| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 2 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 2 | | tagDensity | 1 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 72.70% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1282 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 7 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "slightly" | | 1 | "slowly" | | 2 | "very" | | 3 | "perfectly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1282 | | totalAiIsms | 29 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "familiar" | | 1 | "silence" | | 2 | "weight" | | 3 | "flicker" | | 4 | "echo" | | 5 | "resonance" | | 6 | "scanning" | | 7 | "tracing" | | 8 | "pulsed" | | 9 | "throb" | | 10 | "warmth" | | 11 | "rhythmic" | | 12 | "oppressive" | | 13 | "searing" | | 14 | "dancing" | | 15 | "beacon" | | 16 | "lurched" | | 17 | "footfall" | | 18 | "effortless" | | 19 | "echoed" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 98 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 26.24% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 7 | | narrationSentences | 98 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 98 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 33 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 2 | | markdownWords | 5 | | totalWords | 1276 | | ratio | 0.004 | | matches | | 0 | "Thump. Thump. Thump." | | 1 | "Step-thump. Step-thump." |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 2 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 22 | | wordCount | 1271 | | uniqueNames | 8 | | maxNameDensity | 0.63 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1 | | worstWindowName | "Grove" | | discoveredNames | | Aurora | 1 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | London | 1 | | Grove | 5 | | Heartstone | 4 | | Fae | 1 | | Rory | 8 |
| | persons | | | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "London" | | 3 | "Grove" | | 4 | "Fae" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 59.64% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 83 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "foxgloves that seemed to have sprouted in the seconds she had been looking away" | | 1 | "sounded like a child, but the pitch was sl" | | 2 | "sounded like a dry bone snapping" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.784 | | wordCount | 1276 | | matches | | 0 | "Not vanished in a flash of light, but simply obscured by a sudden, aggressive growth of ferns" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 98 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 30 | | mean | 42.53 | | std | 25.89 | | cv | 0.609 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 81 | | 1 | 97 | | 2 | 101 | | 3 | 53 | | 4 | 50 | | 5 | 39 | | 6 | 4 | | 7 | 36 | | 8 | 75 | | 9 | 4 | | 10 | 56 | | 11 | 31 | | 12 | 3 | | 13 | 49 | | 14 | 53 | | 15 | 53 | | 16 | 15 | | 17 | 46 | | 18 | 55 | | 19 | 44 | | 20 | 54 | | 21 | 4 | | 22 | 49 | | 23 | 31 | | 24 | 7 | | 25 | 67 | | 26 | 24 | | 27 | 12 | | 28 | 42 | | 29 | 41 |
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| 90.94% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 98 | | matches | | 0 | "been replaced" | | 1 | "was gone" | | 2 | "was gone" | | 3 | "was gone" |
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| 0.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 11 | | totalVerbs | 200 | | matches | | 0 | "was imagining" | | 1 | "was jarring" | | 2 | "were speaking" | | 3 | "weren't swaying" | | 4 | "were reaching" | | 5 | "was pulsing" | | 6 | "wasn't just coming" | | 7 | "was coming" | | 8 | "was humming" | | 9 | "wasn't chasing" | | 10 | "was simply keeping" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 6 | | semicolonCount | 5 | | flaggedSentences | 10 | | totalSentences | 98 | | ratio | 0.102 | | matches | | 0 | "Behind her, the familiar, muted sounds of Richmond Park—the distant hum of traffic, the rustle of wind through common brush—vanished." | | 1 | "She didn't turn around immediately; instead, she listened." | | 2 | "A flicker of movement caught her eye—a smudge of charcoal gray darting between two silver-barked trees to her left." | | 3 | "The lilies weren't swaying in a breeze; there was no wind." | | 4 | "The warmth was an alarm, a visceral warning that she was near something—a portal, a breach, a doorway." | | 5 | "The Grove was no longer a clearing; it had become a labyrinth of silver trunks and iridescent flora." | | 6 | "It was a laugh—short, melodic, and entirely devoid of humor." | | 7 | "It didn't come from any one direction; it seemed to emanate from the very air around her." | | 8 | "The warmth was no longer a warning; it was a beacon." | | 9 | "As she ran, she heard it—the sound of something mimicking her." |
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| 98.06% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1279 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 54 | | adverbRatio | 0.04222048475371384 | | lyAdverbCount | 19 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.014855355746677092 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 98 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 98 | | mean | 13.02 | | std | 7.2 | | cv | 0.553 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 14 | | 1 | 29 | | 2 | 20 | | 3 | 18 | | 4 | 22 | | 5 | 23 | | 6 | 30 | | 7 | 22 | | 8 | 13 | | 9 | 12 | | 10 | 14 | | 11 | 16 | | 12 | 18 | | 13 | 28 | | 14 | 9 | | 15 | 15 | | 16 | 2 | | 17 | 8 | | 18 | 14 | | 19 | 5 | | 20 | 3 | | 21 | 7 | | 22 | 33 | | 23 | 7 | | 24 | 19 | | 25 | 6 | | 26 | 14 | | 27 | 4 | | 28 | 4 | | 29 | 15 | | 30 | 17 | | 31 | 13 | | 32 | 10 | | 33 | 27 | | 34 | 11 | | 35 | 11 | | 36 | 3 | | 37 | 4 | | 38 | 15 | | 39 | 9 | | 40 | 18 | | 41 | 14 | | 42 | 20 | | 43 | 11 | | 44 | 1 | | 45 | 1 | | 46 | 1 | | 47 | 19 | | 48 | 9 | | 49 | 21 |
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| 32.65% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 17 | | diversityRatio | 0.24489795918367346 | | totalSentences | 98 | | uniqueOpeners | 24 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 92 | | matches | | 0 | "Then, the Heartstone pulsed." | | 1 | "Only the oppressive shadow of" | | 2 | "Then, very slowly, it began" |
| | ratio | 0.033 | |
| 54.78% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 38 | | totalSentences | 92 | | matches | | 0 | "It wasn't a sudden gust" | | 1 | "She had come here seeking" | | 2 | "She reached up, her fingers" | | 3 | "She let out a slow" | | 4 | "She told herself she was" | | 5 | "She was a woman of" | | 6 | "It was a soft, wet" | | 7 | "She didn't turn around immediately;" | | 8 | "It was an expectant silence." | | 9 | "She turned slowly." | | 10 | "She shifted her weight, her" | | 11 | "she called out" | | 12 | "Her voice didn't echo." | | 13 | "She began to walk again," | | 14 | "She kept her movements precise," | | 15 | "She stepped back, a shiver" | | 16 | "They were reaching." | | 17 | "It wasn't a strong vibration," | | 18 | "It was pulsing faster now," | | 19 | "It was coming from the" |
| | ratio | 0.413 | |
| 63.26% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 73 | | totalSentences | 92 | | matches | | 0 | "The air changed the moment" | | 1 | "It wasn't a sudden gust" | | 2 | "Rory paused, her boots sinking" | | 3 | "She had come here seeking" | | 4 | "She reached up, her fingers" | | 5 | "The deep crimson gem was" | | 6 | "She let out a slow" | | 7 | "She told herself she was" | | 8 | "She was a woman of" | | 9 | "The first sound happened ten" | | 10 | "It was a soft, wet" | | 11 | "She didn't turn around immediately;" | | 12 | "The silence rushed back in" | | 13 | "It was an expectant silence." | | 14 | "She turned slowly." | | 15 | "The path she had walked" | | 16 | "The boundary stones were no" | | 17 | "A flicker of movement caught" | | 18 | "Rory blinked, and it was" | | 19 | "She shifted her weight, her" |
| | ratio | 0.793 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 92 | | matches | | 0 | "Even in the dim, filtered" | | 1 | "To her right, a cluster" |
| | ratio | 0.022 | |
| 43.96% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 65 | | technicalSentenceCount | 9 | | matches | | 0 | "It wasn't a sudden gust or a dramatic shift in temperature, but a thickening of the atmosphere, as if the oxygen had been replaced by something heavier and swee…" | | 1 | "Rory paused, her boots sinking slightly into a carpet of wildflowers that shouldn't have been blooming in the dead of the night." | | 2 | "Not vanished in a flash of light, but simply obscured by a sudden, aggressive growth of ferns and towering foxgloves that seemed to have sprouted in the seconds…" | | 3 | "The lack of resonance was jarring, making her feel as though she were speaking into a vacuum." | | 4 | "The warmth intensified, shifting from a gentle glow to a rhythmic heat that mirrored the accelerating beat of her heart." | | 5 | "A low, subterranean vibration was humming through the soil, a rhythmic thrumming that felt less like geology and more like biology." | | 6 | "It was narrow, elongated, with too many joints in the toes, pressing deep into the earth as if the thing that made it weighed far more than any human." | | 7 | "The branches lowered, snagging her hair, scratching at her cheeks with needle-like thorns." | | 8 | "She scrambled upward, her lungs burning, her mind screaming for the sight of those two oak stones." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 2 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory said, her voice trembling despite her effort to remain cool" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 1 | | fancyCount | 0 | | fancyTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 2 | | tagDensity | 0.5 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |