Run: 2026-04-25-01KQ2GGFAVNJC3A926C8PDHP0V

Run Details

Duration:
1m 55s
Cost:
$0.011666
Provider:
Together

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The green neon sign sputtered faintly as Aurora pushed open the heavy oak door of The Raven’s Nest, a familiar jangle of brass bells announcing her arrival. The scent of old wood and spilled whiskey wrapped around her like a threadbare coat. She20was already tugging at the strap of her delivery bag, her mind half-occupied with the route she still needed to finish before Cheung started texting her about the Wong order, when she saw him. He sat at the far end of the bar, away from the other patrons, 25hunched over a tumbler of something amber. The grey-streaked auburn hair caught the dim light first,209then the slight tilt of his shoulders, the way he rolled the glass between his palms. Older. Thinner in the face. But it was the limp—the way he’d hooked his left foot around the brass rail as if it were a concession—that made her stop dead on the threshold. Silas had told her about the Prague operation once, late at night after closing, when the maps on the walls seemed to whisper their own secrets. A double-cross. A flight of icy stairs. A knee that never healed right. But14 that had been years ago. A different lifetime. She hadn’t seen him since the funeral. Rory’s fingers tightened on the delivery bag. She could still turn around. The bell would jangle again,16 and he might not even look up. She could just— “Aurora.” His voice hadn’t changed. Low, measured, the kind of voice that could talk a man off a ledge or coax a confession from a stone. He didn’t turn on his stool, but his hand stilled on the glass. She saw his reflection in the mirror behind the bar, the deep-set hazel eyes finding hers in the silvered glass. “Silas,” she said, the name coming out steadier than she felt. She crossed the floor, her trainers silent on the worn floorboards. The other patrons—a young couple arguing quietly in the corner booth, a middle-aged man staring into his pint as if it held prophecy—paid her no mind. The Raven’s Nest was that kind of place. It collected people the way the Thames collected silt, slowly and without comment. She slid onto the stool beside him, closer than she’d intended. Up close, the changes were sharper. The beard was still neatly trimmed, but the silver had overtaken the auburn almost entirely. His skin, once weathered to a healthy bronze from the years of fieldwork, had faded to a paler shade, the lines around his mouth deeper, set into something that resembled a smile but wasn’t. He finally turned to face her, and she saw the signet ring glint on his right hand, the same silver band he’d worn since before she’d known him. He’d used it to crack a window in Barcelona once, she remembered. Or was it Vienna? The memories16 blurred now, like watercolours left in the rain. “You’re196 delivery for the kitchen?” he asked, gesturing to the bag with his chin. “Rory, please,” she corrected him, though the softness in her voice took the edge off. “Silas. I go by Rory now.” He absorbed that with a single, deliberate nod, the gesture of a man who had spent decades cataloguing196 information. “Rory, then. Good. Suits you.” “Does it?” “Less formal. Less—” He paused, searching for the word in the amber depths of his glass. “Less like someone else’s decision.” The words landed heavier than he likely intended. She felt them press against the scar on her wrist, the small crescent shape that Evan had given her when she’d tried to grab her keys off the kitchen counter before he could throw them. That was the thing about Silas. He’d always been able to see straight through to the unspoken thing, the dark shape moving under the surface of conversation. “I didn’t know you were back,” she said, waving down the bartender—a young man with a neck tattoo she’d never seen before—and ordering a soda water with lime. She needed her head clear for the rest of her shift. “I’m not back,” Silas said, swirling his whiskey. “I’m192 passing through.” “You still196 own this place, don’t you?” A ghost of a smile flickered at the corner of his mouth. “On paper.” She turned the glass of soda water in her hands, the condensation slick against her palms. “I live upstairs now. Flat 2B. Moved in three years ago, after—” She stopped, suddenly unsure how much to say. Silas had20 been19 gone for six years. He’d missed the worst of it. “After Cardiff,” he finished for her. She192 didn’t ask how he knew. Some people gathered190 information for a living. Silas had made it an art form. “Eva thought it’d be good for me,” she said16 quietly, her fingers finding the scar on her left wrist, the motion automatic. “Get out of the city. Away from—away.” Silas12 followed the movement with his eyes but said nothing. Another gift. The man could hold silence like a weapon, but he’d never used it to hurt her. Only to let her decide what she wanted to say. “It’s13 been six years,” she said finally. “I know.” “You left without saying goodbye. One day you were just—gone. The bar closed for a week. Marcus had to tell me. Marcus, Silas. Not you.” He set his glass down with a soft clink,14 and his24 left leg shifted on the rail,204 the old injury making itself known. “There are things I can’t explain, Aurora. Rory. Operations that don’t fit neatly into190 words over a pint.” “I’m not asking for details. I’m asking why you didn’t trust me enough to15 say anything at all.” She hadn’t meant to say it so bluntly. But the06 years had worn away her patience for evasion. She’d learned to call things what they were, to name13 monsters, even when the names tasted like ash on her tongue. Silas was silent for a long moment, his gaze fixed on the bottles lined up behind the bar. The green neon sign in the window flickered, reflected in the glass. “I wasn’t20 sure you’d want to hear it from me.” “That’s not an answer.” “No,” he agreed. “It’s not.” The couple in the corner booth rose, throwing down crumpled notes, their argument apparently resolved or abandoned. The door swung shut behind them, and the bells jangled, a hollow sound. “I thought about writing,” Silas said16 quietly,14 his voice so low she had to lean in to hear. “A hundred times. I wrote the words,190 and196 then I burned them. Because anything14 I said would have been12 a lie, and you—” He looked at her then,14 really looked, his12 hazel eyes12 sharp with14 an emotion she couldn’t name. “You deserved better than that.” Rory felt the sting of tears, unwelcome and surprising, behind her eyes. She blinked them back. “My father died.” “I know.” “You weren’t there.” He flinched. It was a small thing, a tightening of the muscle in his jaw, but she saw it. “I know,” he repeated. “You’d always said you’d be there. After the Prague thing, when you16 got out, when you opened this place, you said, ‘If anything ever happens, Rory, I’ll be there.’ And then my dad—the cancer took him in four months, Silas. Four months. And I16 called you, I left messages, and you—” She stopped,16 pressing the heel of her palm against her sternum where the old grief still lived, a stubborn14 houseguest that refused to leave. “I was14 in a14 safe house in Minsk,” he said,14 his voice raw.14 “I didn’t get your messages until six weeks after the funeral. And14 by14 then—” He shook his head. “By then, I convinced myself it would14 be easier for you if I stayed gone.” “Easier for me, or easier for you?” The question16 hung between them,14 sharp and clean as a knife. Silas14 rubbed his thumb over the silver signet ring. “You’re smarter than I ever gave you credit for.” He paused. “Or maybe I just16 forgot that you always were.” Rory took a16 sip of her soda water, the lime sharp against her tongue. “16I’m sorry,” she said14 after a moment. “That wasn’t fair.” “It was entirely fair.” He signaled the bartender for another whiskey,14 and14 Rory noticed his hand trembling just slightly, the tremor of age and14 exhaustion.16 “You’ve always been16 honest with me. Even when I didn’t return the favor.” “The Spymaster,” she said,14 a trace of an old, fond16 bitterness in her voice. “Some things don’t change.” “Some things do.”14 He gestured, a slight movement of his chin,16 toward her14 left hand.14 “The scar. It’s different. I noticed when14 you came in.” Rory looked down at her wrist, at the pale14 crescent moon of raised skin.14 Evan’s handiwork.16 “That’s16 a story16 for another whiskey. One16 I don’t think either16 of us is ready for.” “Fair enough.”14 He accepted the refill and held it toward her, a mock toast.14 “To old friends.” She14 hesitated, then14 raised16 her glass.12 “To16 showing up. Finally.” They drank, and the silence15 that followed was different. Softer. Not16 without regret—the regret was28 still there,14 woven into the gaps between words—but without the14 sharp edges. It was the silence of two people who had16 loved each other, in their own complicated way, and16 had hurt each other, and14 were now trying to decide if16 sixteen seconds of vulnerability could outweigh six years of absence. Outside14 the green neon buzzed, and14 the16 city murmured beyond the glass, and Rory checked her watch,14 knowing14 she was already20 late for the next delivery,14 knowing14 Cheung would be furious.14 But12 she didn’t move. Not yet.
created_at"2026-04-25T14:25:44.799Z" 4/25/2026, 2:25:44 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
77.55% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags23
adverbTagCount3
adverbTags
0"She stopped suddenly [suddenly]"
1"she said16 quietly [quietly]"
2"she said finally [finally]"
dialogueSentences49
tagDensity0.469
leniency0.939
rawRatio0.13
effectiveRatio0.122
87.62% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1616
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
1
adverb"suddenly"
count1
2
adverb"really"
count1
3
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
1"suddenly"
2"really"
3"slightly"
80.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found
0"Marcus"
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
65.97% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1616
totalAiIsms11
found
0
word"familiar"
count1
1
word"whisper"
count1
2
word"measured"
count1
3
word"glint"
count1
4
word"depths"
count1
5
word"unspoken"
count1
6
word"flickered"
count2
7
word"silence"
count2
8
word"resolved"
count1
highlights
0"familiar"
1"whisper"
2"measured"
3"glint"
4"depths"
5"unspoken"
6"flickered"
7"silence"
8"resolved"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences98
matches
0"felt the sting"
99.13% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences98
filterMatches
0"decide"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences123
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen76
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1605
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions17
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions29
wordCount1206
uniqueNames12
maxNameDensity0.75
worstName"Silas"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Silas"
discoveredNames
Aurora1
Raven2
Nest2
Cheung2
Wong1
Prague1
Thames1
Barcelona1
Vienna1
Evan2
Silas9
Rory6
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Raven"
2"Cheung"
3"Wong"
4"Evan"
5"Silas"
6"Rory"
places
0"Prague"
1"Thames"
2"Barcelona"
3"Vienna"
globalScore1
windowScore0.833
83.33% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences75
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"tasted like ash on her tongue"
1"their argument apparently resolved or abandon"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1605
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences123
matches
0"was that kind"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs57
mean28.16
std21.92
cv0.778
sampleLengths
076
178
248
37
427
51
658
711
858
966
1054
1114
1221
1324
142
1521
1670
1739
1811
197
2014
2149
226
2320
2429
2538
267
272
2825
2941
3018
3139
3240
334
345
3530
3663
3719
382
393
4019
414
4275
4346
447
4511
4629
4724
4838
4918
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences98
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs198
matches(empty)
26.71% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount9
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences123
ratio0.041
matches
0"But it was the limp—the way he’d hooked his left foot around the brass rail as if it were a concession—that made her stop dead on the threshold."
1"She could just—"
2"The other patrons—a young couple arguing quietly in the corner booth, a middle-aged man staring into his pint as if it held prophecy—paid her no mind."
3"“I didn’t know you were back,” she said, waving down the bartender—a young man with a neck tattoo she’d never seen before—and ordering a soda water with lime."
4"Not16 without regret—the regret was28 still there,14 woven into the gaps between words—but without the14 sharp edges."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1229
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount33
adverbRatio0.026851098454027666
lyAdverbCount15
lyAdverbRatio0.012205044751830757
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences123
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences123
mean13.05
std10.98
cv0.841
sampleLengths
027
115
234
321
424
51
64
728
826
92
105
116
126
133
147
157
165
1712
183
191
204
2121
2213
2320
2411
2511
2626
278
2813
2911
306
3115
3234
3328
3412
354
3610
3714
3815
396
4019
415
422
4316
445
458
4635
476
4821
4928
53.66% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats9
diversityRatio0.36585365853658536
totalSentences123
uniqueOpeners45
37.88% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences88
matches
0"Only to let her decide"
ratio0.011
33.64% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount41
totalSentences88
matches
0"He sat at the far"
1"She hadn’t seen him since"
2"She could still turn around."
3"She could just—"
4"His voice hadn’t changed."
5"He didn’t turn on his"
6"She saw his reflection in"
7"she said, the name coming"
8"She crossed the floor, her"
9"It collected people the way"
10"She slid onto the stool"
11"His skin, once weathered to"
12"He finally turned to face"
13"He’d used it to crack"
14"he asked, gesturing to the"
15"she corrected him, though the"
16"He absorbed that with a"
17"He paused, searching for the"
18"She felt them press against"
19"He’d always been able to"
ratio0.466
5.45% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount80
totalSentences88
matches
0"The green neon sign sputtered"
1"The scent of old wood"
2"She20was already tugging at the"
3"He sat at the far"
4"The grey-streaked auburn hair caught"
5"Silas had told her about"
6"A flight of icy stairs."
7"A knee that never healed"
8"But14 that had been years"
9"A different lifetime."
10"She hadn’t seen him since"
11"Rory’s fingers tightened on the"
12"She could still turn around."
13"The bell would jangle again,16" 1/16/2001, 12:00:00 AM
14"She could just—"
15"His voice hadn’t changed."
16"He didn’t turn on his"
17"She saw his reflection in"
18"she said, the name coming"
19"She crossed the floor, her"
ratio0.909
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences88
matches(empty)
ratio0
59.80% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences43
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"But it was the limp—the way he’d hooked his left foot around the brass rail as if it were a concession—that made her stop dead on the threshold."
1"The other patrons—a young couple arguing quietly in the corner booth, a middle-aged man staring into his pint as if it held prophecy—paid her no mind."
2"His skin, once weathered to a healthy bronze from the years of fieldwork, had faded to a paler shade, the lines around his mouth deeper, set into something that…"
3"He absorbed that with a single, deliberate nod, the gesture of a man who had spent decades cataloguing196 information."
4"It was the silence of two people who had16 loved each other, in their own complicated way, and16 had hurt each other, and14 were now trying to decide if16 sixte…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags23
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"she said, the name coming out steadier than she felt"
88.78% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags10
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"she corrected (correct)"
1"he agreed (agree)"
2"he repeated (repeat)"
dialogueSentences49
tagDensity0.204
leniency0.408
rawRatio0.3
effectiveRatio0.122
79.4283%