Run: 2026-04-27-01KQ78AP1VHZCJ65QERAZQX5TN

Run Details

Duration:
34.6s
Cost:
$0.008553
Provider:
Alibaba

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
Rain fell on Soho in steady, silver sheets, turning the pavement into a black mirror that caught the bleeding emerald glow of the neon sign. Aurora ducked under the awning, shaking water from her straight, shoulder-length black hair. She had meant to pass through. The drizzle had caught her between a route drop-off and a kitchen shift, and the warm amber spill drawing from beneath the oak door was too much of an invitation to ignore. She pushed inside, the heavy wood sighing shut behind her. The air inside was thick with the scent of spilled whiskey, citrus oil, and wet wool. Dim tracks of light pooled over scarred mahogany. The walls were a collage of yellowed Ordnance Survey maps and faded black-and-white photographs of faces she did not recognize, pinned haphazardly like evidence on a board. At the far end of the room, an older man stood behind the counter, polishing a tumbler with a chamois cloth. Grey-streaked auburn hair was tucked behind his ears, his beard neatly trimmed. He paused, turning, and Aurora saw the silver signet ring catching the light on his right hand. Her shoulders eased. Silas. He gave a single, almost imperceptible nod. She slipped into a high-backed booth in the corner, tracing the small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist without thinking. Two decades old, earned in a childhood accident with a kitchen knife, it throbbed faintly whenever the weather turned. The door chimed again. Not rain. Footsteps, deliberate, familiar. She looked up. And stopped breathing for half a second. Julian stood in the doorway, water dripping from the shoulders of a dark wool coat. Five years. The boy she had known was all sharp angles and careless laughter, arguing constitutional theory in Cardiff seminar rooms until the candles burned low. Now his jaw was squared, his posture measured. He scanned the room, and his gaze caught hers. The world narrowed to the space between them. He walked over. The chair leg scraped against the floorboards. He did not sit until she nodded. Aurora. His voice was lower, roughened by years and things left unsaid. He reached out, then pulled his hand back, settling it on the table instead. Julian. She forced her lungs to work. The silence between them was not empty. It was packed with everything they had not said five years ago, everything they had not said yesterday, everything they did not know how to say now. You look like you are still dodging a subpoena. He almost smiled. It did not reach his eyes. I saw the sign. I thought of you complaining about the neon buzzing at three in the morning. It is quiet tonight. It is a war zone in the kitchen. She lied. Delivery routes get longer. I take the breaks where I can. Golden Empress keeps me on my toes. He signaled the bar. Silas approached, the slight limp in his left leg barely noticeable beneath his weight. Two whiskeys. Dark, neat. No questions. The old Spymaster set the glasses down, his hazel eyes lingering on Julian for a fraction too long before melting back into the shadows. Julian wrapped his hands around the crystal. I heard you stayed. Worked for some lawyer. Did not get the degree. Pre-law is a dead end if you are trying to save people instead of billing hours. I deliver food. I read contract law on my breaks. I sleep. You are twenty-five. I feel older. Time does that, doesn't it? He exhaled, slow. Cardiff feels like a different continent. Sometimes I wake up and think I am still sitting in that lecture hall, arguing about equity. You always had the last word. You always saw the angle no one else did. That did not stop me from failing my first contract bridge game. His jaw tightened. You left. After the aftermath. Evan. The name hung between them, a stone dropped into still water. She touched her scar again. I had to. I know. He looked down at his drink. I was supposed to leave with you. The week after. I had the tickets. I just got scared. Or smart. Or both. You stayed. I stayed. Now I manage assets. High-net-worth. Relocation, security, quiet disappearances, depending on how you ask. He said it flatly. Practical. The boy who wanted to write poetry and argued the law was buried under liability waivers and offshore accounts. You went corporate. I went somewhere that pays. That is safe. That does not leave bruises. The words were a mirror. She did not flinch. Safe is boring. Safe keeps you breathing. He lifted his gaze. The honesty in it was a blade. Are you? I am here. At a bar at midnight. In the rain. I am taking a break. From the kitchen. From the flat above your bar. From pretending I am fine. He leaned forward, elbows on the table. I have thought about that night. The night you left. I drove past your building three times. I never got out of the car. I told myself you would call. You did not. I was terrified. Of him. Of you. Of what I would say if you actually showed up. And what would you have said? She let the question sink. The bar hummed. A low jazz tune drifted from a hidden speaker, all brushed cymbals and restrained bass. I would have said that I loved you. And that I was afraid to stay, but more afraid to leave you behind. The silence that followed was absolute. Julian's throat worked. He looked away, out the rain-streaked window. The green neon bled over his profile, painting the sharp line of his cheek in cold light. I am sorry, he said, voice cracking on the second syllable. For what I should have done. For what I did not. Time does not care about apologies. Jules. It just takes. He let out a short, wet laugh. Yes. It does. He drained his glass. Set it down hard. I am not asking for second chances. I just needed to see you. To know you made it out of Cardiff. To know you made it out of him. To know you are still you. I am not her. The girl who thought justice was a clean line. She is gone. I left my parents in Wales and Ireland, swallowed by my own stubbornness. I took my degree by scraps. I live above a bar that smells of old maps and quieter regrets. But I am here. Good. He said it softly. The world needs people who know how to bend before they break. Some breaks leave marks that do not heal right. She pressed her thumb to the crescent on her wrist. They just become part of the map. They are where you have been. He stood. The dark wool of his coat settled over his shoulders. He pulled a business card from his inner pocket, slid it across the wood. Thick paper. Impeccable font. If you ever need someone who actually knows how to read the fine print. Or just wants to argue about equity over a proper drink. Not this. I will keep it. He hesitated at the edge of the booth. You still take your tea with two sugars and one lemon slice? Now it is whiskey and silence. God, you have been practicing. Only at work. He smiled, real this time, quick and bright before it faded. Take care of yourself, Rory. You too, Julian. She caught herself. Leo. He nodded, turned, and walked toward the door. The emerald light washed over his back as he stepped out into the rain. The door chimed shut, sealing the sound away. Silas emerged from behind the counter, wiping his hands on a rag. He did not speak. He did not need to. He refilled her glass, left a clean coaster, and walked back into the shadows. The bar returned to its low hum. Aurora stared at the card. She pressed her thumb to the scar on her wrist, feeling the familiar ridge beneath her skin. Outside, the rain kept falling, washing Soho clean one street at a time. She did not move. She just sat, listening to the quiet where his absence used to be, and let the weight of it settle, heavy and true, into her bones.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
96.41% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1391
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"softly"
count1
highlights
0"softly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
46.08% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1391
totalAiIsms15
found
0
word"tracing"
count1
1
word"throbbed"
count1
2
word"footsteps"
count1
3
word"familiar"
count2
4
word"measured"
count1
5
word"scanned"
count1
6
word"silence"
count3
7
word"weight"
count2
8
word"crystal"
count1
9
word"aftermath"
count1
10
word"restrained"
count1
highlights
0"tracing"
1"throbbed"
2"footsteps"
3"familiar"
4"measured"
5"scanned"
6"silence"
7"weight"
8"crystal"
9"aftermath"
10"restrained"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells2
narrationSentences195
matches
0"was terrified"
1"was afraid"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount3
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences195
filterMatches
0"look"
1"feel"
2"know"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences195
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen33
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1391
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions1
unquotedAttributions1
matches
0"I am sorry, he said, voice cracking on the second syllable."
66.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions35
wordCount1391
uniqueNames13
maxNameDensity0.72
worstName"You"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"You"
discoveredNames
Soho2
Ordnance1
Survey1
Aurora4
Cardiff3
Empress1
Spymaster1
Julian6
Wales1
Ireland1
Rory1
Silas3
You10
persons
0"Survey"
1"Aurora"
2"Empress"
3"Spymaster"
4"Julian"
5"Rory"
6"Silas"
7"You"
places
0"Soho"
1"Cardiff"
2"Wales"
3"Ireland"
globalScore1
windowScore0.667
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences98
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1391
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences195
matches
0"said that I"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs49
mean28.39
std28.4
cv1
sampleLengths
086
1151
219
366
417
51
625
71
840
99
1031
1128
1248
1320
1428
153
168
1741
1812
199
2019
2130
222
2343
2413
2512
2617
273
2827
2940
3017
316
3245
3355
3410
3510
3643
3752
3817
3926
4063
414
4220
436
448
4516
467
4730
48107
92.67% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount7
totalSentences195
matches
0"was tucked"
1"was squared"
2"was packed"
3"was supposed"
4"was buried"
5"was terrified"
6"is gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs276
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences195
ratio0
matches(empty)
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1403
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount45
adverbRatio0.03207412687099073
lyAdverbCount9
lyAdverbRatio0.006414825374198147
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences195
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences195
mean7.13
std5.75
cv0.807
sampleLengths
025
113
26
332
410
516
68
727
821
912
1017
113
121
137
1420
1519
164
172
183
193
207
2115
222
2324
248
259
268
273
287
297
301
3111
3214
331
346
357
3627
379
383
396
404
4114
424
438
442
454
467
477
484
4914
38.29% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats27
diversityRatio0.3128205128205128
totalSentences195
uniqueOpeners61
40.65% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences164
matches
0"Sometimes I wake up and"
1"Only at work."
ratio0.012
15.12% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount84
totalSentences164
matches
0"She had meant to pass"
1"She pushed inside, the heavy"
2"He paused, turning, and Aurora"
3"Her shoulders eased."
4"He gave a single, almost"
5"She slipped into a high-backed"
6"She looked up."
7"He scanned the room, and"
8"He walked over."
9"He did not sit until"
10"His voice was lower, roughened"
11"He reached out, then pulled"
12"She forced her lungs to"
13"It was packed with everything"
14"You look like you are"
15"He almost smiled."
16"It did not reach his"
17"I saw the sign."
18"I thought of you complaining"
19"It is quiet tonight."
ratio0.512
66.71% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount129
totalSentences164
matches
0"Rain fell on Soho in"
1"Aurora ducked under the awning,"
2"She had meant to pass"
3"The drizzle had caught her"
4"She pushed inside, the heavy"
5"The air inside was thick"
6"The walls were a collage"
7"He paused, turning, and Aurora"
8"Her shoulders eased."
9"He gave a single, almost"
10"She slipped into a high-backed"
11"The door chimed again."
12"Footsteps, deliberate, familiar."
13"She looked up."
14"Julian stood in the doorway,"
15"The boy she had known"
16"He scanned the room, and"
17"The world narrowed to the"
18"He walked over."
19"The chair leg scraped against"
ratio0.787
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount7
totalSentences164
matches
0"Now his jaw was squared,"
1"Now I manage assets."
2"To know you made it"
3"To know you made it"
4"To know you are still"
5"If you ever need someone"
6"Now it is whiskey and"
ratio0.043
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences45
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"Rain fell on Soho in steady, silver sheets, turning the pavement into a black mirror that caught the bleeding emerald glow of the neon sign."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
88.5531%