Run: 2026-05-10-01KR8YWQXCFTYAHGPF0N7KA5FP

Run Details

Duration:
8.8s
Cost:
$0.002672
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The green neon sign above the entrance to the Raven’s Nest hummed with a low, electric vibration, casting a sickly lunar glow onto the wet Soho pavement. Aurora pushed the heavy oak door open, the scent of stale ale and old floor wax rushing to meet her. It was a Tuesday, the quietest hour of the night, and the bar held only the muffled ticking of the grandfather clock in the corner and the soft clinking of glass from behind the counter. Silas stood at the mahogany bar, polishing a tumbler with the practiced rhythm of a man who found comfort in singular, repetitive tasks. He didn't look up immediately, but he knew her step; he shifted his weight, favoring his bad left knee, and glanced over the rim of his spectacles. His silver signet ring caught the dim light as he set the glass down. Rory, you’re late, he said, his voice a gravelly rumble that barely topped the jazz drifting from the hidden speakers. Delivery was an hour ago. The bike broke down on Shaftesbury Avenue, she said, shrugging off her damp jacket. Her straight black hair clung to her cheeks in damp, dark strands. Besides, I think the Golden Empress can survive one late order of cold spring rolls. Silas chuckled, a dry sound, and reached under the bar for a clean rag. He stopped, his gaze darting toward the door as a shadow fell across the threshold. The man who entered didn't look like he belonged in Soho. He wore a crisp, tailored overcoat that cost more than Rory’s motorbike, and his hair, once tousled and golden-brown in their university days, was shorn tight to his skull. He stood for a moment, his eyes adjusting to the gloom, scanning the rows of black-and-white photographs on the walls before they landed on the bar. He froze. Aurora felt a strange, cold prickle run down her spine, a sensation she recognized as the sudden absence of breath. Laila. The name hit the room like a physical blow. Rory hadn't heard that name in three years, not since the day she’d left Cardiff, the day she’d scrubbed the memories of Evan from her life with the same ferocity she used to scrub the pans at the restaurant. Evan. He moved toward the bar, his gait steady and devoid of the nervous, frantic energy she remembered. He was older, his face leaner, the jawline sharper, but the eyes—cold and observant—were a sharp, piercing grey. He walked with a confidence that made Rory’s stomach twist. I was told I might find a familiar face in London, Evan said, sliding onto a stool three seats away from her. He didn't look at Silas, though he surely sensed the weight of the man behind the wood. He only looked at Rory. Rory stared at her hands, her fingers tracing the thin, crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist. She remembered the shattered wine glass, the way the kitchen floor had looked stained in red, the way his voice had dropped an octave when he told her it was her own fault he’d had to grab her arm. What are you doing here, Evan? she asked. Her voice was steady, the cool-headed clarity she’d honed in the city holding the tremor in her heart at bay. The world is smaller than you intended it to be, he replied. He ordered a neat scotch from Silas, who served it with a neutral expression, his hazel eyes lingering on Evan’s hands just a second too long. Evan took a sip, winced, and set it down. I heard about Cardiff. The law firm reached out to your father. He didn't know where you were. I thought I’d take a trip down south. See if I could find the girl who ran away. I didn't run away, Rory said, finally meeting his gaze. I left. There’s a distinction. Evan smiled, but it didn't reach his eyes. It was a thin, predatory expression. You were always precise, Laila. It was why I loved you. Why I made sure you never forgot what happened. The air in the Nest grew heavy. Across the bar, Silas began to dry another glass, his movements slower, his posture subtly shifting toward the center of the bar. He was watching the tension between them, a silent predator sensing a shift in the territory. I’m not that girl anymore, Rory said, her voice dropping to a whisper. She couldn't afford to be. If she started shaking, or if she started crying, she knew the thin veneer of her new life would shatter, and she wasn't ready for the debris. You look the same, he insisted, leaning in. He reached out as if to touch the hair at her temple. Rory didn't flinch, but she leaned back, her chair scraping harshly against the floorboards. Don't, Silas warned. His voice wasn't loud, but it possessed the unmistakable edge of authority that came from forty years of handling people who didn't want to follow the rules. His hand had disappeared below the bar counter. Keep your hands on the wood, son. Evan didn't laugh, but he withdrew his hand, looking at Silas with a faint, mocking curiosity. You’ve got a protector, then? I thought you were just delivering Kung Pao chicken. I’m a barista, a courier, and a citizen of a city that doesn't care about your past in Cardiff, Rory said, standing up. She grabbed her jacket. I’m closed for the night, Silas. Wait, Evan said, sounding genuinely surprised. You’re just going to walk away? We have years of silence to catch up on. We have nothing to catch up on, Evan, she said, looking at him with a detachment that she hoped stung. You chased a version of me that didn't exist, and you ended up breaking something that was already well on its way to being whole without you. She turned and headed toward the back of the bar, toward the door that led to her flat. The hallway was narrow, lined with old maps of London, and every step felt like a victory. She heard Evan try to stand, but Silas was faster. The scrape of the old man’s knee, the way he leaned into the space between them, was enough to stop him. The bar is closing, Silas told him, his voice low and vibrating with a command that left no room for argument. And you are a man who has suddenly realized he’s in the wrong company. I suggest you finish your drink and leave before the neon sign goes out. Because in five minutes, the light goes off, and I don't care much for guests who overstay their welcome. Rory reached the stairs. She paused, looking back once. Evan was sitting perfectly still, staring at the empty floor, his shoulders hunched. He looked not like a threat, but like a man mourning a ghost. Rory climbed the steps, the wood creaking under her boots. She reached her room, locked the door, and leaned her forehead against the cool, painted plaster. The city outside roared on—the sirens, the laughter of tourists, the distant rumble of the Underground—but inside, there was only the quiet thud of her heart. She looked at her wrist, at the small crescent mark, and realized that for the first time in years, the weight of the memory wasn't pulling her down. It was just a mark on her skin, a story she had survived. She let out a breath she felt she’d been holding since the day she left Wales, and for the first time, the silence of the flat felt like hers.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
92.18% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1278
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"suddenly"
count1
1
adverb"perfectly"
count1
highlights
0"suddenly"
1"perfectly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
37.40% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1278
totalAiIsms16
found
0
word"electric"
count1
1
word"weight"
count3
2
word"gloom"
count1
3
word"scanning"
count1
4
word"down her spine"
count1
5
word"stomach"
count1
6
word"familiar"
count1
7
word"tracing"
count1
8
word"shattered"
count1
9
word"tension"
count1
10
word"predator"
count1
11
word"whisper"
count1
12
word"silence"
count2
highlights
0"electric"
1"weight"
2"gloom"
3"scanning"
4"down her spine"
5"stomach"
6"familiar"
7"tracing"
8"shattered"
9"tension"
10"predator"
11"whisper"
12"silence"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"let out a breath"
count1
highlights
0"let out a breath"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences91
matches(empty)
80.06% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences91
filterMatches
0"think"
1"look"
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
1"try to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences91
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen39
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1274
ratio0
matches(empty)
15.63% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions16
unquotedAttributions7
matches
0"The bike broke down on Shaftesbury Avenue, she said, shrugging off her damp jacket."
1"I was told I might find a familiar face in London, Evan said, sliding onto a stool three seats away from her."
2"The world is smaller than you intended it to be, he replied."
3"You look the same, he insisted, leaning in."
4"Wait, Evan said, sounding genuinely surprised."
5"We have nothing to catch up on, Evan, she said, looking at him with a detachment that she hoped stung."
6"The bar is closing, Silas told him, his voice low and vibrating with a command that left no room for argument."
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions60
wordCount1274
uniqueNames19
maxNameDensity0.94
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest2
Soho2
Tuesday1
Shaftesbury1
Avenue1
Golden1
Empress1
Rory12
Cardiff3
Evan12
London2
Silas10
Laila2
Kung1
Pao1
Underground1
Wales1
You5
persons
0"Nest"
1"Empress"
2"Rory"
3"Evan"
4"Silas"
5"Laila"
6"You"
places
0"Raven"
1"Soho"
2"Shaftesbury"
3"Avenue"
4"Cardiff"
5"London"
6"Wales"
globalScore1
windowScore1
83.33% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences75
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"felt like a victory"
1"felt like hers"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.785
wordCount1274
matches
0"not like a threat, but like a man mourning a ghost"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences91
matches
0"heard that name"
95.65% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs31
mean41.1
std19.92
cv0.485
sampleLengths
082
164
225
341
429
566
622
71
848
91
1045
1144
1255
1328
1483
1515
1634
1745
1845
1934
2045
2130
2233
2321
2447
2535
2631
2768
2835
2952
3070
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences91
matches
0"was told"
86.52% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount4
totalVerbs235
matches
0"was watching"
1"were just delivering"
2"was sitting"
3"wasn't pulling"
48.67% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount4
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences91
ratio0.033
matches
0"He didn't look up immediately, but he knew her step; he shifted his weight, favoring his bad left knee, and glanced over the rim of his spectacles."
1"He was older, his face leaner, the jawline sharper, but the eyes—cold and observant—were a sharp, piercing grey."
2"The city outside roared on—the sirens, the laughter of tourists, the distant rumble of the Underground—but inside, there was only the quiet thud of her heart."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1283
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"thin, crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount35
adverbRatio0.027279812938425563
lyAdverbCount14
lyAdverbRatio0.010911925175370226
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences91
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences91
mean14
std8.79
cv0.628
sampleLengths
027
120
235
323
427
514
620
75
814
912
1015
1114
1215
1311
1429
1526
162
1720
181
199
2039
211
2217
2318
2410
2522
2617
275
2816
2939
306
312
3220
3312
3426
359
364
378
386
398
4010
4110
422
433
448
456
465
476
489
497
39.01% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats10
diversityRatio0.2967032967032967
totalSentences91
uniqueOpeners27
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences86
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount48
totalSentences86
matches
0"It was a Tuesday, the"
1"He didn't look up immediately,"
2"His silver signet ring caught"
3"Her straight black hair clung"
4"He stopped, his gaze darting"
5"He wore a crisp, tailored"
6"He stood for a moment,"
7"He moved toward the bar,"
8"He was older, his face"
9"He walked with a confidence"
10"I was told I might"
11"He didn't look at Silas,"
12"He only looked at Rory."
13"She remembered the shattered wine"
14"Her voice was steady, the"
15"He ordered a neat scotch"
16"I heard about Cardiff."
17"He didn't know where you"
18"I thought I’d take a"
19"I didn't run away, Rory"
ratio0.558
29.77% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount74
totalSentences86
matches
0"The green neon sign above"
1"Aurora pushed the heavy oak"
2"It was a Tuesday, the"
3"Silas stood at the mahogany"
4"He didn't look up immediately,"
5"His silver signet ring caught"
6"Rory, you’re late, he said,"
7"Delivery was an hour ago."
8"The bike broke down on"
9"Her straight black hair clung"
10"Silas chuckled, a dry sound,"
11"He stopped, his gaze darting"
12"The man who entered didn't"
13"He wore a crisp, tailored"
14"He stood for a moment,"
15"Aurora felt a strange, cold"
16"The name hit the room"
17"Rory hadn't heard that name"
18"He moved toward the bar,"
19"He was older, his face"
ratio0.86
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences86
matches
0"If she started shaking, or"
1"Because in five minutes, the"
ratio0.023
53.57% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences56
technicalSentenceCount7
matches
0"Silas stood at the mahogany bar, polishing a tumbler with the practiced rhythm of a man who found comfort in singular, repetitive tasks."
1"He wore a crisp, tailored overcoat that cost more than Rory’s motorbike, and his hair, once tousled and golden-brown in their university days, was shorn tight t…"
2"He stood for a moment, his eyes adjusting to the gloom, scanning the rows of black-and-white photographs on the walls before they landed on the bar."
3"He walked with a confidence that made Rory’s stomach twist."
4"He ordered a neat scotch from Silas, who served it with a neutral expression, his hazel eyes lingering on Evan’s hands just a second too long."
5"His voice wasn't loud, but it possessed the unmistakable edge of authority that came from forty years of handling people who didn't want to follow the rules."
6"You chased a version of me that didn't exist, and you ended up breaking something that was already well on its way to being whole without you."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
78.5264%