| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 3 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 4 | | tagDensity | 0.75 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 86.92% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1529 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 4 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "truly" | | 1 | "perfectly" | | 2 | "very" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 31.33% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1529 | | totalAiIsms | 21 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "rhythmic" | | 1 | "throb" | | 2 | "warmth" | | 3 | "pulse" | | 4 | "comforting" | | 5 | "silence" | | 6 | "synchronized" | | 7 | "scanned" | | 8 | "tracing" | | 9 | "pulsed" | | 10 | "searing" | | 11 | "amidst" | | 12 | "raced" | | 13 | "profound" | | 14 | "could feel" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 115 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 31.06% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 9 | | narrationSentences | 115 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | 0 | "began to" | | 1 | "seemed to" | | 2 | "tried to" |
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| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 116 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 39 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 2 | | markdownWords | 3 | | totalWords | 1515 | | ratio | 0.002 | | matches | | 0 | "Snap." | | 1 | "Shhh-slip. Shhh-slip." |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 4 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 21 | | wordCount | 1504 | | uniqueNames | 8 | | maxNameDensity | 0.6 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Aurora | 9 | | Eva | 1 | | London | 2 | | Heartstone | 5 | | Fae | 1 | | Grove | 1 |
| | persons | | | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "London" | | 3 | "Fae" | | 4 | "Grove" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 45.83% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 96 | | glossingSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "as if breathing" | | 1 | "fingers that seemed to reach toward the center of the clearing" | | 2 | "looked like a man stretched on a rack, hi" | | 3 | "looked like swollen knots in wood" | | 4 | "felt like the world had ceased to exist" |
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| 1.98% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 3 | | per1kWords | 1.98 | | wordCount | 1515 | | matches | | 0 | "not from one direction, but from every direction" | | 1 | "Not the rustle of wind, but the sound of something heavy being dragged through the grass" | | 2 | "not with the gentleness of a plant, but with the tightening grip of a trap" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 116 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 37 | | mean | 40.95 | | std | 22.25 | | cv | 0.543 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 70 | | 1 | 65 | | 2 | 57 | | 3 | 17 | | 4 | 5 | | 5 | 72 | | 6 | 65 | | 7 | 32 | | 8 | 1 | | 9 | 22 | | 10 | 29 | | 11 | 18 | | 12 | 69 | | 13 | 56 | | 14 | 19 | | 15 | 26 | | 16 | 53 | | 17 | 45 | | 18 | 20 | | 19 | 6 | | 20 | 76 | | 21 | 68 | | 22 | 53 | | 23 | 60 | | 24 | 25 | | 25 | 66 | | 26 | 31 | | 27 | 15 | | 28 | 12 | | 29 | 79 | | 30 | 30 | | 31 | 49 | | 32 | 34 | | 33 | 46 | | 34 | 55 | | 35 | 30 | | 36 | 39 |
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| 96.11% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 115 | | matches | | 0 | "was played" | | 1 | "being dragged" | | 2 | "was known" |
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| 0.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 11 | | totalVerbs | 252 | | matches | | 0 | "were walking" | | 1 | "was reacting" | | 2 | "was searing" | | 3 | "was waiting" | | 4 | "was radiating" | | 5 | "was curling" | | 6 | "was vibrating" | | 7 | "weren't just blooming" | | 8 | "were turning" | | 9 | "were closing" | | 10 | "was trying" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 14 | | semicolonCount | 7 | | flaggedSentences | 16 | | totalSentences | 116 | | ratio | 0.138 | | matches | | 0 | "She shouldn't have come this far into the dark, but the map Eva had scribbled on a napkin wasn't a suggestion—it was a directive." | | 1 | "It didn't just get colder; it became thicker, as if she were walking through invisible cobwebs." | | 2 | "Her fingers brushed the Heartstone pendant, and she felt it—a faint, rhythmic throb of warmth against her collarbone." | | 3 | "The ambient hum of London—the distant, comforting drone of the M3, the far-off siren, the vibration of a city that never truly sleeps—vanished." | | 4 | "They didn't sway with a breeze; there was no breeze." | | 5 | "The trees here were different—twisted, their limbs elongated into spindly, grasping fingers that seemed to reach toward the center of the clearing." | | 6 | "She had a habit of seeing things there—movement in the corner of an eye, a shadow that lasted a second too long—but here, it was worse." | | 7 | "The shadows didn't just sit still; they seemed to retreat just as she looked at them, slipping behind the thick trunks of the oaks with a fluid, predatory grace." | | 8 | "The silence didn't break; it curdled." | | 9 | "It was the sound of a woman laughing—low, melodic, and perfectly pitched—but it was played back at the wrong speed, stretched out into a guttural, sliding moan that slid up and down the scale." | | 10 | "As she moved, she felt the sensation of being watched—not from one direction, but from every direction." | | 11 | "The crimson gem was no longer faintly glowing; it was radiating a frantic, bleeding light, casting long, distorted shadows of her own body against the grass." | | 12 | "A hand—if it could be called that—was curling around the edge of a standing stone." | | 13 | "It didn't grasp the stone; it melded with it, the skin appearing to turn into bark as it moved." | | 14 | "It had no features—no eyes, no nose, no mouth—just a smooth, pale expanse of skin that pulsed with the same rhythm as the Heartstone." | | 15 | "It didn't climb; it simply unspooled from the branches like a length of ribbon, its body lengthening, stretching, defying the physics of bone and sinew." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1523 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 59 | | adverbRatio | 0.038739330269205514 | | lyAdverbCount | 16 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.010505581089954037 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 116 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 116 | | mean | 13.06 | | std | 7.8 | | cv | 0.597 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 12 | | 1 | 17 | | 2 | 17 | | 3 | 24 | | 4 | 10 | | 5 | 16 | | 6 | 9 | | 7 | 30 | | 8 | 11 | | 9 | 10 | | 10 | 18 | | 11 | 13 | | 12 | 5 | | 13 | 14 | | 14 | 3 | | 15 | 5 | | 16 | 17 | | 17 | 23 | | 18 | 11 | | 19 | 21 | | 20 | 11 | | 21 | 12 | | 22 | 22 | | 23 | 10 | | 24 | 10 | | 25 | 3 | | 26 | 7 | | 27 | 22 | | 28 | 1 | | 29 | 9 | | 30 | 13 | | 31 | 9 | | 32 | 11 | | 33 | 2 | | 34 | 7 | | 35 | 4 | | 36 | 4 | | 37 | 10 | | 38 | 14 | | 39 | 26 | | 40 | 29 | | 41 | 27 | | 42 | 29 | | 43 | 4 | | 44 | 6 | | 45 | 9 | | 46 | 17 | | 47 | 7 | | 48 | 2 | | 49 | 4 |
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| 30.17% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 23 | | diversityRatio | 0.2413793103448276 | | totalSentences | 116 | | uniqueOpeners | 28 | |
| 30.58% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 109 | | matches | | 0 | "Then, she saw them: the" |
| | ratio | 0.009 | |
| 10.83% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 57 | | totalSentences | 109 | | matches | | 0 | "It clung to Aurora’s skin" | | 1 | "She kept her head down," | | 2 | "She shouldn't have come this" | | 3 | "It didn't just get colder;" | | 4 | "They rose from the mud" | | 5 | "She reached instinctively for the" | | 6 | "Her fingers brushed the Heartstone" | | 7 | "It wasn't the steady beat" | | 8 | "It was reacting to something." | | 9 | "she whispered, her voice sounding" | | 10 | "She stepped between the stones." | | 11 | "It pressed against her eardrums," | | 12 | "They didn't sway with a" | | 13 | "They bobbed in a rhythmic," | | 14 | "Her bright blue eyes scanned" | | 15 | "It came from the darkness" | | 16 | "She waited, her heart hammering" | | 17 | "she called out" | | 18 | "Her voice didn't carry." | | 19 | "It seemed to fall flat," |
| | ratio | 0.523 | |
| 33.39% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 93 | | totalSentences | 109 | | matches | | 0 | "The dampness of Richmond Park" | | 1 | "It clung to Aurora’s skin" | | 2 | "She kept her head down," | | 3 | "She shouldn't have come this" | | 4 | "It didn't just get colder;" | | 5 | "They rose from the mud" | | 6 | "Aurora slowed her pace, her" | | 7 | "She reached instinctively for the" | | 8 | "Her fingers brushed the Heartstone" | | 9 | "It wasn't the steady beat" | | 10 | "It was reacting to something." | | 11 | "she whispered, her voice sounding" | | 12 | "She stepped between the stones." | | 13 | "The transition was subtle, the" | | 14 | "The ambient hum of London—the" | | 15 | "It pressed against her eardrums," | | 16 | "The Fae Grove did not" | | 17 | "Wildflowers, bioluminescent and strange, bloomed" | | 18 | "They didn't sway with a" | | 19 | "They bobbed in a rhythmic," |
| | ratio | 0.853 | |
| 45.87% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 109 | | matches | | | ratio | 0.009 | |
| 22.13% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 71 | | technicalSentenceCount | 12 | | matches | | 0 | "It didn't just get colder; it became thicker, as if she were walking through invisible cobwebs." | | 1 | "They rose from the mud like the ribcage of a buried giant, their bark gnarled and silvered by a moonlight that seemed too bright, too clinical for a London nigh…" | | 2 | "It pressed against her eardrums, a vacuum that made the blood rushing through her own veins sound like a torrential river." | | 3 | "They bobbed in a rhythmic, synchronized motion, as if breathing." | | 4 | "The trees here were different—twisted, their limbs elongated into spindly, grasping fingers that seemed to reach toward the center of the clearing." | | 5 | "She felt a sudden, irrational urge to check the crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist, her thumb tracing the old mark as if it were a talisman." | | 6 | "It was the sound of a woman laughing—low, melodic, and perfectly pitched—but it was played back at the wrong speed, stretched out into a guttural, sliding moan …" | | 7 | "The wildflowers had grown, their glowing petals weaving together into a dense, choking carpet that obscured the ground." | | 8 | "It was pale, the color of bleached bone, with fingers that were far too long, possessing too many knuckles." | | 9 | "It didn't climb; it simply unspooled from the branches like a length of ribbon, its body lengthening, stretching, defying the physics of bone and sinew." | | 10 | "The air around it hummed with a low-frequency vibration that made her vision swim." | | 11 | "In the absolute dark that followed, the only thing Aurora could feel was the heat of the Heartstone, pulsing against her skin like a dying star, and the sensati…" |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 3 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "she whispered, her voice sounding thin and brittle in the stillness" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 2 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she whispered (whisper)" | | 1 | "she choked (choke)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 4 | | tagDensity | 0.5 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 1 | | effectiveRatio | 1 | |