| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 1 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 1 | | tagDensity | 1 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 92.66% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1363 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 19.30% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1363 | | totalAiIsms | 22 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "weight" | | 1 | "oppressive" | | 2 | "reminder" | | 3 | "gloom" | | 4 | "silence" | | 5 | "electric" | | 6 | "velvet" | | 7 | "rhythmic" | | 8 | "silk" | | 9 | "racing" | | 10 | "flicker" | | 11 | "sense of" | | 12 | "profound" | | 13 | "warmth" | | 14 | "searing" | | 15 | "beacon" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 103 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 18.03% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 8 | | narrationSentences | 103 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | 0 | "began to" | | 1 | "seemed to" | | 2 | "seem to" |
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| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 103 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 35 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 6 | | markdownWords | 23 | | totalWords | 1357 | | ratio | 0.017 | | matches | | 0 | "Thump-thump. Thump-thump." | | 1 | "Shhh-tuck. Shhh-tuck." | | 2 | "It’s a fox. It’s a stray dog. It’s the wind caught in a hollow log." | | 3 | "Shhh-tuck. Shhh-tuck." | | 4 | "Flash." | | 5 | "Flash." |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 1 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 16 | | wordCount | 1354 | | uniqueNames | 6 | | maxNameDensity | 0.74 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Rory | 10 | | London | 1 | | Silas | 1 | | Heartstone | 2 |
| | persons | | | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "London" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 26.54% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 81 | | glossingSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "felt like the entrance to a different c" | | 1 | "oaks that seemed to have grown around something harder and more permanent than wood" | | 2 | "It was as if the world had been placed under a bell jar" | | 3 | "tone that seemed to rise from the ground itself, vibrating through her bones" |
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| 52.62% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 2 | | per1kWords | 1.474 | | wordCount | 1357 | | matches | | 0 | "Not the flowers themselves, but the way the light hit them" | | 1 | "not the sweet perfume of a meadow, but something cloyingly thick, like lilies left too long in stag" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 103 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 34 | | mean | 39.91 | | std | 27.66 | | cv | 0.693 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 74 | | 1 | 72 | | 2 | 72 | | 3 | 90 | | 4 | 52 | | 5 | 5 | | 6 | 68 | | 7 | 59 | | 8 | 2 | | 9 | 3 | | 10 | 38 | | 11 | 57 | | 12 | 75 | | 13 | 18 | | 14 | 18 | | 15 | 86 | | 16 | 2 | | 17 | 14 | | 18 | 54 | | 19 | 57 | | 20 | 22 | | 21 | 48 | | 22 | 3 | | 23 | 44 | | 24 | 80 | | 25 | 16 | | 26 | 53 | | 27 | 8 | | 28 | 12 | | 29 | 17 | | 30 | 45 | | 31 | 31 | | 32 | 54 | | 33 | 8 |
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| 95.04% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 103 | | matches | | 0 | "been placed" | | 1 | "being dragged" | | 2 | "were filled" |
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| 0.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 13 | | totalVerbs | 227 | | matches | | 0 | "was pulsing" | | 1 | "were skipping" | | 2 | "was intensifying" | | 3 | "were turning" | | 4 | "was coming" | | 5 | "was hammering" | | 6 | "was glowing" | | 7 | "was standing" | | 8 | "was searing" | | 9 | "wasn't walking" | | 10 | "was simply appearing" | | 11 | "wasn't trying" | | 12 | "was waiting" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 6 | | semicolonCount | 4 | | flaggedSentences | 8 | | totalSentences | 103 | | ratio | 0.078 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory checked her phone; the screen was a blinding white void in the gloom, and the clock sat frozen at 11:11 PM." | | 1 | "It wasn't a sudden pop or a gust of wind; it was a thickening of the air, a sudden increase in pressure that made her ears pop." | | 2 | "Wildflowers—pinks, deep violets, and a blue so luminous it looked electric—bloomed in thick, undulating carpets." | | 3 | "Not the flowers themselves, but the way the light hit them—the shadows they cast seemed to linger a second too long, stretching toward her boots like reaching fingers." | | 4 | "The scent hit her then—not the sweet perfume of a meadow, but something cloyingly thick, like lilies left too long in stagnant water." | | 5 | "It was tall—impossibly tall—and its silhouette was jagged, uneven." | | 6 | "It didn't seem to occupy space the way a person did; it looked more like a hole cut out of the world, a void shaped like a man but lacking any recognizable humanity." | | 7 | "The crimson light was no longer a faint glow; it was a pulsing beacon, illuminating the clearing in rhythmic flashes of blood-red." |
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| 82.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1370 | | adjectiveStacks | 3 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "small, crescent-shaped scar" | | 1 | "same heavy, damp silt" | | 2 | "shrill, teeth-aching whine." |
| | adverbCount | 52 | | adverbRatio | 0.03795620437956204 | | lyAdverbCount | 14 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.010218978102189781 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 103 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 103 | | mean | 13.17 | | std | 7.95 | | cv | 0.603 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 33 | | 1 | 26 | | 2 | 15 | | 3 | 19 | | 4 | 20 | | 5 | 15 | | 6 | 18 | | 7 | 3 | | 8 | 15 | | 9 | 22 | | 10 | 5 | | 11 | 27 | | 12 | 12 | | 13 | 22 | | 14 | 18 | | 15 | 11 | | 16 | 27 | | 17 | 9 | | 18 | 12 | | 19 | 18 | | 20 | 13 | | 21 | 5 | | 22 | 14 | | 23 | 15 | | 24 | 5 | | 25 | 13 | | 26 | 21 | | 27 | 19 | | 28 | 11 | | 29 | 5 | | 30 | 3 | | 31 | 21 | | 32 | 1 | | 33 | 1 | | 34 | 3 | | 35 | 9 | | 36 | 14 | | 37 | 13 | | 38 | 1 | | 39 | 1 | | 40 | 8 | | 41 | 17 | | 42 | 3 | | 43 | 4 | | 44 | 13 | | 45 | 12 | | 46 | 8 | | 47 | 8 | | 48 | 19 | | 49 | 16 |
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| 27.67% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 23 | | diversityRatio | 0.23300970873786409 | | totalSentences | 103 | | uniqueOpeners | 24 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 96 | | matches | | 0 | "Then, she saw the flowers." | | 1 | "Instead, the petals looked fleshy," | | 2 | "Only the silence, which now" |
| | ratio | 0.031 | |
| 11.67% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 50 | | totalSentences | 96 | | matches | | 0 | "She adjusted the strap of" | | 1 | "It was a nervous habit," | | 2 | "It had been pulling her" | | 3 | "She frowned, tapping the glass." | | 4 | "It was likely just the" | | 5 | "She found the standing stones" | | 6 | "They weren't tall, but they" | | 7 | "They stood in a crooked" | | 8 | "It wasn't a sudden pop" | | 9 | "It wasn't the absence of" | | 10 | "It was as if the" | | 11 | "They shouldn't have been there." | | 12 | "It was mid-November, and the" | | 13 | "She reached up, her hand" | | 14 | "It wasn't just warm anymore." | | 15 | "It was pulsing." | | 16 | "She stopped walking." | | 17 | "It wasn't a snap of" | | 18 | "It was a soft, wet" | | 19 | "She forced herself to remain" |
| | ratio | 0.521 | |
| 38.13% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 81 | | totalSentences | 96 | | matches | | 0 | "The iron gates of Richmond" | | 1 | "The city was a bruised" | | 2 | "She adjusted the strap of" | | 3 | "It was a nervous habit," | | 4 | "The Heartstone pendant felt heavy" | | 5 | "It had been pulling her" | | 6 | "The path narrowed." | | 7 | "The manicured edges of the" | | 8 | "Rory checked her phone; the" | | 9 | "She frowned, tapping the glass." | | 10 | "It was likely just the" | | 11 | "She found the standing stones" | | 12 | "They weren't tall, but they" | | 13 | "They stood in a crooked" | | 14 | "It wasn't a sudden pop" | | 15 | "The silence was the first" | | 16 | "It wasn't the absence of" | | 17 | "It was as if the" | | 18 | "Wildflowers—pinks, deep violets, and a" | | 19 | "They shouldn't have been there." |
| | ratio | 0.844 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 96 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 34.63% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 66 | | technicalSentenceCount | 10 | | matches | | 0 | "It was a nervous habit, a grounding ritual she’d fallen into since she’d started chasing things that didn't make sense." | | 1 | "They weren't tall, but they were ancient, massive oaks that seemed to have grown around something harder and more permanent than wood." | | 2 | "They stood in a crooked semi-circle, their bark silvered by a moonlight that felt too bright, too focused." | | 3 | "Rory slowed her pace, her boots sinking into soil that felt strangely springy, like moss layered over something yielding." | | 4 | "It vanished before she could focus on it, leaving behind a sense of profound wrongness that made the hair on her arms stand up." | | 5 | "The pendant's heat was intensifying, becoming a throbbing warmth that made her skin feel flushed." | | 6 | "The pendant was glowing now, a faint, inner crimson light bleeding through the fabric of her shirt, casting a rhythmic, bloody hue onto her collarbone." | | 7 | "She reached a small rise in the clearing and tripped, her boot catching on a root that felt far too much like a limb." | | 8 | "It was long, narrow, and possessed too many joints, pressed deep into the soil as if the creature behind it had been incredibly heavy." | | 9 | "A low, vibrating tone that seemed to rise from the ground itself, vibrating through her bones." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 1 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |