| 0.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 2 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | | dialogueSentences | 0 | | tagDensity | 1 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.5 | | effectiveRatio | 0.5 | |
| 96.41% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1392 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 1 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 38.94% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1392 | | totalAiIsms | 17 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "pulsed" | | 1 | "throb" | | 2 | "glint" | | 3 | "could feel" | | 4 | "rhythmic" | | 5 | "pulse" | | 6 | "warmth" | | 7 | "silence" | | 8 | "etched" | | 9 | "weight" | | 10 | "flicker" | | 11 | "familiar" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 101 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 101 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 101 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 42 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 3 | | markdownWords | 3 | | totalWords | 1379 | | ratio | 0.002 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 2 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 12 | | wordCount | 1352 | | uniqueNames | 8 | | maxNameDensity | 0.37 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Carter | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Isabella | 1 | | Plantation | 1 | | Fae | 1 | | Grove | 1 | | London | 1 | | Aurora | 5 |
| | persons | | | places | | 0 | "Park" | | 1 | "Isabella" | | 2 | "Plantation" | | 3 | "Fae" | | 4 | "Grove" | | 5 | "London" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 73 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "throb that seemed to press her toward the window, toward the dark line of trees she could just see beyond the rooftops" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1379 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 101 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 35 | | mean | 39.4 | | std | 27.27 | | cv | 0.692 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 82 | | 1 | 14 | | 2 | 96 | | 3 | 2 | | 4 | 37 | | 5 | 72 | | 6 | 83 | | 7 | 19 | | 8 | 81 | | 9 | 29 | | 10 | 47 | | 11 | 5 | | 12 | 72 | | 13 | 36 | | 14 | 8 | | 15 | 67 | | 16 | 9 | | 17 | 42 | | 18 | 22 | | 19 | 41 | | 20 | 38 | | 21 | 59 | | 22 | 8 | | 23 | 38 | | 24 | 70 | | 25 | 21 | | 26 | 4 | | 27 | 58 | | 28 | 2 | | 29 | 58 | | 30 | 39 | | 31 | 5 | | 32 | 12 | | 33 | 41 | | 34 | 62 |
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| 98.32% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 101 | | matches | | 0 | "was locked" | | 1 | "been shaped" |
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| 71.18% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 4 | | totalVerbs | 207 | | matches | | 0 | "was checking" | | 1 | "was singing" | | 2 | "was glowing" | | 3 | "was coming" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 13 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 9 | | totalSentences | 101 | | ratio | 0.089 | | matches | | 0 | "The deep crimson gemstone—thumbnail-sized, polished smooth—pulsed with a faint, steady heat that no inert piece of jewellery should possess." | | 1 | "The wildflowers that covered the clearing floor—bluebells, primroses, tiny white blossoms she couldn't name—should not have been blooming in late autumn." | | 2 | "But the pendant was singing against her skin now—a hum she could feel in her teeth—and her feet would not obey." | | 3 | "Not a sound that should exist in a quiet woodland at night—not the rustle of a fox or the distant bark of a deer." | | 4 | "Silence rushed in to fill the space—a silence so complete she could hear her own blood moving in her veins." | | 5 | "She turned back to the spiral, but her eyes caught a flicker at the edge of her vision—a shape, low and quick, darting between two stones." | | 6 | "She turned again, faster, and this time she saw it clearly—a silhouette, human-shaped but wrong in its proportions, standing at the far edge of the clearing, just outside the ring of stones." | | 7 | "The light illuminated the spiral on the granite, and she saw that the dark substance in the grooves was moving—seeping upward, spreading across the surface like water defying gravity." | | 8 | "And yet, standing there in the empty street, she could still feel it—the weight of that figure’s gaze, the tilt of its head, the certainty that it had not followed because it did not need to." |
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| 65.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 38 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 4 | | adverbRatio | 0.10526315789473684 | | lyAdverbCount | 0 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 101 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 101 | | mean | 13.65 | | std | 10.21 | | cv | 0.748 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 14 | | 1 | 26 | | 2 | 31 | | 3 | 4 | | 4 | 7 | | 5 | 14 | | 6 | 15 | | 7 | 30 | | 8 | 19 | | 9 | 32 | | 10 | 2 | | 11 | 6 | | 12 | 11 | | 13 | 20 | | 14 | 42 | | 15 | 20 | | 16 | 5 | | 17 | 5 | | 18 | 9 | | 19 | 40 | | 20 | 6 | | 21 | 28 | | 22 | 19 | | 23 | 6 | | 24 | 13 | | 25 | 24 | | 26 | 21 | | 27 | 17 | | 28 | 10 | | 29 | 19 | | 30 | 3 | | 31 | 23 | | 32 | 21 | | 33 | 5 | | 34 | 6 | | 35 | 24 | | 36 | 13 | | 37 | 1 | | 38 | 28 | | 39 | 11 | | 40 | 6 | | 41 | 19 | | 42 | 5 | | 43 | 3 | | 44 | 20 | | 45 | 41 | | 46 | 6 | | 47 | 9 | | 48 | 11 | | 49 | 14 |
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| 35.15% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 15 | | diversityRatio | 0.25742574257425743 | | totalSentences | 101 | | uniqueOpeners | 26 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 95 | | matches | | 0 | "Almost hot against her sternum." | | 1 | "Only the standing stones, the" | | 2 | "Just a gust of wind" |
| | ratio | 0.032 | |
| 51.58% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 40 | | totalSentences | 95 | | matches | | 0 | "It was after midnight." | | 1 | "She had no business going" | | 2 | "She didn’t know whose hand" | | 3 | "She told herself she was" | | 4 | "She pulled on a thin" | | 5 | "She squeezed through, snagging her" | | 6 | "She had only heard of" | | 7 | "She’d dismissed it as drunken" | | 8 | "She pushed through a tangle" | | 9 | "It was not a natural" | | 10 | "She stopped at the edge" | | 11 | "She should leave." | | 12 | "She stepped into the grove." | | 13 | "It was a low, rhythmic" | | 14 | "It seemed to come from" | | 15 | "She touched it through her" | | 16 | "She knelt beside the stone." | | 17 | "She leaned closer to the" | | 18 | "She spun, heart lunging into" | | 19 | "She forced herself to breathe." |
| | ratio | 0.421 | |
| 65.26% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 75 | | totalSentences | 95 | | matches | | 0 | "The key turned in the" | | 1 | "Aurora Carter slid the bolt" | | 2 | "The last of the evening’s" | | 3 | "It was after midnight." | | 4 | "She had no business going" | | 5 | "She didn’t know whose hand" | | 6 | "The deep crimson gemstone—thumbnail—sized, polished" | | 7 | "She told herself she was" | | 8 | "That the sensation would fade" | | 9 | "She pulled on a thin" | | 10 | "The park gate was locked" | | 11 | "She squeezed through, snagging her" | | 12 | "The pendant was warmer now." | | 13 | "The Fae Grove was not" | | 14 | "She had only heard of" | | 15 | "She’d dismissed it as drunken" | | 16 | "She pushed through a tangle" | | 17 | "It was not a natural" | | 18 | "The ground was too level," | | 19 | "The wildflowers that covered the" |
| | ratio | 0.789 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 95 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 30.81% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 51 | | technicalSentenceCount | 8 | | matches | | 0 | "And tonight, the heat had become an insistence, a low throb that seemed to press her toward the window, toward the dark line of trees she could just see beyond …" | | 1 | "Seven standing stones ringed the space, ancient oaks that had been shaped and twisted into pillars over centuries, their bark smooth as polished bone." | | 2 | "The wildflowers that covered the clearing floor—bluebells, primroses, tiny white blossoms she couldn't name—should not have been blooming in late autumn." | | 3 | "Yet there they were, petals luminous under the moonless sky, catching a light that had no source." | | 4 | "She leaned closer to the slab, and in the dim light she saw something etched into the surface, a spiral that coiled inward on itself, carved deep into the grani…" | | 5 | "It had no features she could make out, only the darker outline of a head, shoulders, arms that hung too long." | | 6 | "The gemstone was glowing now, a faint inner light that bled through the thin fabric of her shirt, casting a red stain across her chest." | | 7 | "She did not stop until she reached the park fence, until she was through the gap and stumbling onto the pavement, her hands shaking so badly she could barely gr…" |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 2 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |