| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 1 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 1 | | tagDensity | 1 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 94.42% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 896 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 1 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 21.88% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 896 | | totalAiIsms | 14 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "pulse" | | 1 | "warmth" | | 2 | "chill" | | 3 | "vibrated" | | 4 | "pulsed" | | 5 | "stomach" | | 6 | "flickered" | | 7 | "could feel" | | 8 | "echoed" | | 9 | "silence" | | 10 | "footsteps" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 105 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 105 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 105 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 36 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 884 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 3 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 10 | | wordCount | 881 | | uniqueNames | 7 | | maxNameDensity | 0.34 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 0.5 | | worstWindowName | "Eva" | | discoveredNames | | October | 1 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Eva | 2 | | Fae-touched | 1 | | Aurora | 3 |
| | persons | | | places | | | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 58 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "spirals that seemed to shift when she looked at them directly" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 884 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 105 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 22 | | mean | 40.18 | | std | 25.21 | | cv | 0.627 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 46 | | 1 | 93 | | 2 | 10 | | 3 | 84 | | 4 | 12 | | 5 | 48 | | 6 | 48 | | 7 | 56 | | 8 | 53 | | 9 | 10 | | 10 | 40 | | 11 | 71 | | 12 | 15 | | 13 | 56 | | 14 | 10 | | 15 | 65 | | 16 | 5 | | 17 | 46 | | 18 | 18 | | 19 | 50 | | 20 | 11 | | 21 | 37 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 105 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 2 | | totalVerbs | 154 | | matches | | 0 | "was doing" | | 1 | "were already knitting" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 12 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 9 | | totalSentences | 105 | | ratio | 0.086 | | matches | | 0 | "The night air carried the scent of damp earth and something sweeter—honeysuckle, maybe, or jasmine." | | 1 | "She'd come here to test it, to see if the grove Eva had whispered about—the one with the standing stones where time went sideways—would make the pendant do something more than just sit there." | | 2 | "Inside the circle, wildflowers bloomed in impossible clusters—bluebells and poppies and foxglove, all tangled together, their petals glowing with a faint phosphorescence." | | 3 | "The surface was warm, not from the sun—it had been cold and dark for hours—but from something else." | | 4 | "But for a moment, she’d seen something—a shape, tall and thin, standing between two of the stones." | | 5 | "The stone glowed—a deep, angry crimson that bled between her fingers." | | 6 | "Time moves differently—Eva’s warning echoed in her mind." | | 7 | "Abandoning the test, she turned and walked—then jogged—toward the spot where she’d entered." | | 8 | "The silence that followed was worse—absolute, heavy, as if the grove had sucked the sound out of the air." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 894 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 33 | | adverbRatio | 0.03691275167785235 | | lyAdverbCount | 5 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.005592841163310962 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 105 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 105 | | mean | 8.42 | | std | 6.81 | | cv | 0.809 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 15 | | 1 | 3 | | 2 | 9 | | 3 | 19 | | 4 | 20 | | 5 | 20 | | 6 | 34 | | 7 | 6 | | 8 | 13 | | 9 | 10 | | 10 | 11 | | 11 | 27 | | 12 | 22 | | 13 | 8 | | 14 | 16 | | 15 | 4 | | 16 | 3 | | 17 | 5 | | 18 | 7 | | 19 | 14 | | 20 | 3 | | 21 | 13 | | 22 | 3 | | 23 | 1 | | 24 | 2 | | 25 | 5 | | 26 | 3 | | 27 | 20 | | 28 | 6 | | 29 | 4 | | 30 | 9 | | 31 | 3 | | 32 | 3 | | 33 | 2 | | 34 | 6 | | 35 | 5 | | 36 | 6 | | 37 | 1 | | 38 | 11 | | 39 | 6 | | 40 | 1 | | 41 | 4 | | 42 | 14 | | 43 | 13 | | 44 | 18 | | 45 | 11 | | 46 | 5 | | 47 | 6 | | 48 | 8 | | 49 | 2 |
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| 54.92% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 4 | | diversityRatio | 0.3523809523809524 | | totalSentences | 105 | | uniqueOpeners | 37 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 5 | | totalSentences | 90 | | matches | | 0 | "So far, it was doing" | | 1 | "Almost hot against her skin." | | 2 | "Just the rustle of leaves," | | 3 | "Just the wildflowers, swaying in" | | 4 | "Too narrow, too still." |
| | ratio | 0.056 | |
| 73.33% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 33 | | totalSentences | 90 | | matches | | 0 | "It wasn't right." | | 1 | "She'd come here to test" | | 2 | "She pushed through a curtain" | | 3 | "She took a step forward," | | 4 | "She glanced back." | | 5 | "Her stomach tightened." | | 6 | "She knew the way back." | | 7 | "She turned slowly, cataloguing the" | | 8 | "She hadn’t moved." | | 9 | "She listened, straining against the" | | 10 | "She let out a slow" | | 11 | "She walked to the nearest" | | 12 | "She jerked her hand back." | | 13 | "She blinked, and it was" | | 14 | "she whispered, and the words" | | 15 | "She took a step backward," | | 16 | "She could feel it in" | | 17 | "She looked up." | | 18 | "It had been directly overhead" | | 19 | "She needed to leave." |
| | ratio | 0.367 | |
| 60.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 72 | | totalSentences | 90 | | matches | | 0 | "The night air carried the" | | 1 | "It wasn't right." | | 2 | "Aurora pulled the collar of" | | 3 | "The Heartstone pendant rested cool" | | 4 | "A faint warmth, then a" | | 5 | "She'd come here to test" | | 6 | "The pulsing had started the" | | 7 | "She pushed through a curtain" | | 8 | "The clearing opened before her" | | 9 | "Moonlight pooled on a circle" | | 10 | "The air here was still," | | 11 | "Something hummed just below the" | | 12 | "The pendant pulsed again." | | 13 | "She took a step forward," | | 14 | "The grass beneath her feet" | | 15 | "She glanced back." | | 16 | "The hawthorn branches she’d parted" | | 17 | "Her stomach tightened." | | 18 | "She knew the way back." | | 19 | "The path she’d taken was" |
| | ratio | 0.8 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 90 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 81.63% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 35 | | technicalSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "Moonlight pooled on a circle of mossy standing stones, each one blunt and ancient, carved with spirals that seemed to shift when she looked at them directly." | | 1 | "Something hummed just below the threshold of hearing, a bass note that vibrated in her teeth." | | 2 | "She could feel it in her bones now, a vibration that made her teeth ache." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 1 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "she whispered, and the words felt thin, useless" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 1 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 1 | | tagDensity | 1 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 1 | | effectiveRatio | 1 | |