Run: 2026-05-10-01KR8XCKMYBZW58VV6FXNB2MDF

Run Details

Duration:
7.3s
Cost:
$0.002705
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The neon sign above The Raven’s Nest flickered with a rhythmic, sickly buzz, casting a jaundiced light over the Soho sidewalk. Rory pushed through the heavy wooden door, the familiar scent of stale ale and old floor wax hit her like an anchor. It was quiet for a Tuesday; the midday rush of the city was still hours away, leaving the bar to the ghosts and the regulars. Silas stood behind the mahogany bar, polishing a highball glass with a rag that had seen better decades. He looked up, his hazel eyes crinkling at the corners. He didn’t stop his work, but his gaze sharpened, tracking her movement with the practiced scrutiny of a man who had spent his life evaluating threats. He shifted his weight, favoring his left leg—a habit that had become as much a part of his silhouette as the grey-streaked ginger of his beard. Everything alright? he asked. His voice was a low rasp, steady and devoid of the frantic energy that defined the streets outside. Just a long shift, Silas, Rory said, dropping her delivery bag onto the nearest stool. She flexed her left wrist, rubbing the small, crescent-shaped scar that always grew tight in the damp London air. I feel like I’ve cycled through half the postcodes in the city today. Silas poured a splash of soda into a glass and slid it toward her. He didn’t mention the tips, or the flat upstairs, or the fact that she was pushing herself too hard again. He just watched her, his silver signet ring catching the dim light as he leaned against the scarred wood of the counter. You’re thinking too loud again, Rory. It’s bad for the upholstery. She offered him a thin, tired smile. Maybe I’m just waiting for the world to stop spinning for five minutes. The door chimes trilled, a sharp, intrusive sound against the low hum of the refrigeration system. Rory didn’t turn around immediately, distracted by the condensation on her glass, until the sound of a familiar, clipped laugh cut through the ambient gloom. It was a laugh she hadn’t heard in five years—a bright, brittle sound that used to signal the start of chaotic weekends in Cardiff. She turned. Standing by the entrance, shielding his eyes from the transition to the dark interior, was Evan. He looked different, though the wreckage of his character remained the same. He was dressed in a suit that cost more than a month of Rory’s rent, his hair slicked back with a precision that bordered on aggressive. He looked like a man who spent his life climbing over people, only to realize he’d reached the top of a very small hill. He squinted into the gloom, and then, his eyes settled on the girl at the bar. Laila? Rory stiffened, her posture shifting from exhaustion to a defensive, brittle rigidity. She had been Aurora in Cardiff; she had been Carter in the law lectures she’d barely attended; she had become Rory in the silence after she left. Hearing the name he used to lob at her like a weapon felt like a physical blow. It’s Aurora, she said, her voice steady enough to mask the sudden, sharp spike of adrenaline in her chest. Evan took a step forward, his hesitation lasting only a heartbeat before he settled into that familiar, predatory sprawl. He recognized Silas, offering a curt, mocking nod toward the man behind the bar, before turning all his attention back to her. I heard rumors you’d crawled off to London, he said, his voice dropping into the smooth, practiced register that once made her believe they shared a future. You look… different. The hair, the clothes. It’s hard to tell if you’re trying to change your life or just hide from it. Silas had gone very still, his gaze fixed on the base of his glass. His silence was heavy, a wall of implied violence that Rory knew Evan was too arrogant to read. I stopped hiding a long time ago, Evan, Rory replied. She didn't stand up. She didn't leave. The old fear was there, a cold knot in her stomach, but it was wrapped in a new, sharp steel. I stopped being the person who needed your permission to exist. Evan laughed, a short exhale of air that held no humor. You always had a flair for the dramatic. It’s the law school, right? Or maybe the lack of it? It’s a shame. You were brilliant, you know. Before you started thinking small. Rory looked at her hands. The scars of her survival were etched into the way she held herself, into the way she had dismantled her own ambition to escape him. She looked at Silas, who was watching her with an unblinking intensity, waiting to see if she would break or if she would strike. I define my own size now, Evan, she said, leaning forward. The darkness of the bar seemed to press in around them, highlighting the contrast between the man who demanded and the woman who had learned how to refuse. You came here for some reason. If it was to apologize, you’re about four years too late. If it was to see if I’d finally crumbled, you’re going to be disappointed. Evan’s jaw tightened. The polished mask flickered, revealing the raw, ugly resentment underneath. He had expected a victim; he had found a witness. You think you’ve won something? he whispered. You’re working tips in a dive bar, hiding in the shadows of a man who’s been finished for a decade. You haven’t escaped, Rory. You’ve just shrunk your world until you could finally breathe in the air. He didn't wait for her to answer. He turned, the coat of his expensive suit catching the light of the green sign as he stepped out into the street. The door swung shut, leaving behind a silence that felt heavier than before. Rory closed her eyes, her breath finally slowing. She felt the weight of the years, the toll of the decision to walk away from everything she had been told to want. She had traded a house in the suburbs and a life of gilded misery for a flat above a bar and the autonomy of her own soul. Silas moved then, coming around the bar with the slow, purposeful gait that betrayed his injury. He placed a hand on the back of the stool next to her, his presence grounding. He’s a small man, Rory, Silas said quietly. Don't let his shadow take up any more space than he earned. I know, she said, opening her eyes. She stared at the photographs on the walls—blurred images of places she’d never been, of people Silas had known before the world had broken him. I just never thought I’d have to see that ghost again. Ghosts are only dangerous if you agree to let them haunt you, Silas said. He reached over, turning her glass so the moisture pattern circled the base. You’re not the girl from Cardiff anymore. If you were, you wouldn't have been able to look him in the eye. Rory looked at her wrist, at the crescent scar that was the only remnant of the life she’d fled. She reached for the glass, her hand steady, her focus sharp. No, she agreed, her voice barely a whisper. I’m not. She signaled for another round, and as the ice clinked against the glass, the neon sign outside continued to hum, indifferent to the lives that had fractured and shifted in the dim yellow light of The Raven’s Nest. Outside, the rain began to fall in earnest, washing the pavement clean, erasing the footprints of the man who had tried to define her. Inside, she sat upright, shoulders back, watching the door, finally unafraid of who might walk through it next.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
92.38% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1312
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"very"
count2
highlights
0"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
27.59% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1312
totalAiIsms19
found
0
word"flickered"
count2
1
word"rhythmic"
count1
2
word"familiar"
count3
3
word"weight"
count2
4
word"gloom"
count2
5
word"chaotic"
count1
6
word"silence"
count3
7
word"stomach"
count1
8
word"etched"
count1
9
word"intensity"
count1
10
word"whisper"
count1
11
word"fractured"
count1
highlights
0"flickered"
1"rhythmic"
2"familiar"
3"weight"
4"gloom"
5"chaotic"
6"silence"
7"stomach"
8"etched"
9"intensity"
10"whisper"
11"fractured"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences95
matches(empty)
22.56% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount5
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences95
filterMatches
0"feel"
1"look…"
2"know"
3"think"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
2"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences95
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen38
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1309
ratio0
matches(empty)
25.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions15
unquotedAttributions6
matches
0"Just a long shift, Silas, Rory said, dropping her delivery bag onto the nearest stool."
1"I stopped hiding a long time ago, Evan, Rory replied."
2"I define my own size now, Evan, she said, leaning forward."
3"I know, she said, opening her eyes."
4"Ghosts are only dangerous if you agree to let them haunt you, Silas said."
5"No, she agreed, her voice barely a whisper."
66.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions55
wordCount1309
uniqueNames12
maxNameDensity1.07
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"You"
discoveredNames
Raven2
Nest2
Soho1
Tuesday1
Silas10
Rory14
London2
Cardiff3
Evan7
Aurora2
Carter1
You10
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Silas"
3"Rory"
4"Evan"
5"Carter"
6"You"
places
0"Soho"
1"London"
2"Cardiff"
globalScore0.965
windowScore0.667
83.33% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences75
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"looked like a man who spent his life clim"
1"felt like a physical blow"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1309
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences95
matches
0"see that ghost"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs31
mean42.23
std21.23
cv0.503
sampleLengths
068
180
222
347
456
511
620
765
818
978
101
1156
1219
1341
1450
1532
1648
1743
1854
1970
2023
2144
2242
2358
2432
2520
2643
2748
2830
2910
3080
86.80% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount5
totalSentences95
matches
0"was dressed"
1"was wrapped"
2"were etched"
3"been finished"
4"been told"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs239
matches
0"was pushing"
1"was watching"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount4
flaggedSentences6
totalSentences95
ratio0.063
matches
0"It was quiet for a Tuesday; the midday rush of the city was still hours away, leaving the bar to the ghosts and the regulars."
1"He shifted his weight, favoring his left leg—a habit that had become as much a part of his silhouette as the grey-streaked ginger of his beard."
2"It was a laugh she hadn’t heard in five years—a bright, brittle sound that used to signal the start of chaotic weekends in Cardiff."
3"She had been Aurora in Cardiff; she had been Carter in the law lectures she’d barely attended; she had become Rory in the silence after she left."
4"He had expected a victim; he had found a witness."
5"She stared at the photographs on the walls—blurred images of places she’d never been, of people Silas had known before the world had broken him."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1314
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small, crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount49
adverbRatio0.03729071537290715
lyAdverbCount14
lyAdverbRatio0.0106544901065449
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences95
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences95
mean13.78
std8.14
cv0.591
sampleLengths
021
122
225
318
410
526
626
72
82
918
1015
1119
1213
1314
1420
1522
166
175
187
1913
2016
2125
2224
232
2416
2512
2626
2724
2816
291
3012
3127
3217
3319
3419
3522
3627
372
381
394
4016
4114
4218
4310
444
453
4620
4711
4811
498
36.32% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats13
diversityRatio0.2631578947368421
totalSentences95
uniqueOpeners25
76.63% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences87
matches
0"Just a long shift, Silas,"
1"Maybe I’m just waiting for"
ratio0.023
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount52
totalSentences87
matches
0"It was quiet for a"
1"He looked up, his hazel"
2"He didn’t stop his work,"
3"He shifted his weight, favoring"
4"His voice was a low"
5"She flexed her left wrist,"
6"I feel like I’ve cycled"
7"He didn’t mention the tips,"
8"He just watched her, his"
9"You’re thinking too loud again,"
10"It’s bad for the upholstery."
11"She offered him a thin,"
12"It was a laugh she"
13"He looked different, though the"
14"He was dressed in a"
15"He looked like a man"
16"He squinted into the gloom,"
17"She had been Aurora in"
18"It’s Aurora, she said, her"
19"He recognized Silas, offering a"
ratio0.598
34.71% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount74
totalSentences87
matches
0"The neon sign above The"
1"Rory pushed through the heavy"
2"It was quiet for a"
3"Silas stood behind the mahogany"
4"He looked up, his hazel"
5"He didn’t stop his work,"
6"He shifted his weight, favoring"
7"His voice was a low"
8"She flexed her left wrist,"
9"I feel like I’ve cycled"
10"Silas poured a splash of"
11"He didn’t mention the tips,"
12"He just watched her, his"
13"You’re thinking too loud again,"
14"It’s bad for the upholstery."
15"She offered him a thin,"
16"The door chimes trilled, a"
17"Rory didn’t turn around immediately,"
18"It was a laugh she"
19"He looked different, though the"
ratio0.851
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount4
totalSentences87
matches
0"Before you started thinking small."
1"If it was to apologize,"
2"If it was to see"
3"If you were, you wouldn't"
ratio0.046
64.73% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences64
technicalSentenceCount7
matches
0"Silas stood behind the mahogany bar, polishing a highball glass with a rag that had seen better decades."
1"He didn’t stop his work, but his gaze sharpened, tracking her movement with the practiced scrutiny of a man who had spent his life evaluating threats."
2"He shifted his weight, favoring his left leg—a habit that had become as much a part of his silhouette as the grey-streaked ginger of his beard."
3"His voice was a low rasp, steady and devoid of the frantic energy that defined the streets outside."
4"She looked at Silas, who was watching her with an unblinking intensity, waiting to see if she would break or if she would strike."
5"Rory looked at her wrist, at the crescent scar that was the only remnant of the life she’d fled."
6"She signaled for another round, and as the ice clinked against the glass, the neon sign outside continued to hum, indifferent to the lives that had fractured an…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
77.0237%