Run: 2026-05-10-01KR8YGDYGMHAJ0GHTJ74EF19V

Run Details

Duration:
1m 10s
Cost:
$0.002654
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The neon green of the sign outside hummed with a low-frequency buzz that felt less like electricity and more like a warning. Rory stood at the threshold of the Raven’s Nest, her fingers tracing the small crescent scar on her left wrist, a nervous tic she hadn't managed to excise in the three years since she’d fled Cardiff. Inside, the pub smelled of oak, old parchment, and the lingering, sharp scent of Silas’s high-end tobacco. It was the smell of safety, at least as much as safety existed in a city that had once felt like a labyrinth designed to swallow her whole. She pushed past the heavy oak door and into the dim, amber-lit sanctuary. Silas was behind the mahogany bar, polishing a tumbler with the practiced, meticulous rhythm of a man who relied on ritual to keep the ghosts at bay. He glanced up, his hazel eyes narrowing slightly before he offered a short, approving nod. Beyond him, the wall was a mosaic of sepia-toned history—maps of forgotten territories and photographs of faces that had likely long since stopped existing. Rory climbed onto a stool at the far end of the bar, far enough from the entrance to hide in the shadows but close enough to watch the door. She was tired, her shoulder-length black hair damp from the London drizzle, but her pulse was steady. She liked the quiet of the Nest. It was a place where people came to disappear, a philosophy she’d embraced with terrifying ease. The door swung open again, cutting through the low murmur of the room's few regulars. A man stepped in, shaking off a sodden trench coat. Rory didn't look up immediately, focused instead on the way Silas reached for a bottle of aged scotch without being asked. But the man didn't head for the counter. He stood frozen in the entryway, his eyes scanning the room with a hunger that felt familiar—a frantic, searching quality that tore through the air like a jagged blade. When his gaze settled on her, the silence in the room seemed to stretch, thickening until it felt heavy enough to choke on. Evan. He looked different, yet exactly the same. The sharp edges of his jaw were still there, as was the predatory grace in his posture, but there was a hollowness beneath his eyes, a desperate sheen that hadn't existed when he used to stand in the kitchen in Cardiff, his hand wrapped too tightly around the back of her neck. He wasn't the man who had controlled her life; he was a man who had clearly lost his grip on it. Rory turned, her blue eyes icy and detached. She felt the sudden, metallic tang of adrenaline in her throat, a reminder of the survival instincts Silas had spent months helping her sharpen. She didn't bolt. She didn't tremble. She simply watched as he started walking toward her, his movements erratic, buoyed by a nervous, twitching energy. Rory, he said. The way he said her name felt like a violation. He slid onto the stool beside her without asking, his presence a dark stain on the evening. Silas had stopped polishing the glass. He leaned his hands on the bar, his weight slightly shifted to accommodate the ache in his left knee, his expression a mask of careful, predatory intelligence. The silver signet ring on his finger caught the dim light, a silent testament to the years he’d spent reading people far more dangerous than the man now encroaching on his patron’s space. You shouldn't be here, Silas said. His voice was a low rasp, steady and devoid of threat, yet it held the weight of a man who had seen bodies buried in foreign soil. I’m looking for someone, Evan said, his attention never wavering from Rory. He leaned in, the smell of cheap gin clinging to his clothes. You didn't leave a trail, Aurora. I had to pay a lot of people to find out you were hiding in a hole like this. Rory took a slow, deliberate sip of her drink. She felt the small scar on her wrist, rubbing it until the skin stung. She thought of the pre-law textbooks she’d abandoned, the life of spreadsheets and steady expectations she had traded for the anonymity of a delivery uniform and the shadows of a Soho bar. I’m not the person you’re looking for, Evan, she said, her voice cool and clinical. That girl died the moment she packed her bag. Whatever you think I owe you, whatever fantasy you’re still cultivating, it ended in Cardiff. He laughed, a dry, rattling sound that didn't reach his eyes. You think changing your name and working for tips makes you someone else? You’re still the girl who cries in the dark, Rory. You’re still terrified. I can smell it on you. Silas stepped around the edge of the bar, his limp barely perceptible as he moved with a practiced, lethal efficiency. He didn't touch Evan, but he entered his personal space, standing close enough that the man was forced to acknowledge the wall of quiet, seasoned authority he represented. The lady asked you to leave, Silas said. There was no room for debate in his tone. The bar was silent, the few other patrons having suddenly found their drinks far more interesting than the conversation transpiring in the corner. Evan glanced at Silas, his bravado flickering. He clearly recognized he was out of his depth. This wasn't the intimidated, soft-spoken student he had terrorized; this was a woman flanked by an apex predator, sitting in a room that felt like a trap. You’re protecting her? Just like that? Evan sneered, though the words lacked their usual bite. You don't know what she’s capable of, old man. I know exactly what she’s capable of, Silas replied, his gaze flickering briefly to Rory. She’s learned that some things are worth leaving behind. It’s a lesson you’d do well to memorize before you find yourself looking at the wrong end of a very long night. Rory looked Evan dead in the eye. She didn't see the monster that had haunted her dreams for years. She saw a pathetic man grasping at the wreckage of a life he’d destroyed himself. The regret she felt wasn't for him, or for the relationship, but for the girl who had waited so long to walk away. The weight of those lost years pressed on her shoulders, but it was a burden she was ready to set down. Get out, Rory said. Evan hesitated, his chest heaving, his fingers knotting into tight, white-knuckled fists. For a moment, the air hung suspended, the tension threatening to snap. But then, he looked at Silas, saw the hidden metal in the aging man’s eyes, and he backed away. He stood, his movements jerky, and turned toward the door. The green neon sign cast a sickly, alien light over his face as he paused at the threshold, looking back one last time. She didn't offer him a glance. She turned her attention back to her untouched glass and the map on the wall behind the bar, a landscape of paths she would never take. When the door clicked shut, the hum of the Nest returned to its baseline drone. Silas walked back to his station and poured a fresh finger of scotch, sliding it across the wood to her. He didn't ask what had happened. He didn't offer platitudes. He simply kept watch, his presence a silent anchor in the swirling chaos. Rory touched the crescent scar on her wrist one last time, then pulled her hand away. The past was a line she had drawn, and tonight, she had finally stopped looking over it.
created_at"2026-05-10T12:41:31.865Z" 5/10/2026, 12:41:31 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
80.67% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1293
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count2
1
adverb"tightly"
count1
2
adverb"suddenly"
count1
3
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"tightly"
2"suddenly"
3"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
42.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1293
totalAiIsms15
found
0
word"tracing"
count1
1
word"sanctuary"
count1
2
word"mosaic"
count1
3
word"pulse"
count1
4
word"scanning"
count1
5
word"familiar"
count1
6
word"silence"
count1
7
word"reminder"
count1
8
word"weight"
count3
9
word"testament"
count1
10
word"wavering"
count1
11
word"predator"
count1
12
word"tension"
count1
highlights
0"tracing"
1"sanctuary"
2"mosaic"
3"pulse"
4"scanning"
5"familiar"
6"silence"
7"reminder"
8"weight"
9"testament"
10"wavering"
11"predator"
12"tension"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences85
matches(empty)
58.82% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount3
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences85
filterMatches
0"think"
1"know"
hedgeMatches
0"managed to"
1"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences85
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen52
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1291
ratio0
matches(empty)
50.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions10
unquotedAttributions3
matches
0"Rory, he said."
1"The lady asked you to leave, Silas said."
2"Get out, Rory said."
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions49
wordCount1291
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity0.93
worstName"Silas"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"You"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest3
Cardiff3
Silas12
London1
Evan8
Rory12
Aurora1
Soho1
You7
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Silas"
3"Evan"
4"Rory"
5"You"
places
0"Cardiff"
1"London"
2"Soho"
globalScore1
windowScore0.833
51.32% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences76
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"felt like a labyrinth designed to swall"
1"felt like a violation"
2"felt like a trap"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1291
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences85
matches
0"learned that some"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs26
mean49.65
std25.72
cv0.518
sampleLengths
0103
179
269
383
423
51
680
756
813
983
1033
1149
1255
1339
1443
1548
1640
1743
1824
1946
2078
214
2276
2332
2458
2533
92.88% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences85
matches
0"was tired"
1"being asked"
2"was forced"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs228
matches
0"were hiding"
8.40% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount2
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences85
ratio0.047
matches
0"Beyond him, the wall was a mosaic of sepia-toned history—maps of forgotten territories and photographs of faces that had likely long since stopped existing."
1"He stood frozen in the entryway, his eyes scanning the room with a hunger that felt familiar—a frantic, searching quality that tore through the air like a jagged blade."
2"He wasn't the man who had controlled her life; he was a man who had clearly lost his grip on it."
3"This wasn't the intimidated, soft-spoken student he had terrorized; this was a woman flanked by an apex predator, sitting in a room that felt like a trap."
88.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1300
adjectiveStacks2
stackExamples
0"dim, amber-lit sanctuary."
1"tight, white-knuckled fists."
adverbCount45
adverbRatio0.03461538461538462
lyAdverbCount16
lyAdverbRatio0.012307692307692308
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences85
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences85
mean15.19
std9.2
cv0.606
sampleLengths
022
136
217
328
413
527
615
724
829
917
107
1116
1215
1310
1421
158
1629
1723
181
197
2052
2121
228
2324
243
253
2618
273
2810
2917
306
3127
3233
336
3427
3512
3612
376
3819
399
4014
4132
4215
439
4415
4511
4613
4710
483
496
35.88% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats12
diversityRatio0.25882352941176473
totalSentences85
uniqueOpeners22
39.68% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences84
matches
0"Just like that?"
ratio0.012
10.48% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount44
totalSentences84
matches
0"It was the smell of"
1"She pushed past the heavy"
2"He glanced up, his hazel"
3"She was tired, her shoulder-length"
4"She liked the quiet of"
5"It was a place where"
6"He stood frozen in the"
7"He looked different, yet exactly"
8"He wasn't the man who"
9"She felt the sudden, metallic"
10"She didn't bolt."
11"She didn't tremble."
12"She simply watched as he"
13"He slid onto the stool"
14"He leaned his hands on"
15"You shouldn't be here, Silas"
16"His voice was a low"
17"I’m looking for someone, Evan"
18"He leaned in, the smell"
19"You didn't leave a trail,"
ratio0.524
19.52% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount74
totalSentences84
matches
0"The neon green of the"
1"Rory stood at the threshold"
2"It was the smell of"
3"She pushed past the heavy"
4"Silas was behind the mahogany"
5"He glanced up, his hazel"
6"Rory climbed onto a stool"
7"She was tired, her shoulder-length"
8"She liked the quiet of"
9"It was a place where"
10"The door swung open again,"
11"A man stepped in, shaking"
12"Rory didn't look up immediately,"
13"He stood frozen in the"
14"He looked different, yet exactly"
15"The sharp edges of his"
16"He wasn't the man who"
17"Rory turned, her blue eyes"
18"She felt the sudden, metallic"
19"She didn't bolt."
ratio0.881
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences84
matches(empty)
ratio0
15.31% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences56
technicalSentenceCount10
matches
0"The neon green of the sign outside hummed with a low-frequency buzz that felt less like electricity and more like a warning."
1"Silas was behind the mahogany bar, polishing a tumbler with the practiced, meticulous rhythm of a man who relied on ritual to keep the ghosts at bay."
2"Beyond him, the wall was a mosaic of sepia-toned history—maps of forgotten territories and photographs of faces that had likely long since stopped existing."
3"He stood frozen in the entryway, his eyes scanning the room with a hunger that felt familiar—a frantic, searching quality that tore through the air like a jagge…"
4"The sharp edges of his jaw were still there, as was the predatory grace in his posture, but there was a hollowness beneath his eyes, a desperate sheen that hadn…"
5"He wasn't the man who had controlled her life; he was a man who had clearly lost his grip on it."
6"His voice was a low rasp, steady and devoid of threat, yet it held the weight of a man who had seen bodies buried in foreign soil."
7"He laughed, a dry, rattling sound that didn't reach his eyes."
8"This wasn't the intimidated, soft-spoken student he had terrorized; this was a woman flanked by an apex predator, sitting in a room that felt like a trap."
9"Evan hesitated, his chest heaving, his fingers knotting into tight, white-knuckled fists."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
72.5429%