| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 1 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 2 | | tagDensity | 0.5 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 96.85% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1586 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 1 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 46.41% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1586 | | totalAiIsms | 17 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "navigated" | | 1 | "resonated" | | 2 | "pulsed" | | 3 | "rhythmic" | | 4 | "weight" | | 5 | "flicker" | | 6 | "traced" | | 7 | "silence" | | 8 | "searing" | | 9 | "stomach" | | 10 | "raced" | | 11 | "familiar" | | 12 | "uncanny" | | 13 | "structure" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 181 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 2 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 181 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 182 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 36 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 13 | | markdownWords | 71 | | totalWords | 1584 | | ratio | 0.045 | | matches | | 0 | "When it burns, you go." | | 1 | "Thwump. Scrape. Thwump. Scrape." | | 2 | "Time moves differently," | | 3 | "An hour inside can be minutes or days outside. Or it can just be wrong." | | 4 | "It's guarding something. Or waiting." | | 5 | "Not the time. Not the you." | | 6 | "Hel portal," | | 7 | "It pulses near the breach. You're not just in the grove. You're standing on the door." | | 8 | "It wants me to leave," | | 9 | "It's herding me out." | | 10 | "Thwump. Scrape." | | 11 | "Thwump. Scrape." | | 12 | "Thwump. Scrape." |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 6 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 96.17% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 33 | | wordCount | 1579 | | uniqueNames | 10 | | maxNameDensity | 1.08 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Aurora | 17 | | November | 1 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Silas | 4 | | Evan | 4 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Hel | 2 | | Evan-thing | 1 | | Carter | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Aurora" | | 1 | "Silas" | | 2 | "Evan" | | 3 | "Evan-thing" | | 4 | "Carter" |
| | places | | 0 | "November" | | 1 | "Richmond" | | 2 | "Park" |
| | globalScore | 0.962 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 104 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "seemed taller their stalks elongated, stretching toward a canopy that felt impossibly dense" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1584 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 182 | | matches | | 0 | "bleed that Silas" | | 1 | "made that sound" |
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| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 44 | | mean | 36 | | std | 24.4 | | cv | 0.678 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 76 | | 1 | 56 | | 2 | 110 | | 3 | 61 | | 4 | 6 | | 5 | 43 | | 6 | 4 | | 7 | 35 | | 8 | 92 | | 9 | 51 | | 10 | 31 | | 11 | 37 | | 12 | 4 | | 13 | 28 | | 14 | 39 | | 15 | 44 | | 16 | 77 | | 17 | 12 | | 18 | 43 | | 19 | 57 | | 20 | 30 | | 21 | 31 | | 22 | 30 | | 23 | 18 | | 24 | 14 | | 25 | 56 | | 26 | 40 | | 27 | 6 | | 28 | 26 | | 29 | 2 | | 30 | 9 | | 31 | 2 | | 32 | 16 | | 33 | 15 | | 34 | 53 | | 35 | 40 | | 36 | 42 | | 37 | 45 | | 38 | 52 | | 39 | 65 | | 40 | 18 | | 41 | 35 | | 42 | 13 | | 43 | 20 |
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| 97.51% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 181 | | matches | | 0 | "being pulled" | | 1 | "was gone" | | 2 | "was gone" | | 3 | "was unblemished" |
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| 0.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 10 | | totalVerbs | 298 | | matches | | 0 | "wasn't coming" | | 1 | "wasn't burning" | | 2 | "was humming" | | 3 | "was walking" | | 4 | "was stretching" | | 5 | "was listening" | | 6 | "were fraying" | | 7 | "were turning" | | 8 | "were closing" | | 9 | "wasn't warning" |
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| 48.67% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 2 | | semicolonCount | 6 | | flaggedSentences | 6 | | totalSentences | 182 | | ratio | 0.033 | | matches | | 0 | "She had navigated the labyrinthine back accounts of Silas's bar; she had outmaneuvered Evan when he finally realized she wasn't coming home; she could walk through a magical clearing and walk back out." | | 1 | "Wildflowers spilled across the mossy floor in impossibly vibrant clusters; poppies the color of fresh blood and foxgloves dripping with luminescent nectar bloomed year-round, their petals trembling though the air was dead still." | | 2 | "Whoever—or whatever—made that sound hadn't moved closer." | | 3 | "The grove wasn't just deep; it was stretching." | | 4 | "It wasn't the sound of wood drying in the sun; it was the sound of fibers tearing under immense strain." | | 5 | "They fed on the panic of the temporal; they consumed the moments people wasted fearing." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1587 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 41 | | adverbRatio | 0.0258349086326402 | | lyAdverbCount | 9 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.005671077504725898 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 182 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 182 | | mean | 8.7 | | std | 7.57 | | cv | 0.87 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 7 | | 1 | 30 | | 2 | 24 | | 3 | 15 | | 4 | 9 | | 5 | 11 | | 6 | 33 | | 7 | 2 | | 8 | 1 | | 9 | 12 | | 10 | 17 | | 11 | 13 | | 12 | 27 | | 13 | 11 | | 14 | 30 | | 15 | 13 | | 16 | 33 | | 17 | 5 | | 18 | 10 | | 19 | 6 | | 20 | 7 | | 21 | 15 | | 22 | 9 | | 23 | 2 | | 24 | 10 | | 25 | 1 | | 26 | 1 | | 27 | 1 | | 28 | 1 | | 29 | 11 | | 30 | 4 | | 31 | 4 | | 32 | 7 | | 33 | 5 | | 34 | 4 | | 35 | 4 | | 36 | 17 | | 37 | 3 | | 38 | 13 | | 39 | 19 | | 40 | 2 | | 41 | 8 | | 42 | 26 | | 43 | 5 | | 44 | 4 | | 45 | 6 | | 46 | 19 | | 47 | 3 | | 48 | 1 | | 49 | 1 |
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| 33.52% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 30 | | diversityRatio | 0.29120879120879123 | | totalSentences | 182 | | uniqueOpeners | 53 | |
| 21.93% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 152 | | matches | | | ratio | 0.007 | |
| 72.63% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 56 | | totalSentences | 152 | | matches | | 0 | "It hit Aurora's lungs like" | | 1 | "She paused just beyond the" | | 2 | "She had navigated the labyrinthine" | | 3 | "Her hand went to her" | | 4 | "It hadn't stopped throbbing since" | | 5 | "It was humming, a low-frequency" | | 6 | "Her boot sank an inch," | | 7 | "It wasn't a snap or" | | 8 | "It was a wet, rhythmic" | | 9 | "It was walking the perimeter." | | 10 | "She shifted her weight." | | 11 | "Her peripheral vision snagged on" | | 12 | "She turned sharply." | | 13 | "She pressed her thumb against" | | 14 | "It was skin." | | 15 | "She yanked her hand back" | | 16 | "Her skin was unblemished." | | 17 | "She froze, every muscle locked." | | 18 | "It wasn't the sound of" | | 19 | "It didn't fall away." |
| | ratio | 0.368 | |
| 52.11% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 124 | | totalSentences | 152 | | matches | | 0 | "The air changed before the" | | 1 | "It hit Aurora's lungs like" | | 2 | "She paused just beyond the" | | 3 | "The second hand jittered, shuddered," | | 4 | "Aurora forced her breathing to" | | 5 | "Panic was a luxury, and" | | 6 | "She had navigated the labyrinthine" | | 7 | "Her hand went to her" | | 8 | "The deep crimson gem, no" | | 9 | "It hadn't stopped throbbing since" | | 10 | "An unknown benefactor had slipped" | | 11 | "It was humming, a low-frequency" | | 12 | "The gem's faint inner glow" | | 13 | "The grove opened before her," | | 14 | "Wildflowers spilled across the mossy" | | 15 | "Aurora stepped onto the loam." | | 16 | "Her boot sank an inch," | | 17 | "That was when the sound" | | 18 | "It wasn't a snap or" | | 19 | "It was a wet, rhythmic" |
| | ratio | 0.816 | |
| 98.68% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 152 | | matches | | 0 | "Whoever—or whatever—made that sound hadn't" | | 1 | "If it stopped, it was" | | 2 | "Now it came from her" |
| | ratio | 0.02 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 59 | | technicalSentenceCount | 14 | | matches | | 0 | "It hit Aurora's lungs like swallowed static, thick and cloying with the perfume of roses, a scent that had no business existing in a November wind sweeping thro…" | | 1 | "It was humming, a low-frequency vibration that resonated in her molars." | | 2 | "Wildflowers spilled across the mossy floor in impossibly vibrant clusters; poppies the color of fresh blood and foxgloves dripping with luminescent nectar bloom…" | | 3 | "When she looked back, the bluebells seemed taller, their stalks elongated, stretching toward a canopy that felt impossibly dense." | | 4 | "The far edge of the clearing dissolved into a mist that smelled of ozone and copper, the perspective warping like a reflection in a warped spoon." | | 5 | "She pressed her thumb against it, expecting a button, but the sensation that traveled up her arm wasn't metal." | | 6 | "She yanked her hand back as if burned, staring at her wrist." | | 7 | "Aurora gasped, clutching the gem, and the inner glow intensified, casting long, crimson shadows that stretched and twisted across the flowers." | | 8 | "The limbs were too long, segmented and knotted, clad in living moss and shifting leaves that adhered to flesh which cycled between pale muscle and grey bark." | | 9 | "The straight black strands that fell to her shoulders were fraying." | | 10 | "The tips were turning translucent, dissolving into fine grey dust that drifted upward, caught in a wind she couldn't feel." | | 11 | "Heavyset, stubble shadowing a jaw that tightened in a familiar, threatening sneer before dissolving back into rough bark." | | 12 | "The mimicry was imperfect, uncanny, a mask that kept trying to settle on the wrong bone structure." | | 13 | "Aurora Carter adjusted the strap of her bag, checked the knot on her boot, and stepped forward, into the circle of things that wore her world like a skin." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 1 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "she whispered, her voice steady in the silence" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 1 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 2 | | tagDensity | 0.5 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 1 | | effectiveRatio | 1 | |