Run: 2026-04-25-01KQ2FZZ0MAR6J5PCTWY8DG879

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Duration:
49.9s
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$0.001517
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DeepSeek

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System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
Rory had walked the perimeter of Richmond Park more times than she could count, but never at night. Never alone. And never with the Heartstone pendant burning cold against her collarbone. The oak standing stones caught the moonlight like old bones jutting from the earth. She almost missed them—head down, hands stuffed in her jacket pockets, the thin beam of her phone torch cutting a nervous path through the dark. But the pendant pulsed, a single throb of not-quite-warmth that made her suck in a breath and look up. The stones weren’t right. She’d seen them before, in daylight, when Eva had first dragged her out to this corner of the park and whispered about the hidden grove. Back then, they’d looked weathered, harmless, the kind of ancient landmark you’d find on a walking trail marker. Now, under the weight of a starless sky, they seemed taller. Closer together. Like teeth in a half-closed jaw. She should turn back. The thought surfaced, clear and rational, the same voice that had gotten her out of Evan’s flat with a single suitcase and a black eye she’d lied about to everyone who asked. *You don’t have to be here. You can walk away.* But the message had been specific. *Midnight, the standing stones. Come alone. Your mother’s name depends on it.* Jennifer Carter née Ellis. Her mother, who’d been dead for six years and had no business being mentioned in a note slipped under the door of a flat above a bar. Rory clicked off her phone torch. Let her eyes adjust to the silver-dark as her fingers closed around the pendant. When she stepped between the stones, the air changed. It wasn’t dramatic. No flash of light, no roaring in her ears. Just a subtle shift in pressure, the way a plane cabin felt just before descent. And the silence—the vast, swallowing silence of a place that had never known traffic or sirens or the distant hum of the city. Richmond Park was three miles from the Thames. She should have heard something. Birds, maybe. The rustle of deer. The low murmur of London breathing in its sleep. Instead, there was only the sound of her own footsteps, and beneath that, a sound she couldn’t quite name. A low, wet whisper. Like something breathing through water. The grove opened before her. Even in darkness, she knew it wasn’t natural. Wildflowers bloomed in thick, tangled carpets—foxgloves and bluebells out of season, their colors muted to gray in the moonlight but undeniably alive. The air smelled green and sweet and just slightly of rot, the way a florist’s bin smelled at the end of a long day. A massive oak dominated the center of the clearing, its roots twisting into shapes that suggested knuckles, elbows, a spine curled in pain. And it was quiet. So quiet she could hear her own heartbeat. And beneath it, that whisper again. Rory stopped walking. She pressed her thumbnail into the crescent scar on her wrist—an old habit, a grounding trick—and forced herself to breathe evenly. “Hello?” Her voice came out steady. That surprised her. “I got your message.” Nothing answered. The grove held its breath. She took another step. The wildflowers crunched under her boots, brittle in a way they shouldn’t have been, and the sound was too loud in the hush. Ten paces in, she felt it: the creeping certainty that the trees behind her had moved. She turned. Fast. The standing stones were still there, the gap between them unchanged, the familiar silhouette of parkland visible beyond. But it looked wrong. The grass on the other side seemed paler, flatter, like a photograph left in the sun. It shimmered slightly, a heat-haze distortion even though the night was cold. The pendant pulsed again. Colder this time. A thread of ice down her sternum. “I’m not playing games.” Her voice was harder now. “You said my mother's name. You said you knew what happened to her.” The whisper grew sharper. Not louder, but more distinct, like a radio frequency coming into focus. It was to her left. No, to her right. No—behind her, barely a breath away from her ear. She spun again and found nothing. The clearing was empty. The flowers swayed in a breeze she couldn’t feel. And at the base of the oak, something glinted. Rory approached it carefully, her shadow stretching long and thin across the grass even though the moon hung directly overhead. The glint resolved into a mirror. A small, hand-sized disc of polished bronze, propped against a root. When she looked into it, her own face stared back, pale and hollow-eyed, the pendant a dark wound at her throat. Behind her reflection, the clearing was empty. No. Not empty. She saw it first in the mirror. A shape, tall and thin, standing just beyond the frame of the bronze disc. At the edge of the reflection, where the image warped and curved, something pale shifted. It had the suggestion of limbs. The suggestion of a face. The suggestion was wrong. Rory dropped the mirror. It hit the grass with a dull thud that landed too heavily, the sound absorbed by the ground like a stone into mud. She stumbled backward, her hand flying to the pendant, and when she looked up at the place where the shape should have been, there was nothing. But the flowers had changed. They were closer now. The ring of foxgloves and nightshade had contracted inward, the path back to the stones narrowed by half. A few of the blooms had turned black and withered, curled in on themselves like dead spiders. And the whisper—that wet, breathing whisper—had resolved into something almost like words. *...nifer...* Her mother’s name. Half-spoken. Half-gasped. In a voice that was too high and too low at the same time, a chord of sound vibrating in her molars. “Show yourself,” Rory said, and the steadiness in her own voice was a lie she clung to. The crescent scar ached under her thumb. She was pressing too hard. The grove didn’t show itself. The grove only shifted. Now the oak tree was closer. She was certain of it. The distance between her and the trunk had halved, the roots reaching toward her boots like seeking fingers. The mirror lay face-down in the grass, and she didn’t want to pick it up again. She didn’t want to see what stood behind her in the reflection. But she knew. She knew with the deep, animal certainty that bypasses reason and speaks directly to the spine. Something was behind her. Something had been behind her since she stepped through the stones. It wasn’t hostile, exactly—not yet—but it was curious. It was patient. It was leaning closer with every breath she took, and if she turned around now, she would see it. *Don’t turn around.* The thought was her own. She hoped it was her own. There was no way to tell anymore. She walked forward. It was all she could do. The message had said midnight, had said her mother’s name, had said truth and answers and things that had been hidden. So she walked toward the oak tree that was definitely, impossibly closer now, and she kept her eyes fixed on the bark that seemed to pulse with a slow, sap-thick heartbeat. Behind her, the standing stones slid together with a sound like grinding teeth. The path back was gone. The grass was silver. The flowers were closing in. And somewhere in the dark, just at the edge of her hearing, something began to hum a lullaby she remembered from childhood. Her mother’s lullaby. In a voice that was only almost human.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags2
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences5
tagDensity0.4
leniency0.8
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
88.37% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1290
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count2
1
adverb"carefully"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"carefully"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
22.48% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1290
totalAiIsms20
found
0
word"pulsed"
count2
1
word"throb"
count1
2
word"warmth"
count1
3
word"weight"
count1
4
word"roaring"
count1
5
word"silence"
count2
6
word"footsteps"
count1
7
word"whisper"
count5
8
word"familiar"
count1
9
word"shimmered"
count1
10
word"glint"
count1
11
word"resolved"
count2
12
word"pulse"
count1
highlights
0"pulsed"
1"throb"
2"warmth"
3"weight"
4"roaring"
5"silence"
6"footsteps"
7"whisper"
8"familiar"
9"shimmered"
10"glint"
11"resolved"
12"pulse"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences131
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences131
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences133
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen32
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans4
markdownWords26
totalWords1280
ratio0.02
matches
0"You don’t have to be here. You can walk away."
1"Midnight, the standing stones. Come alone. Your mother’s name depends on it."
2"...nifer..."
3"Don’t turn around."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions6
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions18
wordCount1256
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity0.48
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Richmond2
Park2
Heartstone1
Eva1
Evan1
Jennifer1
Carter1
Ellis1
Thames1
London1
Rory6
persons
0"Eva"
1"Evan"
2"Jennifer"
3"Carter"
4"Ellis"
5"Rory"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"Thames"
3"London"
globalScore1
windowScore1
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences74
glossingSentenceCount5
matches
0"not-quite warmth that made her suck in a breath and look up"
1"seemed taller"
2"quite name"
3"seemed paler flatter, like a photograph left in the sun"
4"bark that seemed to pulse with a slow, sap-thick heartbeat"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.781
wordCount1280
matches
0"Not louder, but more distinct, like a radio frequency coming into focus"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences133
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs38
mean33.68
std24.51
cv0.728
sampleLengths
031
158
266
346
418
531
629
7106
85
977
1018
1137
127
1343
143
1550
1614
1722
1834
1928
2065
213
2251
2353
2456
251
2627
2729
289
2957
3064
313
3218
3361
3427
3522
363
378
97.23% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences131
matches
0"being mentioned"
1"been hidden"
2"was gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs201
matches
0"were closing"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount10
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences7
totalSentences133
ratio0.053
matches
0"She almost missed them—head down, hands stuffed in her jacket pockets, the thin beam of her phone torch cutting a nervous path through the dark."
1"And the silence—the vast, swallowing silence of a place that had never known traffic or sirens or the distant hum of the city."
2"Wildflowers bloomed in thick, tangled carpets—foxgloves and bluebells out of season, their colors muted to gray in the moonlight but undeniably alive."
3"She pressed her thumbnail into the crescent scar on her wrist—an old habit, a grounding trick—and forced herself to breathe evenly."
4"No—behind her, barely a breath away from her ear."
5"And the whisper—that wet, breathing whisper—had resolved into something almost like words."
6"It wasn’t hostile, exactly—not yet—but it was curious."
88.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1277
adjectiveStacks2
stackExamples
0"small, hand-sized disc"
1"slow, sap-thick heartbeat."
adverbCount50
adverbRatio0.03915426781519186
lyAdverbCount15
lyAdverbRatio0.011746280344557557
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences133
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences133
mean9.62
std7.42
cv0.77
sampleLengths
018
12
211
314
425
519
64
725
818
911
102
116
124
1332
146
154
166
174
182
196
204
2127
226
2314
249
253
269
2715
2823
298
305
312
324
339
3419
354
365
375
388
3922
4024
4123
424
438
446
453
4621
476
483
494
47.87% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats13
diversityRatio0.3458646616541353
totalSentences133
uniqueOpeners46
84.03% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences119
matches
0"Just a subtle shift in"
1"Instead, there was only the"
2"So quiet she could hear"
ratio0.025
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount33
totalSentences119
matches
0"She almost missed them—head down,"
1"She’d seen them before, in"
2"She should turn back."
3"*You don’t have to be"
4"You can walk away.*"
5"Your mother’s name depends on"
6"Her mother, who’d been dead"
7"It wasn’t dramatic."
8"She should have heard something."
9"She pressed her thumbnail into"
10"Her voice came out steady"
11"She took another step."
12"It shimmered slightly, a heat-haze"
13"Her voice was harder now"
14"It was to her left."
15"She spun again and found"
16"She saw it first in"
17"It had the suggestion of"
18"It hit the grass with"
19"She stumbled backward, her hand"
ratio0.277
100.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount80
totalSentences119
matches
0"Rory had walked the perimeter"
1"The oak standing stones caught"
2"She almost missed them—head down,"
3"The stones weren’t right."
4"She’d seen them before, in"
5"She should turn back."
6"The thought surfaced, clear and"
7"*You don’t have to be"
8"You can walk away.*"
9"*Midnight, the standing stones."
10"Your mother’s name depends on"
11"Jennifer Carter née Ellis."
12"Her mother, who’d been dead"
13"Rory clicked off her phone"
14"It wasn’t dramatic."
15"Richmond Park was three miles"
16"She should have heard something."
17"The rustle of deer."
18"The low murmur of London"
19"A low, wet whisper."
ratio0.672
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount3
totalSentences119
matches
0"Now, under the weight of"
1"Even in darkness, she knew"
2"Now the oak tree was"
ratio0.025
51.67% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences47
technicalSentenceCount6
matches
0"But the pendant pulsed, a single throb of not-quite-warmth that made her suck in a breath and look up."
1"The thought surfaced, clear and rational, the same voice that had gotten her out of Evan’s flat with a single suitcase and a black eye she’d lied about to every…"
2"Her mother, who’d been dead for six years and had no business being mentioned in a note slipped under the door of a flat above a bar."
3"And the silence—the vast, swallowing silence of a place that had never known traffic or sirens or the distant hum of the city."
4"In a voice that was too high and too low at the same time, a chord of sound vibrating in her molars."
5"So she walked toward the oak tree that was definitely, impossibly closer now, and she kept her eyes fixed on the bark that seemed to pulse with a slow, sap-thic…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags2
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences5
tagDensity0.2
leniency0.4
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
85.9885%