| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | |
| 96.21% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1319 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 1 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1319 | | totalAiIsms | 28 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | | | 20 | | | 21 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "rhythmic" | | 1 | "silence" | | 2 | "loomed" | | 3 | "velvet" | | 4 | "grave" | | 5 | "tracing" | | 6 | "weight" | | 7 | "pulsed" | | 8 | "warmth" | | 9 | "flicker" | | 10 | "sanctuary" | | 11 | "comforting" | | 12 | "scanning" | | 13 | "predator" | | 14 | "searing" | | 15 | "could feel" | | 16 | "chill" | | 17 | "abyssal" | | 18 | "echoes" | | 19 | "pulse" | | 20 | "throbbed" | | 21 | "echoing" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 97 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 97 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 97 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 39 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1308 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 4 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 27 | | wordCount | 1308 | | uniqueNames | 10 | | maxNameDensity | 0.61 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | London | 2 | | Rory | 8 | | Fae | 1 | | Grove | 6 | | Heartstone | 5 | | Cardiff | 1 | | Evan | 1 | | Silas | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Rory" | | 1 | "Heartstone" | | 2 | "Evan" | | 3 | "Silas" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "London" | | 3 | "Fae" | | 4 | "Grove" | | 5 | "Cardiff" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 84.21% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 76 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "looked like fingers rising from the grave" | | 1 | "looked like heat haze rising from a highw" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1308 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 97 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 94.12% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 27 | | mean | 48.44 | | std | 23.23 | | cv | 0.479 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 48 | | 1 | 76 | | 2 | 71 | | 3 | 61 | | 4 | 83 | | 5 | 46 | | 6 | 19 | | 7 | 10 | | 8 | 66 | | 9 | 34 | | 10 | 58 | | 11 | 55 | | 12 | 88 | | 13 | 55 | | 14 | 10 | | 15 | 78 | | 16 | 64 | | 17 | 42 | | 18 | 52 | | 19 | 40 | | 20 | 54 | | 21 | 5 | | 22 | 58 | | 23 | 5 | | 24 | 33 | | 25 | 33 | | 26 | 64 |
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| 83.56% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 6 | | totalSentences | 97 | | matches | | 0 | "was supposed" | | 1 | "was followed" | | 2 | "been pulled" | | 3 | "was gone" | | 4 | "was singed" | | 5 | "was gone" |
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| 4.88% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 6 | | totalVerbs | 205 | | matches | | 0 | "were stepping" | | 1 | "were blooming" | | 2 | "were tracking" | | 3 | "weren’t just blooming" | | 4 | "was glowing" | | 5 | "was pulsing" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 11 | | semicolonCount | 5 | | flaggedSentences | 14 | | totalSentences | 97 | | ratio | 0.144 | | matches | | 0 | "Even in the dead of winter, they sat in the moonlight like jewels—petals of indigo and bruised violet, shimmering with an iridescent sheen that didn’t belong in this hemisphere." | | 1 | "The flowers weren’t just blooming; they were tracking her movement." | | 2 | "The warmth of it was no longer comforting; it was feverish, bordering on a burn." | | 3 | "Her training in Cardiff—the analytical approach to logic and arguments—usually served her well." | | 4 | "A sound drifted from the periphery of the trees—a wet, clicking rhythm, like teeth chattering in rapid succession." | | 5 | "This wasn't the malice of a man; this was the indifference of a predator watching a rabbit wander into a trap." | | 6 | "It didn't walk; it drifted, a flicker of motion at the very edge of her peripheral vision." | | 7 | "She saw it then—a shimmer in the air, a crack in the stillness about six feet to her left." | | 8 | "She could feel the chill of it—a frost that began to crystallize on her eyelashes." | | 9 | "The Grove didn't just exist between worlds; it drew things into that space, stripping them of their trajectory until they were nothing more than floating echoes." | | 10 | "She saw it in her reflection in the Heartstone—a pale, elongated face hovering inches behind her shoulder, eyes like hollowed-out sockets reflecting the crimson pulse of the stone." | | 11 | "The creature’s hand—if it could be called that—brushed her hair." | | 12 | "The smell of perfume and stale beer from Silas’s bar, the hum of London traffic, the gritty reality of the street—it all slammed into her with the force of a physical blow." | | 13 | "As she turned back toward the glow of the distant streetlamps, she heard it one last time—the faint, rhythmic click of teeth, echoing from somewhere deep within the stone circle." |
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| 88.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1327 | | adjectiveStacks | 2 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "small, crescent-shaped scar" | | 1 | "white-hot against her" |
| | adverbCount | 41 | | adverbRatio | 0.03089675960813866 | | lyAdverbCount | 9 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.006782215523737754 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 97 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 97 | | mean | 13.48 | | std | 8.03 | | cv | 0.596 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 13 | | 1 | 21 | | 2 | 14 | | 3 | 38 | | 4 | 20 | | 5 | 18 | | 6 | 5 | | 7 | 16 | | 8 | 4 | | 9 | 11 | | 10 | 10 | | 11 | 16 | | 12 | 9 | | 13 | 27 | | 14 | 20 | | 15 | 14 | | 16 | 9 | | 17 | 29 | | 18 | 13 | | 19 | 10 | | 20 | 22 | | 21 | 9 | | 22 | 22 | | 23 | 15 | | 24 | 3 | | 25 | 3 | | 26 | 13 | | 27 | 2 | | 28 | 8 | | 29 | 13 | | 30 | 13 | | 31 | 4 | | 32 | 4 | | 33 | 6 | | 34 | 26 | | 35 | 18 | | 36 | 16 | | 37 | 5 | | 38 | 28 | | 39 | 4 | | 40 | 21 | | 41 | 18 | | 42 | 18 | | 43 | 9 | | 44 | 4 | | 45 | 6 | | 46 | 11 | | 47 | 24 | | 48 | 20 | | 49 | 17 |
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| 36.60% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 13 | | diversityRatio | 0.24742268041237114 | | totalSentences | 97 | | uniqueOpeners | 24 | |
| 70.18% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 95 | | matches | | 0 | "Only the rustle of leaves" | | 1 | "Instead, she leaned into the" |
| | ratio | 0.021 | |
| 26.32% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 46 | | totalSentences | 95 | | matches | | 0 | "It was a suffocating, pressurized" | | 1 | "She walked with her hands" | | 2 | "They looked like fingers rising" | | 3 | "She touched her left wrist," | | 4 | "It felt cold tonight." | | 5 | "It was a rhythmic, sluggish" | | 6 | "It was the only thing" | | 7 | "It made no sound at" | | 8 | "She looked down at them" | | 9 | "she called out." | | 10 | "Her voice sounded flat, swallowed" | | 11 | "She turned in a slow" | | 12 | "Her training in Cardiff—the analytical" | | 13 | "She broke problems down." | | 14 | "She looked for evidence." | | 15 | "She could see the moon," | | 16 | "It was followed by the" | | 17 | "She thought of Evan, the" | | 18 | "She took a step toward" | | 19 | "They stood further away now," |
| | ratio | 0.484 | |
| 33.68% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 81 | | totalSentences | 95 | | matches | | 0 | "The air inside Richmond Park" | | 1 | "It was a suffocating, pressurized" | | 2 | "She walked with her hands" | | 3 | "They looked like fingers rising" | | 4 | "Rory stopped ten paces out." | | 5 | "She touched her left wrist," | | 6 | "It felt cold tonight." | | 7 | "Everything felt cold, except for" | | 8 | "It was a rhythmic, sluggish" | | 9 | "It was the only thing" | | 10 | "The Grove was supposed to" | | 11 | "It made no sound at" | | 12 | "The wildflowers were blooming, just" | | 13 | "She looked down at them" | | 14 | "The flowers weren’t just blooming;" | | 15 | "Every tilt of her head" | | 16 | "Rory pulled the pendant out" | | 17 | "The crimson stone was glowing" | | 18 | "The warmth of it was" | | 19 | "she called out." |
| | ratio | 0.853 | |
| 52.63% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 95 | | matches | | | ratio | 0.011 | |
| 27.65% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 62 | | technicalSentenceCount | 10 | | matches | | 0 | "She walked with her hands jammed deep into the pockets of her jacket, her shoulder-length black hair whipped across her face by a wind that felt less like weath…" | | 1 | "The Grove was supposed to be a sanctuary, a pocket between worlds where she could find the answers regarding the benefactor who had mailed her the pendant." | | 2 | "Even in the dead of winter, they sat in the moonlight like jewels—petals of indigo and bruised violet, shimmering with an iridescent sheen that didn’t belong in…" | | 3 | "Every tilt of her head sent a ripple through the stalks, a wave of motion that followed her displacement in the air." | | 4 | "The crimson stone was glowing with a fierce, unstable light, casting long, jittery shadows that danced across the trunks of the trees." | | 5 | "The pendant was pulsing faster now, a frantic, red strobe that painted the nearby tree bark in blood-colored light." | | 6 | "It had no mouth, no features, only the suggestion of a presence that smelled of wet earth and ancient, forgotten dust." | | 7 | "She reached out, her fingers trembling, aiming for the spot where the pendant hovered." | | 8 | "It was a sensation of absolute zero, a touch that stripped the heat from her skin and left her nerves screaming in sensory overload." | | 9 | "Weathered, moss-covered, unremarkable remnants of a landscape that had nothing to do with the night sky." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 0 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |