| 0.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 1 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "she said quietly [quietly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 1 | | tagDensity | 1 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 1 | | effectiveRatio | 1 | |
| 86.84% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1520 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 4 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "tightly" | | 1 | "gently" | | 2 | "slowly" |
| |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 47.37% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1520 | | totalAiIsms | 16 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "warmth" | | 1 | "resolved" | | 2 | "pulse" | | 3 | "silence" | | 4 | "flicker" | | 5 | "tension" | | 6 | "throb" | | 7 | "traced" | | 8 | "pulsed" | | 9 | "wavering" | | 10 | "weight" | | 11 | "measured" |
| |
| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 120 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 83.33% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 5 | | narrationSentences | 120 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | 0 | "seemed to" | | 1 | "appeared to" | | 2 | "began to" |
| |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 120 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 36 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1520 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 1 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 16 | | wordCount | 1518 | | uniqueNames | 8 | | maxNameDensity | 0.46 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Silas | 1 | | Grove | 1 | | Richmond | 2 | | Park | 2 | | Cardiff | 1 | | October | 1 | | Evan | 1 | | Aurora | 7 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Silas" | | 1 | "Grove" | | 2 | "Evan" | | 3 | "Aurora" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "Cardiff" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 99.49% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 99 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "appeared deeper than it should, the darkness there folding inward rather than receding" | | 1 | "felt like an answer rather than a warni" |
| |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.658 | | wordCount | 1520 | | matches | | 0 | "not with the dry flick of autumn but with the soft, wet sound of something put down gently" |
| |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 120 | | matches | | |
| 35.14% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 23 | | mean | 66.09 | | std | 18.04 | | cv | 0.273 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 105 | | 1 | 96 | | 2 | 94 | | 3 | 55 | | 4 | 61 | | 5 | 81 | | 6 | 73 | | 7 | 22 | | 8 | 78 | | 9 | 63 | | 10 | 85 | | 11 | 49 | | 12 | 65 | | 13 | 73 | | 14 | 67 | | 15 | 45 | | 16 | 49 | | 17 | 62 | | 18 | 67 | | 19 | 62 | | 20 | 54 | | 21 | 56 | | 22 | 58 |
| |
| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 120 | | matches | | |
| 62.83% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 5 | | totalVerbs | 243 | | matches | | 0 | "were matching" | | 1 | "were slowly deciding" | | 2 | "was not coming" | | 3 | "was turning" | | 4 | "were listening" |
| |
| 23.81% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 0 | | semicolonCount | 5 | | flaggedSentences | 5 | | totalSentences | 120 | | ratio | 0.042 | | matches | | 0 | "The Grove answered questions in its own slow language; she needed to know whether the warmth meant an entrance was open or merely waiting." | | 1 | "Not wind through branches; wind made a mess of sound." | | 2 | "Not a shape, exactly; the absence of stillness at the left edge of her vision." | | 3 | "The branches were still; nothing moved among them." | | 4 | "She heard no crack of branches, no snap of undergrowth; only the sense that a great weight had adjusted itself against the earth." |
| |
| 92.43% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1521 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 74 | | adverbRatio | 0.04865220249835635 | | lyAdverbCount | 20 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.013149243918474688 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 120 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 120 | | mean | 12.67 | | std | 7.37 | | cv | 0.582 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 16 | | 1 | 29 | | 2 | 36 | | 3 | 24 | | 4 | 23 | | 5 | 7 | | 6 | 14 | | 7 | 24 | | 8 | 8 | | 9 | 20 | | 10 | 17 | | 11 | 10 | | 12 | 3 | | 13 | 26 | | 14 | 20 | | 15 | 11 | | 16 | 7 | | 17 | 8 | | 18 | 34 | | 19 | 4 | | 20 | 9 | | 21 | 16 | | 22 | 8 | | 23 | 4 | | 24 | 7 | | 25 | 26 | | 26 | 14 | | 27 | 1 | | 28 | 2 | | 29 | 23 | | 30 | 25 | | 31 | 7 | | 32 | 9 | | 33 | 9 | | 34 | 10 | | 35 | 18 | | 36 | 6 | | 37 | 6 | | 38 | 5 | | 39 | 10 | | 40 | 9 | | 41 | 8 | | 42 | 5 | | 43 | 9 | | 44 | 2 | | 45 | 15 | | 46 | 4 | | 47 | 18 | | 48 | 24 | | 49 | 9 |
| |
| 40.83% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 11 | | diversityRatio | 0.23333333333333334 | | totalSentences | 120 | | uniqueOpeners | 28 | |
| 85.47% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 117 | | matches | | 0 | "Then the note again, from" | | 1 | "Somewhere far outside the circle" | | 2 | "Instead she focused on the" |
| | ratio | 0.026 | |
| 69.57% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 44 | | totalSentences | 117 | | matches | | 0 | "They rose like black teeth" | | 1 | "She had come because the" | | 2 | "She set her torch down" | | 3 | "She had left her flat" | | 4 | "She forced herself to stand" | | 5 | "It took a strangely long" | | 6 | "She had never seen green" | | 7 | "She reached into her jacket" | | 8 | "She clicked it off." | | 9 | "She stopped at the gap" | | 10 | "She stepped once toward it," | | 11 | "It lasted seven seconds, then" | | 12 | "She counted the silence that" | | 13 | "She pressed her palm to" | | 14 | "she said quietly" | | 15 | "She turned her head." | | 16 | "She stayed where she was," | | 17 | "She felt one brush the" | | 18 | "She closed the hand into" | | 19 | "She felt the fine hairs" |
| | ratio | 0.376 | |
| 28.38% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 101 | | totalSentences | 117 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora crossed the last stretch" | | 1 | "They rose like black teeth" | | 2 | "She had come because the" | | 3 | "The Grove answered questions in" | | 4 | "She set her torch down" | | 5 | "The crescent scar on her" | | 6 | "The pendant rested just under" | | 7 | "She had left her flat" | | 8 | "The stones themselves looked wrong" | | 9 | "The insects stopped." | | 10 | "Aurora turned her head, once," | | 11 | "She forced herself to stand" | | 12 | "The warmth of the pendant" | | 13 | "A single leaf drifted down" | | 14 | "It took a strangely long" | | 15 | "The leaf was green." | | 16 | "She had never seen green" | | 17 | "She reached into her jacket" | | 18 | "The page looked too white" | | 19 | "She clicked it off." |
| | ratio | 0.863 | |
| 42.74% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 117 | | matches | | 0 | "Now the park felt farther" |
| | ratio | 0.009 | |
| 69.33% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 68 | | technicalSentenceCount | 7 | | matches | | 0 | "They rose like black teeth under a moon that kept slipping behind cloud, their branches laced so tightly above the clearing that the sky became a single pale ey…" | | 1 | "The pendant’s pulse traveled through fabric into the skin just above her sternum, slow and uneven, as if it were matching someone else’s heart farther away." | | 2 | "A moment later the same impression came from the right, as if the clearing were slowly deciding which side of itself to show her." | | 3 | "She thought of Evan’s hand closing over that same wrist the night she left, the bruise that had faded but left the thin white line." | | 4 | "The warmth continued, now duller, as if the stone were listening too." | | 5 | "Aurora thought of the bar upstairs, of the flat that waited, of the walk back through Richmond Park under street lamps that made ordinary shadows." | | 6 | "The pendant answered with a long, slow pulse that traveled up her arm and settled behind her eyes." |
| |
| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 1 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 1 | | fancyCount | 0 | | fancyTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 1 | | tagDensity | 1 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |