Run: 2026-04-25-01KQ2JK9BA57B4T8E9HQ3V2VJ4

Run Details

Duration:
1m 39s
Cost:
$0.012485
Provider:
Together

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The green neon sign outside The Raven’s Nest flickered twice before steadying into its familiar hum, casting a pale wash over the wet pavement. Inside, the bar held its usual quiet — a handful of regulars nursing pints, the low murmur of a football match on the corner screen, the clink of glass against glass. Silas Blackwood stood behind the counter, polishing a tumbler with a white cloth, his movements unhurried. The slight weight of his left leg shifted against the stool he kept behind the bar, a concession to the damp weather and the old ache in his knee. The door swung open, letting in a gust of rain-scented air and a woman in a waxed jacket, her shoulder-length black hair plastered to her temples. She shrugged off the jacket, hung it on the rack near the door, and made her way to the far end of the counter. Rory Carter. She’d been upstairs in the flat twenty minutes ago, but she always came down this way — through the front door, not the back stairs — a ritual she’d kept since she first rented the place. Something about the transition from private to public, she’d told Silas once. He hadn’t asked. She sat on her usual stool, running a hand through her damp hair. “Rain’s getting worse.” “So I gathered,” Silas said, setting the tumbler down. “The usual?” “Please.” He poured her a glass of the house red, something inexpensive but decent — she’d never developed a taste for anything fancier. She wrapped both hands around the stem, the way someone holds a cup of tea for warmth, and let her gaze drift across the bar. The maps on the walls. The black-and-white photographs of places she’d never been. Silas watched her for a moment longer than necessary, a habit from his old life, reading the tension in her shoulders. The door opened again. A man stepped inside, shaking rain from a dark overcoat. He was tall, broad-shouldered but lean, with1960s style horn-rimmed glasses and a close-cropped beard shot through with grey. He moved with a precision that snagged at Silas’ attention — the way he scanned the room before stepping fully inside, the way his weight stayed centered. Trained, Silas thought. Or once-trained. The man hung his coat, approached the bar, and ordered a whiskey. Neat. Rory froze. Silas noticed it immediately. The wine glass stopped halfway to her lips. Her shoulders pulled back an inch, the way a cat draws into itself before deciding whether to flee or spit. He glanced at the man, who was studying the bottles on the back shelf with the air of someone20 who’d never been here before, then back at Rory. “Something wrong?” Silas asked softly. She didn’t answer. She set the glass down, her fingers lingering on the stem. The man’s whiskey arrived, and he lifted it, turning on his stool to survey the room. His eyes swept past her, then snapped back. A pause. Recognition flickered, then something more complicated — disbelief, then a kind of weary resignation. “Rory,” he said. His voice was deeper than it used to be. That was her first thought. Her second was that he looked04 older than he should, his face carved out and tired around the eyes,14 though the sharpness was still there, the intelligence that had once made him the most dangerous person she knew. She hadn’t seen Evan in six years. “Evan,” she said. Her voice came out flat,16 steadier than she felt. Silas16 busied himself with a glass, but his attention stayed fixed on the conversation. He knew the name. Rory had told him enough, over late-night drinks when the bar was empty and the memories crowded too close, about the man in Cardiff who’d been all charm and sharp edges, who’d isolated her, worn her down,15 left her with a small crescent scar on her wrist and a deep well of regret. She’d left him in the middle of the night, a single backpack, a train ticket to London Eva had bought for her. She’d never gone back. Evan picked up his whiskey and moved down the bar, settling onto the stool beside her. Up close, she could see the details: a small cut on his jaw from shaving, the frayed collar of his shirt, the faint tremor in his right hand that he tried to hide by gripping the glass tightly. She16 remembered that tremor. It got worse when he was angry, but06 had it always been there? “I didn’t expect to see you here,” he said. “I thought you were in Cardiff.” “I left.” Two words, but they carried06 the weight of everything she hadn’t told him. “I know.” He took a drink, a short, sharp swallow. “Eva told me. Eventually.” Rory16 pictured Eva cornered by him at a pub, or a grocery store, or somewhere else she shouldn’t have had to deal with him. Her17 jaw tightened. “That was06 supposed to be08 the point. That I left.” “I’m not here for you,” Evan said20 quickly. “If that’s what you’re thinking. I didn’t track you down. I’m08 here for a conference. King’s College. I’m a lecturer now.” She turned on her stool to look at him properly. A lecturer.663 He’d been an investment analyst when she knew him, all aggressive ambition and long hours03 that12 turned into03 excuses about why she couldn’t see her friends, why she couldn’t wear that dress, why everything that went wrong was somehow her fault. He’d05 talked about his colleagues with contempt,16 but06 had always787 craved05 their12 approval. And here he was, in a world of tweed and lecture halls,1663 his hands still shaking. “What do you lecture in?” She heard her own voice as if from a distance, polite and distant, the way she’d speak to a stranger. “Economics.” A wry smile that didn’t reach his eyes. “I’m04 boring now. Respectable.” Rory took a sip of her06 wine. It tasted sour.08 She’d imagined this moment a hundred times in the first year after she left, rehearsed what she’d say, how she’d make him understand the damage he’d done. But06 the man sitting next to her didn’t look13 like the14 man from her06 nightmares. He looked diminished. Defeated, even. She didn’t08 know what to do with that08. “You look well,” he said, and13 there was16 something in his tone — surprise, maybe, or regret. Like he’d12 expected her to be13 less. Less put together. Less whole. “I03 am.” She set the glass down and met his eyes. In her old life, she’d have dodged that stare, looked away, made herself small to avoid provoking him. She didn’t now. And he noticed. His gaze dropped first. “I’ve thought about calling you,” he said12 quietly. “A lot, actually. After you… After. ” “You never did.” “No.” He ran a thumb along the rim of his glass. “I didn’t know what to say. I still don’t.” Silas moved down the bar,12 refilling a bowl of nuts, his presence a silent reminder1 that Rory wasn’t alone. She felt a swell of gratitude toward him, but she13 kept16 her focus on Evan. “I’m not the same person,” Evan said. The tremor in his hand grew more noticeable. He seemed14 to realize she was watching it, and set the glass down. “I’ve been in therapy for three years. I’m on medication. I — ” He stopped, struggling. “I know that06 doesn’t undo what I did. I’m not asking for forgiveness.” Rory felt something shift in her chest. Not forgiveness — no,05 that was too warm. But understanding, maybe. She knew what it cost to rebuild yourself, to look at your own damage and decide16 to be something else. She’d done it too. In the06 flat above this bar, in her runs across London delivering noodles for Yu-Fei, in the slow recovery of06 trusting herself again. She’d been angry for so long she wasn’t sure who she’d be without it. But the anger07 felt tired now,16 a worn-out coat she’d outgrown. “Why are you telling me this?” she asked. “Because you deserved to hear it.” He looked at her then,14 properly, and his eyes were raw with a grief she couldn’t name. “You deserved an explanation six years ago. You deserved06 a lot of things I couldn’t give you. All I have now is the truth.” Rory stared at the dark surface of her wine. She could feel Silas watching — not intrusively, just present, a steady anchor15 in case she needed one. She thought about the scar on her wrist, how it had faded from angry red to15 pale silver, how she barely noticed it anymore unless someone pointed it out. She thought about her father’s voice on the phone last week, asking when she was coming home, and how she’d said not yet, maybe never, and how04 he’d accepted it without question. She thought about05 the05 weight of06 being loved by people who06 didn’t try to own her. She thought about how06 much had changed, and how she had changed, and06 how04 Evan had13 sat there16 looking like a ghost of his former self. And she realized17 she didn’t hate him anymore. She didn’t love him. He12 was just a stranger who’d once known her,14 and13 that knowledge carried its own kind of grief16 but no heat. “I’m glad you’re getting help,” she said finally.19 The words felt inadequate, too small for the history between them13. But06 they were true. Evan08 nodded. He finished his whiskey, set some money on the bar,22 and stood up. For a moment, he hovered, as if there was more to say. But whatever it was, he swallowed it. “Take care, Rory.” “You too.” He walked to the door, retrieved his coat, and stepped out into the rain without looking back. The neon sign outside flickered again, casting a green glow across the threshold, and then he was gone, swallowed by the Soho night. Rory let out a breath she hadn’t realized she’d been holding. Silas slid a fresh glass of wine in front of her16, replacing the03 one she’d barely touched. “On the house,” he said. She looked at him, and the tightness in her chest loosened. “You didn’t have to hover.” “I wasn’t hovering.” A ghost of a smile pulled at the corner of his mouth. “I was15 polishing glasses. With intent.” She laughed, a short exhale that was almost a sob. The bar settled back into its familiar rhythm — the murmur of voices, the rain tapping against the windows, the soft hiss of the radiator. She stayed on her stool,16 cradling the16 fresh wine, and let the silence between her and Silas stretch comfortable12. Outside, the rain kept falling, washing the streets clean.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
94.74% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags19
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"Silas asked softly [softly]"
1"he said12 quietly [quietly]"
dialogueSentences38
tagDensity0.5
leniency1
rawRatio0.105
effectiveRatio0.105
91.55% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1776
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"softly"
count1
1
adverb"tightly"
count1
2
adverb"quickly"
count1
highlights
0"softly"
1"tightly"
2"quickly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
57.77% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1776
totalAiIsms15
found
0
word"flickered"
count3
1
word"familiar"
count2
2
word"weight"
count4
3
word"warmth"
count1
4
word"tension"
count1
5
word"scanned"
count1
6
word"charm"
count1
7
word"could feel"
count1
8
word"silence"
count1
highlights
0"flickered"
1"familiar"
2"weight"
3"warmth"
4"tension"
5"scanned"
6"charm"
7"could feel"
8"silence"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"let out a breath"
count1
highlights
0"let out a breath"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells2
narrationSentences123
matches
0"was angry"
1"s with contempt"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences123
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"tried to"
1"try to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences141
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen54
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1787
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions21
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions43
wordCount1561
uniqueNames15
maxNameDensity0.77
worstName"Silas"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Silas"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Blackwood1
Carter1
Silas12
Trained1
Rory10
Evan7
Cardiff1
London2
Eva2
Two1
Like1
Yu-Fei1
Soho1
persons
0"Nest"
1"Blackwood"
2"Carter"
3"Silas"
4"Rory"
5"Evan"
6"Eva"
places
0"Raven"
1"Trained"
2"Cardiff"
3"London"
4"Soho"
globalScore1
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences86
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1787
matches(empty)
95.74% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount3
totalSentences141
matches
0"remembered that tremor"
1"wear that dress"
2"dodged that stare"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs46
mean38.85
std31.04
cv0.799
sampleLengths
0100
1103
216
311
41
581
677
72
860
95
1054
113
1259
1312
1497
1571
1615
1715
1814
1937
2029
2182
2225
2313
2465
2529
2639
2715
283
2920
3034
3157
3290
338
3447
35104
3659
3723
3837
392
4040
4128
425
4316
4421
4563
99.56% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences123
matches
0"being loved"
1"was gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs268
matches
0"was studying"
1"was watching"
2"was coming"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount9
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences8
totalSentences141
ratio0.057
matches
0"Inside, the bar held its usual quiet — a handful of regulars nursing pints, the low murmur of a football match on the corner screen, the clink of glass against glass."
1"She’d been upstairs in the flat twenty minutes ago, but she always came down this way — through the front door, not the back stairs — a ritual she’d kept since she first rented the place."
2"He poured her a glass of the house red, something inexpensive but decent — she’d never developed a taste for anything fancier."
3"Recognition flickered, then something more complicated — disbelief, then a kind of weary resignation."
4"“You look well,” he said, and13 there was16 something in his tone — surprise, maybe, or regret."
5"Not forgiveness — no,05 that was too warm."
6"She could feel Silas watching — not intrusively, just present, a steady anchor15 in case she needed one."
7"The bar settled back into its familiar rhythm — the murmur of voices, the rain tapping against the windows, the soft hiss of the radiator."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount523
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount8
adverbRatio0.015296367112810707
lyAdverbCount1
lyAdverbRatio0.0019120458891013384
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences141
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences141
mean12.67
std9.7
cv0.765
sampleLengths
024
131
216
329
426
524
62
736
812
93
1013
113
129
132
141
1522
1625
175
188
1921
204
2110
2218
2327
243
252
2612
271
282
294
308
3120
3228
335
343
3511
3616
378
382
3914
403
419
425
4338
447
453
469
4714
484
4953
46.57% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats16
diversityRatio0.3475177304964539
totalSentences141
uniqueOpeners49
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences109
matches(empty)
ratio0
32.84% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount51
totalSentences109
matches
0"She shrugged off the jacket,"
1"She’d been upstairs in the"
2"He hadn’t asked."
3"She sat on her usual"
4"He poured her a glass"
5"She wrapped both hands around"
6"He was tall, broad-shouldered but"
7"He moved with a precision"
8"Her shoulders pulled back an"
9"He glanced at the man,"
10"She didn’t answer."
11"She set the glass down,"
12"His eyes swept past her,"
13"His voice was deeper than"
14"Her second was that he"
15"She hadn’t seen Evan in"
16"Her voice came out flat,16"
17"He knew the name."
18"She’d left him in the"
19"She’d never gone back."
ratio0.468
33.39% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount93
totalSentences109
matches
0"The green neon sign outside"
1"Silas Blackwood stood behind the"
2"The slight weight of his"
3"The door swung open, letting"
4"She shrugged off the jacket,"
5"She’d been upstairs in the"
6"Something about the transition from"
7"He hadn’t asked."
8"She sat on her usual"
9"Silas said, setting the tumbler"
10"He poured her a glass"
11"She wrapped both hands around"
12"The maps on the walls."
13"The black-and-white photographs of places"
14"Silas watched her for a"
15"The door opened again."
16"A man stepped inside, shaking"
17"He was tall, broad-shouldered but"
18"He moved with a precision"
19"The man hung his coat,"
ratio0.853
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences109
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences59
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"Her second was that he looked04 older than he should, his face carved out and tired around the eyes,14 though the sharpness was still there, the intelligence th…"
1"Rory had told him enough, over late-night drinks when the bar was empty and the memories crowded too close, about the man in Cardiff who’d been all charm and sh…"
2"A lecturer.663 He’d been an investment analyst when she knew him, all aggressive ambition and long hours03 that12 turned into03 excuses about why she couldn’t s…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags19
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags10
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences38
tagDensity0.263
leniency0.526
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
81.1836%