| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 1 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 0 | | tagDensity | 1 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 88.63% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1319 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "perfectly" | | 1 | "suddenly" | | 2 | "slowly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 43.14% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1319 | | totalAiIsms | 15 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "scanning" | | 1 | "pulse" | | 2 | "rhythmic" | | 3 | "velvet" | | 4 | "warmth" | | 5 | "fractured" | | 6 | "searing" | | 7 | "abyssal" | | 8 | "predator" | | 9 | "tracing" | | 10 | "familiar" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 90 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 47.62% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 5 | | narrationSentences | 90 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 90 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 38 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1308 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 2 | | unquotedAttributions | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "Think, she told herself." |
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| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 24 | | wordCount | 1286 | | uniqueNames | 8 | | maxNameDensity | 0.54 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1 | | worstWindowName | "Heartstone" | | discoveredNames | | London | 1 | | Richmond | 2 | | Park | 2 | | Heartstone | 5 | | Yu-Fei | 1 | | Grove | 5 | | Think | 1 | | Rory | 7 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Heartstone" | | 1 | "Grove" | | 2 | "Rory" |
| | places | | 0 | "London" | | 1 | "Richmond" | | 2 | "Park" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 47.26% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 73 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "vibration that seemed to emanate from the ground itself" | | 1 | "looked like a limb, long and impossibly d" | | 2 | "as if reading invisible braille" |
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| 0.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 3 | | per1kWords | 2.294 | | wordCount | 1308 | | matches | | 0 | "not by walking, but by blinking from one patch of darkness to the next" | | 1 | "Not through the air, but through the vibration in the soil, the rhythm of her own pul" | | 2 | "not toward the park exit, but toward the standing stones, toward the boundary" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 90 | | matches | | |
| 89.90% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 25 | | mean | 52.32 | | std | 24.31 | | cv | 0.465 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 86 | | 1 | 71 | | 2 | 58 | | 3 | 62 | | 4 | 64 | | 5 | 15 | | 6 | 18 | | 7 | 68 | | 8 | 65 | | 9 | 6 | | 10 | 39 | | 11 | 76 | | 12 | 53 | | 13 | 94 | | 14 | 54 | | 15 | 45 | | 16 | 72 | | 17 | 1 | | 18 | 40 | | 19 | 50 | | 20 | 57 | | 21 | 28 | | 22 | 61 | | 23 | 37 | | 24 | 88 |
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| 89.67% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 90 | | matches | | 0 | "was supposed" | | 1 | "being crumpled" | | 2 | "being hunted" | | 3 | "was crouched" |
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| 0.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 9 | | totalVerbs | 219 | | matches | | 0 | "were holding" | | 1 | "were trying" | | 2 | "was reacting" | | 3 | "was tearing" | | 4 | "wasn't looking" | | 5 | "was exploring" | | 6 | "was learning" | | 7 | "was adapting" | | 8 | "was merely waiting" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 12 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 10 | | totalSentences | 90 | | ratio | 0.111 | | matches | | 0 | "Somewhere in the distance, a fox shrieked—a jagged, human-sounding cry that stopped as abruptly as it began." | | 1 | "It was warm—unnervingly so, like a feverish skin pressed against her chest." | | 2 | "The wildflowers—shouldn't they be dormant in this weather?—glowed with a faint, bioluminescent pallor, casting long, writhing shadows against the gnarled trunks of the oaks." | | 3 | "Something moved—a flick of motion so fast it had to be a trick of the light." | | 4 | "There—near the base of the nearest standing stone." | | 5 | "It wasn't a creature of flesh in any way she knew; it was more of a void, a hole cut into the fabric of the night." | | 6 | "She could see the texture of it—a matte, abyssal black that seemed to drink the meager light." | | 7 | "It moved with a jerky, stop-motion gait, its long, thin fingers—or claws, or blades—tracing the air as if reading invisible braille." | | 8 | "Then, the creature let out a sound—a jarring imitation of a human voice, high and thin and distorted, like a corrupted recording." | | 9 | "She took a breath—forced, shallow—and pulled the pendant from beneath her shirt." |
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| 90.03% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 494 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "small, crescent-shaped scar" |
| | adverbCount | 22 | | adverbRatio | 0.044534412955465584 | | lyAdverbCount | 6 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.012145748987854251 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 90 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 90 | | mean | 14.53 | | std | 8.08 | | cv | 0.556 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 25 | | 1 | 24 | | 2 | 20 | | 3 | 17 | | 4 | 19 | | 5 | 18 | | 6 | 12 | | 7 | 22 | | 8 | 6 | | 9 | 27 | | 10 | 25 | | 11 | 5 | | 12 | 2 | | 13 | 13 | | 14 | 18 | | 15 | 24 | | 16 | 15 | | 17 | 12 | | 18 | 11 | | 19 | 26 | | 20 | 2 | | 21 | 2 | | 22 | 11 | | 23 | 2 | | 24 | 16 | | 25 | 8 | | 26 | 28 | | 27 | 16 | | 28 | 16 | | 29 | 9 | | 30 | 16 | | 31 | 12 | | 32 | 28 | | 33 | 4 | | 34 | 2 | | 35 | 3 | | 36 | 18 | | 37 | 9 | | 38 | 9 | | 39 | 15 | | 40 | 8 | | 41 | 8 | | 42 | 19 | | 43 | 26 | | 44 | 8 | | 45 | 10 | | 46 | 11 | | 47 | 5 | | 48 | 19 | | 49 | 15 |
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| 32.22% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 16 | | diversityRatio | 0.24444444444444444 | | totalSentences | 90 | | uniqueOpeners | 22 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 84 | | matches | | 0 | "Somewhere in the distance, a" | | 1 | "Even the insects had retreated," | | 2 | "Just the rustle again, closer" | | 3 | "Then, the creature let out" |
| | ratio | 0.048 | |
| 0.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 49 | | totalSentences | 84 | | matches | | 0 | "She stood just inside the" | | 1 | "Her left wrist ached, a" | | 2 | "She rubbed her thumb over" | | 3 | "It was warm—unnervingly so, like" | | 4 | "She wasn't supposed to be" | | 5 | "She was supposed to be" | | 6 | "She turned in a slow" | | 7 | "It came from behind a" | | 8 | "She stood perfectly still, her" | | 9 | "Her voice sounded thin, swallowed" | | 10 | "She focused on the edge" | | 11 | "It looked like a limb," | | 12 | "Her hand went to the" | | 13 | "She felt exposed, a stray" | | 14 | "She thought of her flat" | | 15 | "She stopped retreating." | | 16 | "She forced herself to plant" | | 17 | "She had to understand the" | | 18 | "She took a step toward" | | 19 | "It was crouched, spindly and" |
| | ratio | 0.583 | |
| 31.43% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 72 | | totalSentences | 84 | | matches | | 0 | "The air inside the boundary" | | 1 | "Rory pulled her coat tighter," | | 2 | "She stood just inside the" | | 3 | "Her left wrist ached, a" | | 4 | "She rubbed her thumb over" | | 5 | "It was warm—unnervingly so, like" | | 6 | "She wasn't supposed to be" | | 7 | "She was supposed to be" | | 8 | "The Grove was silent now." | | 9 | "Rory took a hesitant step" | | 10 | "The wildflowers—shouldn't they be dormant" | | 11 | "She turned in a slow" | | 12 | "It came from behind a" | | 13 | "She stood perfectly still, her" | | 14 | "Her voice sounded thin, swallowed" | | 15 | "Rory shifted, the movement clumsy" | | 16 | "She focused on the edge" | | 17 | "Something moved—a flick of motion" | | 18 | "It looked like a limb," | | 19 | "Her hand went to the" |
| | ratio | 0.857 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 84 | | matches | | 0 | "Even through the fabric, the" | | 1 | "If she was being hunted," |
| | ratio | 0.024 | |
| 2.34% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 61 | | technicalSentenceCount | 12 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory pulled her coat tighter, the coarse wool doing little to keep out the unnatural vibration that seemed to emanate from the ground itself." | | 1 | "Somewhere in the distance, a fox shrieked—a jagged, human-sounding cry that stopped as abruptly as it began." | | 2 | "She was supposed to be dropping off the last delivery for Yu-Fei, a stack of takeout containers that were likely already growing stone-cold in her thermal bag." | | 3 | "Rory took a hesitant step forward, her boot sinking into soil that felt more like velvet than dirt." | | 4 | "She stood perfectly still, her intelligence screaming at her to run, but her feet felt heavy, as if the earth were trying to claim her ownership." | | 5 | "She focused on the edge of her vision, where the shadows seemed to pool and thicken, defying the moonlight that struggled to penetrate the canopy of the Grove." | | 6 | "The heat radiating from it was intense now, a stinging warmth that seeped into her palm." | | 7 | "She forced herself to plant her feet, her gaze narrowing, cooling her panic into a sharp, analytical edge." | | 8 | "It moved with a jerky, stop-motion gait, its long, thin fingers—or claws, or blades—tracing the air as if reading invisible braille." | | 9 | "For a moment, the atmosphere grew so dense she felt as though she were underwater, the pressure pushing against her eardrums." | | 10 | "The crimson gem flared, a burst of angry, deep light that illuminated the space for a heartbeat." | | 11 | "Rory stood for a long time, her heart hammering against her ribs, the Heartstone slowly cooling against her palm." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 1 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |