Run: 2026-04-27-01KQ77C0JPQMGB4BPN5PMFSH36

Run Details

Duration:
2m 56s
Cost:
$0.038836
Provider:
Alibaba

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The scooter engine ticked as it cooled, a metronome counting down the silence. Rory killed the headlight and let the dark settle over Richmond Park. Midnight air bit through her delivery jacket, carrying the damp scent of fallen leaves and distant traffic. She should have been upstairs above Silas bar, nursing a mug of tea and sorting tomorrow route for the Golden Empress. Instead, she stood at the rusted pedestrian gate with a silver chain burning against her collarbone. The Heartstone pendant had not stopped pulsing since she left Cardiff. Tonight, it felt urgent. A slow, rhythmic warmth that matched her own heartbeat, then gradually outpaced it. The note slipped under her door that morning had been typed on cheap paper, unsigned, but the instruction was clear. Follow the heat. Find the stones. Before the hour turns. She had traced similar clues before, always leading to dead ends or half-remembered folklore. This time, the gem glowed with a faint inner light, deep crimson and thumbnail-small, pressing against her sternum like a second pulse. She touched it, felt the silver chain bite her fingers, and pushed through the gate. Richmond Park should have been asleep. Deer bedded in bracken, tawny owls hunting the ridges, the distant hum of London a dull blanket over the trees. Instead, the path ahead swallowed sound. Her boots on the gravel made no crunch. The wind moved through the canopy without a whisper. She paused, listening to the silence. It was not empty. It was held. Like a breath drawn and not released. She followed the pendant pull off the marked trail, into a tangle of hawthorn and elder. Branches caught at her sleeves. The crescent scar on her left wrist tingled, an old memory of shattered glass and a childhood kitchen floor waking for no reason. She pushed through a final curtain of ivy and stepped into the clearing. The Fae Grove did not belong to November. Wildflowers crowded the soil in impossible profusion. Foxgloves stood tall beside bluebells and red campion, all blooming under a moon that seemed too close, too sharp. Ancient oaks formed a rough circle, their trunks thick and twisted, bark grooved like weathered stone. They were not just trees. They were markers. Boundaries. The air tasted of damp earth and crushed petals, sweet and cloying. The pendant grew hotter. Rory unclasped it, letting the gem rest in her palm. It glowed faintly, a deep crimson pulse that matched the rhythm in her throat. She took three steps forward. A twig snapped behind her. She turned. Nothing but the ivy curtain she had just pushed through, still swaying. She had not touched it. She told herself it was settling foliage, though the air had not moved. She faced the stones again. Another sound. A soft, wet drag. Like something heavy pulled through loam. It came from her left. She tracked it with her eyes, but the flowers only trembled in a pattern that did not match any breeze. She kept her breathing even. Cool head. Assess. Do not run. Evan used to mock her for overthinking, for mapping exits and weighing variables. Now, overthinking was the only thing keeping her upright. She checked her watch. Twelve fourteen. The second hand stuttered, jumped backward, then spun lazily counter-clockwise before freezing. She tapped the glass. Nothing. The pendant warmth spiked. She slipped the chain back over her neck. The gem settled against her sternum, beating faster. Something shifted at the edge of the tree line. Not an animal. The shape was wrong. Too tall. Too still until it was not. It slid between two oaks without parting the shadows. Rory did not turn her head. She kept her gaze fixed on the center of the clearing, where the wildflowers grew densest, and let her peripheral vision do the work. The shape moved again. Closer. It did not walk. It unfolded. Branches seemed to bend toward it. The flowers tilted their faces away. Her pulse hammered against the pendant. She forced her shoulders down, unclenched her jaw. The stories Silas muttered over pints, the fragments she had pieced together from library archives and late-night deliveries, all said the same thing. Time behaved differently here. An hour inside could be minutes or days outside. If she stayed too long, London might age without her. If she left too soon, she would miss whatever door the pendant was trying to open. Or whatever was trying to open her. A whisper brushed her right ear. Not words. Vowels stretched thin, like a recording played backward and slowed. She flinched, spinning. The clearing was empty. The ivy curtain hung still. But the gravel at her feet bore a footprint. Long. Narrow. Toes splayed like roots. It had not been there a second ago. She stepped back. Another print appeared in the damp soil, then another, circling her. Not approaching. Herding. The Heartstone burned now. Not uncomfortably, but insistently, a brand against her skin. She pulled it out. The crimson light had brightened, casting long, warped shadows across the flower beds. The glow pulsed in time with the dragging sound, which had returned, closer, synchronized with the prints. She realized then that the sound was not footsteps. It was breathing. Slow, wet, deliberate. Coming from everywhere and nowhere. She did not run. Running triggered pursuit. She had learned that in Cardiff, learned it again with Evan, learned it on London back alleys when a shadow decided to follow her home. Instead, she walked toward the center of the grove. The flowers parted for her boots. The air grew thicker, syrupy. Each step required more effort. The pendant chain felt heavy. The whispering returned, layered now, overlapping voices speaking in a cadence that made her teeth ache. She caught a word. Or thought she did. Malphora. The name tasted like ash. She had never heard it before, but her scar burned, and her stomach dropped. The dragging stopped. The prints stopped. The grove held its breath again. Rory stood in the center, surrounded by ancient oaks and impossible blooms. The pendant flared. A seam opened in the air three feet in front of her. Not a tear. A fold. The space buckled, revealing a sliver of something dark and cold beyond. Hel, if the old texts were right. The pendant warmth turned icy at the edges. The fold widened. From within came a sound like glass grinding on stone. And a presence. Not seen. Felt. A weight against her ribs. A cold finger tracing the line of her jaw without touching skin. She did not blink. She could not. The wildflowers around her boots began to wilt, petals browning, stems curling inward as if recoiling from her. Or from what stood behind her. She exhaled. Slow. Measured. The presence leaned closer. The whispering resolved into a single, clear sentence, spoken in a voice that sounded like her own, but stripped of warmth. You brought the key. Rory fingers closed around the pendant. The gem bit into her palm. She did not turn. She did not run. She stepped forward, toward the fold, and let the grove swallow her whole.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
95.79% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1189
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"lazily"
count1
highlights
0"lazily"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1189
totalAiIsms24
found
0
word"silence"
count2
1
word"rhythmic"
count1
2
word"warmth"
count4
3
word"traced"
count1
4
word"pulse"
count3
5
word"whisper"
count2
6
word"shattered"
count1
7
word"trembled"
count1
8
word"variables"
count1
9
word"pulsed"
count1
10
word"synchronized"
count1
11
word"footsteps"
count1
12
word"stomach"
count1
13
word"weight"
count1
14
word"tracing"
count1
15
word"measured"
count1
16
word"resolved"
count1
highlights
0"silence"
1"rhythmic"
2"warmth"
3"traced"
4"pulse"
5"whisper"
6"shattered"
7"trembled"
8"variables"
9"pulsed"
10"synchronized"
11"footsteps"
12"stomach"
13"weight"
14"tracing"
15"measured"
16"resolved"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"stomach dropped/sank"
count1
1
label"clenched jaw/fists"
count1
highlights
0"stomach dropped"
1"clenched her jaw"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences158
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences158
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences158
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen25
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1189
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions0
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions25
wordCount1189
uniqueNames13
maxNameDensity0.42
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Richmond"
discoveredNames
Richmond2
Park2
Silas2
Golden1
Empress1
Heartstone2
Cardiff2
London3
Fae1
Grove1
November1
Evan2
Rory5
persons
0"Silas"
1"Heartstone"
2"Evan"
3"Rory"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"Cardiff"
3"London"
4"Fae"
5"Grove"
6"November"
globalScore1
windowScore1
86.71% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences79
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"as if recoiling from her"
1"sounded like her own, but stripped of warm"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.841
wordCount1189
matches
0"Not uncomfortably, but insistently, a brand against her skin"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences158
matches(empty)
64.69% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs15
mean79.27
std29.84
cv0.376
sampleLengths
079
1109
269
357
499
5117
643
786
883
970
1067
11106
12138
1333
1433
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences158
matches
0"been typed"
1"was held"
80.42% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount4
totalVerbs223
matches
0"was settling"
1"was trying"
2"was trying"
3"was breathing"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences158
ratio0
matches(empty)
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1193
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"thumbnail-small, pressing against her"
adverbCount44
adverbRatio0.036881810561609385
lyAdverbCount8
lyAdverbRatio0.006705783738474434
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences158
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences158
mean7.53
std5.68
cv0.755
sampleLengths
013
112
217
321
416
511
64
713
820
93
103
114
1214
1322
1415
156
1620
176
188
199
206
214
223
237
2416
255
2623
2713
288
297
3019
3116
325
333
341
3512
364
3710
3814
395
405
412
4212
435
4413
455
462
474
486
495
44.73% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats21
diversityRatio0.34810126582278483
totalSentences158
uniqueOpeners55
98.04% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount4
totalSentences136
matches
0"Instead, she stood at the"
1"Instead, the path ahead swallowed"
2"Too still until it was"
3"Instead, she walked toward the"
ratio0.029
93.53% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount43
totalSentences136
matches
0"She should have been upstairs"
1"She had traced similar clues"
2"She touched it, felt the"
3"Her boots on the gravel"
4"She paused, listening to the"
5"It was not empty."
6"It was held."
7"She followed the pendant pull"
8"She pushed through a final"
9"They were not just trees."
10"They were markers."
11"It glowed faintly, a deep"
12"She took three steps forward."
13"She had not touched it."
14"She told herself it was"
15"She faced the stones again."
16"It came from her left."
17"She tracked it with her"
18"She kept her breathing even."
19"She checked her watch."
ratio0.316
51.91% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount111
totalSentences136
matches
0"The scooter engine ticked as"
1"Rory killed the headlight and"
2"Midnight air bit through her"
3"She should have been upstairs"
4"The Heartstone pendant had not"
5"Tonight, it felt urgent."
6"A slow, rhythmic warmth that"
7"The note slipped under her"
8"She had traced similar clues"
9"This time, the gem glowed"
10"She touched it, felt the"
11"Richmond Park should have been"
12"Deer bedded in bracken, tawny"
13"Her boots on the gravel"
14"The wind moved through the"
15"She paused, listening to the"
16"It was not empty."
17"It was held."
18"She followed the pendant pull"
19"Branches caught at her sleeves."
ratio0.816
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount4
totalSentences136
matches
0"Before the hour turns."
1"Now, overthinking was the only"
2"If she stayed too long,"
3"If she left too soon,"
ratio0.029
61.69% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences44
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"A slow, rhythmic warmth that matched her own heartbeat, then gradually outpaced it."
1"Foxgloves stood tall beside bluebells and red campion, all blooming under a moon that seemed too close, too sharp."
2"It glowed faintly, a deep crimson pulse that matched the rhythm in her throat."
3"The whispering returned, layered now, overlapping voices speaking in a cadence that made her teeth ache."
4"The wildflowers around her boots began to wilt, petals browning, stems curling inward as if recoiling from her."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
87.9393%