Run: 2026-04-25-01KQ2F8YTH6R8NW8FAVNGDBB2P

Run Details

Duration:
36.4s
Cost:
$0.000664
Provider:
DeepSeek

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The rain had settled into that particular London drizzle that seemed to soak through everything despite the best efforts of umbrellas and overpriced raincoats. Aurora Carter ducked through the door of The Raven's Nest, shaking water from her shoulders, the familiar smell of old wood and whiskey hitting her before her eyes adjusted to the dim light. Silas looked up from polishing a glass behind the bar, the motion automatic, his grey-streaked auburn hair catching the amber glow of the sconces. He raised an eyebrow and nodded toward her usual stool near the end. She returned the gesture and slid onto the cracked leather, running a finger along the crescent-shaped scar on her wrist—a nervous habit she'd never managed to shake. "Rough shift?" Silas asked, setting a glass of water in front of her without being asked. Ice, lemon, the way she liked it. "Yu-Fei's cousin showed up with a delivery of five hundred spring rolls for a party that got cancelled. I spent two hours redistributing them to shelter kitchens." Rory took a long drink, the cold water a relief against her dry throat. "I smell like soy sauce and desperation." "Better than some nights." She was about to agree when the door swung open again, bringing with it a gust of damp air and a figure that made her freeze mid-sip. He was tall, broad-shouldered, wearing a charcoal overcoat that looked expensive in that understated way that meant it cost more than her monthly rent. His hair was shorter than she remembered, greying at the temples, and there was a neatness to his posture that hadn't been there a decade ago. He stepped inside, blinking against the dimness, and she watched his eyes adjust, searching the room with the careful, practiced scan of someone who had learned to always know the exits. Then his gaze landed on her. And stopped. "Rory?" The voice cracked the name like glass, uncertain and hopeful in equal measure. She knew that voice. She'd heard it shouting across playgrounds, mumbling through late-night study sessions, laughing until they both couldn't breathe. "Kieran?" She heard herself say it, but it felt like someone else's voice. Someone younger. Someone who still believed in the permanence of childhood friendships. He crossed the room in three long strides, and for a moment she thought he might hug her, but the impulse died somewhere between his shoulders and arms. Instead, he pulled out the stool beside her, the leather creaking as he sat down heavily. "I can't believe it," he said, shaking his head slowly. "I was just passing through. Had a meeting in the area. I've been in—" He stopped, the sentence unfinished. "How long has it been?" "Eight years." The number came out without calculation. She'd counted. She'd always counted. "You left the week after Evan and I—" She stopped, the memory of that breakup still tasting like copper and ash. "After things ended." Kieran's face flickered through something complicated. "I heard. I wanted to call. I should have called." "But you didn't." "No." He said it simply, without excuse. "I didn't." Silas materialized at their corner of the bar, his limp barely perceptible as he set a tumbler of whiskey in front of Kieran without being asked. "On the house," he said, his voice carrying the quiet authority of someone who knew things without being told. His hazel eyes moved between them, reading the air. "Old friends catching up." "Something like that," Kieran said, wrapping his fingers around the glass. The silver signet ring on Silas's right hand caught the light as he turned away, leaving them in their bubble of shared history. Rory studied Kieran's hands. They were different. Cleaner. The knuckles that had once been perpetually bruised from climbing fences and throwing punches were smooth now, the nails trimmed and cared for. He wore a watch that probably cost more than her mother's car. "You look good," she said, and meant it, though the words felt strange in her mouth. "Different. But good." "So do you." He smiled, and for a second she saw the boy she'd known, the one who'd held her hair back when she'd thrown up after too much cheap cider at sixteen. "You cut your hair shorter. It suits you." "I grew up." She tapped the scar on her wrist without thinking. "We both did." The whiskey in his glass caught the light as he swirled it. "I'm a lawyer now. Corporate. London office." "You always said you'd never become your father." The words hung between them like smoke from a blown-out candle. Kieran's laugh was hollow. "I said a lot of things." "So did I. I'm a delivery driver." "A delivery driver." He repeated it slowly, as if tasting the words. "You had a full ride to Cardiff. You were going to be a barrister. You were going to change the world." "I was going to change my world." She held his gaze, refusing to flinch. "Not the same thing." "Rory—" "Don't." She held up a hand, the motion sharper than she intended. "Don't do the pity thing. I'm fine. I'm alive. I'm not with Evan. That's more than I had eight years ago." He looked away first, staring into his whiskey for a long moment before taking a slow drink. When he spoke again, his voice was softer. "I think about that night sometimes. The night before I left. You called me, crying. You said you didn't know what to do." "I remember." " I told you it would be okay. I told you I'd be there for you." He set the glass down with a heavy click. "And then I got the job offer in Manchester, and I told myself I'd call you in the morning. And then morning became a week, and a week became a month, and—" "And eight years." "Eight years." He looked at her finally, and there was something raw in his eyes that she hadn't seen since they were seventeen, sitting on a rooftop in Cardiff, trying to convince themselves the world was theirs for the taking. "I'm sorry, Rory. I'm sorry I wasn't there." The apology lay between them, fragile and unexpected. She'd imagined this moment a hundred times—confronting him, screaming at him, demanding to know why he'd abandoned her when she needed him most. But sitting here, in the familiar dimness of The Raven's Nest, with the rain drumming against the windows and Silas's quiet presence a few feet away, the anger felt like something she'd outgrown. "You were twenty-two," she said slowly. "So was I. We were both kids pretending to be adults. You made a choice. I made choices too. Some of them were worse." "Evan wasn't your fault." "No." She took a breath. "But staying as long as I did? That one's on me." The silence that followed was not uncomfortable. It was the silence of two people remembering loudly, the weight of shared history pressing down on the worn wooden bar between them. "Heard he's married now," Kieran said after a while. "Has a kid. Lives in Bristol." Rory felt the surprise register somewhere deep, then dissipate like smoke. "Good for him. I hope he's changed." "Not that I've heard. But people do." "Some do." Kieran looked at her, and she saw him really seeing her—the delivery uniform, the tired eyes, the small scar on her wrist, the quiet strength she'd built from the rubble of her old life. "You did." It wasn't a question. She acknowledged it with a small nod. Another long silence. The bar was filling slowly, the early evening crowd trickling in from the rain. Somewhere in the back, a phone rang, and Silas answered it, his voice low and measured. "I should go," Kieran said finally, sliding off his stool. He left a twenty on the bar, more than enough to cover his single drink and then some. He stood there for a moment, looking at her, and she saw the boy again—the one who'd taught her to throw a proper punch, who'd held her hand at her grandmother's funeral, who'd promised her they'd always be friends. "So this is it?" she asked. "Another eight years?" He pulled something from his pocket—a business card, plain white, embossed with simple black lettering. He set it on the bar between them. "My office number. And my mobile. I'm not running anymore, Rory. I don't want to." She picked up the card, running her thumb across the embossed letters. Kieran Cole, Solicitor. "I don't know if I'm ready to just—" "Neither do I." He smiled, and this time it reached his eyes. "But maybe we figure it out together. No pressure. Just coffee. Or tea. Whatever you want." "Or spring rolls," she said, and they both laughed, the sound strange and welcome in the quiet bar. "Or spring rolls." He nodded. "I'll leave the card. You call when you're ready." He turned and walked toward the door, his overcoat brushing against the wooden chairs. At the threshold, he paused and looked back. "Rory?" "Yeah?" "I'm glad you're okay." She watched him disappear into the London rain, the door swinging shut behind him. The card was warm in her hand, heavy with possibility. Silas appeared beside her, his limp barely audible on the worn floorboards. "Old friend?" "Something like that." He picked up the twenty, considered it, then tucked it into the charity jar on the back counter. "Sometimes the past finds us when we're ready to face it." "Or when we least expect it." "The same thing, in my experience." Rory finished her water, feeling the cool glass against her palm. She slipped the card into her pocket, next to her keys, next to the small part of her that had been waiting for this moment for eight years. Outside, the rain had begun to ease, the clouds breaking just enough to let a thin sliver of evening light through. The neon sign above the door cast a green glow across the wet pavement, and somewhere down the street, a bus rumbled past, carrying strangers through the heart of a city that never quite finished its stories. She pulled out her phone, typed a message she'd been writing for eight years, then deleted it. She'd call tomorrow. Or the day after. Or maybe she wouldn't. But the card was in her pocket. And that, she thought, was enough. For now.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags26
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"she said slowly [slowly]"
1"Kieran said finally [finally]"
dialogueSentences72
tagDensity0.361
leniency0.722
rawRatio0.077
effectiveRatio0.056
85.63% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1740
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count4
1
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
1"really"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
74.14% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1740
totalAiIsms9
found
0
word"familiar"
count2
1
word"eyebrow"
count1
2
word"flickered"
count1
3
word"silence"
count3
4
word"weight"
count1
5
word"measured"
count1
highlights
0"familiar"
1"eyebrow"
2"flickered"
3"silence"
4"weight"
5"measured"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences96
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences96
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"managed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences142
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen42
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1736
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions24
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions31
wordCount1265
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity0.71
worstName"Kieran"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Kieran"
discoveredNames
London2
Carter1
Raven2
Nest2
Ice1
Kieran9
Silas7
Cardiff1
Rory4
Cole1
Solicitor1
persons
0"Carter"
1"Raven"
2"Nest"
3"Kieran"
4"Silas"
5"Rory"
6"Cole"
places
0"London"
1"Cardiff"
globalScore1
windowScore1
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences74
glossingSentenceCount5
matches
0"drizzle that seemed to soak through everything despite the best efforts of umbrellas and overpriced raincoats"
1"felt like someone else's voice"
2"as if tasting the words"
3"felt like something she'd outgrown"
4"appeared beside her, his limp barely audible on the worn floorboards"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1736
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences142
matches
0"knew that voice"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs71
mean24.45
std19.39
cv0.793
sampleLengths
057
164
223
348
44
527
681
76
82
91
1034
1125
1244
1334
1437
1516
163
179
1858
1934
2043
2119
2241
2315
2419
258
2621
277
2833
2918
301
3133
3248
332
3457
353
3648
3764
3830
394
4016
4130
4215
4318
447
452
4636
4711
4833
4967
94.30% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences96
matches
0"being asked"
1"being asked"
2"being told"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs225
matches
0"was filling"
42.25% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount5
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences142
ratio0.035
matches
0"She returned the gesture and slid onto the cracked leather, running a finger along the crescent-shaped scar on her wrist—a nervous habit she'd never managed to shake."
1"She'd imagined this moment a hundred times—confronting him, screaming at him, demanding to know why he'd abandoned her when she needed him most."
2"Kieran looked at her, and she saw him really seeing her—the delivery uniform, the tired eyes, the small scar on her wrist, the quiet strength she'd built from the rubble of her old life."
3"He stood there for a moment, looking at her, and she saw the boy again—the one who'd taught her to throw a proper punch, who'd held her hand at her grandmother's funeral, who'd promised her they'd always be friends."
4"He pulled something from his pocket—a business card, plain white, embossed with simple black lettering."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount853
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount29
adverbRatio0.03399765533411489
lyAdverbCount8
lyAdverbRatio0.009378663540445486
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences142
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences142
mean12.23
std9.59
cv0.785
sampleLengths
024
133
224
313
427
516
67
741
87
94
1027
1124
1226
1331
146
152
161
1713
184
1917
2013
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2328
2416
2510
2619
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288
292
303
3121
323
336
3410
353
367
372
3826
3919
409
414
4211
4323
444
453
461
4723
4812
4916
50.70% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats13
diversityRatio0.3591549295774648
totalSentences142
uniqueOpeners51
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences89
matches
0"Then his gaze landed on"
1"Instead, he pulled out the"
2"Somewhere in the back, a"
ratio0.034
8.76% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount47
totalSentences89
matches
0"He raised an eyebrow and"
1"She returned the gesture and"
2"She was about to agree"
3"He was tall, broad-shouldered, wearing"
4"His hair was shorter than"
5"He stepped inside, blinking against"
6"She knew that voice."
7"She'd heard it shouting across"
8"She heard herself say it,"
9"He crossed the room in"
10"he said, shaking his head"
11"He stopped, the sentence unfinished"
12"She'd always counted."
13"She stopped, the memory of"
14"He said it simply, without"
15"he said, his voice carrying"
16"His hazel eyes moved between"
17"They were different."
18"He wore a watch that"
19"she said, and meant it,"
ratio0.528
21.80% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount78
totalSentences89
matches
0"The rain had settled into"
1"Aurora Carter ducked through the"
2"Silas looked up from polishing"
3"He raised an eyebrow and"
4"She returned the gesture and"
5"Silas asked, setting a glass"
6"Ice, lemon, the way she"
7"Rory took a long drink,"
8"She was about to agree"
9"He was tall, broad-shouldered, wearing"
10"His hair was shorter than"
11"He stepped inside, blinking against"
12"The voice cracked the name"
13"She knew that voice."
14"She'd heard it shouting across"
15"She heard herself say it,"
16"Someone who still believed in"
17"He crossed the room in"
18"he said, shaking his head"
19"He stopped, the sentence unfinished"
ratio0.876
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences89
matches(empty)
ratio0
23.81% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences42
technicalSentenceCount7
matches
0"The rain had settled into that particular London drizzle that seemed to soak through everything despite the best efforts of umbrellas and overpriced raincoats."
1"Aurora Carter ducked through the door of The Raven's Nest, shaking water from her shoulders, the familiar smell of old wood and whiskey hitting her before her e…"
2"She was about to agree when the door swung open again, bringing with it a gust of damp air and a figure that made her freeze mid-sip."
3"He was tall, broad-shouldered, wearing a charcoal overcoat that looked expensive in that understated way that meant it cost more than her monthly rent."
4"He stepped inside, blinking against the dimness, and she watched his eyes adjust, searching the room with the careful, practiced scan of someone who had learned…"
5"The knuckles that had once been perpetually bruised from climbing fences and throwing punches were smooth now, the nails trimmed and cared for."
6"She slipped the card into her pocket, next to her keys, next to the small part of her that had been waiting for this moment for eight years."
86.54% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags26
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"He stopped, the sentence unfinished"
1"He repeated, as if tasting the words"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags13
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"She heard (hear)"
1"He repeated (repeat)"
dialogueSentences72
tagDensity0.181
leniency0.361
rawRatio0.154
effectiveRatio0.056
79.5979%