| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 13 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "she said quietly [quietly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 21 | | tagDensity | 0.619 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.077 | | effectiveRatio | 0.077 | |
| 84.16% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1263 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 4 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "precisely" | | 1 | "really" | | 2 | "slightly" | | 3 | "utterly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 20.82% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1263 | | totalAiIsms | 20 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "flickered" | | 1 | "rhythmic" | | 2 | "mechanical" | | 3 | "tapestry" | | 4 | "tracing" | | 5 | "scanning" | | 6 | "silence" | | 7 | "gloom" | | 8 | "weight" | | 9 | "profound" | | 10 | "intensity" | | 11 | "chilling" | | 12 | "predictable" | | 13 | "shattered" | | 14 | "flicker" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 64 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 64 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 72 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 47 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1255 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 16 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 83.33% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 36 | | wordCount | 1021 | | uniqueNames | 14 | | maxNameDensity | 1.08 | | worstName | "Leo" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Leo" | | discoveredNames | | Raven | 1 | | Nest | 2 | | Soho | 1 | | Golden | 1 | | Empress | 1 | | Silas | 4 | | Rory | 9 | | October | 1 | | Savile | 1 | | Row | 1 | | Cardiff | 1 | | Leo | 11 | | Evan | 1 | | London | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Raven" | | 1 | "Nest" | | 2 | "Empress" | | 3 | "Silas" | | 4 | "Rory" | | 5 | "Leo" | | 6 | "Evan" |
| | places | | 0 | "Soho" | | 1 | "Cardiff" | | 2 | "London" |
| | globalScore | 0.961 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 59.09% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 55 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "as if trying to occupy the smallest possible amount of space" | | 1 | "felt like a costume she no longer knew" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1255 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 72 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 29 | | mean | 43.28 | | std | 27.91 | | cv | 0.645 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 94 | | 1 | 89 | | 2 | 80 | | 3 | 40 | | 4 | 1 | | 5 | 49 | | 6 | 39 | | 7 | 27 | | 8 | 57 | | 9 | 39 | | 10 | 12 | | 11 | 38 | | 12 | 51 | | 13 | 59 | | 14 | 9 | | 15 | 68 | | 16 | 93 | | 17 | 9 | | 18 | 43 | | 19 | 46 | | 20 | 15 | | 21 | 91 | | 22 | 6 | | 23 | 41 | | 24 | 45 | | 25 | 20 | | 26 | 22 | | 27 | 5 | | 28 | 67 |
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| 99.78% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 64 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 6 | | totalVerbs | 168 | | matches | | 0 | "was still wearing" | | 1 | "was polishing" | | 2 | "was offering" | | 3 | "was seeing" | | 4 | "wasn't seeing" | | 5 | "was finally learning" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 7 | | semicolonCount | 2 | | flaggedSentences | 8 | | totalSentences | 72 | | ratio | 0.111 | | matches | | 0 | "He didn't speak; he didn't have to." | | 1 | "For a moment, the noise of the bar—the low murmur of two regulars in the corner, the clink of ice—faded into a vacuum." | | 2 | "He looked at her—really looked at her." | | 3 | "He believed in the trajectory of a life—that you start at point A, work hard, and arrive at point B." | | 4 | "Leo’s expression softened, the arrogance slipping away to reveal a flicker of the boy she had once loved—or perhaps the boy she had hoped to be like." | | 5 | "To Leo, she was a tragedy—a wasted talent, a fallen star." | | 6 | "Rory looked at him—at the charcoal coat, the polished shoes, the absolute conviction that he was offering her a lifeline." | | 7 | "She realized then that he wasn't seeing her at all; he was seeing a puzzle with a missing piece that he felt compelled to fix." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1032 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "small, crescent-shaped scar" |
| | adverbCount | 35 | | adverbRatio | 0.03391472868217054 | | lyAdverbCount | 9 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.00872093023255814 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 72 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 72 | | mean | 17.43 | | std | 10.33 | | cv | 0.592 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 24 | | 1 | 21 | | 2 | 22 | | 3 | 27 | | 4 | 24 | | 5 | 17 | | 6 | 18 | | 7 | 7 | | 8 | 23 | | 9 | 26 | | 10 | 23 | | 11 | 31 | | 12 | 10 | | 13 | 14 | | 14 | 16 | | 15 | 1 | | 16 | 18 | | 17 | 8 | | 18 | 23 | | 19 | 3 | | 20 | 36 | | 21 | 3 | | 22 | 24 | | 23 | 16 | | 24 | 7 | | 25 | 34 | | 26 | 4 | | 27 | 35 | | 28 | 12 | | 29 | 20 | | 30 | 5 | | 31 | 13 | | 32 | 19 | | 33 | 32 | | 34 | 10 | | 35 | 6 | | 36 | 43 | | 37 | 9 | | 38 | 4 | | 39 | 18 | | 40 | 46 | | 41 | 16 | | 42 | 9 | | 43 | 7 | | 44 | 11 | | 45 | 20 | | 46 | 30 | | 47 | 9 | | 48 | 16 | | 49 | 27 |
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| 36.11% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 10 | | diversityRatio | 0.2638888888888889 | | totalSentences | 72 | | uniqueOpeners | 19 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 58 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 13.10% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 30 | | totalSentences | 58 | | matches | | 0 | "She was still wearing her" | | 1 | "He was polishing a highball" | | 2 | "He didn't speak; he didn't" | | 3 | "He knew Rory’s silence wasn't" | | 4 | "He was dressed in a" | | 5 | "He paused, blinking against the" | | 6 | "She recognized the tilt of" | | 7 | "It had been four years," | | 8 | "She felt the sudden, instinctive" | | 9 | "Her voice sounded thin, a" | | 10 | "He stopped a few feet" | | 11 | "He looked at her—really looked" | | 12 | "He saw the frayed edges" | | 13 | "she said, her voice gaining" | | 14 | "He stepped closer, the scent" | | 15 | "she lied, the words tasting" | | 16 | "He looked around the bar," | | 17 | "It wasn't just the clothes" | | 18 | "It was the certainty in" | | 19 | "He believed in the trajectory" |
| | ratio | 0.517 | |
| 20.34% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 51 | | totalSentences | 58 | | matches | | 0 | "The green neon sign of" | | 1 | "Aurora sat at the far" | | 2 | "She was still wearing her" | | 3 | "He was polishing a highball" | | 4 | "The silver signet ring on" | | 5 | "He didn't speak; he didn't" | | 6 | "He knew Rory’s silence wasn't" | | 7 | "The door creaked open, admitting" | | 8 | "He was dressed in a" | | 9 | "He paused, blinking against the" | | 10 | "Rory felt a cold spike" | | 11 | "She recognized the tilt of" | | 12 | "It had been four years," | | 13 | "The voice was richer than" | | 14 | "Leo stepped forward, his gaze" | | 15 | "Rory didn't move." | | 16 | "She felt the sudden, instinctive" | | 17 | "Her voice sounded thin, a" | | 18 | "He stopped a few feet" | | 19 | "He looked at her—really looked" |
| | ratio | 0.879 | |
| 86.21% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 58 | | matches | | | ratio | 0.017 | |
| 35.71% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 40 | | technicalSentenceCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "Behind the bar, Silas moved with a practiced, economical grace, despite the slight, hitching limp in his left leg that punctuated every third step." | | 1 | "He was dressed in a charcoal wool overcoat that screamed Savile Row, his hair precisely groomed, his expression one of mild, aristocratic curiosity." | | 2 | "He paused, blinking against the dimness, his eyes roaming over the walls covered in yellowed nautical maps and grainy black-and-white photographs of cities that…" | | 3 | "She felt the sudden, instinctive urge to pull her sleeve down further over her left wrist, hiding the small, crescent-shaped scar that remained a permanent souv…" | | 4 | "He saw the frayed edges of her jacket, the tired shadows beneath her bright blue eyes, and the way she shrank into herself, as if trying to occupy the smallest …" | | 5 | "He didn't understand the violent redirection of a life shattered by a man who knew exactly how to break a person without leaving a bruise that the world could s…" |
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| 9.62% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 13 | | uselessAdditionCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "she said, her voice gaining a brittle edge" | | 1 | "Leo reached out, his hand hovering near her shoulder but not touching" | | 2 | "she said, her voice steady for the first time" |
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| 25.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 12 | | fancyCount | 3 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "he whispered (whisper)" | | 1 | "she lied (lie)" | | 2 | "he murmured (murmur)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 21 | | tagDensity | 0.571 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.25 | | effectiveRatio | 0.25 | |