| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 1 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 0 | | tagDensity | 1 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 84.57% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1296 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 4 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "perfectly" | | 1 | "suddenly" | | 2 | "very" | | 3 | "truly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1296 | | totalAiIsms | 32 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | | | 20 | | | 21 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "stark" | | 1 | "silence" | | 2 | "weight" | | 3 | "chill" | | 4 | "pulse" | | 5 | "warmth" | | 6 | "resolve" | | 7 | "rhythmic" | | 8 | "grave" | | 9 | "echoed" | | 10 | "scanning" | | 11 | "gloom" | | 12 | "traced" | | 13 | "spectral" | | 14 | "stomach" | | 15 | "flicker" | | 16 | "velvet" | | 17 | "searing" | | 18 | "beacon" | | 19 | "yearning" | | 20 | "vibrated" | | 21 | "shattered" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 89 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 62.60% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 4 | | narrationSentences | 89 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | 0 | "managed to" | | 1 | "seemed to" | | 2 | "began to" |
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| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 89 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 41 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1288 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 89.29% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 7 | | unquotedAttributions | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "The silence shattered into a thousand jagged pieces, and then, for the first time since she had stepped over the stones,…" |
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| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 16 | | wordCount | 1282 | | uniqueNames | 9 | | maxNameDensity | 0.55 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Aurora | 1 | | London | 1 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Heartstone | 2 | | Friday | 1 | | Golden | 1 | | Empress | 1 | | Rory | 7 |
| | persons | | | places | | 0 | "London" | | 1 | "Richmond" | | 2 | "Park" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 78 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1288 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 89 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 65.61% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 23 | | mean | 56 | | std | 21.26 | | cv | 0.38 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 63 | | 1 | 98 | | 2 | 75 | | 3 | 47 | | 4 | 63 | | 5 | 47 | | 6 | 57 | | 7 | 63 | | 8 | 1 | | 9 | 56 | | 10 | 73 | | 11 | 65 | | 12 | 70 | | 13 | 55 | | 14 | 32 | | 15 | 84 | | 16 | 35 | | 17 | 64 | | 18 | 45 | | 19 | 33 | | 20 | 89 | | 21 | 35 | | 22 | 38 |
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| 89.49% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 89 | | matches | | 0 | "was gone" | | 1 | "was gone" | | 2 | "was swamped" | | 3 | "been denied" |
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| 0.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 7 | | totalVerbs | 211 | | matches | | 0 | "were piling" | | 1 | "were filling" | | 2 | "were standing" | | 3 | "was already scrambling" | | 4 | "was burning" | | 5 | "was glowing" | | 6 | "were reopening" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 7 | | semicolonCount | 5 | | flaggedSentences | 11 | | totalSentences | 89 | | ratio | 0.124 | | matches | | 0 | "Here, pinned within the heart of Richmond Park, the silence was not merely an absence of noise; it was a physical weight, something textured and absolute." | | 1 | "A twig snapped—a sharp, violent sound that echoed with enough force to suggest a branch the size of a man’s forearm." | | 2 | "She saw a flicker of white—long, pale fingers splayed wide against the wood—before they vanished." | | 3 | "They didn't move toward her; they simply occupied the space, a growing density of malice." | | 4 | "They didn't walk; they transitioned between states, shifting from one shadow to the next with a jittery, frame-by-frame motion that made her head ache." | | 5 | "She looked up, her gaze desperate, and saw the moon finally breaking through the canopy—or perhaps it was a false moon, too large and too white." | | 6 | "The trees weren't trees at all; they were twisted, petrified limbs, the fingers of giants reaching out of the earth, yearning for the life they had been denied." | | 7 | "It didn't speak, but a sound vibrated in the marrow of her bones—a low, grinding noise like grinding stones, rhythmic and demanding." | | 8 | "A memory surfaced, unbidden—cold water, a sharp edge, the sound of her father shouting from the floor below." | | 9 | "She wasn't an intruder; she was an offering." | | 10 | "She reached out, grasping for a branch, for a stone, for any piece of the world she had left behind—the Golden Empress, the smell of grease and ginger, the flickering neon sign above Silas' bar—but the world was gone." |
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| 82.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1223 | | adjectiveStacks | 3 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "damp, exhaust-thickened atmosphere" | | 1 | "white—long, pale fingers" | | 2 | "same sweet, heavy mist" |
| | adverbCount | 38 | | adverbRatio | 0.03107113654946852 | | lyAdverbCount | 12 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.009811937857726901 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 89 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 89 | | mean | 14.47 | | std | 7.78 | | cv | 0.537 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 25 | | 1 | 12 | | 2 | 26 | | 3 | 7 | | 4 | 22 | | 5 | 15 | | 6 | 21 | | 7 | 3 | | 8 | 30 | | 9 | 16 | | 10 | 9 | | 11 | 11 | | 12 | 11 | | 13 | 19 | | 14 | 9 | | 15 | 11 | | 16 | 9 | | 17 | 27 | | 18 | 21 | | 19 | 9 | | 20 | 22 | | 21 | 11 | | 22 | 14 | | 23 | 4 | | 24 | 5 | | 25 | 24 | | 26 | 17 | | 27 | 20 | | 28 | 4 | | 29 | 16 | | 30 | 8 | | 31 | 26 | | 32 | 2 | | 33 | 2 | | 34 | 25 | | 35 | 1 | | 36 | 15 | | 37 | 15 | | 38 | 11 | | 39 | 15 | | 40 | 3 | | 41 | 7 | | 42 | 18 | | 43 | 8 | | 44 | 15 | | 45 | 22 | | 46 | 6 | | 47 | 11 | | 48 | 16 | | 49 | 19 |
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| 35.39% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 13 | | diversityRatio | 0.2808988764044944 | | totalSentences | 89 | | uniqueOpeners | 25 | |
| 77.52% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 86 | | matches | | 0 | "Instead, it was as cold" | | 1 | "Then, there was only the" |
| | ratio | 0.023 | |
| 15.35% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 44 | | totalSentences | 86 | | matches | | 0 | "It was a stark departure" | | 1 | "She checked her watch, but" | | 2 | "It didn’t matter." | | 3 | "She had come here for" | | 4 | "She reached beneath her collar," | | 5 | "It rested against her collarbone," | | 6 | "She tapped it, willing it" | | 7 | "She took a step forward," | | 8 | "She hummed a low, tuneless" | | 9 | "She traced the crescent scar" | | 10 | "I’m alone, she told herself," | | 11 | "It’s just the wind." | | 12 | "She turned to leave, her" | | 13 | "She blinked, spinning around." | | 14 | "She forced a breath, slow" | | 15 | "She reached into her pocket" | | 16 | "It wasn't the movement of" | | 17 | "It was fluid, boneless, a" | | 18 | "She saw a flicker of" | | 19 | "She didn't have the breath" |
| | ratio | 0.512 | |
| 23.95% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 75 | | totalSentences | 86 | | matches | | 0 | "The air inside the grove" | | 1 | "It was a stark departure" | | 2 | "Here, pinned within the heart" | | 3 | "Rory shivered, pulling her thin" | | 4 | "The streetlight glow from outside" | | 5 | "She checked her watch, but" | | 6 | "It didn’t matter." | | 7 | "She had come here for" | | 8 | "She reached beneath her collar," | | 9 | "It rested against her collarbone," | | 10 | "She tapped it, willing it" | | 11 | "The lack of warmth was" | | 12 | "She took a step forward," | | 13 | "Something was wrong with the" | | 14 | "She hummed a low, tuneless" | | 15 | "A twig snapped—a sharp, violent" | | 16 | "Rory froze, her bright blue" | | 17 | "She traced the crescent scar" | | 18 | "The skin there felt tight," | | 19 | "I’m alone, she told herself," |
| | ratio | 0.872 | |
| 58.14% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 86 | | matches | | 0 | "If the portal were close," |
| | ratio | 0.012 | |
| 9.69% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 59 | | technicalSentenceCount | 11 | | matches | | 0 | "The air inside the grove tasted faintly of ozone and crushed clover, a sharp, metallic sweetness that sat heavy on the back of Aurora’s tongue." | | 1 | "The streetlight glow from outside the tree line was gone, swallowed by the dense, unnatural foliage that thrived despite the late-October chill." | | 2 | "The wildflowers, clusters of pale, spectral blooms that shouldn't have been alive in the dark, stood perfectly still, their petals unmoving as wax sculptures." | | 3 | "She reached into her pocket for her lighter, her fingers trembling until the flint sparked, throwing a stuttering, golden arc of light into the gloom." | | 4 | "Her lungs felt as if they were filling with the same sweet, heavy mist that permeated the grove." | | 5 | "The grove seemed to be pulsing now, a slow, terrestrial heartbeat that rattled her teeth." | | 6 | "The ground beneath her felt softer, more yielding, like walking on layers of moss-covered velvet that hid something yielding and soft underneath." | | 7 | "It grew searing, a localized fire against her chest that hurt enough to make her gasp." | | 8 | "They didn't walk; they transitioned between states, shifting from one shadow to the next with a jittery, frame-by-frame motion that made her head ache." | | 9 | "In its illumination, she saw the grove for what it truly was: a graveyard of things that had wandered in and forgotten the way back to the world of men." | | 10 | "Then, there was only the wind, blowing through the leaves, and the patient, rhythmic thrumming of a world that waited for the next one to wander in." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 1 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |