Run: 2026-05-10-01KR8X8WQE9Q9KFHZ9HGS09MV4

Run Details

Duration:
1m 9s
Cost:
$0.002478
Provider:
Venice

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The green neon of The Raven’s Nest hummed with a low, electric frequency that seemed to vibrate in Aurora’s very marrow. It was a rhythmic, sickly light, casting long, emerald shadows across the maps that lined the walls—weathered charts of forgotten borders and sea lanes that made the small Soho bar feel like a sanctuary for ghosts. Aurora sat on a high stool, her shoulders slumped under the weight of a day spent dodging mopeds and navigating the labyrinthine alleys of London. The scent of Yu-Fei Cheung’s Golden Empress—ginger, soy, and the faint, greasy warmth of takeout containers—clung to her skin, a stubborn reminder of her shift. She rubbed her left wrist, her thumb tracing the small, crescent-shaped scar a ritual of habit rather than pain. It was a quiet evening, the kind where the city felt like it was breathing just outside the heavy oak door, and for a moment, the anonymity of the bar felt like a second skin. Behind the bar, Silas moved with the measured, heavy grace of a man who knew exactly how much space he occupied. He was cleaning a glass, his grey-streaked auburn hair caught in the dim light. Every few moments, the slight, rhythmic drag of his left leg against the floorboards signaled his movement—a steady, grounding sound in the quiet room. Aurora closed her eyes, letting the darkness behind her lids take her back to Cardiff, to the lecture halls of Cardiff University and the ghost of a Pre-Law degree she had buried under a mountain of delivery slips and London rain. She was twenty-five, but in the silence of the Nest, she felt a century old. "You look like you’ve been dragged through the Thames, Rory." The voice didn't belong in this room. It was too bright, too polished, cutting through the amber-and-green gloom like a blade. Aurora’s eyes snapped open. The breath hitched in her throat, a sharp, jagged thing. Standing two stools away, silhouetted against the glow of the street through the window, was a woman who looked like a stranger wearing a familiar face. "Eva?" The name was barely a whisper, a fragment of a life she had thought she’d left behind in the damp hills of Wales. Eva didn't look like the girl who had sat on the floor of a cramped Cardiff flat, nursing a cheap bottle of wine and promising Aurora that London would be a fresh start. That Eva had messy, sun-bleached hair and a laugh that could be heard three streets away. This woman was composed of sharp lines and expensive fabrics. Her hair was a sleek, controlled bob; her coat was a tailored wool that probably cost more than Aurora’s monthly rent. She looked like she belonged in a boardroom in Canary Wharf, not a dim-lit dive in Soho. "It is you," Eva said, stepping closer. She didn't move for a hug. She didn't even smile. She simply stood there, observing Aurora with a clinical kind of curiosity. "I heard you were in London. I didn't realize you were... here." Eva’s eyes flickered to Aurora’s practical, scuffed jacket and the way her black, shoulder-length hair was tucked haphazardly behind her ears. The implication hung in the air, heavy and unsaid. "I'm working," Aurora said, her voice finding its footing, though it felt thin. She straightened her spine, the old instinct for composure kicking in. "I live above the bar. It’s quiet. It’s fine." "Fine," Eva repeated. She sat on the stool beside Aurora, the silk of her sleeve whispering against the wood. "That’s a very safe word, isn't it? 'Fine.' You always were good at finding the middle ground, Rory. Even when the ground was crumbling under you." The mention of the past—of the escape, of the wreckage Evan had left in her wake—made the air in the bar feel suddenly thin. Aurora turned her head, meeting Eva’s gaze. The bright blue of her eyes felt too loud in the dimness. "Some of us don't need to build skyscrapers to feel like we've arrived, Eva," Aurora said. It wasn't an attack, but the edges were sharp. "Some of us just need to be able to sleep at night." Eva laughed, a short, brittle sound that lacked any real mirth. "Is that what you call this? Sleeping? You look like you're waiting for a blow to land." "Maybe I am," Aurora countered. For a long moment, they sat in a silence that was not peaceful, but pregnant with the weight of the years they hadn't spoken. The tension between them was a physical thing, a cord stretched taut across the years of silence, the unanswered texts, and the divergent paths they had taken. Eva had pursued the life they had dreamed of in Cardiff—the fast life, the high-stakes, the polished surface. Aurora had pursued survival. "I saw your father's name in the papers once," Eva said, her tone softening just a fraction, though her posture remained rigid. "The barrister. It made me think of you. I wondered if you’d finished your studies. If you were practicing in the City." "I left the law in the rearview mirror, Eva. Along with almost everything else." Aurora looked down at her hands. They were steady, but they felt weary. "I didn't come to London to be a barrister. I came to disappear." "And did you?" Eva asked, leaning in. The scent of her perfume—something expensive, floral, and intimidating—overpowered the smell of the bar. "Because from where I’m sitting, you just traded one kind of cage for another. A smaller one. One with delivery routes and neon signs." Aurora felt the sting, a hot flash of indignation, but she suppressed it. That was the old Rory—the one who could think her way out of any corner, the one who could dissect a problem until it was nothing but facts. "At least I know where the walls are in this one. I built them myself." Eva reached out, her manicured fingers hovering near Aurora’s wrist, near the scar. For a second, Aurora thought she might touch it, might bridge the distance, but Eva pulled back, smoothing her coat instead. "We were supposed to be a team," Eva said, her voice dropping to a low, melancholic register. "Two girls from Cardiff taking on the world. We had a plan, Rory. We had a map." "Maps change," Aurora said. She looked up at the walls of The Raven's Nest, at the old, faded charts of places that no longer existed. "Geography isn't permanent. People move. Borders shift. Sometimes you end up in a place you never intended to go, and you realize the map was wrong all along." Eva looked away, her gaze drifting toward the dark corners of the bar, toward Silas, who was now moving toward the far end of the room. She looked, for a fleeting second, like the girl from Cardiff again—lost, uncertain, and profoundly lonely. But then the mask slid back into place, the polished, impenetrable veneer of a London professional. "I have a gala to attend," Eva said, standing up. She reached into her clutch, pulling out a slim, gold card. "If you ever want to... if you ever want to see what the other side of the city looks like. Call me." Aurora looked at the card, then up at her friend. "I think I like my side of the city just fine, Eva." Eva nodded, a sharp, decisive movement. "Of course you do. You always were the sensible one." She turned and walked away, her heels clicking a rhythmic, expensive cadence against the floorboards. Aurora watched her go, watching the way she moved through the shadows, never once stumbling, never once looking back. When the heavy door finally swung shut behind her, the silence that rushed back into the bar felt heavier than before. Aurora sat still, the green neon light washing over her, making her feel like a part of the furniture, a ghost in a room full of them. Silas approached, his limp more pronounced in the sudden quiet. He set a small glass of amber liquid on the coaster in front of her. He didn't ask what had happened; he was too old and too wise for the prying questions of the curious. He simply stood there, a silent sentinel in the gloom. "On the house," he said, his voice a low rumble. Aurora wrapped her hands around the glass. The warmth seeped into her palms, a small, solitary comfort. She stared at the liquid, watching the way the green light fractured in the glass, creating a thousand tiny, emerald stars. She thought of the girl she had been, and the woman she had become, and the vast, unbridgeable distance between the two. The map had changed, indeed. And as she took a slow, steady sip, Aurora realized she had no intention of ever finding her way back.
created_at"2026-05-10T12:19:56.278Z" 5/10/2026, 12:19:56 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags13
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences28
tagDensity0.464
leniency0.929
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
89.94% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1491
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"very"
count2
1
adverb"suddenly"
count1
highlights
0"very"
1"suddenly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
2.75% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1491
totalAiIsms29
found
0
word"electric"
count1
1
word"rhythmic"
count3
2
word"sanctuary"
count1
3
word"weight"
count2
4
word"navigating"
count1
5
word"warmth"
count2
6
word"reminder"
count1
7
word"tracing"
count1
8
word"measured"
count1
9
word"silence"
count4
10
word"gloom"
count2
11
word"familiar"
count1
12
word"whisper"
count1
13
word"flickered"
count1
14
word"implication"
count1
15
word"silk"
count1
16
word"tension"
count1
17
word"fleeting"
count1
18
word"sentinel"
count1
19
word"solitary"
count1
20
word"fractured"
count1
highlights
0"electric"
1"rhythmic"
2"sanctuary"
3"weight"
4"navigating"
5"warmth"
6"reminder"
7"tracing"
8"measured"
9"silence"
10"gloom"
11"familiar"
12"whisper"
13"flickered"
14"implication"
15"silk"
16"tension"
17"fleeting"
18"sentinel"
19"solitary"
20"fractured"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences77
matches
0"felt the sting"
68.65% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount3
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences77
filterMatches
0"feel"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences92
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen42
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1480
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions14
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
33.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions70
wordCount1163
uniqueNames19
maxNameDensity2.06
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity4
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Raven2
Nest3
Aurora24
Soho2
London4
Yu-Fei1
Cheung1
Golden1
Empress1
Silas3
Cardiff5
University1
Pre-Law1
Wales1
Eva16
Canary1
Wharf1
Evan1
Rory1
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Aurora"
3"Yu-Fei"
4"Cheung"
5"Silas"
6"Eva"
7"Evan"
8"Rory"
places
0"Soho"
1"London"
2"Cardiff"
3"Wales"
4"Canary"
globalScore0.468
windowScore0.333
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences66
glossingSentenceCount4
matches
0"frequency that seemed to vibrate in Aurora’s very marrow"
1"felt like it was breathing just outside"
2"felt like a second skin"
3"looked like a stranger wearing a familiar"
4"looked like she belonged in a boardroom i"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.676
wordCount1480
matches
0"not peaceful, but pregnant with the weight of the years they hadn't spoken"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences92
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs35
mean42.29
std21.29
cv0.503
sampleLengths
057
1104
259
356
410
521
640
724
897
941
1030
1133
1245
1343
1437
1528
165
1773
1844
1940
2045
2156
2234
2334
2453
2558
2643
2722
2816
2934
3048
3155
3210
3360
3425
96.15% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences77
matches
0"was composed"
1"was tucked"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs181
matches
0"was breathing"
1"was cleaning"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount11
semicolonCount2
flaggedSentences10
totalSentences92
ratio0.109
matches
0"It was a rhythmic, sickly light, casting long, emerald shadows across the maps that lined the walls—weathered charts of forgotten borders and sea lanes that made the small Soho bar feel like a sanctuary for ghosts."
1"The scent of Yu-Fei Cheung’s Golden Empress—ginger, soy, and the faint, greasy warmth of takeout containers—clung to her skin, a stubborn reminder of her shift."
2"Every few moments, the slight, rhythmic drag of his left leg against the floorboards signaled his movement—a steady, grounding sound in the quiet room."
3"Her hair was a sleek, controlled bob; her coat was a tailored wool that probably cost more than Aurora’s monthly rent."
4"The mention of the past—of the escape, of the wreckage Evan had left in her wake—made the air in the bar feel suddenly thin."
5"Eva had pursued the life they had dreamed of in Cardiff—the fast life, the high-stakes, the polished surface."
6"The scent of her perfume—something expensive, floral, and intimidating—overpowered the smell of the bar."
7"That was the old Rory—the one who could think her way out of any corner, the one who could dissect a problem until it was nothing but facts."
8"She looked, for a fleeting second, like the girl from Cardiff again—lost, uncertain, and profoundly lonely."
9"He didn't ask what had happened; he was too old and too wise for the prying questions of the curious."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1185
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"messy, sun-bleached hair"
adverbCount43
adverbRatio0.036286919831223625
lyAdverbCount12
lyAdverbRatio0.010126582278481013
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences92
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences92
mean16.09
std7.93
cv0.493
sampleLengths
021
136
225
325
419
535
621
714
824
941
1015
1110
127
1314
144
1510
1626
1724
1833
1916
2010
2121
2217
237
246
254
2612
2712
2821
299
3013
3111
329
333
3416
3526
3624
377
3812
3916
409
4112
4211
4317
445
4524
4627
4718
484
4922
53.26% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.358695652173913
totalSentences92
uniqueOpeners33
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences73
matches(empty)
ratio0
83.01% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount25
totalSentences73
matches
0"It was a rhythmic, sickly"
1"She rubbed her left wrist,"
2"It was a quiet evening,"
3"He was cleaning a glass,"
4"She was twenty-five, but in"
5"It was too bright, too"
6"Her hair was a sleek,"
7"She looked like she belonged"
8"She didn't move for a"
9"She didn't even smile."
10"She simply stood there, observing"
11"She straightened her spine, the"
12"She sat on the stool"
13"It wasn't an attack, but"
14"They were steady, but they"
15"She looked up at the"
16"She looked, for a fleeting"
17"She reached into her clutch,"
18"She turned and walked away,"
19"He set a small glass"
ratio0.342
7.95% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount66
totalSentences73
matches
0"The green neon of The"
1"It was a rhythmic, sickly"
2"Aurora sat on a high"
3"The scent of Yu-Fei Cheung’s"
4"She rubbed her left wrist,"
5"It was a quiet evening,"
6"He was cleaning a glass,"
7"Every few moments, the slight,"
8"Aurora closed her eyes, letting"
9"She was twenty-five, but in"
10"The voice didn't belong in"
11"It was too bright, too"
12"Aurora’s eyes snapped open."
13"The breath hitched in her"
14"The name was barely a"
15"Eva didn't look like the"
16"That Eva had messy, sun-bleached"
17"This woman was composed of"
18"Her hair was a sleek,"
19"She looked like she belonged"
ratio0.904
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences73
matches(empty)
ratio0
32.97% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences52
technicalSentenceCount8
matches
0"The green neon of The Raven’s Nest hummed with a low, electric frequency that seemed to vibrate in Aurora’s very marrow."
1"It was a rhythmic, sickly light, casting long, emerald shadows across the maps that lined the walls—weathered charts of forgotten borders and sea lanes that mad…"
2"Standing two stools away, silhouetted against the glow of the street through the window, was a woman who looked like a stranger wearing a familiar face."
3"Eva didn't look like the girl who had sat on the floor of a cramped Cardiff flat, nursing a cheap bottle of wine and promising Aurora that London would be a fre…"
4"That Eva had messy, sun-bleached hair and a laugh that could be heard three streets away."
5"Eva looked away, her gaze drifting toward the dark corners of the bar, toward Silas, who was now moving toward the far end of the room."
6"Aurora watched her go, watching the way she moved through the shadows, never once stumbling, never once looking back."
7"When the heavy door finally swung shut behind her, the silence that rushed back into the bar felt heavier than before."
48.08% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags13
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"Eva said, her voice dropping to a low, melancholic register"
1"he said, his voice a low rumble"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags10
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"Eva repeated (repeat)"
dialogueSentences28
tagDensity0.357
leniency0.714
rawRatio0.1
effectiveRatio0.071
70.3361%