| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 1 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 1 | | tagDensity | 1 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 95.75% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1176 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 1 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 2.21% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1176 | | totalAiIsms | 23 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "echoed" | | 1 | "silence" | | 2 | "pulsed" | | 3 | "warmth" | | 4 | "flicker" | | 5 | "flickered" | | 6 | "echo" | | 7 | "scanning" | | 8 | "stark" | | 9 | "whisper" | | 10 | "footsteps" | | 11 | "pulse" | | 12 | "weight" | | 13 | "stomach" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 113 | | matches | | |
| 92.29% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 2 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 113 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | 0 | "seemed to" | | 1 | "managed to" |
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| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 113 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 34 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 3 | | markdownWords | 34 | | totalWords | 1166 | | ratio | 0.029 | | matches | | 0 | "Come to the grove. Alone. You’ll understand when you see it." | | 1 | "You’ll understand when you see it." | | 2 | "You’re a rational person. This is a park. There are deer, foxes, badgers. The wind plays tricks." |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 2 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 16 | | wordCount | 1165 | | uniqueNames | 6 | | maxNameDensity | 0.52 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Rory | 6 | | Richmond | 3 | | Park | 1 | | November | 1 | | Eva | 3 | | Hel | 2 |
| | persons | | | places | | | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 50.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 75 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "felt like a warning" | | 1 | "crack that seemed to linger in the air" | | 2 | "looked like nothing more than a patch of" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1166 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 113 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 28 | | mean | 41.64 | | std | 26.71 | | cv | 0.641 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 90 | | 1 | 36 | | 2 | 97 | | 3 | 27 | | 4 | 91 | | 5 | 75 | | 6 | 17 | | 7 | 52 | | 8 | 3 | | 9 | 49 | | 10 | 53 | | 11 | 47 | | 12 | 53 | | 13 | 15 | | 14 | 48 | | 15 | 49 | | 16 | 61 | | 17 | 7 | | 18 | 7 | | 19 | 2 | | 20 | 71 | | 21 | 32 | | 22 | 32 | | 23 | 36 | | 24 | 16 | | 25 | 49 | | 26 | 45 | | 27 | 6 |
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| 95.95% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 113 | | matches | | 0 | "was supposed" | | 1 | "was hidden" | | 2 | "been allowed" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 2 | | totalVerbs | 202 | | matches | | 0 | "was watching" | | 1 | "was holding" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 10 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 9 | | totalSentences | 113 | | ratio | 0.08 | | matches | | 0 | "The lock had been new—too new for a park that had stood for centuries—and it clicked open with a sharp, final sound that echoed through the silence." | | 1 | "She passed it and felt the pendant flicker—a brief warmth, then nothing." | | 2 | "The wind moved through the trees, but it made no sound—no rustle of leaves, no creak of branches." | | 3 | "But she felt it—a presence, pressing at the edge of her awareness." | | 4 | "Her heel came down on a flower, and the stem snapped with a sound too loud for a simple plant—a wet crack that seemed to linger in the air." | | 5 | "The presence she’d felt—it was still there, but it had shifted." | | 6 | "She couldn’t see anything, but the sound was precise, deliberate—a footstep, then another, circling the edge of the grove." | | 7 | "Then the footsteps began again—coming toward her." | | 8 | "The gap was five paces away, then three, then one—and she burst through it onto the path, stumbling as her foot caught on a root." |
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| 98.54% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1176 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 49 | | adverbRatio | 0.041666666666666664 | | lyAdverbCount | 9 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.007653061224489796 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 113 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 113 | | mean | 10.32 | | std | 7.69 | | cv | 0.746 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 22 | | 1 | 27 | | 2 | 5 | | 3 | 18 | | 4 | 11 | | 5 | 1 | | 6 | 6 | | 7 | 3 | | 8 | 3 | | 9 | 30 | | 10 | 7 | | 11 | 16 | | 12 | 25 | | 13 | 4 | | 14 | 33 | | 15 | 5 | | 16 | 7 | | 17 | 6 | | 18 | 13 | | 19 | 8 | | 20 | 11 | | 21 | 8 | | 22 | 12 | | 23 | 28 | | 24 | 23 | | 25 | 9 | | 26 | 8 | | 27 | 9 | | 28 | 16 | | 29 | 13 | | 30 | 7 | | 31 | 14 | | 32 | 8 | | 33 | 3 | | 34 | 10 | | 35 | 2 | | 36 | 2 | | 37 | 2 | | 38 | 18 | | 39 | 13 | | 40 | 19 | | 41 | 3 | | 42 | 6 | | 43 | 14 | | 44 | 2 | | 45 | 12 | | 46 | 3 | | 47 | 3 | | 48 | 9 | | 49 | 25 |
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| 34.96% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 17 | | diversityRatio | 0.22123893805309736 | | totalSentences | 113 | | uniqueOpeners | 25 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 5 | | totalSentences | 103 | | matches | | 0 | "Just the certainty that she" | | 1 | "Then the footsteps began again—coming" | | 2 | "Only then did she stop" | | 3 | "Almost an approval." | | 4 | "Eventually, she turned and walked" |
| | ratio | 0.049 | |
| 49.13% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 44 | | totalSentences | 103 | | matches | | 0 | "She shouldn’t have been here." | | 1 | "You’ll understand when you see" | | 2 | "She still didn’t." | | 3 | "Her trainers crunched on gravel," | | 4 | "She knew the way." | | 5 | "She’d come here with Eva" | | 6 | "It had always felt safe." | | 7 | "It pressed against her face," | | 8 | "She pulled her jacket tighter" | | 9 | "She passed it and felt" | | 10 | "They swayed in a wind" | | 11 | "She pulled it out and" | | 12 | "It glowed faintly, a dull" | | 13 | "She’d never seen it do" | | 14 | "It was supposed to warm" | | 15 | "Her voice came out flat," | | 16 | "She turned slowly, scanning the" | | 17 | "Her breath fogged in the" | | 18 | "It felt almost protective, but" | | 19 | "*You’ll understand when you see" |
| | ratio | 0.427 | |
| 42.52% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 86 | | totalSentences | 103 | | matches | | 0 | "The key was cold in" | | 1 | "The lock had been new—too" | | 2 | "She shouldn’t have been here." | | 3 | "The park closed at dusk," | | 4 | "You’ll understand when you see" | | 5 | "Rory hadn’t understood." | | 6 | "She still didn’t." | | 7 | "The path was darker than" | | 8 | "The streetlamps of Richmond stopped" | | 9 | "Her trainers crunched on gravel," | | 10 | "She knew the way." | | 11 | "She’d come here with Eva" | | 12 | "It had always felt safe." | | 13 | "A secret place, not a" | | 14 | "It pressed against her face," | | 15 | "She pulled her jacket tighter" | | 16 | "The first standing stone emerged" | | 17 | "Granite, crusted with lichen, taller" | | 18 | "She passed it and felt" | | 19 | "The second stone stood twenty" |
| | ratio | 0.835 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 103 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 47.62% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 45 | | technicalSentenceCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "The lock had been new—too new for a park that had stood for centuries—and it clicked open with a sharp, final sound that echoed through the silence." | | 1 | "The wildflowers that should have been dead by now bloomed at her feet, white and purple petals catching what little light there was." | | 2 | "It glowed faintly, a dull red ember that flickered like a dying candle." | | 3 | "Her breath fogged in the cold air, and she watched the cloud dissipate faster than it should have, as if something had drawn it away." | | 4 | "Her heart hammered against her ribs, and her breath came in white clouds that vanished into the night." | | 5 | "But she felt the weight of the grove’s attention on her shoulders all the way down the street, and she knew, with a certainty that sat cold in her stomach, that…" |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 1 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 1 | | fancyCount | 0 | | fancyTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 1 | | tagDensity | 1 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |