Run: 2026-05-10-01KR8ZC36QVKYFDNR00B5NFQEA

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Duration:
51.4s
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DekaLLM

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System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The green neon sign above the door hummed, a low-frequency vibration that Rory felt in her teeth more than she heard in her ears. It cast a sickly, emerald glow over the rain-slicked pavement of Soho, turning the puddles into pools of toxic light. She pulled her jacket tighter against the damp chill of a London evening, her thumb tracing the small, crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist—a mindless habit, a tactile anchor. The Raven's Nest was quiet for a Tuesday. Inside, the air smelled of spilled stout, expensive tobacco, and the faint, metallic tang of old radiator steam. Rory navigated the dimly lit room, her eyes adjusting to the shadows. The walls were a collage of history: sepia-toned photographs of faces long dead and faded maps of cities that had been reshaped by war and time. It was a place designed for disappearing, which was exactly why she liked it. She found a corner stool, tucked away from the heavy oak bar where Silas was methodically polishing a glass. He didn't look up, but she knew he was aware of her presence. Silas moved with a measured, rhythmic grace, despite the slight hitch in his left leg that signaled the arrival of the evening damp. He was a man of quiet authority, a silhouette carved from granite and silver-streaked auburn. "You're late with the deliveries, Rory," Silas said, his voice a low rumble that didn't require her to look up to know he was speaking to her. "Yu-Fei had a rush. The spring rolls were flying out the door," she replied, sliding onto the stool. She watched his hand—the way the silver signet ring on his right hand caught the dim light as he worked. "Sit. Drink. You look like you've been running through a gale." She was about to decline when the bell above the door chimed. It wasn't the heavy, decisive ring of a regular; it was a hesitant, light sound. Rory didn't turn around, but she felt the shift in the room's pressure. A draft of cold, wet air swept in, followed by the heavy silence of someone standing uncertainly in the threshold. "Silas?" The voice hit Rory like a physical blow. It was a ghost. It was a memory of a summer in Cardiff, of laughter in rain-drenched parks and the shared, frantic energy of youth. Rory froze. Her heart, usually a steady, pragmatic engine, stuttered. She turned slowly, her bright blue eyes widening as they adjusted to the figure standing by the entrance. It was Eva. But it wasn't the Eva who had gripped her hand in a frantic, tearful goodbye in a Cardiff train station. That Eva had been all bright eyes and messy blonde curls, a girl who lived in the future. The woman standing under the green neon glow was a stranger composed of sharp edges and guarded stillness. Her hair was cut into a severe, chin-length bob, and her clothes—a tailored charcoal coat and silk scarf—spoke of a life lived in climate-controlled rooms and high-stakes boardrooms. Eva’s gaze swept the room, landing on the corner. When she saw Rory, her entire posture fractured. For a heartbeat, the polished veneer cracked, revealing a raw, hollowed-out panic. "Rory?" Eva whispered. The name sounded fragile, like glass about to shatter. Rory stood, her legs feeling uncharacteristically heavy. "Eva. I... I didn't know you were in London." "I moved here three years ago," Eva said, moving toward the bar. Her walk was different—stiffer, more deliberate, as if she were carrying an invisible weight. She sat on the stool beside Rory, leaving a deliberate, aching gap between them. "I didn't think I'd run into you. Not here." "The Nest is a small world," Rory said, her voice steadier than she felt. She reached for the menu, but her eyes were fixed on Eva’s hands. They were trembling, just slightly, hidden beneath the sleeves of her expensive coat. "You look... well," Eva said, though the word felt dishonest. She was scanning Rory, taking in the practical layers of her clothing, the tired set of her shoulders, the way she carried herself with the weary competence of someone who had learned to survive on her own terms. "You look like you've found your feet." "I found them," Rory said, a sudden, sharp bitterness rising in her throat. "It took some time. A lot of running." The mention of the running hung between them, heavy and unspoken. They both knew what she meant. They both knew about the shadow of Evan, the wreckage of the life Rory had fled, and the silent pact of distance they had maintained to keep their own lives from collapsing. "I heard about Cardiff," Eva said softly, her eyes dropping to the scarred wood of the bar. "I heard things were... difficult." "Difficult is a polite word for it," Rory replied. She looked at Silas, who had gone unnervingly still, watching them with the keen, detached observation of a man who had seen a thousand such reunions and knew the anatomy of every heartbreak. "But I'm okay. I'm working. I'm living." "And me?" Eva asked, looking up. Her eyes were rimmed with a fatigue that no amount of expensive skincare could mask. "I'm successful, Rory. I have the life we used to talk about when we were twenty. The London life. The career. The everything." "Is that what you wanted?" Rory asked. It wasn't an accusation, but it felt like one. Eva leaned back, a hollow laugh escaping her. "I don't know. Sometimes I feel like I'm just playing a part in a play I didn't audition for. Everything is so precise. So controlled. I spend my days managing people who have nothing to lose, and my nights wondering why I feel so empty." The silence that followed was thick, filled with the hum of the refrigerator and the distant muffled roar of Soho traffic. They were two versions of a shared past, colliding in a room built for secrets. The girl who had run away and the girl who had run toward everything, only to find it lacked substance. "I missed you," Eva said, her voice breaking. It was the most honest thing she had said. "When you left... it felt like the air went out of the room. I wanted to call, but I didn't know who you were anymore. You were a ghost even before you left." Rory felt a pang of regret so sharp it was almost physical. She thought of the letters she had started and never sent, the months of staring at her phone in her small flat above the bar, waiting for a sign that it was safe to reach back. "I couldn't come back, Eva," Rory said, her voice low. "If I had come back, I would have been pulled under. I had to become someone else. Someone who didn't need anyone." "And did you succeed?" Eva asked, her gaze searching Rory's face. Rory looked at her own reflection in the polished brass of the bar rail. She saw the intelligence in her blue eyes, the hardness in her jaw, the way she sat with a ready, defensive poise. She saw a woman who was capable, efficient, and profoundly alone. "I think so," Rory said. Silas cleared his throat, the sound cutting through the tension like a knife. He set a glass of amber liquid in front of Eva and a glass of water in front of Rory. "On the house," he said simply, his hazel eyes flickering between them for a fraction of a second before he returned to his work. It was an olive branch, offered with the practiced indifference of a man who knew when to intervene and when to let the ghosts settle. Eva took a sip of the drink, her eyes closing for a moment as the warmth hit her. When she opened them, the sharpness had returned, but the hardness had softened into something resembling grief. "We're not those girls anymore, are we?" Eva asked. "No," Rory said, reaching out—almost involuntarily—to brush her hand against Eva's sleeve. "We're much older than we feel." "And much more tired," Eva added. Rory nodded. She looked around the bar, at the maps of lost territories and the photographs of the forgotten. This place, the Nest, was a sanctuary for things that had been left behind. Perhaps that was why she had felt drawn to it. "Stay for a while," Rory said, the words surprising her. "Just for a drink. You don't have to be the person in the charcoal coat here. Nobody knows who you're supposed to be." Eva looked at the green neon light reflecting in the window, then back at Rory. For the first time in years, the tension in her shoulders seemed to yield, just a fraction. "Okay," Eva whispered. "Just for a drink." They sat in the dim light, two strangers bound by a history they could no longer inhabit, while the rain continued to wash the streets of Soho, trying, and failing, to cleanse the city of its ghosts.
created_at"2026-05-10T12:56:38.366Z" 5/10/2026, 12:56:38 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags21
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"Eva said softly [softly]"
1"he said simply [simply]"
dialogueSentences36
tagDensity0.583
leniency1
rawRatio0.095
effectiveRatio0.095
90.12% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1518
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
1
adverb"slightly"
count1
2
adverb"softly"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
1"slightly"
2"softly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
40.71% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1518
totalAiIsms18
found
0
word"chill"
count1
1
word"tracing"
count1
2
word"navigated"
count1
3
word"measured"
count1
4
word"rhythmic"
count1
5
word"silence"
count2
6
word"silk"
count1
7
word"fractured"
count1
8
word"weight"
count1
9
word"scanning"
count1
10
word"unspoken"
count1
11
word"pang"
count1
12
word"efficient"
count1
13
word"tension"
count2
14
word"warmth"
count1
15
word"sanctuary"
count1
highlights
0"chill"
1"tracing"
2"navigated"
3"measured"
4"rhythmic"
5"silence"
6"silk"
7"fractured"
8"weight"
9"scanning"
10"unspoken"
11"pang"
12"efficient"
13"tension"
14"warmth"
15"sanctuary"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences87
matches
0"a pang of regret"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences87
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences102
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen45
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1512
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions15
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
50.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions60
wordCount1209
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity1.99
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Rory24
Soho3
London1
Raven1
Nest2
Tuesday1
Silas5
Cardiff2
Eva20
Evan1
persons
0"Rory"
1"Raven"
2"Silas"
3"Eva"
4"Evan"
places
0"Soho"
1"London"
2"Cardiff"
globalScore0.507
windowScore0.5
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences73
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"felt like one"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1512
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences102
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs41
mean36.88
std22.07
cv0.599
sampleLengths
073
178
270
327
438
511
660
71
833
928
1087
1129
1212
1316
1449
1540
1655
1721
1849
1922
2049
2144
2216
2353
2456
2550
2648
2732
2811
2947
305
3182
3235
339
3418
356
3643
3733
3832
397
4037
89.13% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount4
totalSentences87
matches
0"been reshaped"
1"were fixed"
2"were rimmed"
3"been left"
44.24% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount5
totalVerbs214
matches
0"was methodically polishing"
1"was speaking"
2"were carrying"
3"were trembling"
4"was scanning"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount7
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences6
totalSentences102
ratio0.059
matches
0"She pulled her jacket tighter against the damp chill of a London evening, her thumb tracing the small, crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist—a mindless habit, a tactile anchor."
1"She watched his hand—the way the silver signet ring on his right hand caught the dim light as he worked."
2"It wasn't the heavy, decisive ring of a regular; it was a hesitant, light sound."
3"Her hair was cut into a severe, chin-length bob, and her clothes—a tailored charcoal coat and silk scarf—spoke of a life lived in climate-controlled rooms and high-stakes boardrooms."
4"Her walk was different—stiffer, more deliberate, as if she were carrying an invisible weight."
5"\"No,\" Rory said, reaching out—almost involuntarily—to brush her hand against Eva's sleeve."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1225
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small, crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount36
adverbRatio0.029387755102040815
lyAdverbCount15
lyAdverbRatio0.012244897959183673
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences102
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences102
mean14.82
std8.66
cv0.584
sampleLengths
024
120
229
38
418
512
626
714
819
913
1023
1115
1227
1318
1420
1511
1612
1715
1813
1920
201
218
224
2321
242
258
2618
273
2820
2918
3018
3128
329
338
3412
353
369
377
389
3912
4014
4114
429
4314
4413
4513
4610
4738
487
4913
46.73% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.30392156862745096
totalSentences102
uniqueOpeners31
42.74% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences78
matches
0"Perhaps that was why she"
ratio0.013
35.38% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount36
totalSentences78
matches
0"It cast a sickly, emerald"
1"She pulled her jacket tighter"
2"It was a place designed"
3"She found a corner stool,"
4"He didn't look up, but"
5"He was a man of"
6"she replied, sliding onto the"
7"She watched his hand—the way"
8"She was about to decline"
9"It wasn't the heavy, decisive"
10"It was a ghost."
11"It was a memory of"
12"Her heart, usually a steady,"
13"She turned slowly, her bright"
14"It was Eva."
15"Her hair was cut into"
16"Her walk was different—stiffer, more"
17"She sat on the stool"
18"She reached for the menu,"
19"They were trembling, just slightly,"
ratio0.462
4.87% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount71
totalSentences78
matches
0"The green neon sign above"
1"It cast a sickly, emerald"
2"She pulled her jacket tighter"
3"The Raven's Nest was quiet"
4"Rory navigated the dimly lit"
5"The walls were a collage"
6"It was a place designed"
7"She found a corner stool,"
8"He didn't look up, but"
9"Silas moved with a measured,"
10"He was a man of"
11"Silas said, his voice a"
12"she replied, sliding onto the"
13"She watched his hand—the way"
14"She was about to decline"
15"It wasn't the heavy, decisive"
16"Rory didn't turn around, but"
17"A draft of cold, wet"
18"The voice hit Rory like"
19"It was a ghost."
ratio0.91
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences78
matches(empty)
ratio0
58.82% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences51
technicalSentenceCount6
matches
0"The walls were a collage of history: sepia-toned photographs of faces long dead and faded maps of cities that had been reshaped by war and time."
1"Silas moved with a measured, rhythmic grace, despite the slight hitch in his left leg that signaled the arrival of the evening damp."
2"Her walk was different—stiffer, more deliberate, as if she were carrying an invisible weight."
3"She was scanning Rory, taking in the practical layers of her clothing, the tired set of her shoulders, the way she carried herself with the weary competence of …"
4"She looked at Silas, who had gone unnervingly still, watching them with the keen, detached observation of a man who had seen a thousand such reunions and knew t…"
5"She saw a woman who was capable, efficient, and profoundly alone."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags21
uselessAdditionCount7
matches
0"Rory said, her voice steadier than she felt"
1"Eva said, though the word felt dishonest"
2"Eva said softly, her eyes dropping to the scarred wood of the bar"
3"Eva said, her voice breaking"
4"Rory said, her voice low"
5"Eva asked, her gaze searching Rory's face"
6"Rory said, the words surprising her"
78.57% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags21
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"Eva whispered (whisper)"
1"Eva added (add)"
2"Eva whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences36
tagDensity0.583
leniency1
rawRatio0.143
effectiveRatio0.143
72.5105%