Run: 2026-04-25-01KQ2JDNY9QECW829194NGX0NJ

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Duration:
1m 23s
Cost:
$0.002419
Provider:
DeepSeek

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The damp chill of a Soho evening clung to Rory’s jacket as she pushed open the heavy oak door of The Raven’s Nest. The green neon glow from the sign outside tinted the wet pavement for a moment before the door swung shut, sealing her into the warm, amber-lit quiet. She shook rain from her shoulder-length black hair and scanned the room out of habit. Weeknight regulars dotted the stools like moss on old stones. Silas stood behind the bar, polishing a pint glass with a white cloth, his grey-streaked auburn hair catching the light. Rory had just hung her jacket on a peg when the door opened again behind her. A gust of cold air, the brief hiss of traffic, and then the thud of the door closing. She didn’t turn at first—people came and went—but Silas glanced up, and his expression flickered with something between recognition and caution. A bar owner’s instinct. Then a voice, low and measured, with an edge of something Rory couldn’t immediately place. “Rory.” She turned. The man standing just inside the doorway was tall and lean, his dark wool coat beaded with rain. He looked like someone who had been traveling, or perhaps just not sleeping. There were lines at the corners of his eyes that hadn’t been there before, a new sharpness to his jaw. His hair was shorter, neater than she remembered. But the eyes were unmistakable: a deep, calm brown that she’d last seen across a café table in Cardiff four years ago, when she’d told him she was leaving for London and he’d said nothing at all. “Marcus,” she said. The name felt strange in her mouth, like a word from a language she’d half forgotten. He smiled, but it didn’t reach his eyes. “I thought it was you. From the back, I wasn’t sure.” He took a step closer, and she caught the scent of rain and something smoky, like a fire that had burned down to embers. “It’s been a long time.” Silas set down his glass. “Everything all right, Rory?” His voice was casual, but his hazel eyes moved between them with the kind of quiet assessment that came from a lifetime of reading rooms. “It’s fine, Silas,” she said, forcing her shoulders to relax. “An old friend.” Silas nodded once, but he didn’t go back to polishing. He busied himself with rearranging bottles on the back shelf, close enough to hear, far enough to give the illusion of privacy. Marcus took off his coat and draped it over a stool. Underneath, he wore a simple dark sweater, but the watch on his wrist was new. Expensive. The kind of detail Rory’s mother would have called telling. He gestured to the bar. “Can I buy you a drink? For old times’ sake.” She wanted to say no. The instinct was immediate and sharp, a small flare of self-protection. But she was twenty-five now, not twenty-one, and she’d learned that running only took you so far. “One drink,” she said, and slid onto a stool. He settled onto the one beside her, leaving a careful space between them. Silas came over. Marcus ordered a whiskey, neat. Rory asked for a glass of the house red. They waited in silence while the drinks were poured, the only sound the soft clink of glass and the murmur of a radio somewhere in the back. When the wine arrived, Rory wrapped her fingers around the stem and took a sip. Earthy, a little sharp. It steadied her. “You look well,” Marcus said, turning his glass in slow circles on the bar top. “Different, but well.” “Different how?” He considered the question, his brow furrowing slightly. “Older. More… settled, maybe. I’m not sure how to describe it. There’s something in the way you’re sitting, like you’re not waiting to leave.” The observation landed too close to the truth. She deflected. “And you? You look like you haven’t slept in a week.” A short laugh, more breath than sound. “I’m on my way back from Zurich. Work. It’s been a brutal year.” He said it the way people did when they wanted you to ask more, but she didn’t take the bait. Instead, she watched him in the mirror behind the bar. The reflection showed a man who carried tension in his shoulders like a backpack full of stones. “Zurich,” she said. “That’s a long way from the philosophy department.” “I left academia.” He took a long swallow of whiskey. “Three years ago now. I went into consulting. Business ethics, ironically. Turns out companies will pay a lot of money for someone to tell them how to look moral without actually changing anything.” The bitterness in his voice was worn smooth, a stone polished by too many repetitions. Rory remembered the Marcus she’d known at university: a graduate student with ink-stained fingers and a battered copy of Kierkegaard perpetually tucked under his arm. He’d worn secondhand cardigans and argued passionately about the existence of the soul. The man beside her now wore a watch that probably cost more than her monthly rent and spoke about his work like it was a punishment. “Do you like it?” she asked. “The work.” He didn’t answer right away. Outside, a siren wailed past, its sound muffled by the thick walls of the bar. “I’m good at it,” he said finally. “That’s not the same thing.” The words hung between them, and Rory felt the weight of everything unspoken pressing against the edges of the conversation. Four years ago, she’d fled Cardiff with a suitcase and a half-formed plan, leaving behind an abusive ex named Evan who had spent two years breaking her down piece by piece. Marcus had been her friend then, the one who’d seen the bruises she’d tried to hide with long sleeves and careful makeup. He’d never confronted her about them directly. Instead, he’d left books in her bag with passages underlined, lines about courage and self-worth and the right to walk away. She’d never thanked him for it. She’d never said goodbye at all. “I heard about Evan,” Marcus said quietly, as if reading her thoughts. “After you left. I heard what he did.” Rory’s fingers tightened on the stem of her wine glass. The small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist seemed to itch beneath her sleeve, a phantom reminder of a night she didn’t want to revisit. “That’s old news.” “I should have done more.” The words came out in a rush, as if he’d been holding them for years. “I knew something was wrong. I saw it, and I didn’t—I thought it wasn’t my place. I told myself you’d ask for help if you needed it.” He set his glass down with a little too much force, and whiskey sloshed over the rim. “That was cowardice, not respect.” Rory looked at him, this stranger in a well-cut coat with guilt carved into the lines of his face. She remembered the books he’d left her, the quiet ways he’d tried to reach her without forcing her hand. “You were twenty-three,” she said. “We both were. You weren’t supposed to save me.” “Someone should have.” “I saved myself.” She said it without pride, just fact. “It took longer than it should have, and I made a mess of it, but I got out. I got here.” She gestured vaguely at the bar around them, at the maps on the walls and the black-and-white photographs of places she’d never been. “This is mine. This life. I built it. And you don’t get to come in here after four years and tell me you’re sorry you weren’t the one to do it for me.” Silence fell. The radio in the back crackled faintly, someone singing about rain and memory. Silas had moved to the far end of the bar, giving them more space, but she could feel his attention like a steady hand on her back. Marcus exhaled slowly. “That’s fair,” he said. “That’s more than fair.” He picked up his glass again, cradling it between his palms. “I’m not the person I was. I don’t know if that’s a good thing or not.” “Who are you, then?” He didn’t flinch at the directness of the question. “Someone who spends a lot of time in airports,” he said. “Someone who has a very nice apartment he never sees. Someone who woke up one morning and realized he’d become the kind of person he used to write essays about, and not in a good way.” He met her eyes in the mirror. “I think I’ve been running, too. Just in a different direction.” Rory turned on her stool to face him directly. The movement brought her knee close to his, but she didn’t pull away. “Why are you really here, Marcus? You didn’t just wander into The Raven’s Nest on a rainy Tuesday.” He hesitated, and for a moment she saw a flash of the old Marcus, the one who’d linger in doorways and struggle to say what he meant. “I’m in London for a conference. I had a free evening. I remembered you mentioning this place once, years ago, before everything. You said the owner had a green sign and a knee that predicted the weather.” A faint, crooked smile. “I wasn’t sure you’d still be here. I just… I wanted to see if you were all right.” “And if I wasn’t?” “Then maybe I’d finally get it right.” He said it without self-pity, just a quiet acknowledgment of a debt long overdue. “But you are. You’re all right. Better than all right.” The truth of it settled over her. She was all right. Not perfect, not unscathed, but standing on her own feet in a life she’d chosen. She thought of the flat above the bar, of the smell of ginger and garlic from Yu-Fei’s restaurant where she’d work her shift tomorrow, of Silas teaching her how to spot a tail and read a room. This was hers. All of it. “I am,” she said. “And you?” Marcus looked down at his whiskey, at the amber liquid catching the bar light. “I’m working on it.” He pulled a card from his pocket and slid it across the bar toward her. It was plain, white, with just a name and a phone number. “If you ever want to talk. Not about the past. Just… talk. I’d like that.” Rory picked up the card. She ran her thumb over the edge, feeling the crispness of the paper. “Maybe,” she said. “But not tonight.” “Not tonight,” he agreed. He finished his whiskey and stood, pulling his coat back on. The rain had stopped; the windows showed only the dark, wet gleam of the street outside. He paused near the door, looking back at her with an expression she couldn’t quite read. “Take care of yourself, Rory.” “You too, Marcus.” The door opened, and the night swallowed him. Rory sat for a long moment, the card still in her hand, before Silas drifted back down the bar. He picked up Marcus’s empty glass and wiped the spot where it had stood. “Old friend?” he asked, his tone neutral. “Something like that.” She tucked the card into her pocket. “He’s changed.” Silas glanced toward the door. “People do,” he said. “The question is whether they’ve changed into someone worth knowing.” Rory thought about that. She thought about the books with their underlined passages, about the guilt in Marcus’s voice and the banked sadness in his eyes. About the girl she’d been and the woman she’d become. “I don’t know yet,” she said. “But maybe I’ll find out.” Silas nodded, the ghost of a smile tugging at the corner of his mouth. He refilled her wine glass without asking and moved away to tend to the other customers. Rory stayed on her stool, the card a small, weighty presence in her pocket, and watched the rain begin to fall again through the window. The green neon from the sign outside cast a faint glow on the wet street, and somewhere in the distance, a clock chimed the hour. Another night in Soho, full of old ghosts and new possibilities. She drank her wine slowly, tasting every note, and let the warmth of the bar settle deep into her bones.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags31
adverbTagCount3
adverbTags
0"he said finally [finally]"
1"Marcus said quietly [quietly]"
2"She gestured vaguely [vaguely]"
dialogueSentences64
tagDensity0.484
leniency0.969
rawRatio0.097
effectiveRatio0.094
85.39% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount2054
totalAiIsmAdverbs6
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"passionately"
count1
2
adverb"slowly"
count2
3
adverb"very"
count1
4
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"passionately"
2"slowly"
3"very"
4"really"
80.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found
0"Marcus"
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
65.92% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount2054
totalAiIsms14
found
0
word"chill"
count1
1
word"scanned"
count1
2
word"flickered"
count1
3
word"measured"
count1
4
word"silence"
count2
5
word"furrowing"
count1
6
word"tension"
count1
7
word"weight"
count1
8
word"unspoken"
count1
9
word"reminder"
count1
10
word"could feel"
count1
11
word"perfect"
count1
12
word"warmth"
count1
highlights
0"chill"
1"scanned"
2"flickered"
3"measured"
4"silence"
5"furrowing"
6"tension"
7"weight"
8"unspoken"
9"reminder"
10"could feel"
11"perfect"
12"warmth"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences125
matches
0"t with guilt"
85.71% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount5
narrationSentences125
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"tried to"
1"seemed to"
2"tend to"
3"begin to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences157
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen48
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords2052
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions31
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions47
wordCount1531
uniqueNames12
maxNameDensity0.98
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Soho2
Rory15
Raven1
Nest1
Silas10
Cardiff2
London1
Marcus11
Kierkegaard1
Evan1
Silence1
Yu-Fei1
persons
0"Rory"
1"Raven"
2"Silas"
3"Marcus"
4"Kierkegaard"
5"Evan"
places
0"Soho"
1"Cardiff"
2"London"
3"Yu-Fei"
globalScore1
windowScore1
40.11% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences91
glossingSentenceCount4
matches
0"something between recognition and caution"
1"looked like someone who had been travelin"
2"as if reading her thoughts"
3"quite read"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords0.975
wordCount2052
matches
0"Not perfect, not unscathed, but standing on her own feet in a life she’d chosen"
1"not unscathed, but standing on her own feet in a life she’d chosen"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences157
matches
0"learned that running"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs50
mean41.04
std29.87
cv0.728
sampleLengths
095
159
216
32
496
519
648
734
813
932
1052
1155
1266
1318
142
1532
1621
1767
1811
1958
2064
218
2232
23113
2420
2538
2669
2752
283
2987
3042
3138
324
3374
3440
3586
364
3731
3869
396
4060
4124
4252
433
4441
457
4612
4719
4847
49111
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences125
matches
0"were poured"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs254
matches
0"was leaving"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences157
ratio0.013
matches
0"She didn’t turn at first—people came and went—but Silas glanced up, and his expression flickered with something between recognition and caution."
1"The rain had stopped; the windows showed only the dark, wet gleam of the street outside."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1548
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount54
adverbRatio0.03488372093023256
lyAdverbCount17
lyAdverbRatio0.010981912144702842
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences157
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences157
mean13.07
std9.97
cv0.763
sampleLengths
023
127
215
310
420
516
618
721
84
915
101
112
1218
1313
1420
158
1637
173
1816
198
2035
215
225
2329
2410
253
2610
2722
2811
2915
301
3110
325
3310
345
3511
3617
379
3813
393
405
419
4227
4315
444
453
4615
473
482
498
49.68% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats7
diversityRatio0.3248407643312102
totalSentences157
uniqueOpeners51
90.91% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences110
matches
0"Then a voice, low and"
1"Instead, she watched him in"
2"Instead, he’d left books in"
ratio0.027
52.73% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount46
totalSentences110
matches
0"She shook rain from her"
1"She didn’t turn at first—people"
2"He looked like someone who"
3"His hair was shorter, neater"
4"He smiled, but it didn’t"
5"He took a step closer,"
6"His voice was casual, but"
7"she said, forcing her shoulders"
8"He busied himself with rearranging"
9"He gestured to the bar."
10"She wanted to say no."
11"she said, and slid onto"
12"He settled onto the one"
13"They waited in silence while"
14"It steadied her."
15"He considered the question, his"
16"He said it the way"
17"He took a long swallow"
18"He’d worn secondhand cardigans and"
19"He didn’t answer right away."
ratio0.418
23.64% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount96
totalSentences110
matches
0"The damp chill of a"
1"The green neon glow from"
2"She shook rain from her"
3"Weeknight regulars dotted the stools"
4"Silas stood behind the bar,"
5"Rory had just hung her"
6"A gust of cold air,"
7"She didn’t turn at first—people"
8"A bar owner’s instinct."
9"The man standing just inside"
10"He looked like someone who"
11"His hair was shorter, neater"
12"The name felt strange in"
13"He smiled, but it didn’t"
14"He took a step closer,"
15"Silas set down his glass."
16"His voice was casual, but"
17"she said, forcing her shoulders"
18"Silas nodded once, but he"
19"He busied himself with rearranging"
ratio0.873
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences110
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences60
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"Four years ago, she’d fled Cardiff with a suitcase and a half-formed plan, leaving behind an abusive ex named Evan who had spent two years breaking her down pie…"
76.61% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags31
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"Marcus said quietly, as if reading her thoughts"
1"The words came out, as if he’d been holding them for years"
2"he asked, his tone neutral"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags20
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"he agreed (agree)"
dialogueSentences64
tagDensity0.313
leniency0.625
rawRatio0.05
effectiveRatio0.031
84.8235%