| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 1 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 0 | | tagDensity | 1 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 88.70% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1328 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "quickly" | | 1 | "slowly" | | 2 | "slightly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 39.76% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1328 | | totalAiIsms | 16 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "warmth" | | 1 | "echoing" | | 2 | "loomed" | | 3 | "etched" | | 4 | "implication" | | 5 | "flicker" | | 6 | "reminder" | | 7 | "scanning" | | 8 | "footfall" | | 9 | "mechanical" | | 10 | "measured" | | 11 | "weight" | | 12 | "aligned" | | 13 | "pulse" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 98 | | matches | | |
| 84.55% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 98 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | 0 | "seemed to" | | 1 | "began to" | | 2 | "started to" |
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| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 98 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 36 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1325 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 3 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 10 | | wordCount | 1307 | | uniqueNames | 5 | | maxNameDensity | 0.46 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Evan | 1 | | London | 1 | | Eva | 1 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Aurora | 6 |
| | persons | | | places | | | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 30.95% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 84 | | glossingSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "seemed muted here, as if the night held its breath" | | 1 | "seemed romantic then" | | 2 | "felt like a warning" | | 3 | "seemed closer than memory allowed" |
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| 0.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 3 | | per1kWords | 2.264 | | wordCount | 1325 | | matches | | 0 | "not in the friendly way of growing things, but watchful" | | 1 | "not mechanical but resonant, like a held note in a throat too large to see" | | 2 | "not moving when she stared but sliding a hand’s breadth" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 98 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 4.23% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 9 | | mean | 147.22 | | std | 24.26 | | cv | 0.165 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 160 | | 1 | 200 | | 2 | 150 | | 3 | 149 | | 4 | 130 | | 5 | 124 | | 6 | 129 | | 7 | 118 | | 8 | 165 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 98 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 218 | | matches | | |
| 55.39% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 4 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 3 | | totalSentences | 98 | | ratio | 0.031 | | matches | | 0 | "She had always been the one to think her way out—through university, through the breakup, through the move to London with Eva’s encouragement." | | 1 | "Rational explanations—optical trick from the time shift, exhaustion after the long shift—ran through her mind and failed to land." | | 2 | "Her intelligence supplied no immediate path through this—retreat meant crossing the bent flowers again, and the flowers themselves had become part of the observation." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 113 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 3 | | adverbRatio | 0.02654867256637168 | | lyAdverbCount | 0 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 98 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 98 | | mean | 13.52 | | std | 6.86 | | cv | 0.507 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 21 | | 1 | 22 | | 2 | 28 | | 3 | 23 | | 4 | 35 | | 5 | 13 | | 6 | 18 | | 7 | 17 | | 8 | 12 | | 9 | 18 | | 10 | 18 | | 11 | 13 | | 12 | 10 | | 13 | 13 | | 14 | 16 | | 15 | 5 | | 16 | 4 | | 17 | 23 | | 18 | 15 | | 19 | 15 | | 20 | 2 | | 21 | 19 | | 22 | 12 | | 23 | 6 | | 24 | 11 | | 25 | 4 | | 26 | 13 | | 27 | 6 | | 28 | 4 | | 29 | 6 | | 30 | 14 | | 31 | 8 | | 32 | 9 | | 33 | 15 | | 34 | 33 | | 35 | 9 | | 36 | 12 | | 37 | 15 | | 38 | 11 | | 39 | 13 | | 40 | 13 | | 41 | 7 | | 42 | 23 | | 43 | 8 | | 44 | 21 | | 45 | 9 | | 46 | 17 | | 47 | 8 | | 48 | 12 | | 49 | 22 |
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| 43.88% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 6 | | diversityRatio | 0.2755102040816326 | | totalSentences | 98 | | uniqueOpeners | 27 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 96 | | matches | | 0 | "Only the faint rustle, constant" | | 1 | "Too warm for dew at" | | 2 | "Once she stopped and it" |
| | ratio | 0.031 | |
| 90.83% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 31 | | totalSentences | 96 | | matches | | 0 | "Her shoulder-length black hair clung" | | 1 | "It had led her this" | | 2 | "She slipped between them, the" | | 3 | "She walked to the center," | | 4 | "She had always been the" | | 5 | "Her head snapped toward the" | | 6 | "She knelt, fingers brushing the" | | 7 | "They felt alive, warm." | | 8 | "She withdrew her hand, the" | | 9 | "She straightened, the crescent scar" | | 10 | "She rubbed it, the old" | | 11 | "Her watch face stayed blank," | | 12 | "She turned in a slow" | | 13 | "She followed, each footfall absorbed" | | 14 | "She reached the far side" | | 15 | "She backed away two steps." | | 16 | "She stepped sideways to break" | | 17 | "She drew it out fully," | | 18 | "It had reacted like this" | | 19 | "She turned slowly, letting the" |
| | ratio | 0.323 | |
| 38.13% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 81 | | totalSentences | 96 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora pushed through the undergrowth" | | 1 | "Moonlight filtered through the canopy" | | 2 | "Her shoulder-length black hair clung" | | 3 | "It had led her this" | | 4 | "Yu-Fei’s had been busy, too" | | 5 | "Evan’s last message still burned" | | 6 | "A mystery she couldn’t ignore," | | 7 | "The ancient oaks loomed, their" | | 8 | "She slipped between them, the" | | 9 | "Wildflowers carpeted the ground, their" | | 10 | "An hour inside could stretch" | | 11 | "She walked to the center," | | 12 | "The solitude wrapped around her" | | 13 | "Aurora paused, cocking her head." | | 14 | "She had always been the" | | 15 | "This place offered space to" | | 16 | "The small size of the" | | 17 | "A sound broke the stillness:" | | 18 | "Her head snapped toward the" | | 19 | "The standing stones encircled, but" |
| | ratio | 0.844 | |
| 52.08% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 96 | | matches | | 0 | "Now, with the pendant pulsing" |
| | ratio | 0.01 | |
| 87.91% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 65 | | technicalSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "The ancient oaks loomed, their surfaces etched with patterns that might have been natural or something older." | | 1 | "The wildflowers leaned again in unison, all away from the center as if something invisible passed through them and kept moving." | | 2 | "The flowers she had passed through stayed parted, creating a narrow trail that pointed back to the center like a marker she hadn’t left intentionally." | | 3 | "No outline of clothing or face, just a denser patch of night that obeyed rules separate from the rest of the clearing." | | 4 | "Wildflowers nearest the far stones swayed in a slow wave that traveled toward her without wind." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 1 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |