| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 1 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 1 | | tagDensity | 1 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 92.30% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1298 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1298 | | totalAiIsms | 29 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | | | 20 | | | 21 | | | 22 | | | 23 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "tapestry" | | 1 | "weight" | | 2 | "loomed" | | 3 | "silence" | | 4 | "pulsed" | | 5 | "swept away" | | 6 | "pulse" | | 7 | "rhythmic" | | 8 | "echoing" | | 9 | "vibrated" | | 10 | "flickered" | | 11 | "resonance" | | 12 | "warmth" | | 13 | "searing" | | 14 | "porcelain" | | 15 | "measured" | | 16 | "beacon" | | 17 | "crystal" | | 18 | "intensity" | | 19 | "silk" | | 20 | "looming" | | 21 | "electric" | | 22 | "throbbed" | | 23 | "traced" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 96 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 96 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 96 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 37 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1292 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 3 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 27 | | wordCount | 1291 | | uniqueNames | 13 | | maxNameDensity | 0.46 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 2 | | Park | 2 | | London | 2 | | Rory | 6 | | Golden | 1 | | Empress | 1 | | Fae | 1 | | Grove | 2 | | Heartstone | 6 | | Cardiff | 1 | | Evan | 1 | | Hel | 1 | | Heatstone | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Rory" | | 1 | "Empress" | | 2 | "Heartstone" | | 3 | "Evan" | | 4 | "Heatstone" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "London" | | 3 | "Golden" | | 4 | "Fae" | | 5 | "Grove" | | 6 | "Cardiff" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 81 | | glossingSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "quite remember, yet couldn't ignore" | | 1 | "branches that seemed to droop too low, their limbs stretching out like inquisitive fingers" | | 2 | "shadows that seemed to detach themselves from the trees and crawl across the grass toward her" | | 3 | "felt like a stretched membrane, pulled" | | 4 | "looked like ink spilled beneath the skin" |
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| 45.20% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 2 | | per1kWords | 1.548 | | wordCount | 1292 | | matches | | 0 | "not a word, but a change in the environment" | | 1 | "not at the figures, but at the tangled wall of roots" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 96 | | matches | | |
| 68.89% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 27 | | mean | 47.85 | | std | 18.72 | | cv | 0.391 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 66 | | 1 | 60 | | 2 | 33 | | 3 | 81 | | 4 | 57 | | 5 | 41 | | 6 | 4 | | 7 | 67 | | 8 | 19 | | 9 | 72 | | 10 | 52 | | 11 | 46 | | 12 | 12 | | 13 | 54 | | 14 | 69 | | 15 | 33 | | 16 | 56 | | 17 | 45 | | 18 | 39 | | 19 | 73 | | 20 | 52 | | 21 | 30 | | 22 | 46 | | 23 | 53 | | 24 | 31 | | 25 | 64 | | 26 | 37 |
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| 90.64% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 96 | | matches | | 0 | "being swept" | | 1 | "was bathed" | | 2 | "being watched" | | 3 | "being evaluated" | | 4 | "was gone" |
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| 0.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 7 | | totalVerbs | 206 | | matches | | 0 | "was radiating" | | 1 | "was getting" | | 2 | "was pulsing" | | 3 | "were knitting" | | 4 | "weren't hiding" | | 5 | "were standing" | | 6 | "was blistering" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 6 | | semicolonCount | 6 | | flaggedSentences | 10 | | totalSentences | 96 | | ratio | 0.104 | | matches | | 0 | "Wildflowers she didn't recognize—blooms that spiraled in impossible, fractal geometries—brushed against her ankles." | | 1 | "She wasn't being watched; she was being evaluated." | | 2 | "A shape—a tall, spindly thing—flickered in and out of focus." | | 3 | "The light it shed didn't illuminate; it revealed." | | 4 | "Seven of them—or perhaps it was one thing that moved with such speed it tricked the eye into multiplication." | | 5 | "The tearing sound resumed, louder now, coming from everywhere at once—above, below, inside her own head." | | 6 | "They were no longer arranged in a perimeter; they had spun themselves into a cage, their interlocking roots forming a dense, impenetrable weave." | | 7 | "It wasn't just a pendant; it was a beacon, a key." | | 8 | "The light didn't hit the wood; it passed through it like a blade through silk." | | 9 | "The crescent-shaped scar was no longer just a scar; it was angry, inflamed, and traced with thin, black lines that looked like ink spilled beneath the skin, slowly creeping toward her elbow." |
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| 82.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1305 | | adjectiveStacks | 3 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "small crescent-shaped scar" | | 1 | "searing hot against her" | | 2 | "above, below, inside her" |
| | adverbCount | 42 | | adverbRatio | 0.03218390804597701 | | lyAdverbCount | 10 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.007662835249042145 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 96 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 96 | | mean | 13.46 | | std | 7.58 | | cv | 0.563 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 13 | | 1 | 22 | | 2 | 13 | | 3 | 18 | | 4 | 14 | | 5 | 26 | | 6 | 20 | | 7 | 5 | | 8 | 18 | | 9 | 4 | | 10 | 6 | | 11 | 14 | | 12 | 17 | | 13 | 9 | | 14 | 22 | | 15 | 19 | | 16 | 14 | | 17 | 14 | | 18 | 29 | | 19 | 9 | | 20 | 13 | | 21 | 10 | | 22 | 9 | | 23 | 4 | | 24 | 7 | | 25 | 20 | | 26 | 2 | | 27 | 26 | | 28 | 12 | | 29 | 1 | | 30 | 18 | | 31 | 12 | | 32 | 8 | | 33 | 14 | | 34 | 10 | | 35 | 28 | | 36 | 12 | | 37 | 10 | | 38 | 30 | | 39 | 9 | | 40 | 10 | | 41 | 27 | | 42 | 3 | | 43 | 9 | | 44 | 12 | | 45 | 3 | | 46 | 24 | | 47 | 8 | | 48 | 7 | | 49 | 7 |
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| 30.21% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 19 | | diversityRatio | 0.28125 | | totalSentences | 96 | | uniqueOpeners | 27 | |
| 71.68% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 93 | | matches | | 0 | "Then, the sound started." | | 1 | "Just the swaying of branches" |
| | ratio | 0.022 | |
| 35.05% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 43 | | totalSentences | 93 | | matches | | 0 | "It smelled of ozone and" | | 1 | "She adjusted the weight of" | | 2 | "She touched the small crescent-shaped" | | 3 | "They were ancient oaks, gnarled" | | 4 | "It was an absolute, suffocating" | | 5 | "She pulled the Heartstone pendant" | | 6 | "It pulsed with a faint," | | 7 | "She knew the physics of" | | 8 | "She walked further in, the" | | 9 | "It was getting warmer, hotter," | | 10 | "It wasn't a growl or" | | 11 | "It was the sound of" | | 12 | "She willed her heartbeat to" | | 13 | "She turned slowly, her gaze" | | 14 | "She took another step, and" | | 15 | "She wasn't being watched; she" | | 16 | "She looked to her left," | | 17 | "It had the suggestion of" | | 18 | "She took a step backward," | | 19 | "Her voice sounded thin, alien," |
| | ratio | 0.462 | |
| 35.27% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 79 | | totalSentences | 93 | | matches | | 0 | "The air in Richmond Park" | | 1 | "It smelled of ozone and" | | 2 | "She adjusted the weight of" | | 3 | "The restaurant was hours behind" | | 4 | "She touched the small crescent-shaped" | | 5 | "The standing stones loomed ahead." | | 6 | "They were ancient oaks, gnarled" | | 7 | "This was the boundary." | | 8 | "The entrance to the Fae" | | 9 | "Rory stepped over the threshold," | | 10 | "It was an absolute, suffocating" | | 11 | "She pulled the Heartstone pendant" | | 12 | "The silver chain felt cold" | | 13 | "It pulsed with a faint," | | 14 | "She knew the physics of" | | 15 | "An hour here could be" | | 16 | "That thought made her breath" | | 17 | "The grove was bathed in" | | 18 | "Wildflowers she didn't recognize—blooms that" | | 19 | "She walked further in, the" |
| | ratio | 0.849 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 93 | | matches | | 0 | "If she ran, she would" | | 1 | "To trigger their pursuit was" | | 2 | "If it pulsed in the" |
| | ratio | 0.032 | |
| 16.13% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 62 | | technicalSentenceCount | 11 | | matches | | 0 | "She touched the small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist, a nervous habit that ground her back to the present." | | 1 | "The silver chain felt cold against her collarbone, but the crimson gem itself was radiating a heat that prickled against her skin." | | 2 | "Wildflowers she didn't recognize—blooms that spiraled in impossible, fractal geometries—brushed against her ankles." | | 3 | "She willed her heartbeat to slow, calling upon the cool-headed logic that had kept her sane through her years in Cardiff and her flight from Evan." | | 4 | "Just the swaying of branches that seemed to droop too low, their limbs stretching out like inquisitive fingers." | | 5 | "The pressure in her ears increased, a low-frequency hum that vibrated in her teeth." | | 6 | "The Heartstone was pulsing frantically now, the deep crimson light casting frantic shadows that seemed to detach themselves from the trees and crawl across the …" | | 7 | "The path she had forged through the wildflowers had already sealed itself, the stems rising and intertwining as if the ground were knitting itself together behi…" | | 8 | "Yu-Fei used to say that the most dangerous traps were the ones that convinced you they were solid." | | 9 | "She felt a sensation like static shock, a jarring jolt that numbed her entire left side, from her shoulder down to the crescent scar on her wrist." | | 10 | "The crescent-shaped scar was no longer just a scar; it was angry, inflamed, and traced with thin, black lines that looked like ink spilled beneath the skin, slo…" |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 1 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 1 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 1 | | tagDensity | 1 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 1 | | effectiveRatio | 1 | |