Run: 2026-04-25-01KQ2ESEVYVKS3R9575HKJKBAQ

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Duration:
24.7s
Cost:
$0.000572
Provider:
DeepSeek

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The neon sign flickered green through the rain-slicked window, casting its glow across the aged wood of the bar. Aurora Carter wiped a rag across the counter, watching the droplets race each other down the glass. Slow night. She preferred it that way. The hum of the city felt distant here, muffled by old maps and the quiet weight of photographs staring down from the walls. Silas sat at his usual table near the back, nursing a scotch and reading yesterday's newspaper. His silver signet ring caught the light when he turned a page. He didn't look up when the door opened, but Rory did. The man who stepped in out of the rain shook water from his jacket, stamped his boots twice on the mat. He was tall, broad-shouldered, with a weathered face that looked like it had seen too many mornings it didn't remember. His hair was cropped short, graying at the temples, and he had the kind of jaw that suggested stubbornness worn down into quiet resignation. Something cold settled in Rory's stomach. She knew that face. He saw her about the same moment she saw him. His eyes, slate gray and rimmed with tired lines, widened for just a fraction of a second before they narrowed again. Recognition flickered through them like a current through dark water. He walked to the bar. “Rory Carter,” he said. His voice was rougher than she remembered. Gravel and smoke. “Evan.” The name came out flat. She hadn't said it out loud in nearly two years. “I didn't expect to find you here.” He pulled out a stool, sat down heavily. The wood groaned under him. “Last I heard, you were still in Cardiff. That little flat above the bookshop.” “People move.” “So they do.” He gestured at the row of bottles behind her. “Whiskey. Neat.” Rory didn't move. She let the rag hang from her fingers. “You're a long way from Wales.” “Business,” he said. “A deal fell through. I'm meeting someone here tomorrow to fix it.” “This isn't the kind of place for business meetings.” “It used to be your kind of place.” He smiled, but it didn't reach his eyes. “You never told me you worked in bars.” “There's a lot I never told you.” The smile dropped. He looked at his hands on the counter, thick knuckles and callused palms. Those hands had held hers once. They had also broken a plate against the wall two inches from her head. She remembered the sound of it shattering, the way the pieces scattered across the linoleum kitchen floor. “I'm not the same man I was,” he said quietly. “People say that.” She poured the whiskey. Set it in front of him. “Sometimes it's even true.” He wrapped his fingers around the glass but didn't drink. The ice shifted, settling. “I've been going to meetings. Got myself clean. Got a job in a garage, fixing engines. Honest work.” “Good for you.” “I know you don't believe me.” “I don't know what to believe.” Rory leaned back against the counter behind her. The wood felt solid against her spine. “You hit me, Evan. You broke my phone, my laptop, a lamp, a chair. You held me down in the shower and screamed at me until my ears rang for three days. And when I finally left, you told my mother I was mentally ill and needed to be brought home.” His jaw tightened. He stared into the amber liquid like it held answers. “I was sick.” “So was I. The difference is I didn't hurt anyone.” The rain picked up outside, drumming against the window. Silas turned a page of his newspaper, slow and deliberate. He wasn't watching them, but Rory knew he was listening. He always listened. Evan finally took a drink. The whiskey went down hard. He coughed once, wiped his mouth with the back of his hand. “I think about it every day. What I did. What I became.” His voice cracked. “I lost you. I lost everyone. My brother won't speak to me. My mother sends me letters I don't open because I'm too ashamed to read them.” “That's not my problem.” “No. It's not.” He set the glass down. “I'm not asking for forgiveness. I know I don't deserve it. I just... I wanted you to know. That I remember. That I carry it.” Rory watched him. The man who had once made her laugh until her ribs ached, who had brought her soup when she was sick, who had whispered promises into her hair in the dark. That man still lived somewhere inside this shell, but she couldn't find him anymore. The scar on her wrist, the one from a bike accident when she was twelve, pulsed with a phantom ache. “What do you want, Evan?” “I don't know.” He looked up at her. His eyes were wet. “I saw you through the window and I couldn't walk past. I had to come in. I had to see you.” “And now you've seen me.” “And now I've seen you.” He nodded slowly. “You look good, Rory. You look... strong.” “I learned to be.” “From him?” He glanced toward Silas. “From myself.” The silence stretched between them, filled with everything they didn't say. The years. The bruises. The phone calls she'd made to Eva, crying, begging her to come pick her up. The flat in London she'd rented with borrowed money and a forged reference. The nights she'd spent curled on the floor of a stranger's bathroom, shaking, because the sound of a man's footsteps on the stairs sent her back to Cardiff. Evan finished his whiskey. He reached into his pocket, pulled out a crumpled ten-pound note, and laid it on the counter. “Keep the change.” “Evan.” She said his name before she could stop herself. He paused, halfway off the stool. “I'm glad you're trying,” she said. “I really am. But I don't think I can be part of that story.” He held her gaze for a long moment. Then he nodded, once, sharp, and walked toward the door. The rain greeted him like an old friend. The neon sign flickered green across his back as he stepped out into the night. The door swung shut. Rory stood very still, her hands pressed flat against the counter. Her heart beat hard and fast, like a bird trapped in her ribs. She counted her breaths. One. Two. Three. Four. Five. Silas folded his newspaper and stood. His limp was more pronounced tonight, the old knee injury complaining about the weather. He crossed to the bar and picked up the ten-pound note, examined it, and tucked it into the till. “That was well done,” he said. “What was?” “Not letting the past pull you under.” He poured himself a fresh scotch. “Takes a particular kind of courage to stand still when everything in you wants to run.” She looked at him. His hazel eyes held hers, steady and warm. “He could have hurt me again.” “He could have tried.” Silas raised his glass. “But you're not that girl anymore, Rory. You're not the one who runs.” She picked up the empty glass Evan had left behind. She held it up to the light, watching the last finger of whiskey slide across the bottom. Then she put it in the sink and reached for a fresh one. “What time do you close?” she asked. “Whenever you're ready.” She nodded. The rain kept falling. The green sign kept glowing. And somewhere in the streets of Soho, a man she used to love was walking away, carrying his shadows with him into the dark. She lifted a bottle, poured a measure, and drank alone, at peace with the silence she had built around herself.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
82.35% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags20
adverbTagCount3
adverbTags
0"he said quietly [quietly]"
1"Rory leaned back [back]"
2"He nodded slowly [slowly]"
dialogueSentences51
tagDensity0.392
leniency0.784
rawRatio0.15
effectiveRatio0.118
88.43% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1297
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
1
adverb"really"
count1
2
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
1"really"
2"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
61.45% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1297
totalAiIsms10
found
0
word"flickered"
count3
1
word"race"
count1
2
word"weight"
count1
3
word"stomach"
count1
4
word"pulsed"
count1
5
word"silence"
count2
6
word"footsteps"
count1
highlights
0"flickered"
1"race"
2"weight"
3"stomach"
4"pulsed"
5"silence"
6"footsteps"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences101
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences101
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences132
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen51
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1297
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions16
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions21
wordCount897
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity0.78
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Carter1
Rory7
Set1
Silas5
Eva1
London1
Cardiff1
Evan3
Soho1
persons
0"Carter"
1"Rory"
2"Silas"
3"Eva"
4"Evan"
places
0"London"
1"Cardiff"
2"Soho"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences58
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"looked like it had seen too many mornings"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1297
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences132
matches
0"knew that face"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs56
mean23.16
std20.54
cv0.887
sampleLengths
066
139
265
310
441
55
614
716
834
92
1014
1117
1215
139
1424
157
1653
1710
1817
1932
203
216
2272
2316
2410
2532
2664
274
2833
2968
305
3133
325
3315
344
356
362
3771
3821
393
4010
416
4220
4341
444
4533
4639
476
482
4929
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences101
matches
0"was cropped"
79.52% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs166
matches
0"was listening"
1"wasn't watching"
2"was walking"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences132
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount901
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount31
adverbRatio0.03440621531631521
lyAdverbCount5
lyAdverbRatio0.005549389567147614
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences132
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences132
mean9.83
std7.46
cv0.759
sampleLengths
019
117
22
35
423
516
612
711
821
920
1024
116
124
1310
1421
1510
165
174
187
193
206
2110
2215
235
2414
252
2612
272
283
298
306
313
3212
339
3416
358
367
373
3813
396
4014
4117
4210
437
446
454
4610
474
4818
493
44.70% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats16
diversityRatio0.3409090909090909
totalSentences132
uniqueOpeners45
76.63% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences87
matches
0"Then he nodded, once, sharp,"
1"Then she put it in"
ratio0.023
8.51% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount46
totalSentences87
matches
0"She preferred it that way."
1"His silver signet ring caught"
2"He didn't look up when"
3"He was tall, broad-shouldered, with"
4"His hair was cropped short,"
5"She knew that face."
6"He saw her about the"
7"His eyes, slate gray and"
8"He walked to the bar."
9"His voice was rougher than"
10"She hadn't said it out"
11"He pulled out a stool,"
12"He gestured at the row"
13"She let the rag hang"
14"He smiled, but it didn't"
15"He looked at his hands"
16"They had also broken a"
17"She remembered the sound of"
18"he said quietly"
19"She poured the whiskey"
ratio0.529
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount83
totalSentences87
matches
0"The neon sign flickered green"
1"Aurora Carter wiped a rag"
2"She preferred it that way."
3"The hum of the city"
4"Silas sat at his usual"
5"His silver signet ring caught"
6"He didn't look up when"
7"The man who stepped in"
8"He was tall, broad-shouldered, with"
9"His hair was cropped short,"
10"Something cold settled in Rory's"
11"She knew that face."
12"He saw her about the"
13"His eyes, slate gray and"
14"Recognition flickered through them like"
15"He walked to the bar."
16"His voice was rougher than"
17"Gravel and smoke."
18"The name came out flat"
19"She hadn't said it out"
ratio0.954
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences87
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences40
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"He was tall, broad-shouldered, with a weathered face that looked like it had seen too many mornings it didn't remember."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags20
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags7
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences51
tagDensity0.137
leniency0.275
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
84.7195%