| 0.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 4 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "she had always [always]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 5 | | tagDensity | 0.8 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.25 | | effectiveRatio | 0.25 | |
| 86.73% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 2260 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 6 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "very" | | 1 | "slowly" | | 2 | "slightly" | | 3 | "suddenly" | | 4 | "gently" |
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| 80.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 60.18% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 2260 | | totalAiIsms | 18 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | word | "the last thing" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "silence" | | 1 | "throb" | | 2 | "pulse" | | 3 | "weight" | | 4 | "gleaming" | | 5 | "warmth" | | 6 | "stomach" | | 7 | "footsteps" | | 8 | "flickered" | | 9 | "lurch" | | 10 | "echo" | | 11 | "perfect" | | 12 | "the last thing" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "wave of emotion" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 215 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 4 | | narrationSentences | 215 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | 0 | "tried to" | | 1 | "began to" | | 2 | "seemed to" |
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| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 217 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 56 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 2254 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 6 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 31 | | wordCount | 2225 | | uniqueNames | 14 | | maxNameDensity | 0.31 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1 | | worstWindowName | "Carter" | | discoveredNames | | Carter | 3 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | October | 1 | | Heartstone | 2 | | Pendant | 1 | | Rory | 1 | | Cardiff | 4 | | Evan | 2 | | Isolde | 1 | | London | 5 | | Fae | 1 | | Grove | 1 | | Aurora | 7 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Carter" | | 1 | "Pendant" | | 2 | "Rory" | | 3 | "Evan" | | 4 | "Isolde" | | 5 | "Aurora" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "October" | | 3 | "Cardiff" | | 4 | "London" | | 5 | "Fae" | | 6 | "Grove" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 95.65% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 138 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "seemed closer than before" | | 1 | "felt like the moment before a verdict," | | 2 | "seemed fused to her skin" |
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| 0.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 5 | | per1kWords | 2.218 | | wordCount | 2254 | | matches | | 0 | "Not the urgent heat that had dragged her across London, but something closer to recognition" | | 1 | "Not painful, but insistent, the way a fever feels just before it breaks" | | 2 | "Not the shape of it exactly, but the shape of the feeling it left behind" | | 3 | "not for help, but in pure refusal" | | 4 | "not from wind but from reverence" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 217 | | matches | | 0 | "acknowledge that something" | | 1 | "knew that laugh" | | 2 | "answer that she" | | 3 | "see that its" |
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| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 50 | | mean | 45.08 | | std | 29.28 | | cv | 0.649 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 137 | | 1 | 47 | | 2 | 5 | | 3 | 76 | | 4 | 16 | | 5 | 82 | | 6 | 52 | | 7 | 46 | | 8 | 12 | | 9 | 59 | | 10 | 48 | | 11 | 51 | | 12 | 32 | | 13 | 75 | | 14 | 7 | | 15 | 58 | | 16 | 9 | | 17 | 82 | | 18 | 37 | | 19 | 91 | | 20 | 75 | | 21 | 41 | | 22 | 88 | | 23 | 12 | | 24 | 1 | | 25 | 52 | | 26 | 9 | | 27 | 51 | | 28 | 54 | | 29 | 47 | | 30 | 47 | | 31 | 5 | | 32 | 58 | | 33 | 64 | | 34 | 50 | | 35 | 3 | | 36 | 71 | | 37 | 7 | | 38 | 54 | | 39 | 51 | | 40 | 71 | | 41 | 55 | | 42 | 6 | | 43 | 70 | | 44 | 12 | | 45 | 75 | | 46 | 13 | | 47 | 12 | | 48 | 49 | | 49 | 29 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 215 | | matches | | 0 | "was gone" | | 1 | "been called" |
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| 71.79% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 7 | | totalVerbs | 364 | | matches | | 0 | "wasn’t looking" | | 1 | "were following" | | 2 | "was pretending" | | 3 | "was putting" | | 4 | "were softening" | | 5 | "was scalding" | | 6 | "was learning" |
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| 77.02% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 6 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 5 | | totalSentences | 217 | | ratio | 0.023 | | matches | | 0 | "The wildflowers—impossible bluebells, foxgloves, meadowsweet—stood knee-high although it was nearly midnight in late autumn." | | 1 | "She was cool-headed; everyone said so." | | 2 | "The accent was hers exactly—Cardiff edges worn smooth by London years—but the tone was not." | | 3 | "She screamed—not for help, but in pure refusal." | | 4 | "The features were hers but stretched, elegant in the way deep-sea creatures are elegant—beautiful and impossible and wrong." |
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| 78.39% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 2138 | | adjectiveStacks | 2 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "lay cool against her" | | 1 | "same half-remembered dream:" |
| | adverbCount | 109 | | adverbRatio | 0.0509822263797942 | | lyAdverbCount | 36 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.01683816651075772 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 217 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 217 | | mean | 10.39 | | std | 8.3 | | cv | 0.8 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 22 | | 1 | 27 | | 2 | 9 | | 3 | 54 | | 4 | 25 | | 5 | 12 | | 6 | 24 | | 7 | 7 | | 8 | 4 | | 9 | 5 | | 10 | 3 | | 11 | 3 | | 12 | 1 | | 13 | 16 | | 14 | 14 | | 15 | 6 | | 16 | 11 | | 17 | 11 | | 18 | 11 | | 19 | 4 | | 20 | 2 | | 21 | 10 | | 22 | 14 | | 23 | 6 | | 24 | 2 | | 25 | 23 | | 26 | 5 | | 27 | 4 | | 28 | 17 | | 29 | 5 | | 30 | 5 | | 31 | 1 | | 32 | 4 | | 33 | 8 | | 34 | 23 | | 35 | 2 | | 36 | 15 | | 37 | 11 | | 38 | 15 | | 39 | 20 | | 40 | 8 | | 41 | 4 | | 42 | 2 | | 43 | 3 | | 44 | 6 | | 45 | 11 | | 46 | 10 | | 47 | 12 | | 48 | 5 | | 49 | 10 |
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| 43.52% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 14 | | diversityRatio | 0.27314814814814814 | | totalSentences | 216 | | uniqueOpeners | 59 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 15 | | totalSentences | 192 | | matches | | 0 | "Instead it dissolved after five," | | 1 | "Of course not." | | 2 | "Instead she heard, very faintly," | | 3 | "Then the sound came again," | | 4 | "Instead the warmth spread outward," | | 5 | "Directly above her." | | 6 | "Instead she fixed her gaze" | | 7 | "Only more flowers, denser, their" | | 8 | "Of course only flowers." | | 9 | "Then everything stopped." | | 10 | "Even her own ragged breathing" | | 11 | "Only the suggestion of it:" | | 12 | "Instead she stood frozen while" | | 13 | "Perhaps she had always been" | | 14 | "Somewhere far away, perhaps only" |
| | ratio | 0.078 | |
| 82.50% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 66 | | totalSentences | 192 | | matches | | 0 | "She had come because it" | | 1 | "Their trunks bore spirals of" | | 2 | "She told herself it was" | | 3 | "She stepped between the stones." | | 4 | "Their petals looked wet, almost" | | 5 | "She kept the phone’s light" | | 6 | "She was cool-headed; everyone said" | | 7 | "She had come for answers." | | 8 | "She took another step." | | 9 | "Their stems bent, then sprang" | | 10 | "She closed her fist around" | | 11 | "Her voice sounded smaller than" | | 12 | "She aimed the phone upward." | | 13 | "She lowered the beam." | | 14 | "She didn’t remember moving." | | 15 | "Her boots remained planted on" | | 16 | "She was not easily afraid." | | 17 | "She checked her watch." | | 18 | "She had entered the grove" | | 19 | "She whipped toward it, phone" |
| | ratio | 0.344 | |
| 77.19% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 147 | | totalSentences | 192 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora Carter pushed through the" | | 1 | "The Heartstone Pendant lay cool" | | 2 | "She had come because it" | | 3 | "The ancient oaks rose ahead" | | 4 | "Their trunks bore spirals of" | | 5 | "She told herself it was" | | 6 | "She stepped between the stones." | | 7 | "The air changed." | | 8 | "The wildflowers—impossible bluebells, foxgloves, meadowsweet—stood" | | 9 | "Their petals looked wet, almost" | | 10 | "She kept the phone’s light" | | 11 | "The beam should have cut" | | 12 | "A single cricket chirped." | | 13 | "The silence that followed felt" | | 14 | "Aurora rolled her shoulders, trying" | | 15 | "She was cool-headed; everyone said" | | 16 | "The girl who had walked" | | 17 | "This was only a park." | | 18 | "A peculiar one, granted." | | 19 | "The locals called it Isolde’s" |
| | ratio | 0.766 | |
| 52.08% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 192 | | matches | | 0 | "As though she had walked" | | 1 | "If she could keep them" |
| | ratio | 0.01 | |
| 53.57% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 96 | | technicalSentenceCount | 12 | | matches | | 0 | "The Heartstone Pendant lay cool against her sternum for the first time in hours, as though the thing had exhausted itself leading her here and now waited." | | 1 | "Their trunks bore spirals of lichen that seemed, in the weak torchlight of her phone, to shift when she wasn’t looking straight at them." | | 2 | "Their stems bent, then sprang back upright behind her with soft, wet sounds, as though something else were following exactly in her footprints." | | 3 | "Not the urgent heat that had dragged her across London, but something closer to recognition." | | 4 | "Soft, almost tender, the way a parent laughs at a child who has done something both ridiculous and endearing." | | 5 | "The impression of wide eyes and a mouth that smiled the way her own mouth smiled when she was pretending not to be afraid." | | 6 | "Her boots sank deeper with each step, as though the earth were softening under her weight like warm wax." | | 7 | "The name that belonged to late-night arguments and the smell of her mother’s perfume and the sound of a belt unbuckling in the hallway." | | 8 | "Between them the wildflowers had flattened themselves into the shape of a perfect circle, leaving her on bare earth that felt strangely warm beneath her boots." | | 9 | "Only the suggestion of it: a place where the dark had folded itself into shoulders, a head slightly too large, eyes that caught the faint red glow of the pendan…" | | 10 | "The final piece of something that had been waiting in this pocket between worlds since before her parents met, before Cardiff, before the small crescent scar on…" | | 11 | "Inside the Fae Grove the wildflowers opened wider, drinking starlight and something warmer, something that had once been called Aurora Carter and was learning, …" |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 4 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 2 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "She whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 5 | | tagDensity | 0.4 | | leniency | 0.8 | | rawRatio | 0.5 | | effectiveRatio | 0.4 | |