| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 1 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 1 | | tagDensity | 1 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 76.08% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1254 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 6 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | adverb | "ever so slightly" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "softly" | | 1 | "very" | | 2 | "ever so slightly" | | 3 | "perfectly" | | 4 | "utterly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1254 | | totalAiIsms | 26 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | | | 20 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "rhythmic" | | 1 | "pulse" | | 2 | "magnetic" | | 3 | "navigate" | | 4 | "weight" | | 5 | "scanning" | | 6 | "tracing" | | 7 | "sentinels" | | 8 | "dancing" | | 9 | "silence" | | 10 | "racing" | | 11 | "flickered" | | 12 | "chaotic" | | 13 | "sense of" | | 14 | "resonated" | | 15 | "familiar" | | 16 | "amidst" | | 17 | "mechanical" | | 18 | "flicker" | | 19 | "vibrated" | | 20 | "echoing" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 96 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 2 | | hedgeCount | 8 | | narrationSentences | 96 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 96 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 32 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 10 | | markdownWords | 26 | | totalWords | 1248 | | ratio | 0.021 | | matches | | 0 | "Don't be stupid, Rory," | | 1 | "Hallucination. Sleep deprivation. Maybe a localized chemical spill in the soil." | | 2 | "scritch-scritch-scritch" | | 3 | "scritch" | | 4 | "A Hel portal," | | 5 | "It’s close." | | 6 | "Flash." | | 7 | "Flash." | | 8 | "Flash." | | 9 | "scritch-scritch-scritch" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 2 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 19 | | wordCount | 1245 | | uniqueNames | 10 | | maxNameDensity | 0.56 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | London | 1 | | Aurora | 1 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Yu-Fei | 1 | | Silas | 1 | | Heartstone | 4 | | Grove | 1 | | Hel | 1 | | Rory | 7 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Aurora" | | 1 | "Yu-Fei" | | 2 | "Silas" | | 3 | "Heartstone" | | 4 | "Rory" |
| | places | | 0 | "London" | | 1 | "Richmond" | | 2 | "Park" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 56.25% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 80 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "shadows that seemed to move independently of the light" | | 1 | "It was as if the very flora was observing her, the blooms tilting ever so slightly in her direction as she passed" | | 2 | "felt like lead" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1248 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 96 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 34 | | mean | 36.71 | | std | 21.42 | | cv | 0.584 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 43 | | 1 | 74 | | 2 | 43 | | 3 | 97 | | 4 | 4 | | 5 | 49 | | 6 | 13 | | 7 | 64 | | 8 | 55 | | 9 | 26 | | 10 | 15 | | 11 | 18 | | 12 | 45 | | 13 | 13 | | 14 | 45 | | 15 | 65 | | 16 | 11 | | 17 | 50 | | 18 | 33 | | 19 | 28 | | 20 | 3 | | 21 | 43 | | 22 | 34 | | 23 | 19 | | 24 | 41 | | 25 | 42 | | 26 | 15 | | 27 | 61 | | 28 | 16 | | 29 | 13 | | 30 | 31 | | 31 | 31 | | 32 | 56 | | 33 | 52 |
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| 97.95% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 96 | | matches | | 0 | "was gone" | | 1 | "were elongated" |
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| 0.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 9 | | totalVerbs | 215 | | matches | | 0 | "were descending" | | 1 | "was observing" | | 2 | "were stretching" | | 3 | "were reaching" | | 4 | "weren't just lengthening" | | 5 | "was shifting" | | 6 | "was coming" | | 7 | "was standing" | | 8 | "were closing" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 6 | | semicolonCount | 7 | | flaggedSentences | 11 | | totalSentences | 96 | | ratio | 0.115 | | matches | | 0 | "The deep crimson gemstone was warm—uncomfortably so—against her skin." | | 1 | "It wasn't the empty, charcoal void of a city park; it felt populated." | | 2 | "They weren't just trees; they were monuments." | | 3 | "A carpet of wildflowers—vibrant, impossible blooms of violet, gold, and pale blue—spread out in a riot of color that defied the season and the hour." | | 4 | "It wasn't the peaceful quiet of a sleeping garden; it was a predatory silence, the kind that precedes a strike." | | 5 | "A movement caught the corner of her eye—a flash of something pale darting between the stalks of wildflowers." | | 6 | "They weren't just lengthening; they were reaching." | | 7 | "The pulsing was no longer a thrum; it was a frantic strobe." | | 8 | "As she retreated, she tripped over a protruding root—or perhaps a limb that hadn't been there a moment before." | | 9 | "It didn't move toward her; it simply existed there, a void in the shape of a person, standing perfectly still amidst the swaying wildflowers." | | 10 | "She didn't look back; she simply pushed, driven by a primal, frantic need to reach the oaks, to reach the world of streetlights and sirens and logic." |
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| 93.63% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 767 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "small, crescent-shaped scar." |
| | adverbCount | 31 | | adverbRatio | 0.04041720990873533 | | lyAdverbCount | 9 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.011734028683181226 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 96 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 96 | | mean | 13 | | std | 7.12 | | cv | 0.548 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 25 | | 1 | 18 | | 2 | 7 | | 3 | 19 | | 4 | 25 | | 5 | 23 | | 6 | 11 | | 7 | 12 | | 8 | 9 | | 9 | 11 | | 10 | 8 | | 11 | 13 | | 12 | 11 | | 13 | 16 | | 14 | 27 | | 15 | 22 | | 16 | 4 | | 17 | 16 | | 18 | 7 | | 19 | 26 | | 20 | 13 | | 21 | 7 | | 22 | 13 | | 23 | 25 | | 24 | 19 | | 25 | 2 | | 26 | 5 | | 27 | 20 | | 28 | 13 | | 29 | 15 | | 30 | 15 | | 31 | 1 | | 32 | 2 | | 33 | 8 | | 34 | 15 | | 35 | 14 | | 36 | 4 | | 37 | 18 | | 38 | 11 | | 39 | 1 | | 40 | 15 | | 41 | 3 | | 42 | 10 | | 43 | 10 | | 44 | 13 | | 45 | 22 | | 46 | 4 | | 47 | 21 | | 48 | 8 | | 49 | 32 |
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| 31.25% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 18 | | diversityRatio | 0.23958333333333334 | | totalSentences | 96 | | uniqueOpeners | 23 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 90 | | matches | | 0 | "Then, she saw them." | | 1 | "Maybe a localized chemical spill" | | 2 | "Only the swaying of the" |
| | ratio | 0.033 | |
| 55.56% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 37 | | totalSentences | 90 | | matches | | 0 | "It became something cloying and" | | 1 | "She shouldn't have been out" | | 2 | "It had led her here," | | 3 | "She reached up, her fingers" | | 4 | "It felt less like jewelry" | | 5 | "It wasn't the empty, charcoal" | | 6 | "It felt dense, as if" | | 7 | "She kept her eyes moving," | | 8 | "It was a nervous tic," | | 9 | "They weren't just trees; they" | | 10 | "She stepped through the boundary" | | 11 | "They glowed with a soft," | | 12 | "It wasn't the peaceful quiet" | | 13 | "She took another step, and" | | 14 | "It was a warning." | | 15 | "She whipped her head around," | | 16 | "It wasn't the feeling of" | | 17 | "It was as if the" | | 18 | "She checked her watch." | | 19 | "She felt a sudden, dizzying" |
| | ratio | 0.411 | |
| 76.67% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 69 | | totalSentences | 90 | | matches | | 0 | "The damp London air usually" | | 1 | "It became something cloying and" | | 2 | "She shouldn't have been out" | | 3 | "The delivery route for Yu-Fei" | | 4 | "It had led her here," | | 5 | "Rory slowed her pace, her" | | 6 | "She reached up, her fingers" | | 7 | "The deep crimson gemstone was" | | 8 | "It felt less like jewelry" | | 9 | "The darkness in the park" | | 10 | "It wasn't the empty, charcoal" | | 11 | "It felt dense, as if" | | 12 | "She kept her eyes moving," | | 13 | "Every time a branch creaked" | | 14 | "It was a nervous tic," | | 15 | "The ancient oaks stood like" | | 16 | "They weren't just trees; they" | | 17 | "She stepped through the boundary" | | 18 | "The darkness didn't lift, but" | | 19 | "The ground beneath her feet" |
| | ratio | 0.767 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 90 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 63 | | technicalSentenceCount | 15 | | matches | | 0 | "It became something cloying and heavy, a thick sweetness that coated the back of her throat like nectar." | | 1 | "But the Heartstone pendant had begun to thrum against her sternum three days ago, a low, rhythmic heat that had grown into a demanding pulse." | | 2 | "She kept her eyes moving, her bright blue gaze scanning the periphery of the tree line." | | 3 | "As she approached, the air pressure seemed to drop, a sudden heaviness settling in her ears that made her feel as though she were descending underwater." | | 4 | "A carpet of wildflowers—vibrant, impossible blooms of violet, gold, and pale blue—spread out in a riot of color that defied the season and the hour." | | 5 | "They glowed with a soft, internal luminescence, casting long, dancing shadows that seemed to move independently of the light." | | 6 | "It wasn't the peaceful quiet of a sleeping garden; it was a predatory silence, the kind that precedes a strike." | | 7 | "There was only the sound of her own breathing, which felt too loud, too intrusive." | | 8 | "It was as if the very flora was observing her, the blooms tilting ever so slightly in her direction as she passed." | | 9 | "The digital display flickered, the numbers spinning in a chaotic, nonsensical blur before settling on a time that made no sense." | | 10 | "In the silence that followed, a new sound emerged: a low, melodic humming." | | 11 | "It was beautiful, a haunting, wordless tune that resonated in her very bones." | | 12 | "As she retreated, she tripped over a protruding root—or perhaps a limb that hadn't been there a moment before." | | 13 | "It didn't have a face, just a smooth, pale expanse where a head should be, and its limbs were elongated, bending at angles that defied human anatomy." | | 14 | "Behind her, the *scritch-scritch-scritch* resumed, faster now, echoing from all sides, as if the shadows themselves were closing in to claim the space she had v…" |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 1 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 1 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 1 | | tagDensity | 1 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 1 | | effectiveRatio | 1 | |