Run: 2026-04-27-01KQ7910F73TA7NBWZAT90SC3D

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Duration:
3m 42s
Cost:
$0.054242
Provider:
Alibaba

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The green neon of the Raven’s Nest bled through the rain-streaked window, painting the polished mahogany in sickly emerald. Rory traced the rim of her glass, watching condensation pool against her fingertips. Downstairs, the bar hummed with the low, familiar frequencies of Soho at midnight: the clink of ice, the murmur of strangers, the soft scrape of Silas’s left leg as he moved behind the counter. He polished a tumbler with methodical precision, the silver signet ring on his right hand catching the dim light every time he turned his wrist. Rory liked the quiet hours. They demanded nothing of her. The brass bell above the door chimed. A draft of damp London air cut through the warmth, carrying the scent of wet wool and diesel. Rory did not look up until the footsteps paused. Not the heavy tread of a regular, not the hesitant shuffle of a tourist. A measured, familiar cadence that snagged somewhere in her ribs. She lifted her head. He stood just inside the threshold, shaking rain from a charcoal overcoat. Three years had carved him into something sharper. The soft-jawed boy who used to share highlighters and case briefs in the Cardiff university library was gone, replaced by a man in a tailored suit, his posture rigid, his hair cut with expensive severity. But the eyes were the same. Dark, watchful, currently widening as they locked onto hers. Rory? His voice cracked on the second syllable. He cleared his throat. Aurora? She set her glass down. The condensation left a perfect ring on the wood. Tomas. The name felt foreign on her tongue, like a language she had stopped practicing. I did not know you were in London. Transferred last month. Corporate litigation. He stepped closer, shedding his coat over a vacant stool. His movements were careful, rehearsed. I thought… well, I heard you left Cardiff. Just vanished, really. Eva would not say where you went. Eva knows better than to hand out my coordinates. Rory kept her voice level. Cool-headed. It was a practiced discipline now, not a natural state. She watched him settle onto the stool, noted the way his fingers drummed a restless rhythm against his thigh. The expensive watch on his wrist glinted. He looked like a man who had won exactly what he had been promised, and found it heavier than expected. Silas materialized at the end of the bar, setting a fresh coaster down with a soft tap. His hazel eyes flicked between them, reading the temperature of the room the way he used to read surveillance feeds in another life. Whisky? he asked, his voice a low gravel that brooked no argument. Please. Neat. Tomas offered a tight smile. You must be the proprietor. This place is atmospheric. It is a bar, Silas said, pouring two fingers of amber liquid. He slid the glass across the wood, his limp pronounced as he shifted his weight. Atmosphere is extra. He caught Rory’s eye, a silent question hanging in the glance. She gave a micro-shake of her head. He nodded once and retreated to the far end, giving them the illusion of privacy while remaining close enough to intervene if the air turned sour. Tomas took a sip, winced, and set the glass down. You look different. I cut my hair. No. It is not that. He studied her face, his gaze dropping to her hands. The crescent scar on her left wrist stood out pale against her skin, a relic of a bicycle crash when she was twelve, long before the other bruises that did not leave marks. You look settled. I always pictured you in a courtroom. Defending the indefensible, or prosecuting it. You were the best in our cohort. I was the most stubborn, Rory corrected. There is a difference. She turned her glass, watching the ice melt. Pre-law was my father’s dream. Brendan Carter, barrister. He liked the idea of a dynasty. I liked the idea of not suffocating. Tomas flinched, just slightly. We all wondered why you left so abruptly. Mid-semester. No forwarding address. Rumors started, but… He trailed off, the unspoken name hanging between them like smoke. Evan. She did not need to hear it. The shape of it was enough to tighten her shoulders. Rumors are just noise, she said. I needed quiet. London has plenty of it, if you know where to look. Delivering takeout is not exactly quiet. He gestured vaguely toward the stacked Golden Empress bags near the door, her name scrawled on the top receipt in Yu-Fei’s looping script. I saw you outside earlier. On the bicycle. You were hauling those containers like it was second nature. It pays the rent. The flat upstairs comes with the job. She met his gaze. I sleep well. That is more than I can say for most people. He looked down at his whisky. The neon sign buzzed, a persistent electric hum that vibrated in the floorboards. I took the path, Rory. Articled, qualified, made partner track. I do exactly what we swore we would do. I draft motions until two in the morning. I bill in six-minute increments. I have not read a book that was not a case file in three years. He laughed, a dry, brittle sound. And I am so tired I can barely remember why I wanted it. Rory said nothing. She let the silence stretch, watching the black-and-white photographs framed along the wall behind him. Faces of dead soldiers, forgotten cabaret singers, street vendors from a London that no longer existed. Faded cartography of places with borders drawn and redrawn by men who thought they could control the terrain. She understood the feeling. Do you ever think about going back? he asked, his voice dropping. Finishing it? No. The word came out clean, without hesitation. I do not miss the person I was there. She was always waiting for permission to breathe. I do not wait anymore. He nodded slowly, absorbing the finality of it. His fingers stilled on his glass. I should have called. When you left. I told myself you needed space, but the truth is, I was relieved. One less competitor. One less mirror showing me how fast I was running on a treadmill. He swallowed hard. I am sorry. For all of it. For not being the friend you deserved when the ground gave out. The apology landed with a dull thud. Rory felt the old ache rise, not sharp anymore, just a familiar pressure behind her sternum. She wanted to tell him it was fine, to smooth it over with the polite fiction that time heals everything. But time did not heal. It just buried things under layers of new habits, new addresses, new names. She was Rory now. Not Aurora. Not the girl who flinched at raised voices or drafted escape routes in her head during lectures. You are here now, she said quietly. That counts for something. He finished his drink in one swallow, the burn making his eyes water. He stood, shrugging back into his coat. The expensive wool looked like armor. I am staying at a hotel near Chancery Lane. If you ever want to… I do not know. Get coffee. Talk about something that is not billing rates or takeout routes. I will think about it, she said. It was not a promise. They both knew it. He hesitated, then reached out, his fingers brushing the edge of the bar before pulling back. Take care of yourself, Rory. You too, Tomas. The bell chimed again as he stepped out into the Soho rain. The door swung shut, cutting off the sound of passing traffic. The green neon bled back into the room, steady and unchanging. Silas appeared at her elbow, wiping down the counter with a damp cloth. He did not look at the door. He looked at her. Old ghosts have a habit of tracking you down, he murmured. Usually just to see if you are still bleeding. I am not, Rory said. She flexed her left hand, the crescent scar catching the low light. Not from that, anyway. Good. Silas set a fresh glass of water in front of her, his signet ring tapping softly against the rim. The back room is open if you need to sit with it. Or you can stay out here. Your choice. She looked past him, toward the bookshelf that hid the narrow door to the hidden room. A place for secrets, for planning, for people who needed to disappear for an hour. She did not need to disappear tonight. She was exactly where she was supposed to be. I will stay, she said. Silas nodded, a faint crease of approval softening his neatly trimmed beard. He moved down the bar, his limp a quiet metronome against the floorboards. Rory picked up her water. The ice had melted completely, leaving the drink cool and clear. Outside, London breathed, wet and relentless. Inside, the maps on the walls held their silent histories, and Rory let the weight of the past settle, not as an anchor, but as ballast. She took a sip, and waited for the night to turn.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
83.66% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1530
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"really"
count1
1
adverb"slightly"
count1
2
adverb"slowly"
count1
3
adverb"softly"
count1
4
adverb"completely"
count1
highlights
0"really"
1"slightly"
2"slowly"
3"softly"
4"completely"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
47.71% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1530
totalAiIsms16
found
0
word"traced"
count1
1
word"familiar"
count3
2
word"methodical"
count1
3
word"warmth"
count1
4
word"footsteps"
count1
5
word"measured"
count1
6
word"perfect"
count1
7
word"flicked"
count1
8
word"weight"
count2
9
word"unspoken"
count1
10
word"electric"
count1
11
word"vibrated"
count1
12
word"silence"
count1
highlights
0"traced"
1"familiar"
2"methodical"
3"warmth"
4"footsteps"
5"measured"
6"perfect"
7"flicked"
8"weight"
9"unspoken"
10"electric"
11"vibrated"
12"silence"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences182
matches
0"was relieved"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount3
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences182
filterMatches
0"look"
1"know"
hedgeMatches
0"appear to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences182
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen36
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1530
ratio0
matches(empty)
0.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions9
unquotedAttributions9
matches
0"It is a bar, Silas said, pouring two fingers of amber liquid."
1"I was the most stubborn, Rory corrected."
2"Rumors are just noise, she said."
3"You are here now, she said quietly."
4"I will think about it, she said."
5"Old ghosts have a habit of tracking you down, he murmured."
6"I am not, Rory said."
7"I will stay, she said."
8"Outside, London breathed, wet and relentless."
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions52
wordCount1530
uniqueNames16
maxNameDensity0.98
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"You"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Soho2
Silas6
London5
Cardiff2
Rory15
Carter1
Golden1
Empress1
Yu-Fei1
Aurora2
Chancery1
Lane1
Tomas5
You7
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Silas"
3"Rory"
4"Carter"
5"Tomas"
6"You"
places
0"Soho"
1"London"
2"Cardiff"
3"Yu-Fei"
4"Chancery"
5"Lane"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences108
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"looked like a man who had won exactly wha"
1"looked like armor"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.654
wordCount1530
matches
0"not as an anchor, but as ballast"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences182
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs36
mean42.5
std26.45
cv0.622
sampleLengths
0101
162
270
313
437
538
671
752
816
974
1013
114
1271
1341
1448
1520
1647
1728
1885
1956
2014
2130
2272
2384
2411
2557
2616
2721
283
2934
3044
3121
3240
3347
345
3584
97.55% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount4
totalSentences182
matches
0"was gone"
1"been promised"
2"was relieved"
3"was supposed"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs292
matches
0"were hauling"
1"was always waiting"
2"was running"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences182
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1539
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount54
adverbRatio0.03508771929824561
lyAdverbCount17
lyAdverbRatio0.011046133853151396
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences182
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences182
mean8.41
std6.27
cv0.746
sampleLengths
019
113
234
325
45
55
67
718
89
914
1010
114
1212
138
1435
156
169
171
187
194
201
215
229
231
2414
258
263
272
2810
295
302
316
323
337
349
355
361
3710
3819
397
4020
4117
4223
431
4411
451
461
475
485
494
50.18% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats12
diversityRatio0.34065934065934067
totalSentences182
uniqueOpeners62
60.98% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences164
matches
0"Dark, watchful, currently widening as"
1"Just vanished, really."
2"Usually just to see if"
ratio0.018
15.12% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount84
totalSentences164
matches
0"He polished a tumbler with"
1"They demanded nothing of her."
2"She lifted her head."
3"He stood just inside the"
4"His voice cracked on the"
5"He cleared his throat."
6"She set her glass down."
7"I did not know you"
8"He stepped closer, shedding his"
9"His movements were careful, rehearsed."
10"It was a practiced discipline"
11"She watched him settle onto"
12"He looked like a man"
13"His hazel eyes flicked between"
14"he asked, his voice a"
15"You must be the proprietor."
16"It is a bar, Silas"
17"He slid the glass across"
18"He caught Rory’s eye, a"
19"She gave a micro-shake of"
ratio0.512
57.56% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount132
totalSentences164
matches
0"The green neon of the"
1"Rory traced the rim of"
2"Downstairs, the bar hummed with"
3"He polished a tumbler with"
4"Rory liked the quiet hours."
5"They demanded nothing of her."
6"The brass bell above the"
7"A draft of damp London"
8"Rory did not look up"
9"A measured, familiar cadence that"
10"She lifted her head."
11"He stood just inside the"
12"The soft-jawed boy who used"
13"His voice cracked on the"
14"He cleared his throat."
15"She set her glass down."
16"The condensation left a perfect"
17"The name felt foreign on"
18"I did not know you"
19"He stepped closer, shedding his"
ratio0.805
30.49% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences164
matches
0"If you ever want to…"
ratio0.006
84.31% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences61
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"The soft-jawed boy who used to share highlighters and case briefs in the Cardiff university library was gone, replaced by a man in a tailored suit, his posture …"
1"he asked, his voice a low gravel that brooked no argument."
2"The neon sign buzzed, a persistent electric hum that vibrated in the floorboards."
3"He hesitated, then reached out, his fingers brushing the edge of the bar before pulling back."
4"She looked past him, toward the bookshelf that hid the narrow door to the hidden room."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
84.2521%