| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 3 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 2 | | tagDensity | 1 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 87.45% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1593 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 4 | | found | | 0 | | adverb | "deliberately" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "deliberately" | | 1 | "slowly" | | 2 | "slightly" | | 3 | "sharply" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 27.81% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1593 | | totalAiIsms | 23 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "pulse" | | 1 | "throb" | | 2 | "warmth" | | 3 | "scanned" | | 4 | "gloom" | | 5 | "trembled" | | 6 | "sense of" | | 7 | "measured" | | 8 | "scanning" | | 9 | "footsteps" | | 10 | "aligned" | | 11 | "resolved" | | 12 | "echo" | | 13 | "chilled" | | 14 | "silence" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 113 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 113 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 113 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 39 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1590 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 0 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 19 | | wordCount | 1580 | | uniqueNames | 8 | | maxNameDensity | 0.44 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1 | | worstWindowName | "Park" | | discoveredNames | | Park | 2 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Pendant | 1 | | Richmond | 2 | | Cardiff | 3 | | October | 1 | | Evan | 2 | | Aurora | 7 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Pendant" | | 1 | "Evan" | | 2 | "Aurora" |
| | places | | 0 | "Park" | | 1 | "Richmond" | | 2 | "Cardiff" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 91 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 74.21% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 2 | | per1kWords | 1.258 | | wordCount | 1590 | | matches | | 0 | "Not painful, but insistent enough" | | 1 | "no longer random but" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 113 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 53.53% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 15 | | mean | 106 | | std | 35.76 | | cv | 0.337 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 159 | | 1 | 130 | | 2 | 121 | | 3 | 104 | | 4 | 132 | | 5 | 5 | | 6 | 107 | | 7 | 97 | | 8 | 80 | | 9 | 129 | | 10 | 90 | | 11 | 83 | | 12 | 113 | | 13 | 87 | | 14 | 153 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 113 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 264 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 16.43% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 3 | | semicolonCount | 3 | | flaggedSentences | 5 | | totalSentences | 113 | | ratio | 0.044 | | matches | | 0 | "Her straight black hair clung to the back of her neck in the sudden stillness; the air had grown heavy, pressing against her ears like the pause before a storm." | | 1 | "The print had not been there when she entered—she would have noticed the disturbance in the silver sheen." | | 2 | "Logic dictated a return path; she possessed an excellent sense of direction and had marked the stones with a folded receipt from the restaurant tucked into the lowest carving." | | 3 | "Aurora’s pulse remained even; she catalogued the symptom as she had catalogued every prior anomaly." | | 4 | "No answer formed, but the temperature dropped sharply enough that her breath misted, and the mist held a faint outline—shoulders again, narrow at the waist—before it dispersed." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 163 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 1 | | adverbRatio | 0.006134969325153374 | | lyAdverbCount | 1 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.006134969325153374 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 113 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 113 | | mean | 14.07 | | std | 8.55 | | cv | 0.608 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 25 | | 1 | 25 | | 2 | 22 | | 3 | 25 | | 4 | 29 | | 5 | 33 | | 6 | 18 | | 7 | 14 | | 8 | 6 | | 9 | 3 | | 10 | 20 | | 11 | 7 | | 12 | 13 | | 13 | 21 | | 14 | 21 | | 15 | 7 | | 16 | 4 | | 17 | 11 | | 18 | 23 | | 19 | 4 | | 20 | 19 | | 21 | 17 | | 22 | 7 | | 23 | 25 | | 24 | 2 | | 25 | 9 | | 26 | 4 | | 27 | 16 | | 28 | 2 | | 29 | 19 | | 30 | 2 | | 31 | 6 | | 32 | 12 | | 33 | 22 | | 34 | 18 | | 35 | 3 | | 36 | 2 | | 37 | 15 | | 38 | 30 | | 39 | 8 | | 40 | 23 | | 41 | 1 | | 42 | 18 | | 43 | 35 | | 44 | 5 | | 45 | 4 | | 46 | 29 | | 47 | 28 | | 48 | 14 | | 49 | 7 |
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| 41.15% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 10 | | diversityRatio | 0.2831858407079646 | | totalSentences | 113 | | uniqueOpeners | 32 | |
| 62.89% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 106 | | matches | | 0 | "Only the faint click of" | | 1 | "Instead she continued her slow" |
| | ratio | 0.019 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 30 | | totalSentences | 106 | | matches | | 0 | "It had begun that faint" | | 1 | "She followed it here because" | | 2 | "She paused between them, boot" | | 3 | "She lifted her arm into" | | 4 | "She crossed the threshold." | | 5 | "It was no larger than" | | 6 | "She had not stepped on" | | 7 | "Her eyes tracked the edges" | | 8 | "She took the first step" | | 9 | "She waited ten seconds by" | | 10 | "Her straight black hair clung" | | 11 | "She reached the clearing’s center" | | 12 | "She crouched, but the grass" | | 13 | "She turned in a measured" | | 14 | "She did not spin." | | 15 | "She spoke aloud, voice low" | | 16 | "She took one deliberate step" | | 17 | "She tested the next step." | | 18 | "She could no longer see" | | 19 | "It carried no scent of" |
| | ratio | 0.283 | |
| 49.62% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 87 | | totalSentences | 106 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora pressed through the final" | | 1 | "Richmond Park had thinned out" | | 2 | "The Heartstone Pendant lay against" | | 3 | "It had begun that faint" | | 4 | "She followed it here because" | | 5 | "The boundary stones rose before" | | 6 | "She paused between them, boot" | | 7 | "She lifted her arm into" | | 8 | "The hands stood still for" | | 9 | "She crossed the threshold." | | 10 | "Wildflowers opened underfoot, their pale" | | 11 | "Petals brushed the cuffs of" | | 12 | "Aurora scanned the clearing." | | 13 | "It was no larger than" | | 14 | "A single trail, unfamiliar, cut" | | 15 | "She had not stepped on" | | 16 | "Her eyes tracked the edges" | | 17 | "She took the first step" | | 18 | "The pendant grew hotter." | | 19 | "A dry-leaf crackle sounded to" |
| | ratio | 0.821 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 106 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 61.22% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 70 | | technicalSentenceCount | 8 | | matches | | 0 | "Only the faint click of the watch on her wrist, its second hand dragging as though the mechanism had thickened." | | 1 | "A low branch on a nearby oak trembled as though something had brushed it from behind the trunk, but no figure emerged." | | 2 | "She crouched, but the grass beside it showed no further trail, only the same pale flowers pressing up against the stone as though they had grown around the step…" | | 3 | "The intelligence that had carried her out of her father’s Cardiff household and away from Evan now aligned facts: the pendant, the time slippage, the prints and…" | | 4 | "A cold touch brushed the back of her right hand, a pressure no thicker than chilled air yet directional, as though a body had passed exactly there." | | 5 | "Each step produced the same rearrangement of flowers, the same peripheral density that retreated only when met head-on." | | 6 | "The cool-headed calculation that had served her through university and the split-second decisions on delivery routes now offered a single remaining option: rema…" | | 7 | "The flowers at her boots continued their slow, soundless shift, curling inward around her feet as though the grove itself had decided the path ended here." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 3 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "The words scattered, as though the clearing itself considered the question" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |