Run: 2026-05-10-01KR8YM59VZSFPA5SR8VTQAVHJ

Run Details

Duration:
8.7s
Cost:
$0.002618
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The green neon sign of The Raven’s Nest hummed with a low-frequency buzz that Rory felt in her teeth before she even reached the door. It was a Tuesday, the kind of wet, miserable London night that leached the color out of the pavement and made the grit of Soho feel particularly intimate. Rory pushed inside, the bell above the door chiming a dull note. The bar smelled of stale hops, lemon polish, and the faint, grounding scent of pipe tobacco that Silas preferred. She didn’t head for the counter immediately. She stood for a moment near the entrance, rubbing her left wrist where the crescent-shaped scar pulled tight against the damp cold. Her shoulder-length black hair was plastered to her cheeks from the drizzle, and her delivery bag for the Golden Empress felt like a lead weight pressing into her spine. Silas was behind the bar, his grey-streaked auburn hair caught in the warm amber glow of a low-hanging lamp. He was polishing a glass with the methodical focus of a man who had spent his life waiting for things that might never happen. He looked up, his hazel eyes narrowing as they flicked over her, acknowledging her presence with a small, sharp dip of his chin. He didn't speak. He never did until he was sure you were worth the breath. Rory moved toward a booth near the back wall, where the shadows were deepest and the old maps on the wall seemed to bleed into the darkness. She slid into the worn leather seat, her legs feeling like lead. She was halfway through pulling a damp notepad from her pocket when the door opened again. A man stepped in, shaking off a London Fog trench coat that looked far too expensive for the neighborhood. He checked his reflection in the glass of the door, adjusted a silk tie that shimmered charcoal in the gloom, and scanned the room. When his eyes landed on the booth in the corner, he froze. Rory felt that familiar, sudden icy prickle at the base of her skull. She knew the way he stood—the aggressive tilt of the chin, the habit of resting his right hand against his hip as if he were constantly ready to strike or flee. Evan. The blood drained from her face, leaving her head spinning. She looked instinctively toward the bar, but Silas was busy pouring a pint for a regular near the tap, his silver signet ring flashing as he worked. Evan started toward her. He looked older, tighter, the soft edges of the boy she remembered from Cardiff replaced by a refined, predatory polish. He stopped at the edge of her table, his shadow falling across her like a shroud. Rory? he said. His voice was a practiced baritone, smoother than it had any right to be. Rory didn't look up, though her pulse was hammering against her collarbone. She kept her focus on the condensation tracing a vein down the side of her glass of water. She didn’t know how he’d found her, or if this was merely the cruelty of a massive city shrinking into a single, claustrophobic point. I think you have the wrong person, she said, her voice steadying only through years of forced indifference. He laughed then, a low, dismissive sound that was entirely devoid of warmth. He pulled out the chair opposite her and sat before she had an opportunity to signal for Silas. He leaned forward, his hands flat on the scarred wood of the table. You always were a terrible liar, Aurora. It’s one of the things I used to find charming. Now, it’s just exhausting. Rory finally met his eyes. Her own bright blue ones were narrow, defensive. I left that life, Evan. I left it five years ago. I’m not the girl who sits around waiting for an apology, and I’m definitely not the one who listens to excuses. I’m not here for excuses, he replied, looking around the bar with a sneer of disdain. I heard you were playing delivery girl for some takeaway joint. I thought it was a rumor. It’s hard to believe someone with your potential ended up hiding out in a dive like this, waiting for the shadows to protect her. I’m safe here, she said, and the truth of it surprised her. Safe? He gestured to the room, to the photographs of unrecognizable landscapes on the wall. You aren’t safe, Rory. You’re just stagnating. People don’t change. They just bury the parts of themselves they’re ashamed of. I buried mine. You clearly just tucked yours under a different name. Silas moved then. He didn't rush—that wasn't his way—but he navigated the floor with a slight, deliberate limp that gave him the appearance of a prowling cat. He set a clean rag on the edge of the table and leaned in, his hazel eyes locking onto Evan’s with a terrifying, cool quiet. Everything about him—from the precision of his beard to the weight of his gaze—suggested that he was measuring Evan’s dimensions for a shallow grave. Is there a problem here, Mr. Sterling? Silas asked, his voice low and vibrating with a quiet authority that silenced the far end of the bar. Evan looked up, his expression flickering from arrogance to something approximating caution. The older man’s presence was a barrier, a wall of cold iron. I was just catching up with an old acquaintance, Silas. Nothing for the management to worry about. There’s nothing to catch up on, Silas said. He turned his attention to Rory, his voice shifting into a softer key, one he reserved for the secrets he held. Rory, the delivery order for the Cheung account is ready. They’re running behind. Rory looked at Silas, seeing the warning in the set of his jaw. He didn't want the scene to escalate, not here, not in the heart of his territory. But more than that, she saw the offer of an exit. She stood, grabbing her jacket. She didn't look at Evan. She ignored him as completely as if he were a piece of architecture. You’re a coward, Evan said, though his voice lacked conviction now. He was sitting in the light of the neon sign, looking small and brittle. You always ran. That’s all you do. You run until you find a place small enough to hide in, and then you pretend you’re the one holding the map. Rory stopped, her hand on the back of the chair. She turned, her gaze sweeping over him—seeing the expensive coat, the hollow eyes, the desperate need to exert control over a world that had clearly been stripping him of it. I’m not running anymore, Evan, she said. I’m just moving on. Sometimes, moving on looks exactly like walking away. She let the chair fall back, the wood clattering against the floor, and stepped past Silas toward the door. She didn't wait to see if Evan followed. As she stepped out into the biting wind of the London night, the door shut behind her, cutting off the low, rhythmic hum of the Nest. She breathed in the exhaust-heavy air, the scent of damp pavement and iron, and realized that for the first time in five years, the weight on her shoulders wasn't just physical. It was heavy, yes—the bag, the past, the memories of a life she no longer claimed—but she could carry it. She pulled her coat tight, felt the sharp crescent of the scar on her wrist, and started walking toward the city lights, leaving the past firmly inside the bar.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
96.07% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1272
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"completely"
count1
highlights
0"completely"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
29.25% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1272
totalAiIsms18
found
0
word"weight"
count3
1
word"methodical"
count1
2
word"flicked"
count1
3
word"silk"
count1
4
word"shimmered"
count1
5
word"gloom"
count1
6
word"scanned"
count1
7
word"familiar"
count1
8
word"pulse"
count1
9
word"tracing"
count1
10
word"warmth"
count1
11
word"potential"
count1
12
word"navigated"
count1
13
word"grave"
count1
14
word"rhythmic"
count1
15
word"firmly"
count1
highlights
0"weight"
1"methodical"
2"flicked"
3"silk"
4"shimmered"
5"gloom"
6"scanned"
7"familiar"
8"pulse"
9"tracing"
10"warmth"
11"potential"
12"navigated"
13"grave"
14"rhythmic"
15"firmly"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences94
matches(empty)
82.07% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences94
filterMatches
0"feel"
1"think"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"started to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences94
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen32
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1264
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions10
unquotedAttributions1
matches
0"I think you have the wrong person, she said, her voice steadying only through years of forced indifference."
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions54
wordCount1264
uniqueNames16
maxNameDensity0.95
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Silas"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest2
Rory12
Tuesday1
London3
Soho1
Silas10
Golden1
Empress1
Fog1
Cardiff1
Aurora1
Evan10
Mr1
Cheung1
You7
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Rory"
3"Silas"
4"Empress"
5"Evan"
6"Mr"
7"Cheung"
8"You"
places
0"London"
1"Soho"
2"Fog"
3"Cardiff"
globalScore1
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences73
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"felt like a lead weight pressing into h"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1264
matches(empty)
95.74% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences94
matches
0"left that life"
1"suggested that he"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs26
mean48.62
std25.62
cv0.527
sampleLengths
084
158
281
339
471
545
637
740
817
954
1018
1165
1245
1357
1412
1547
1676
1726
1841
1942
2040
2123
2254
2340
2419
25133
97.80% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences94
matches
0"was plastered"
1"ashamed"
15.67% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount6
totalVerbs217
matches
0"was polishing"
1"was hammering"
2"were playing"
3"was measuring"
4"was just catching"
5"was sitting"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount8
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences94
ratio0.053
matches
0"She knew the way he stood—the aggressive tilt of the chin, the habit of resting his right hand against his hip as if he were constantly ready to strike or flee."
1"He didn't rush—that wasn't his way—but he navigated the floor with a slight, deliberate limp that gave him the appearance of a prowling cat."
2"Everything about him—from the precision of his beard to the weight of his gaze—suggested that he was measuring Evan’s dimensions for a shallow grave."
3"She turned, her gaze sweeping over him—seeing the expensive coat, the hollow eyes, the desperate need to exert control over a world that had clearly been stripping him of it."
4"It was heavy, yes—the bag, the past, the memories of a life she no longer claimed—but she could carry it."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1278
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"familiar, sudden icy prickle"
adverbCount41
adverbRatio0.032081377151799685
lyAdverbCount14
lyAdverbRatio0.010954616588419406
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences94
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences94
mean13.45
std8.35
cv0.621
sampleLengths
025
128
212
319
47
522
629
719
824
923
103
1112
1227
1312
1416
1519
1624
1712
1813
1931
201
2110
2227
234
2420
2516
261
272
2814
2912
3018
3124
3218
3313
3418
3513
367
3710
384
395
408
415
426
4321
4416
4511
466
4724
4812
491
28.72% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats20
diversityRatio0.2765957446808511
totalSentences94
uniqueOpeners26
37.45% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences89
matches
0"Sometimes, moving on looks exactly"
ratio0.011
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount60
totalSentences89
matches
0"It was a Tuesday, the"
1"She didn’t head for the"
2"She stood for a moment"
3"Her shoulder-length black hair was"
4"He was polishing a glass"
5"He looked up, his hazel"
6"He didn't speak."
7"He never did until he"
8"She slid into the worn"
9"She was halfway through pulling"
10"He checked his reflection in"
11"She knew the way he"
12"She looked instinctively toward the"
13"He looked older, tighter, the"
14"He stopped at the edge"
15"His voice was a practiced"
16"She kept her focus on"
17"She didn’t know how he’d"
18"I think you have the"
19"He laughed then, a low,"
ratio0.674
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount82
totalSentences89
matches
0"The green neon sign of"
1"It was a Tuesday, the"
2"Rory pushed inside, the bell"
3"The bar smelled of stale"
4"She didn’t head for the"
5"She stood for a moment"
6"Her shoulder-length black hair was"
7"Silas was behind the bar,"
8"He was polishing a glass"
9"He looked up, his hazel"
10"He didn't speak."
11"He never did until he"
12"Rory moved toward a booth"
13"She slid into the worn"
14"She was halfway through pulling"
15"A man stepped in, shaking"
16"He checked his reflection in"
17"Rory felt that familiar, sudden"
18"She knew the way he"
19"The blood drained from her"
ratio0.921
56.18% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences89
matches
0"Now, it’s just exhausting."
ratio0.011
37.47% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences61
technicalSentenceCount9
matches
0"It was a Tuesday, the kind of wet, miserable London night that leached the color out of the pavement and made the grit of Soho feel particularly intimate."
1"He was polishing a glass with the methodical focus of a man who had spent his life waiting for things that might never happen."
2"A man stepped in, shaking off a London Fog trench coat that looked far too expensive for the neighborhood."
3"She knew the way he stood—the aggressive tilt of the chin, the habit of resting his right hand against his hip as if he were constantly ready to strike or flee."
4"The blood drained from her face, leaving her head spinning."
5"He laughed then, a low, dismissive sound that was entirely devoid of warmth."
6"Silas asked, his voice low and vibrating with a quiet authority that silenced the far end of the bar."
7"Evan looked up, his expression flickering from arrogance to something approximating caution."
8"She turned, her gaze sweeping over him—seeing the expensive coat, the hollow eyes, the desperate need to exert control over a world that had clearly been stripp…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
75.1251%