| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 6 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 6 | | tagDensity | 1 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 87.70% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 2033 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 5 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "perfectly" | | 1 | "slowly" | | 2 | "quickly" | | 3 | "completely" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 40.97% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 2033 | | totalAiIsms | 24 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "silk" | | 1 | "warmth" | | 2 | "pulsed" | | 3 | "shimmered" | | 4 | "throb" | | 5 | "traced" | | 6 | "footsteps" | | 7 | "pulse" | | 8 | "navigated" | | 9 | "silence" | | 10 | "stomach" | | 11 | "weight" | | 12 | "lilt" | | 13 | "could feel" | | 14 | "searing" | | 15 | "resolve" | | 16 | "perfect" | | 17 | "flawless" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 180 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 95.24% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 6 | | narrationSentences | 180 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | 0 | "began to" | | 1 | "seemed to" | | 2 | "tried to" |
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| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 183 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 40 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 2023 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 3 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 43 | | wordCount | 1971 | | uniqueNames | 17 | | maxNameDensity | 0.86 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Rory | 17 | | Richmond | 2 | | Park | 2 | | Tonight | 1 | | Golden | 1 | | Empress | 1 | | Heartstone | 1 | | London | 3 | | October | 1 | | Cardiff | 2 | | Evan | 2 | | Eva | 2 | | Welsh | 1 | | Jennifer | 1 | | Stupid | 1 | | Carter | 1 | | One | 4 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Rory" | | 1 | "Empress" | | 2 | "Evan" | | 3 | "Eva" | | 4 | "Jennifer" | | 5 | "Carter" | | 6 | "One" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "Golden" | | 3 | "London" | | 4 | "Cardiff" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 56.72% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 134 | | glossingSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "as though listening" | | 1 | "as if listening" | | 2 | "not quite reach" | | 3 | "looked like small, listening ears" | | 4 | "felt like defiance" |
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| 51.71% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 3 | | per1kWords | 1.483 | | wordCount | 2023 | | matches | | 0 | "Not the residual heat of sun-baked bark, but the steady temperature of living flesh" | | 1 | "Not the cool-headed Rory who had walked out on Evan with nothing but a rucksack" | | 2 | "not as a guest but as something far more permanent" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 183 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 45 | | mean | 44.96 | | std | 30.01 | | cv | 0.668 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 142 | | 1 | 78 | | 2 | 6 | | 3 | 74 | | 4 | 66 | | 5 | 23 | | 6 | 13 | | 7 | 76 | | 8 | 53 | | 9 | 8 | | 10 | 50 | | 11 | 82 | | 12 | 64 | | 13 | 59 | | 14 | 60 | | 15 | 62 | | 16 | 16 | | 17 | 58 | | 18 | 64 | | 19 | 78 | | 20 | 26 | | 21 | 69 | | 22 | 51 | | 23 | 70 | | 24 | 48 | | 25 | 8 | | 26 | 53 | | 27 | 10 | | 28 | 58 | | 29 | 28 | | 30 | 3 | | 31 | 84 | | 32 | 8 | | 33 | 50 | | 34 | 49 | | 35 | 61 | | 36 | 13 | | 37 | 29 | | 38 | 43 | | 39 | 3 | | 40 | 76 | | 41 | 33 | | 42 | 9 | | 43 | 3 | | 44 | 6 |
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| 97.47% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 180 | | matches | | 0 | "was chained" | | 1 | "being seen" | | 2 | "been led" | | 3 | "being known" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 5 | | totalVerbs | 334 | | matches | | 0 | "was being" | | 1 | "were swallowing" | | 2 | "was behaving" | | 3 | "was burning" | | 4 | "was tasting" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 9 | | semicolonCount | 5 | | flaggedSentences | 13 | | totalSentences | 183 | | ratio | 0.071 | | matches | | 0 | "The delivery bike was chained back by the road; the half-eaten order of prawn toast from Golden Empress sat cold in its bag." | | 1 | "Wildflowers spilled across the ground in impossible profusion—bluebells, foxgloves, moon-white anemones—all blooming at once though it was late October and the rest of the park had already surrendered to frost." | | 2 | "Rory’s boots sank into the soft earth; each step released a sweet, cloying perfume that coated the back of her throat." | | 3 | "Her left wrist itched beneath the sleeve of her jacket; she tugged it up without thinking and traced the small crescent scar there, the one she had earned at seven when she fell off her father’s garden wall in Cardiff." | | 4 | "A sound reached her then—soft, like someone sighing just behind her left ear." | | 5 | "From the corner of her eye she saw movement—something pale darting between two distant stones." | | 6 | "She hated the sound of it—small, uncertain." | | 7 | "The cold had settled into her bones; her fingers around the torch had gone stiff." | | 8 | "Another sound drifted across the clearing—laughter, faint and bubbling, like a child’s." | | 9 | "She dropped it outside her jumper; it swung like a pendulum, throwing bloody light across the grass." | | 10 | "In that soil something pale glistened—bones, perhaps, or roots too smooth to be roots." | | 11 | "The pale shapes at the edge of her vision multiplied—tall, slender figures that stood just where the torch could not quite reach." | | 12 | "Somewhere behind her, deeper in the trees where the path should have been, a new sound began—her own voice, laughing the way she had laughed with Eva only last week." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 87 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | | adverbCount | 1 | | adverbRatio | 0.011494252873563218 | | lyAdverbCount | 1 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.011494252873563218 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 183 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 183 | | mean | 11.05 | | std | 7.39 | | cv | 0.668 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 23 | | 1 | 26 | | 2 | 10 | | 3 | 29 | | 4 | 26 | | 5 | 23 | | 6 | 5 | | 7 | 7 | | 8 | 17 | | 9 | 7 | | 10 | 23 | | 11 | 24 | | 12 | 6 | | 13 | 30 | | 14 | 15 | | 15 | 21 | | 16 | 8 | | 17 | 22 | | 18 | 10 | | 19 | 19 | | 20 | 15 | | 21 | 8 | | 22 | 8 | | 23 | 7 | | 24 | 3 | | 25 | 10 | | 26 | 6 | | 27 | 15 | | 28 | 40 | | 29 | 11 | | 30 | 4 | | 31 | 13 | | 32 | 8 | | 33 | 18 | | 34 | 8 | | 35 | 5 | | 36 | 1 | | 37 | 8 | | 38 | 3 | | 39 | 3 | | 40 | 16 | | 41 | 9 | | 42 | 19 | | 43 | 6 | | 44 | 25 | | 45 | 7 | | 46 | 3 | | 47 | 14 | | 48 | 5 | | 49 | 22 |
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| 40.16% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 18 | | diversityRatio | 0.2568306010928962 | | totalSentences | 183 | | uniqueOpeners | 47 | |
| 77.97% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 171 | | matches | | 0 | "Only the flowers, swaying though" | | 1 | "Only the slow realization that" | | 2 | "Somewhere behind her, deeper in" | | 3 | "Instead she clutched the cold" |
| | ratio | 0.023 | |
| 63.27% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 67 | | totalSentences | 171 | | matches | | 0 | "She had come because the" | | 1 | "She told herself she was" | | 2 | "She had worn it anyway," | | 3 | "Their petals shone with a" | | 4 | "She swallowed, tasting something metallic" | | 5 | "They formed a rough circle," | | 6 | "she whispered, the words sounding" | | 7 | "She told herself it was" | | 8 | "Her left wrist itched beneath" | | 9 | "She dropped her arm." | | 10 | "She swept the torch again." | | 11 | "Her heart beat once, hard," | | 12 | "She was alone." | | 13 | "She had checked." | | 14 | "She pressed her palm to" | | 15 | "It was warm." | | 16 | "She jerked her hand back." | | 17 | "She turned slowly, refusing to" | | 18 | "She kept the light steady." | | 19 | "She stared until her eyes" |
| | ratio | 0.392 | |
| 56.49% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 138 | | totalSentences | 171 | | matches | | 0 | "The night air clung to" | | 1 | "The pendant lay heavy against" | | 2 | "She had come because the" | | 3 | "Tonight the glow had flared" | | 4 | "The delivery bike was chained" | | 5 | "None of that mattered now." | | 6 | "She told herself she was" | | 7 | "The Heartstone was the only" | | 8 | "An unknown benefactor, the note" | | 9 | "She had worn it anyway," | | 10 | "The clearing opened like a" | | 11 | "Wildflowers spilled across the ground" | | 12 | "Their petals shone with a" | | 13 | "Rory’s boots sank into the" | | 14 | "She swallowed, tasting something metallic" | | 15 | "The standing stones rose ahead," | | 16 | "They formed a rough circle," | | 17 | "The pendant flared once, hot" | | 18 | "Rory stopped at the edge" | | 19 | "she whispered, the words sounding" |
| | ratio | 0.807 | |
| 58.48% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 171 | | matches | | 0 | "Now the light yellowed, then" | | 1 | "If she moved, she would" |
| | ratio | 0.012 | |
| 62.60% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 89 | | technicalSentenceCount | 10 | | matches | | 0 | "The pendant lay heavy against her sternum, its deep crimson stone radiating a faint, sickly warmth that had sharpened the moment she left the main path." | | 1 | "Rory’s boots sank into the soft earth; each step released a sweet, cloying perfume that coated the back of her throat." | | 2 | "The standing stones rose ahead, eight ancient oaks stripped of bark and carved with spirals that hurt to follow for too long." | | 3 | "They formed a rough circle, leaning inward as though listening." | | 4 | "A faint imprint remained on the surface, the shape of her fingers already fading as though the oak were swallowing the touch." | | 5 | "The flowers there stood motionless, yet she could see the stalks trembling as if something had only just passed between them." | | 6 | "Not the cool-headed Rory who had walked out on Evan with nothing but a rucksack and a black eye." | | 7 | "The pale shapes at the edge of her vision multiplied—tall, slender figures that stood just where the torch could not quite reach." | | 8 | "She recognized the way it held its left wrist, as though the crescent scar there pained it." | | 9 | "She felt the flowers leaning closer, their stalks brushing her jeans like curious fingers." |
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| 41.67% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 6 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "she whispered, the words sounding borrowed" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 1 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 6 | | tagDensity | 0.167 | | leniency | 0.333 | | rawRatio | 1 | | effectiveRatio | 0.333 | |