Run: 2026-04-25-01KQ2F3VJYQZKEXBRHKVGW30TN

Run Details

Duration:
21.2s
Cost:
$0.000437
Provider:
DeepSeek

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The night air carried the scent of damp earth and something sweeter—honeysuckle, maybe, or jasmine. It wasn't right. Not for October, not for Richmond Park after midnight. Aurora pulled the collar of her jacket tighter and stepped off the path, the grass wet against her boots. The Heartstone pendant rested cool against her sternum, but she felt it pulse as she moved deeper into the trees. A faint warmth, then a chill, then warmth again, like a heartbeat that couldn't decide whether to live or die. She'd come here to test it, to see if the grove Eva had whispered about—the one with the standing stones where time went sideways—would make the pendant do something more than just sit there. So far, it was doing plenty. The pulsing had started the moment she’d climbed over the park’s locked gate. She pushed through a curtain of hawthorn branches and stopped. The clearing opened before her like a wound in the world. Moonlight pooled on a circle of mossy standing stones, each one blunt and ancient, carved with spirals that seemed to shift when she looked at them directly. Inside the circle, wildflowers bloomed in impossible clusters—bluebells and poppies and foxglove, all tangled together, their petals glowing with a faint phosphorescence. The air here was still, but not silent. Something hummed just below the threshold of hearing, a bass note that vibrated in her teeth. The pendant pulsed again. Warmer this time. Almost hot against her skin. She took a step forward, then another. The grass beneath her feet was springy, dry, but she’d just crossed wet ground. She glanced back. The hawthorn branches she’d parted were already knitting themselves together, sealing the gap. Her stomach tightened. Okay. That’s fine. She knew the way back. But did she? The path she’d taken was already gone, swallowed by undergrowth that looked thicker than it had been thirty seconds ago. She turned slowly, cataloguing the trees. Same oaks, same ash. The standing stones were exactly where they should be. She hadn’t moved. The grove had. A sound. Soft, like fabric brushing against stone. Aurora froze, her breath catching. She listened, straining against the hum. Nothing. Just the rustle of leaves, the distant cry of a fox. She let out a slow breath. Paranoia. That’s what this was. The grove was just a weird pocket of Fae-touched land, not a haunted house. She walked to the nearest standing stone and pressed her palm against it. The surface was warm, not from the sun—it had been cold and dark for hours—but from something else. A deep, organic heat, like the flank of a sleeping animal. She jerked her hand back. The pendant blazed against her chest. Movement flickered at the edge of her vision. She spun. Nothing. Just the wildflowers, swaying in a breeze she couldn't feel. But for a moment, she’d seen something—a shape, tall and thin, standing between two of the stones. Not human. Too narrow, too still. She blinked, and it was gone. “You’re not here,” she whispered, and the words felt thin, useless. She took a step backward, toward the centre of the circle. The hum grew louder. She could feel it in her bones now, a vibration that made her teeth ache. The pendant’s warmth climbed toward pain, and she grabbed it through her shirt, pulling it away from her skin. The stone glowed—a deep, angry crimson that bled between her fingers. A sound like a door opening. Wood on wood. But there were no doors here. She looked up. The moon had moved. It had been directly overhead when she’d entered the clearing, but now it hung low, just above the treeline, casting long, distorted shadows. How long had she been standing there? Minutes? Hours? Time moves differently—Eva’s warning echoed in her mind. An hour inside could be minutes or days outside. Days. The thought was a cold hand around her throat. She needed to leave. Now. Abandoning the test, she turned and walked—then jogged—toward the spot where she’d entered. The hawthorn branches were there, but they were thicker now, woven into a wall of thorns that reached higher than her head. She pushed against them. They held firm. She shoved harder, and a thorn raked across her palm, drawing blood. The pain was sharp, real, human. Behind her, the hum stopped. The silence that followed was worse—absolute, heavy, as if the grove had sucked the sound out of the air. She pressed her bleeding palm to her mouth and tasted copper. The pendant’s glow had faded. It was cold now, just a piece of silver and stone. She heard footsteps. Not heavy. Delicate. The sound of bare feet on damp earth. Coming from behind her. She didn’t turn. She couldn’t. Her body had locked in place, every muscle screaming at her to run, but her legs wouldn’t obey. The footsteps stopped. She felt a presence at her back, close enough to feel the cold radiating from it. It smelled of wet stone and crushed flowers. Something brushed her hair. A touch, light as a spider’s thread. Aurora closed her eyes. She didn’t scream. She didn’t run. She just stood there, in the centre of the circle, with the moon sliding toward dawn and the wildflowers glowing brighter, and waited for whatever came next.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags1
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences1
tagDensity1
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
94.42% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount896
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
21.88% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount896
totalAiIsms14
found
0
word"pulse"
count1
1
word"warmth"
count3
2
word"chill"
count1
3
word"vibrated"
count1
4
word"pulsed"
count1
5
word"stomach"
count1
6
word"flickered"
count1
7
word"could feel"
count1
8
word"echoed"
count1
9
word"silence"
count1
10
word"footsteps"
count2
highlights
0"pulse"
1"warmth"
2"chill"
3"vibrated"
4"pulsed"
5"stomach"
6"flickered"
7"could feel"
8"echoed"
9"silence"
10"footsteps"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences105
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences105
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences105
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen36
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords884
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions3
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions10
wordCount881
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity0.34
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity0.5
worstWindowName"Eva"
discoveredNames
October1
Richmond1
Park1
Heartstone1
Eva2
Fae-touched1
Aurora3
persons
0"Eva"
1"Aurora"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences58
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"spirals that seemed to shift when she looked at them directly"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount884
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences105
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs22
mean40.18
std25.21
cv0.627
sampleLengths
046
193
210
384
412
548
648
756
853
910
1040
1171
1215
1356
1410
1565
165
1746
1818
1950
2011
2137
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences105
matches
0"was gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs154
matches
0"was doing"
1"were already knitting"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount12
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences9
totalSentences105
ratio0.086
matches
0"The night air carried the scent of damp earth and something sweeter—honeysuckle, maybe, or jasmine."
1"She'd come here to test it, to see if the grove Eva had whispered about—the one with the standing stones where time went sideways—would make the pendant do something more than just sit there."
2"Inside the circle, wildflowers bloomed in impossible clusters—bluebells and poppies and foxglove, all tangled together, their petals glowing with a faint phosphorescence."
3"The surface was warm, not from the sun—it had been cold and dark for hours—but from something else."
4"But for a moment, she’d seen something—a shape, tall and thin, standing between two of the stones."
5"The stone glowed—a deep, angry crimson that bled between her fingers."
6"Time moves differently—Eva’s warning echoed in her mind."
7"Abandoning the test, she turned and walked—then jogged—toward the spot where she’d entered."
8"The silence that followed was worse—absolute, heavy, as if the grove had sucked the sound out of the air."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount894
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount33
adverbRatio0.03691275167785235
lyAdverbCount5
lyAdverbRatio0.005592841163310962
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences105
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences105
mean8.42
std6.81
cv0.809
sampleLengths
015
13
29
319
420
520
634
76
813
910
1011
1127
1222
138
1416
154
163
175
187
1914
203
2113
223
231
242
255
263
2720
286
294
309
313
323
332
346
355
366
371
3811
396
401
414
4214
4313
4418
4511
465
476
488
492
54.92% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.3523809523809524
totalSentences105
uniqueOpeners37
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount5
totalSentences90
matches
0"So far, it was doing"
1"Almost hot against her skin."
2"Just the rustle of leaves,"
3"Just the wildflowers, swaying in"
4"Too narrow, too still."
ratio0.056
73.33% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount33
totalSentences90
matches
0"It wasn't right."
1"She'd come here to test"
2"She pushed through a curtain"
3"She took a step forward,"
4"She glanced back."
5"Her stomach tightened."
6"She knew the way back."
7"She turned slowly, cataloguing the"
8"She hadn’t moved."
9"She listened, straining against the"
10"She let out a slow"
11"She walked to the nearest"
12"She jerked her hand back."
13"She blinked, and it was"
14"she whispered, and the words"
15"She took a step backward,"
16"She could feel it in"
17"She looked up."
18"It had been directly overhead"
19"She needed to leave."
ratio0.367
60.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount72
totalSentences90
matches
0"The night air carried the"
1"It wasn't right."
2"Aurora pulled the collar of"
3"The Heartstone pendant rested cool"
4"A faint warmth, then a"
5"She'd come here to test"
6"The pulsing had started the"
7"She pushed through a curtain"
8"The clearing opened before her"
9"Moonlight pooled on a circle"
10"The air here was still,"
11"Something hummed just below the"
12"The pendant pulsed again."
13"She took a step forward,"
14"The grass beneath her feet"
15"She glanced back."
16"The hawthorn branches she’d parted"
17"Her stomach tightened."
18"She knew the way back."
19"The path she’d taken was"
ratio0.8
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences90
matches(empty)
ratio0
81.63% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences35
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"Moonlight pooled on a circle of mossy standing stones, each one blunt and ancient, carved with spirals that seemed to shift when she looked at them directly."
1"Something hummed just below the threshold of hearing, a bass note that vibrated in her teeth."
2"She could feel it in her bones now, a vibration that made her teeth ache."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags1
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"she whispered, and the words felt thin, useless"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"she whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences1
tagDensity1
leniency1
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio1
79.5394%