| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 1 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 1 | | tagDensity | 1 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 83.59% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1219 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 4 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "suddenly" | | 1 | "slowly" | | 2 | "very" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 1.56% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1219 | | totalAiIsms | 24 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "oppressive" | | 1 | "silence" | | 2 | "pulsed" | | 3 | "rhythmic" | | 4 | "warmth" | | 5 | "chill" | | 6 | "pulse" | | 7 | "beacon" | | 8 | "scanning" | | 9 | "whisper" | | 10 | "echo" | | 11 | "flicker" | | 12 | "structure" | | 13 | "searing" | | 14 | "mechanical" | | 15 | "silk" | | 16 | "depths" | | 17 | "perfect" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 94 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 51.67% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 6 | | narrationSentences | 94 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | 0 | "began to" | | 1 | "seemed to" | | 2 | "tried to" |
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| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 94 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 34 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1216 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 1 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 21 | | wordCount | 1215 | | uniqueNames | 8 | | maxNameDensity | 0.82 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | London | 1 | | Rory | 10 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Heartstone | 5 | | Fae | 1 | | Grove | 1 | | Silas | 1 |
| | persons | | | places | | 0 | "London" | | 1 | "Richmond" | | 2 | "Park" | | 3 | "Fae" | | 4 | "Grove" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 47.26% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 73 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "looked like tattered grey silk, but as it" | | 1 | "burn that seemed to be marking her, signaling her position to everything hidden in the brush" | | 2 | "darkness that seemed to swallow the moonlight" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.822 | | wordCount | 1216 | | matches | | 0 | "not by walking, but by gliding, its long limbs undulating in a rhythmic, sickeni" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 94 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 29 | | mean | 41.93 | | std | 24.3 | | cv | 0.58 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 91 | | 1 | 18 | | 2 | 85 | | 3 | 67 | | 4 | 63 | | 5 | 45 | | 6 | 9 | | 7 | 53 | | 8 | 17 | | 9 | 62 | | 10 | 48 | | 11 | 37 | | 12 | 4 | | 13 | 43 | | 14 | 12 | | 15 | 70 | | 16 | 41 | | 17 | 6 | | 18 | 84 | | 19 | 18 | | 20 | 51 | | 21 | 30 | | 22 | 48 | | 23 | 51 | | 24 | 44 | | 25 | 5 | | 26 | 36 | | 27 | 53 | | 28 | 25 |
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| 97.80% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 94 | | matches | | 0 | "was draped" | | 1 | "were gone" |
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| 0.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 10 | | totalVerbs | 208 | | matches | | 0 | "was intensifying" | | 1 | "was imagining" | | 2 | "were merely playing" | | 3 | "were turning" | | 4 | "were rotating" | | 5 | "was coming" | | 6 | "were trying" | | 7 | "was coming" | | 8 | "was moving" | | 9 | "was glowing" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 3 | | semicolonCount | 3 | | flaggedSentences | 6 | | totalSentences | 94 | | ratio | 0.064 | | matches | | 0 | "A sound drifted through the trees—a soft, wet clicking." | | 1 | "The brain, she knew, abhorred a vacuum; in the absence of sensory data, it invented patterns." | | 2 | "They weren't just plants; they were eyes, wide and sightless, staring up from the dirt." | | 3 | "The exit she had used was no longer a straight line; the trees had drifted, weaving themselves into a dense, suffocating wall of thorns and silver bark." | | 4 | "She turned to run, but the ground felt different—spongy, yielding, like walking on a mattress of something organic." | | 5 | "It was draped in something that looked like tattered grey silk, but as it shifted, Rory saw that the fabric was actually skin—translucent, stretched thin over a frame that was far too long." |
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| 87.14% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1220 | | adjectiveStacks | 2 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "physical, pressing against her" | | 1 | "different—spongy, yielding, like" |
| | adverbCount | 50 | | adverbRatio | 0.040983606557377046 | | lyAdverbCount | 15 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.012295081967213115 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 94 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 94 | | mean | 12.94 | | std | 8.1 | | cv | 0.626 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 21 | | 1 | 34 | | 2 | 22 | | 3 | 14 | | 4 | 4 | | 5 | 14 | | 6 | 2 | | 7 | 15 | | 8 | 18 | | 9 | 20 | | 10 | 30 | | 11 | 9 | | 12 | 17 | | 13 | 15 | | 14 | 26 | | 15 | 3 | | 16 | 28 | | 17 | 9 | | 18 | 5 | | 19 | 5 | | 20 | 13 | | 21 | 17 | | 22 | 17 | | 23 | 11 | | 24 | 9 | | 25 | 2 | | 26 | 7 | | 27 | 11 | | 28 | 3 | | 29 | 30 | | 30 | 4 | | 31 | 9 | | 32 | 4 | | 33 | 6 | | 34 | 8 | | 35 | 23 | | 36 | 8 | | 37 | 17 | | 38 | 15 | | 39 | 7 | | 40 | 16 | | 41 | 10 | | 42 | 10 | | 43 | 11 | | 44 | 16 | | 45 | 4 | | 46 | 14 | | 47 | 14 | | 48 | 15 | | 49 | 6 |
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| 32.98% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 16 | | diversityRatio | 0.22340425531914893 | | totalSentences | 94 | | uniqueOpeners | 21 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 92 | | matches | | 0 | "Then, the pendant pulsed." | | 1 | "Slowly, with a mechanical precision," | | 2 | "Only a few feet, perhaps," |
| | ratio | 0.033 | |
| 50.43% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 39 | | totalSentences | 92 | | matches | | 0 | "She kept her hand clamped" | | 1 | "It was cold, unnervingly so," | | 2 | "They marked the boundary of" | | 3 | "She had come here seeking" | | 4 | "She wanted to understand why" | | 5 | "They bloomed in defiance of" | | 6 | "She was a creature of" | | 7 | "She tried to apply that" | | 8 | "She walked toward the center" | | 9 | "It felt less like a" | | 10 | "She tilted her head, scanning" | | 11 | "she called out" | | 12 | "Her voice sounded flat, swallowed" | | 13 | "She turned in a slow" | | 14 | "It was a flicker of" | | 15 | "It hadn't been a deer" | | 16 | "It had been too tall," | | 17 | "She told herself she was" | | 18 | "She took another step forward," | | 19 | "She gasped, clutching the pendant," |
| | ratio | 0.424 | |
| 41.52% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 77 | | totalSentences | 92 | | matches | | 0 | "The humidity of the London" | | 1 | "She kept her hand clamped" | | 2 | "It was cold, unnervingly so," | | 3 | "A slow, rhythmic thrum of" | | 4 | "They marked the boundary of" | | 5 | "She had come here seeking" | | 6 | "She wanted to understand why" | | 7 | "The oppressive humidity vanished, replaced" | | 8 | "The ground beneath her boots" | | 9 | "They bloomed in defiance of" | | 10 | "Rory’s breath hitched." | | 11 | "She was a creature of" | | 12 | "She tried to apply that" | | 13 | "The air was too clear." | | 14 | "The flowers were too vibrant." | | 15 | "The silence wasn't the absence" | | 16 | "She walked toward the center" | | 17 | "The warmth of the Heartstone" | | 18 | "It felt less like a" | | 19 | "A sound drifted through the" |
| | ratio | 0.837 | |
| 54.35% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 92 | | matches | | 0 | "Before her, the ancient oak" |
| | ratio | 0.011 | |
| 12.99% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 55 | | technicalSentenceCount | 10 | | matches | | 0 | "The humidity of the London night clung to Rory’s skin, a heavy, oppressive veil that smelled of exhaust and wet asphalt." | | 1 | "The oppressive humidity vanished, replaced by a crisp, autumnal chill that tasted of ozone and crushed peppermint." | | 2 | "She was a creature of logic, a woman who had survived the suffocating control of an abusive relationship by learning to map the exits and predict the storms." | | 3 | "It was a flicker of movement, a pale, elongated shape that slipped behind a wide oak trunk the moment she looked toward it." | | 4 | "It had been too tall, the movement too fluid, as if the creature lacked a skeletal structure." | | 5 | "It was draped in something that looked like tattered grey silk, but as it shifted, Rory saw that the fabric was actually skin—translucent, stretched thin over a…" | | 6 | "It had no face, only a smooth, pale expanse of flesh where features should be, save for a vertical slit that ran from the crown of its head down to its throat." | | 7 | "The warmth had become an oppressive heat, a feverish burn that seemed to be marking her, signaling her position to everything hidden in the brush." | | 8 | "In their place stood the same pale, faceless creature, its vertical slit slowly peeling open to reveal a row of needle-thin teeth and a darkness that seemed to …" | | 9 | "It was glowing with a steady, blinding light, illuminating the circle of creatures that had now emerged from the shadows to surround her." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 1 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |