| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 1 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 1 | | tagDensity | 1 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 86.84% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1140 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 3.51% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1140 | | totalAiIsms | 22 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "sanctuary" | | 1 | "rhythmic" | | 2 | "pulse" | | 3 | "silence" | | 4 | "warmth" | | 5 | "dancing" | | 6 | "echoed" | | 7 | "scanning" | | 8 | "sentinels" | | 9 | "echoing" | | 10 | "could feel" | | 11 | "firmly" | | 12 | "weight" | | 13 | "oppressive" | | 14 | "chaotic" | | 15 | "symphony" | | 16 | "throbbed" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "blink of an eye" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 84 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 40.82% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 6 | | narrationSentences | 84 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 84 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 40 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1129 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 2 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 22 | | wordCount | 1128 | | uniqueNames | 9 | | maxNameDensity | 0.62 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Heartstone | 5 | | Aurora | 1 | | London | 2 | | Park | 2 | | Fae | 1 | | Grove | 1 | | Yu-Fei | 1 | | Richmond | 2 | | Rory | 7 |
| | persons | | | places | | 0 | "Heartstone" | | 1 | "London" | | 2 | "Park" | | 3 | "Fae" | | 4 | "Grove" | | 5 | "Richmond" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 78.57% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 70 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "felt like a cold wire against Aurora’s" | | 1 | "felt like a sanctuary, but as she stepp" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.886 | | wordCount | 1129 | | matches | | 0 | "not loud, but insistent" |
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| 87.30% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 84 | | matches | | 0 | "dictated that an" | | 1 | "dictated that the" |
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| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 28 | | mean | 40.32 | | std | 22.23 | | cv | 0.551 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 94 | | 1 | 62 | | 2 | 9 | | 3 | 57 | | 4 | 9 | | 5 | 48 | | 6 | 70 | | 7 | 2 | | 8 | 77 | | 9 | 39 | | 10 | 16 | | 11 | 59 | | 12 | 48 | | 13 | 14 | | 14 | 55 | | 15 | 41 | | 16 | 40 | | 17 | 61 | | 18 | 11 | | 19 | 38 | | 20 | 19 | | 21 | 44 | | 22 | 30 | | 23 | 39 | | 24 | 35 | | 25 | 18 | | 26 | 54 | | 27 | 40 |
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| 96.91% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 84 | | matches | | 0 | "being dragged" | | 1 | "was ripped" |
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| 11.68% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 5 | | totalVerbs | 177 | | matches | | 0 | "was pulsing" | | 1 | "were circling" | | 2 | "weren't coming" | | 3 | "was vibrating" | | 4 | "was like hitting" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 11 | | semicolonCount | 7 | | flaggedSentences | 13 | | totalSentences | 84 | | ratio | 0.155 | | matches | | 0 | "The city’s distant hum—the rhythmic pulse of traffic and the far-off wail of sirens—vanished instantly, replaced by a silence so absolute it felt heavy, pressing against her eardrums like deep water." | | 1 | "The Fae Grove lived up to the rumors; the grass was a vivid, neon emerald, and the flowers breathed in slow, rhythmic pulses of color." | | 2 | "The silence wasn't empty; it was expectant." | | 3 | "She was a creature of logic—trained in the rigid structures of law, grounded by the mundane grind of delivering takeout for Yu-Fei." | | 4 | "It was tall—too tall—and thin enough to be a shadow given physical form." | | 5 | "She began to hear sounds—not loud, but insistent." | | 6 | "The sounds weren't coming from one direction; they were circling her, orbiting her in a wide, invisible ring." | | 7 | "The Heartstone was no longer pulsing; it was vibrating violently, the heat now bordering on painful." | | 8 | "They weren't figures anymore, but shapes—slender, needle-like things that stretched and contracted." | | 9 | "They didn't chase her; they simply drifted, closing the circle, narrowing the path toward the exit." | | 10 | "Every time she glanced to the side, she caught a glimpse of them: a long, pale finger curling around a branch; a wide, lipless mouth opening in a silent scream; eyes that were nothing more than hollow pits of void." | | 11 | "Just as she reached the threshold, a hand—long, grey, and possessing far too many knuckles—clamped firmly onto her shoulder." | | 12 | "The sensory overload of the grove—the smell of lilies, the clicking, the oppressive purple sky—was ripped away in an instant." |
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| 92.35% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1146 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "heavy, pressing against her" |
| | adverbCount | 48 | | adverbRatio | 0.041884816753926704 | | lyAdverbCount | 14 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.012216404886561954 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 84 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 84 | | mean | 13.44 | | std | 7.43 | | cv | 0.553 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 15 | | 1 | 28 | | 2 | 20 | | 3 | 31 | | 4 | 21 | | 5 | 25 | | 6 | 16 | | 7 | 2 | | 8 | 7 | | 9 | 7 | | 10 | 6 | | 11 | 27 | | 12 | 17 | | 13 | 9 | | 14 | 10 | | 15 | 27 | | 16 | 4 | | 17 | 7 | | 18 | 11 | | 19 | 22 | | 20 | 10 | | 21 | 13 | | 22 | 14 | | 23 | 2 | | 24 | 16 | | 25 | 13 | | 26 | 3 | | 27 | 3 | | 28 | 17 | | 29 | 25 | | 30 | 3 | | 31 | 20 | | 32 | 16 | | 33 | 4 | | 34 | 12 | | 35 | 8 | | 36 | 3 | | 37 | 8 | | 38 | 11 | | 39 | 11 | | 40 | 18 | | 41 | 12 | | 42 | 23 | | 43 | 13 | | 44 | 5 | | 45 | 9 | | 46 | 3 | | 47 | 9 | | 48 | 19 | | 49 | 24 |
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| 30.95% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 16 | | diversityRatio | 0.25 | | totalSentences | 84 | | uniqueOpeners | 21 | |
| 82.30% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 81 | | matches | | 0 | "Just the windless sway of" | | 1 | "Slowly, she reached up to" |
| | ratio | 0.025 | |
| 71.85% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 30 | | totalSentences | 81 | | matches | | 0 | "She paused at the edge" | | 1 | "She reached up and touched" | | 2 | "It wasn’t the gentle, guiding" | | 3 | "She told herself it was" | | 4 | "She was a creature of" | | 5 | "It stood perhaps fifty yards" | | 6 | "It was tall—too tall—and thin" | | 7 | "It didn't move." | | 8 | "It didn't breathe." | | 9 | "It simply existed in the" | | 10 | "She stepped backward, her hand" | | 11 | "she called out" | | 12 | "Her voice sounded flat, swallowed" | | 13 | "It became layered." | | 14 | "She began to hear sounds—not" | | 15 | "She began to walk back" | | 16 | "It was closer now, echoing" | | 17 | "It shifted through the leaves" | | 18 | "It moved with a jerky," | | 19 | "She broke into a jog." |
| | ratio | 0.37 | |
| 52.59% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 66 | | totalSentences | 81 | | matches | | 0 | "The silver chain of the" | | 1 | "She paused at the edge" | | 2 | "Richmond Park usually felt like" | | 3 | "The city’s distant hum—the rhythmic" | | 4 | "Rory didn’t know why the" | | 5 | "The Fae Grove lived up" | | 6 | "The silence wasn't empty; it" | | 7 | "She reached up and touched" | | 8 | "The deep crimson gem was" | | 9 | "It wasn’t the gentle, guiding" | | 10 | "The pendant glowed with a" | | 11 | "A snap of a twig" | | 12 | "Rory spun around, her bright" | | 13 | "The oak trees stood like" | | 14 | "She told herself it was" | | 15 | "She was a creature of" | | 16 | "Logic dictated that an animal" | | 17 | "Logic dictated that the pulsing" | | 18 | "It stood perhaps fifty yards" | | 19 | "It was tall—too tall—and thin" |
| | ratio | 0.815 | |
| 61.73% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 81 | | matches | | 0 | "Just as she reached the" |
| | ratio | 0.012 | |
| 70.22% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 59 | | technicalSentenceCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "She paused at the edge of the clearing, her boots sinking into a carpet of wildflowers that had no business blooming in the dead of a London autumn." | | 1 | "The oak trees stood like sentinels, their twisted limbs interlocking to form a ceiling of black lace against a sky that had turned an bruised, unnatural purple." | | 2 | "They weren't figures anymore, but shapes—slender, needle-like things that stretched and contracted." | | 3 | "Every time she glanced to the side, she caught a glimpse of them: a long, pale finger curling around a branch; a wide, lipless mouth opening in a silent scream;…" | | 4 | "They remained at the edge of her vision, retreating the moment she turned her head, playing a sadistic game of hide-and-seek." | | 5 | "She lay on her back for a long time, staring up at the grey, overcast sky, her chest heaving." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 1 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |