| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 1 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 1 | | tagDensity | 1 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 86.95% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1533 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 4 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "very" | | 1 | "quickly" | | 2 | "perfectly" |
| |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1533 | | totalAiIsms | 40 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | | | 20 | | | 21 | | | 22 | | | 23 | | | 24 | | | 25 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "chill" | | 1 | "weight" | | 2 | "rhythmic" | | 3 | "warmth" | | 4 | "navigating" | | 5 | "tension" | | 6 | "silence" | | 7 | "footsteps" | | 8 | "loomed" | | 9 | "gloom" | | 10 | "sentinels" | | 11 | "unsettled" | | 12 | "familiar" | | 13 | "electric" | | 14 | "dance" | | 15 | "pulsed" | | 16 | "throb" | | 17 | "scanning" | | 18 | "flicker" | | 19 | "pulse" | | 20 | "velvet" | | 21 | "profound" | | 22 | "echoed" | | 23 | "searing" | | 24 | "predator" | | 25 | "could feel" |
| |
| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 110 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 12.99% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 9 | | narrationSentences | 110 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | 0 | "seemed to" | | 1 | "seem to" | | 2 | "began to" |
| |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 110 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 36 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 4 | | markdownWords | 21 | | totalWords | 1530 | | ratio | 0.014 | | matches | | 0 | "Logic, Rory. Use your head," | | 1 | "It’s an ecological anomaly. A microclimate. A pocket of high-density pollen or something." | | 2 | "Snap." | | 3 | "Haaah... haaaah..." |
| |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 3 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 25 | | wordCount | 1529 | | uniqueNames | 9 | | maxNameDensity | 0.52 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Aurora | 8 | | Heartstone | 6 | | London | 1 | | English | 1 | | Grove | 5 | | Rory | 1 | | Fae | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Aurora" | | 1 | "Heartstone" | | 2 | "Rory" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "London" | | 3 | "Grove" | | 4 | "Fae" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 88 | | glossingSentenceCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "stillness that seemed to swallow the very noise of her footsteps" | | 1 | "quite map" | | 2 | "as if sensing her awareness, and then it elongated, stretching across the ground toward her with a slow, liquid grace" | | 3 | "felt like warm, damp skin" | | 4 | "trees that seemed to have closed ranks behind her" | | 5 | "nothingness that seemed to drink the light of her pendant" |
| |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1530 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 110 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 36 | | mean | 42.5 | | std | 26.58 | | cv | 0.625 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 78 | | 1 | 66 | | 2 | 66 | | 3 | 5 | | 4 | 79 | | 5 | 49 | | 6 | 74 | | 7 | 23 | | 8 | 82 | | 9 | 1 | | 10 | 18 | | 11 | 58 | | 12 | 18 | | 13 | 13 | | 14 | 82 | | 15 | 56 | | 16 | 65 | | 17 | 46 | | 18 | 43 | | 19 | 5 | | 20 | 65 | | 21 | 60 | | 22 | 4 | | 23 | 32 | | 24 | 2 | | 25 | 54 | | 26 | 6 | | 27 | 84 | | 28 | 4 | | 29 | 58 | | 30 | 34 | | 31 | 42 | | 32 | 45 | | 33 | 20 | | 34 | 53 | | 35 | 40 |
| |
| 86.12% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 6 | | totalSentences | 110 | | matches | | 0 | "were gnarled" | | 1 | "been drawn" | | 2 | "been snagged" | | 3 | "was laid" | | 4 | "been stretched" | | 5 | "was gone" | | 6 | "was trapped" |
| |
| 45.56% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 6 | | totalVerbs | 259 | | matches | | 0 | "was standing" | | 1 | "was shifting" | | 2 | "were breathing" | | 3 | "weren't just blooming" | | 4 | "was pulling" | | 5 | "was waiting" |
| |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 3 | | semicolonCount | 12 | | flaggedSentences | 15 | | totalSentences | 110 | | ratio | 0.136 | | matches | | 0 | "It wasn't just warm; it was insistent, a tiny, beating heart of heat that guided her deeper into the darkness of the park, away from the distant, muted hum of London’s life." | | 1 | "One moment, she was in the familiar, shadowed expanse of a public park; the next, she was standing in a clearing that defied the season." | | 2 | "Aurora reached up, her fingers brushing the small, crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist—a nervous tic she’d carried since childhood." | | 3 | "They didn't sway in the breeze because there was no breeze; the air was stagnant, thick as syrup." | | 4 | "The moonlight, filtered through the dense canopy, didn't dance; it hung in fixed, gelatinous shafts, illuminating the petals with a light that felt static, as if time itself had been snagged on a thorn." | | 5 | "The warmth was no longer a comfort; it was a warning, a frantic throb that mimicked a panicked heartbeat." | | 6 | "Every time she glanced toward the edge of her vision, she caught a flicker of movement—a shadow shifting too quickly, a petal falling in a trajectory that felt intentionally wrong." | | 7 | "It wasn't the sensation of a single gaze; it was a thousand eyes, hidden in the textures of the bark, tucked behind the velvet folds of the flowers, peering from the hollows of the trees." | | 8 | "She didn't scream; she was too terrified to breathe, let alone make a sound." | | 9 | "They didn't feel like petals; they felt like warm, damp skin." | | 10 | "The flowers weren't just blooming; they were breathing." | | 11 | "The trees didn't just stand; they leaned, their heavy limbs angled toward her as if drawn by her heat." | | 12 | "It wasn't a shadow at all, but a void—a hole in the world shaped like something that had once been human but had been stretched and refined into something much thinner, much taller." | | 13 | "The light from the gem was no longer a steady glow; it was a strobe, a frantic flickering that made the movements of the Grove look like a stop-motion nightmare." | | 14 | "It didn't run; it simply existed in new places, appearing ten feet ahead, then five, then three." |
| |
| 78.39% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1541 | | adjectiveStacks | 3 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "twisting, silver-barked trees," | | 1 | "small, crescent-shaped scar" | | 2 | "large, moss-covered stone" |
| | adverbCount | 68 | | adverbRatio | 0.04412719013627515 | | lyAdverbCount | 15 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.00973393900064893 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 110 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 110 | | mean | 13.91 | | std | 8.48 | | cv | 0.61 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 16 | | 1 | 2 | | 2 | 28 | | 3 | 32 | | 4 | 10 | | 5 | 29 | | 6 | 6 | | 7 | 21 | | 8 | 16 | | 9 | 20 | | 10 | 8 | | 11 | 22 | | 12 | 5 | | 13 | 12 | | 14 | 25 | | 15 | 15 | | 16 | 27 | | 17 | 20 | | 18 | 8 | | 19 | 2 | | 20 | 6 | | 21 | 4 | | 22 | 2 | | 23 | 7 | | 24 | 17 | | 25 | 5 | | 26 | 18 | | 27 | 34 | | 28 | 4 | | 29 | 19 | | 30 | 12 | | 31 | 20 | | 32 | 30 | | 33 | 20 | | 34 | 1 | | 35 | 18 | | 36 | 2 | | 37 | 12 | | 38 | 24 | | 39 | 5 | | 40 | 15 | | 41 | 3 | | 42 | 15 | | 43 | 2 | | 44 | 11 | | 45 | 9 | | 46 | 14 | | 47 | 12 | | 48 | 11 | | 49 | 36 |
| |
| 29.09% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 23 | | diversityRatio | 0.23636363636363636 | | totalSentences | 110 | | uniqueOpeners | 26 | |
| 33.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 101 | | matches | | 0 | "Only the faint, rhythmic thrum" |
| | ratio | 0.01 | |
| 33.86% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 47 | | totalSentences | 101 | | matches | | 0 | "It wasn't just warm; it" | | 1 | "Her boots crunched rhythmically over" | | 2 | "She kept her breathing shallow," | | 3 | "It wasn't the absence of" | | 4 | "It was the presence of" | | 5 | "They were gnarled, prehistoric sentinels," | | 6 | "She stepped into the Grove." | | 7 | "She forced herself to take" | | 8 | "*It’s an ecological anomaly." | | 9 | "They didn't sway in the" | | 10 | "She began to walk, her" | | 11 | "She stayed perfectly still, her" | | 12 | "She waited for the sound" | | 13 | "It was a predatory silence." | | 14 | "It felt as though the" | | 15 | "Her voice felt small, stripped" | | 16 | "She forced herself to move" | | 17 | "She needed to find the" | | 18 | "She had passed a cluster" | | 19 | "It wasn't the sensation of" |
| | ratio | 0.465 | |
| 34.26% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 86 | | totalSentences | 101 | | matches | | 0 | "The damp chill of Richmond" | | 1 | "The Heartstone pendant was a" | | 2 | "It wasn't just warm; it" | | 3 | "Her boots crunched rhythmically over" | | 4 | "She kept her breathing shallow," | | 5 | "It wasn't the absence of" | | 6 | "It was the presence of" | | 7 | "They were gnarled, prehistoric sentinels," | | 8 | "The biting chill of the" | | 9 | "She stepped into the Grove." | | 10 | "The transition was seamless, which" | | 11 | "Aurora reached up, her fingers" | | 12 | "She forced herself to take" | | 13 | "*It’s an ecological anomaly." | | 14 | "A pocket of high-density pollen" | | 15 | "The wildflowers were too bright." | | 16 | "They didn't sway in the" | | 17 | "The moonlight, filtered through the" | | 18 | "The Heartstone pulsed harder." | | 19 | "The warmth was no longer" |
| | ratio | 0.851 | |
| 49.50% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 101 | | matches | | | ratio | 0.01 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 73 | | technicalSentenceCount | 19 | | matches | | 0 | "The Heartstone pendant was a frantic weight against her sternum, its deep crimson surface pulsing with a rhythmic, feverish warmth that bled through the fabric …" | | 1 | "It wasn't just warm; it was insistent, a tiny, beating heart of heat that guided her deeper into the darkness of the park, away from the distant, muted hum of L…" | | 2 | "It was the presence of a vacuum, a heavy, expectant stillness that seemed to swallow the very noise of her footsteps." | | 3 | "The biting chill of the English autumn vanished, replaced by a cloying, unnatural warmth that tasted of bruised nectar and damp earth." | | 4 | "Electric violets, pale, glowing ambers, and deep, bruised magentas erupted from the loam, their petals shimmering in a light that didn't seem to come from the m…" | | 5 | "The moonlight, filtered through the dense canopy, didn't dance; it hung in fixed, gelatinous shafts, illuminating the petals with a light that felt static, as i…" | | 6 | "Every time she glanced toward the edge of her vision, she caught a flicker of movement—a shadow shifting too quickly, a petal falling in a trajectory that felt …" | | 7 | "She had passed a cluster of weeping white lilies only moments ago, yet as she circled back, she found herself facing a wall of thorned vines that looked old eno…" | | 8 | "She stopped near a large, moss-covered stone that looked suspiciously like a slumped shoulder." | | 9 | "It paused, as if sensing her awareness, and then it elongated, stretching across the ground toward her with a slow, liquid grace." | | 10 | "It wasn't a shadow at all, but a void—a hole in the world shaped like something that had once been human but had been stretched and refined into something much …" | | 11 | "The sound echoed from multiple directions at once, a surround-sound hallucination that made her dizzy." | | 12 | "The path she had taken was gone, replaced by a wall of silver-barked trees that seemed to have closed ranks behind her." | | 13 | "The light from the gem was no longer a steady glow; it was a strobe, a frantic flickering that made the movements of the Grove look like a stop-motion nightmare…" | | 14 | "In the flashes of light, she saw them: things that weren't things, peering from the periphery." | | 15 | "The scent of the flowers grew overwhelming, a saccharine, rotting stench that threatened to choke her." | | 16 | "She skidded to a halt, her chest heaving, her vision blurring." | | 17 | "The void stood directly before her, a towering column of nothingness that seemed to drink the light of her pendant." | | 18 | "Aurora reached for the silver chain of the pendant, her fingers trembling, wanting to rip the thing from her neck, but her hand froze." |
| |
| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 1 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 1 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 1 | | tagDensity | 1 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 1 | | effectiveRatio | 1 | |