| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 2 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 5 | | tagDensity | 0.4 | | leniency | 0.8 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 88.37% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1290 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 22.48% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1290 | | totalAiIsms | 20 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "pulsed" | | 1 | "throb" | | 2 | "warmth" | | 3 | "weight" | | 4 | "roaring" | | 5 | "silence" | | 6 | "footsteps" | | 7 | "whisper" | | 8 | "familiar" | | 9 | "shimmered" | | 10 | "glint" | | 11 | "resolved" | | 12 | "pulse" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 131 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 131 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 133 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 32 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 4 | | markdownWords | 26 | | totalWords | 1280 | | ratio | 0.02 | | matches | | 0 | "You don’t have to be here. You can walk away." | | 1 | "Midnight, the standing stones. Come alone. Your mother’s name depends on it." | | 2 | "...nifer..." | | 3 | "Don’t turn around." |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 6 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 18 | | wordCount | 1256 | | uniqueNames | 11 | | maxNameDensity | 0.48 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 2 | | Park | 2 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Eva | 1 | | Evan | 1 | | Jennifer | 1 | | Carter | 1 | | Ellis | 1 | | Thames | 1 | | London | 1 | | Rory | 6 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Eva" | | 1 | "Evan" | | 2 | "Jennifer" | | 3 | "Carter" | | 4 | "Ellis" | | 5 | "Rory" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "Thames" | | 3 | "London" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 74 | | glossingSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "not-quite warmth that made her suck in a breath and look up" | | 1 | "seemed taller" | | 2 | "quite name" | | 3 | "seemed paler flatter, like a photograph left in the sun" | | 4 | "bark that seemed to pulse with a slow, sap-thick heartbeat" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.781 | | wordCount | 1280 | | matches | | 0 | "Not louder, but more distinct, like a radio frequency coming into focus" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 133 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 38 | | mean | 33.68 | | std | 24.51 | | cv | 0.728 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 31 | | 1 | 58 | | 2 | 66 | | 3 | 46 | | 4 | 18 | | 5 | 31 | | 6 | 29 | | 7 | 106 | | 8 | 5 | | 9 | 77 | | 10 | 18 | | 11 | 37 | | 12 | 7 | | 13 | 43 | | 14 | 3 | | 15 | 50 | | 16 | 14 | | 17 | 22 | | 18 | 34 | | 19 | 28 | | 20 | 65 | | 21 | 3 | | 22 | 51 | | 23 | 53 | | 24 | 56 | | 25 | 1 | | 26 | 27 | | 27 | 29 | | 28 | 9 | | 29 | 57 | | 30 | 64 | | 31 | 3 | | 32 | 18 | | 33 | 61 | | 34 | 27 | | 35 | 22 | | 36 | 3 | | 37 | 8 |
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| 97.23% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 131 | | matches | | 0 | "being mentioned" | | 1 | "been hidden" | | 2 | "was gone" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 201 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 10 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 7 | | totalSentences | 133 | | ratio | 0.053 | | matches | | 0 | "She almost missed them—head down, hands stuffed in her jacket pockets, the thin beam of her phone torch cutting a nervous path through the dark." | | 1 | "And the silence—the vast, swallowing silence of a place that had never known traffic or sirens or the distant hum of the city." | | 2 | "Wildflowers bloomed in thick, tangled carpets—foxgloves and bluebells out of season, their colors muted to gray in the moonlight but undeniably alive." | | 3 | "She pressed her thumbnail into the crescent scar on her wrist—an old habit, a grounding trick—and forced herself to breathe evenly." | | 4 | "No—behind her, barely a breath away from her ear." | | 5 | "And the whisper—that wet, breathing whisper—had resolved into something almost like words." | | 6 | "It wasn’t hostile, exactly—not yet—but it was curious." |
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| 88.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1277 | | adjectiveStacks | 2 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "small, hand-sized disc" | | 1 | "slow, sap-thick heartbeat." |
| | adverbCount | 50 | | adverbRatio | 0.03915426781519186 | | lyAdverbCount | 15 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.011746280344557557 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 133 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 133 | | mean | 9.62 | | std | 7.42 | | cv | 0.77 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 18 | | 1 | 2 | | 2 | 11 | | 3 | 14 | | 4 | 25 | | 5 | 19 | | 6 | 4 | | 7 | 25 | | 8 | 18 | | 9 | 11 | | 10 | 2 | | 11 | 6 | | 12 | 4 | | 13 | 32 | | 14 | 6 | | 15 | 4 | | 16 | 6 | | 17 | 4 | | 18 | 2 | | 19 | 6 | | 20 | 4 | | 21 | 27 | | 22 | 6 | | 23 | 14 | | 24 | 9 | | 25 | 3 | | 26 | 9 | | 27 | 15 | | 28 | 23 | | 29 | 8 | | 30 | 5 | | 31 | 2 | | 32 | 4 | | 33 | 9 | | 34 | 19 | | 35 | 4 | | 36 | 5 | | 37 | 5 | | 38 | 8 | | 39 | 22 | | 40 | 24 | | 41 | 23 | | 42 | 4 | | 43 | 8 | | 44 | 6 | | 45 | 3 | | 46 | 21 | | 47 | 6 | | 48 | 3 | | 49 | 4 |
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| 47.87% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 13 | | diversityRatio | 0.3458646616541353 | | totalSentences | 133 | | uniqueOpeners | 46 | |
| 84.03% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 119 | | matches | | 0 | "Just a subtle shift in" | | 1 | "Instead, there was only the" | | 2 | "So quiet she could hear" |
| | ratio | 0.025 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 33 | | totalSentences | 119 | | matches | | 0 | "She almost missed them—head down," | | 1 | "She’d seen them before, in" | | 2 | "She should turn back." | | 3 | "*You don’t have to be" | | 4 | "You can walk away.*" | | 5 | "Your mother’s name depends on" | | 6 | "Her mother, who’d been dead" | | 7 | "It wasn’t dramatic." | | 8 | "She should have heard something." | | 9 | "She pressed her thumbnail into" | | 10 | "Her voice came out steady" | | 11 | "She took another step." | | 12 | "It shimmered slightly, a heat-haze" | | 13 | "Her voice was harder now" | | 14 | "It was to her left." | | 15 | "She spun again and found" | | 16 | "She saw it first in" | | 17 | "It had the suggestion of" | | 18 | "It hit the grass with" | | 19 | "She stumbled backward, her hand" |
| | ratio | 0.277 | |
| 100.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 80 | | totalSentences | 119 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory had walked the perimeter" | | 1 | "The oak standing stones caught" | | 2 | "She almost missed them—head down," | | 3 | "The stones weren’t right." | | 4 | "She’d seen them before, in" | | 5 | "She should turn back." | | 6 | "The thought surfaced, clear and" | | 7 | "*You don’t have to be" | | 8 | "You can walk away.*" | | 9 | "*Midnight, the standing stones." | | 10 | "Your mother’s name depends on" | | 11 | "Jennifer Carter née Ellis." | | 12 | "Her mother, who’d been dead" | | 13 | "Rory clicked off her phone" | | 14 | "It wasn’t dramatic." | | 15 | "Richmond Park was three miles" | | 16 | "She should have heard something." | | 17 | "The rustle of deer." | | 18 | "The low murmur of London" | | 19 | "A low, wet whisper." |
| | ratio | 0.672 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 119 | | matches | | 0 | "Now, under the weight of" | | 1 | "Even in darkness, she knew" | | 2 | "Now the oak tree was" |
| | ratio | 0.025 | |
| 51.67% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 47 | | technicalSentenceCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "But the pendant pulsed, a single throb of not-quite-warmth that made her suck in a breath and look up." | | 1 | "The thought surfaced, clear and rational, the same voice that had gotten her out of Evan’s flat with a single suitcase and a black eye she’d lied about to every…" | | 2 | "Her mother, who’d been dead for six years and had no business being mentioned in a note slipped under the door of a flat above a bar." | | 3 | "And the silence—the vast, swallowing silence of a place that had never known traffic or sirens or the distant hum of the city." | | 4 | "In a voice that was too high and too low at the same time, a chord of sound vibrating in her molars." | | 5 | "So she walked toward the oak tree that was definitely, impossibly closer now, and she kept her eyes fixed on the bark that seemed to pulse with a slow, sap-thic…" |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 2 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 1 | | fancyCount | 0 | | fancyTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 5 | | tagDensity | 0.2 | | leniency | 0.4 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |