Run: 2026-05-10-01KR8YY2PBN5PF6292NRHTQKKX

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Duration:
8.7s
Cost:
$0.002573
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The green neon sign of The Raven’s Nest hummed with an acidic buzz, casting a spectral glow over the rain-slicked pavement of Soho. Aurora pushed through the heavy oak door, the smell of stale beer, lemon floor wax, and centuries of dust immediately grounding her. She shook out her damp hair, the cold London drizzle having turned it into a tangled, heavy curtain against her shoulders, and felt the familiar biting chill of the autumn air dissipate into the bar’s suffocating, comfortable warmth. Her left wrist throbbed faintly—a psychosomatic ache that usually flared whenever the weather shifted—and she traced the small crescent-shaped scar beneath her sleeve, a reflexive habit she couldn’t quite break. Behind the polished mahogany of the bar, Silas moved with his characteristic, measured grace. He was obsessively wiping down a glass, his hazel eyes scanning the room with that quiet, predatory intelligence that suggested he was counting every pulse in the building. He saw her, gave a brief, sharp nod, and moved toward the taps. He didn’t limp when he was behind the wood, a practiced deception he’d maintained for years to hide the injury that ended his time in the field, but as he stepped toward the end of the bar to hand her a drink, the slight drag in his left leg returned, unavoidable and etched into his bone. Before she could take the glass, the stool beside her was occupied. The man who sat down smelled of cedarwood and overpriced cologne, a scent far too sharp and clean for the grime of Soho. Rory? The voice was a ghost pulled from a time she had spent three years trying to bury. She went rigid, her fingers tightening around the cold glass Silas had just set down. She turned slowly, her bright blue eyes narrowing as she took him in. It was Evan. Or, at least, it was the structural frame of Evan, smoothed over by time and perhaps the grace of a tailoring budget that hadn’t existed when they were students in Cardiff. He was wearing a trench coat that cost more than her entire inventory of possessions, his hair styled into a careless sweep that looked entirely intentional. Evan, she said, her voice dropping into a register so flat it felt like a door slamming shut. He smiled, but it didn't reach his eyes—those familiar, predatory flickers of expectation. He looked at her, really looked at her, his gaze sliding from her hair to the frayed hem of her delivery jacket. He seemed to be searching for the girl he had dominated, the girl who had spent hours rearranging her life to avoid triggering his tempers. He looked disappointed, or perhaps surprised, that the fire he had once stoked hadn't burned the house down. I heard you moved to London, he said, his tone casual, as if they were bumping into each other at a Saturday market rather than in a dimly lit hole-in-the-wall. I didn't think I’d find you in a place like this. Silas’ place, isn't it? I remember you talking about his reputation when we were in university. Rory took a slow sip of her drink, staring at the reflection of the old maps on the wall behind the bar. I don’t think you remember a single thing I ever said, Evan. I think you remember the things you wanted me to have said. He chuckled, a low, smooth sound that made the hair on her arms prickle. He reached out as if to touch her shoulder, but Rory shifted, creating a deliberate, insurmountable gap between them. His hand hung in the air for a second before he pulled it back, adjusting his signet ring—a hollow echo of the one Silas wore, though Evan’s was merely gaudy, not functional. You’re still just as sharp, he murmured. I’ve grown, Rory. I’ve done a lot of growing since Cardiff. The law firm in Mayfair keeps me on a very tight leash, but it’s been… grounding. I’ve realized how much… friction there was between us. How much of it was my fault. Rory felt a sharp, hysterical laugh rising in her throat, but she killed it before it could surface. She looked at Silas, who was currently occupied with a customer at the other end of the bar, yet his presence was a heavy, watchful weight against the small of her back. The Spymaster was listening, every muscle and nerve attuned to the shift in the room. Friction, she repeated, the word tasting like copper. That’s a polite term for a closed door, locked from the inside, while I was outside shivering in a winter coat. You don’t get to rebrand the past, Evan. You don’t get to call it growth. Evan’s expression hardened, just for a flicker of a second—a hairline fracture in the porcelain veneer. He leaned closer, his voice dropping into that intimately manipulative whisper that used to make her heart stutter. I really am sorry, Rory. I’ve spent a lot of nights wondering where you went. Why you just vanished. No note, no forwarding address. It wasn't fair. It was necessary, she corrected. She finally turned to face him fully, her gaze steady, devoid of the fear that had once defined her posture. I didn't vanish. I escaped. There is a distinct, measurable difference that you, of all people, as a lawyer, should be able to parse. She saw the flicker of annoyance now, the way his jaw tightened, the way his fingers drummed a rhythmic, impatient pattern against the mahogany. He was losing his grip on the narrative. She wasn't the girl who apologized for existing any longer. She worked for a man who kept tabs on the criminal underbelly of the city; she had seen, through Silas’ influence and her own hard-won survival, exactly how small men like Evan truly were when shorn of their pedestals. I’m buying you a drink, he said, his tone transitioning into a demand disguised as benevolence. Let’s start over. A conversation, nothing more. I want to know who you’ve become. I’ve become the person who leaves before the drink is poured, she replied. She stood up, her movements fluid and calm. She tapped her glass—untouched—and nodded toward the bar. Silas was there in an instant, his limp barely perceptible as he crossed the floor. He didn't look at Evan; he looked at Rory, his hazel eyes searching hers for a signal. She gave a slight downward tilt of her chin. The tab? Silas asked, his voice gravelly and authoritative. It’s paid, Rory said, turning toward the door. She didn't look back at Evan. She walked toward the green neon glow of the Soho night, her shoulders square, her breath coming in slow, even plumes. Behind her, she heard Evan’s voice, sharp and demanding, asking Silas who the hell she thought she was, and the low, dangerous, and utterly dismissive hum of Silas’ bar stool shifting as he prepared to handle the trash. The rain had let up, leaving the city shimmering with reflected neon. She walked past the flat door and out into the cooling air of the street, the weight of the past not erased, but finally, firmly, left behind the thick oak door of the Raven’s Nest. She was Rory Carter, delivery girl, survivor, and for the first time in years, the only person writing the script of her own life.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags2
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences0
tagDensity1
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
75.79% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1239
totalAiIsmAdverbs6
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
1
adverb"really"
count2
2
adverb"very"
count1
3
adverb"truly"
count1
4
adverb"utterly"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
1"really"
2"very"
3"truly"
4"utterly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
15.25% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1239
totalAiIsms21
found
0
word"spectral"
count1
1
word"familiar"
count2
2
word"chill"
count1
3
word"comfortable"
count1
4
word"warmth"
count1
5
word"throbbed"
count1
6
word"traced"
count1
7
word"measured"
count1
8
word"scanning"
count1
9
word"pulse"
count1
10
word"etched"
count1
11
word"echo"
count1
12
word"weight"
count2
13
word"flicker"
count2
14
word"porcelain"
count1
15
word"whisper"
count1
16
word"rhythmic"
count1
17
word"firmly"
count1
highlights
0"spectral"
1"familiar"
2"chill"
3"comfortable"
4"warmth"
5"throbbed"
6"traced"
7"measured"
8"scanning"
9"pulse"
10"etched"
11"echo"
12"weight"
13"flicker"
14"porcelain"
15"whisper"
16"rhythmic"
17"firmly"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences81
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences81
filterMatches
0"think"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences82
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen56
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1232
ratio0
matches(empty)
56.82% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions11
unquotedAttributions3
matches
0"Evan, she said, her voice dropping into a register so flat it felt like a door slamming shut."
1"I heard you moved to London, he said, his tone casual, as if they were bumping into each other at a Saturday market rath…"
2"It was necessary, she corrected."
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions44
wordCount1197
uniqueNames13
maxNameDensity0.84
worstName"Evan"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Raven2
Nest2
Soho3
London2
Silas7
Evan10
Cardiff2
Saturday1
Rory9
Mayfair1
Spymaster1
Carter1
You3
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Silas"
3"Evan"
4"Rory"
5"Carter"
6"You"
places
0"Soho"
1"London"
2"Cardiff"
3"Saturday"
globalScore1
windowScore1
73.08% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences65
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"quite break"
1"felt like a door slamming shut"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.812
wordCount1232
matches
0"not erased, but finally, firmly, left behind the thick oak door of the Raven"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences82
matches
0"surprised, that the"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs22
mean56
std30.5
cv0.545
sampleLengths
0113
1111
235
31
4105
518
678
757
846
965
1050
1165
1244
1361
1449
1581
1630
1713
1857
199
2073
2171
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences81
matches(empty)
15.67% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount6
totalVerbs217
matches
0"was obsessively wiping"
1"was counting"
2"was wearing"
3"were bumping"
4"was listening"
5"was losing"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount7
semicolonCount2
flaggedSentences7
totalSentences82
ratio0.085
matches
0"Her left wrist throbbed faintly—a psychosomatic ache that usually flared whenever the weather shifted—and she traced the small crescent-shaped scar beneath her sleeve, a reflexive habit she couldn’t quite break."
1"He smiled, but it didn't reach his eyes—those familiar, predatory flickers of expectation."
2"His hand hung in the air for a second before he pulled it back, adjusting his signet ring—a hollow echo of the one Silas wore, though Evan’s was merely gaudy, not functional."
3"Evan’s expression hardened, just for a flicker of a second—a hairline fracture in the porcelain veneer."
4"She worked for a man who kept tabs on the criminal underbelly of the city; she had seen, through Silas’ influence and her own hard-won survival, exactly how small men like Evan truly were when shorn of their pedestals."
5"She tapped her glass—untouched—and nodded toward the bar."
6"He didn't look at Evan; he looked at Rory, his hazel eyes searching hers for a signal."
91.25% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount510
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount22
adverbRatio0.043137254901960784
lyAdverbCount8
lyAdverbRatio0.01568627450980392
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences82
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences82
mean15.02
std10.62
cv0.707
sampleLengths
023
122
238
330
414
528
613
756
812
923
101
1117
1215
1313
143
1531
1626
1718
1813
1922
2025
2118
2230
2311
244
2512
2622
2712
2812
2914
3019
3132
327
333
348
3515
361
374
385
397
4018
4132
4215
438
4421
458
467
4716
4818
495
26.83% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats19
diversityRatio0.2926829268292683
totalSentences82
uniqueOpeners24
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences77
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount51
totalSentences77
matches
0"She shook out her damp"
1"Her left wrist throbbed faintly—a"
2"He was obsessively wiping down"
3"He saw her, gave a"
4"He didn’t limp when he"
5"She went rigid, her fingers"
6"She turned slowly, her bright"
7"It was Evan."
8"He was wearing a trench"
9"He smiled, but it didn't"
10"He looked at her, really"
11"He seemed to be searching"
12"He looked disappointed, or perhaps"
13"I heard you moved to"
14"I didn't think I’d find"
15"I remember you talking about"
16"I don’t think you remember"
17"I think you remember the"
18"He chuckled, a low, smooth"
19"He reached out as if"
ratio0.662
18.44% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount68
totalSentences77
matches
0"The green neon sign of"
1"Aurora pushed through the heavy"
2"She shook out her damp"
3"Her left wrist throbbed faintly—a"
4"He was obsessively wiping down"
5"He saw her, gave a"
6"He didn’t limp when he"
7"The man who sat down"
8"The voice was a ghost"
9"She went rigid, her fingers"
10"She turned slowly, her bright"
11"It was Evan."
12"He was wearing a trench"
13"Evan, she said, her voice"
14"He smiled, but it didn't"
15"He looked at her, really"
16"He seemed to be searching"
17"He looked disappointed, or perhaps"
18"I heard you moved to"
19"I didn't think I’d find"
ratio0.883
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences77
matches
0"Before she could take the"
1"Or, at least, it was"
ratio0.026
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences50
technicalSentenceCount12
matches
0"He didn’t limp when he was behind the wood, a practiced deception he’d maintained for years to hide the injury that ended his time in the field, but as he stepp…"
1"The man who sat down smelled of cedarwood and overpriced cologne, a scent far too sharp and clean for the grime of Soho."
2"Or, at least, it was the structural frame of Evan, smoothed over by time and perhaps the grace of a tailoring budget that hadn’t existed when they were students…"
3"He was wearing a trench coat that cost more than her entire inventory of possessions, his hair styled into a careless sweep that looked entirely intentional."
4"Evan, she said, her voice dropping into a register so flat it felt like a door slamming shut."
5"He seemed to be searching for the girl he had dominated, the girl who had spent hours rearranging her life to avoid triggering his tempers."
6"I heard you moved to London, he said, his tone casual, as if they were bumping into each other at a Saturday market rather than in a dimly lit hole-in-the-wall."
7"He chuckled, a low, smooth sound that made the hair on her arms prickle."
8"He reached out as if to touch her shoulder, but Rory shifted, creating a deliberate, insurmountable gap between them."
9"She looked at Silas, who was currently occupied with a customer at the other end of the bar, yet his presence was a heavy, watchful weight against the small of …"
10"He leaned closer, his voice dropping into that intimately manipulative whisper that used to make her heart stutter."
11"I’m buying you a drink, he said, his tone transitioning into a demand disguised as benevolence."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags2
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
72.4377%