| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 1 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 1 | | tagDensity | 1 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 96.17% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1307 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 1 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 8.19% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1307 | | totalAiIsms | 24 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "silk" | | 1 | "rhythmic" | | 2 | "tracing" | | 3 | "warmth" | | 4 | "silence" | | 5 | "echoed" | | 6 | "scanned" | | 7 | "searing" | | 8 | "mechanical" | | 9 | "sense of" | | 10 | "weight" | | 11 | "predator" | | 12 | "familiar" | | 13 | "imposing" | | 14 | "pulse" | | 15 | "velvet" | | 16 | "comforting" | | 17 | "shimmered" | | 18 | "pulsed" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 111 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 39.90% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 7 | | narrationSentences | 111 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | 0 | "began to" | | 1 | "tried to" | | 2 | "seemed to" |
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| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 111 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 37 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 5 | | markdownWords | 24 | | totalWords | 1300 | | ratio | 0.018 | | matches | | 0 | "Stay cool, Rory," | | 1 | "It’s just an atmospheric shift. A localized pocket. It’s science. Or... physics. Something." | | 2 | "Slap. Slide. Slap. Slide." | | 3 | "were" | | 4 | "Rory... Rory... Rory..." |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 3 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 17 | | wordCount | 1298 | | uniqueNames | 8 | | maxNameDensity | 0.46 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 2 | | Park | 2 | | London | 1 | | Heartstone | 2 | | Pendant | 1 | | Fae | 1 | | Grove | 2 | | Aurora | 6 |
| | persons | | | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "London" | | 3 | "Fae" | | 4 | "Grove" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 76 | | glossingSentenceCount | 7 | | matches | | 0 | "felt like a comfort, a heavy, wet blank" | | 1 | "sounded like something heavy being dragged" | | 2 | "felt like being observed by something t" | | 3 | "looked like bruised skin" | | 4 | "sounded like a dozen people whispering the" | | 5 | "looked like hallucinations" | | 6 | "felt like a physical blow to her ribs" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.769 | | wordCount | 1300 | | matches | | 0 | "not the scent of earth and rain, but a cloying, sickly sweetness, like lilies left to rot in stag" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 111 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 37 | | mean | 35.14 | | std | 21.17 | | cv | 0.603 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 50 | | 1 | 77 | | 2 | 6 | | 3 | 52 | | 4 | 50 | | 5 | 14 | | 6 | 74 | | 7 | 16 | | 8 | 19 | | 9 | 63 | | 10 | 2 | | 11 | 50 | | 12 | 27 | | 13 | 36 | | 14 | 20 | | 15 | 13 | | 16 | 33 | | 17 | 47 | | 18 | 60 | | 19 | 40 | | 20 | 39 | | 21 | 17 | | 22 | 3 | | 23 | 64 | | 24 | 50 | | 25 | 49 | | 26 | 9 | | 27 | 51 | | 28 | 27 | | 29 | 50 | | 30 | 44 | | 31 | 3 | | 32 | 19 | | 33 | 33 | | 34 | 65 | | 35 | 14 | | 36 | 14 |
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| 83.14% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 7 | | totalSentences | 111 | | matches | | 0 | "being drowned" | | 1 | "were severed" | | 2 | "being dragged" | | 3 | "being observed" | | 4 | "been finished" | | 5 | "been lined" | | 6 | "was broken" |
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| 0.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 9 | | totalVerbs | 207 | | matches | | 0 | "was waking" | | 1 | "were breathing" | | 2 | "were turning" | | 3 | "weren't just swaying" | | 4 | "were pivoting" | | 5 | "wasn't coming" | | 6 | "was coming" | | 7 | "were standing" | | 8 | "were standing" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 7 | | semicolonCount | 8 | | flaggedSentences | 13 | | totalSentences | 111 | | ratio | 0.117 | | matches | | 0 | "It wasn't just the moisture; it was a thickness, a visceral quality to the atmosphere that made every breath feel like swallowing silk." | | 1 | "The logical part of her brain—the part that had once parsed legal precedents and studied the rigid structures of contract law—told her that a woman walking through a dark park at midnight was a target." | | 2 | "The boundary wasn't a wall, but a seam, and as she stepped between the massive, gnarled trunks, the sounds of the city—the distant hum of the M4, the far-off siren—simply ceased." | | 3 | "They didn't fade; they were severed." | | 4 | "They didn't stretch away from the faint, bioluminescent glow of the flora; they seemed to pool toward her, gathering in the hollows of the roots like spilled ink." | | 5 | "The petals weren't just swaying; they were turning." | | 6 | "It wasn't the feeling of a predator watching prey—that would have been a familiar, adrenaline-spiked terror." | | 7 | "The smell hit her then—not the scent of earth and rain, but a cloying, sickly sweetness, like lilies left to rot in stagnant water." | | 8 | "The light from the crimson stone was no longer a glow; it was a rhythmic strobe, casting long, jerking shadows across the clearing." | | 9 | "They were shapes—tall, spindly things that lacked any discernible features, as if they were sketches of people that hadn't been finished." | | 10 | "They didn't move toward her; they simply *were* closer every time the light died and returned." | | 11 | "She couldn't scream; her throat felt as though it had been lined with velvet, stifling any sound." | | 12 | "They didn't walk; they tilted, their bodies defying the physics of gravity." |
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| 88.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1309 | | adjectiveStacks | 2 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "small, crescent-shaped scar" | | 1 | "familiar, adrenaline-spiked terror." |
| | adverbCount | 52 | | adverbRatio | 0.03972498090145149 | | lyAdverbCount | 13 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.009931245225362872 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 111 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 111 | | mean | 11.71 | | std | 8.43 | | cv | 0.72 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 21 | | 1 | 6 | | 2 | 23 | | 3 | 21 | | 4 | 6 | | 5 | 35 | | 6 | 15 | | 7 | 6 | | 8 | 21 | | 9 | 7 | | 10 | 24 | | 11 | 13 | | 12 | 31 | | 13 | 6 | | 14 | 14 | | 15 | 9 | | 16 | 12 | | 17 | 17 | | 18 | 5 | | 19 | 31 | | 20 | 16 | | 21 | 6 | | 22 | 5 | | 23 | 3 | | 24 | 2 | | 25 | 1 | | 26 | 1 | | 27 | 1 | | 28 | 26 | | 29 | 9 | | 30 | 28 | | 31 | 2 | | 32 | 16 | | 33 | 2 | | 34 | 21 | | 35 | 3 | | 36 | 8 | | 37 | 5 | | 38 | 4 | | 39 | 14 | | 40 | 1 | | 41 | 1 | | 42 | 1 | | 43 | 1 | | 44 | 7 | | 45 | 16 | | 46 | 13 | | 47 | 5 | | 48 | 15 | | 49 | 2 |
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| 38.14% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 16 | | diversityRatio | 0.3153153153153153 | | totalSentences | 111 | | uniqueOpeners | 35 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 95 | | matches | | 0 | "Only the swaying of the" | | 1 | "Then came the sound again." | | 2 | "Only the sliding sound, which" | | 3 | "Slowly, with the mechanical precision" |
| | ratio | 0.042 | |
| 51.58% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 40 | | totalSentences | 95 | | matches | | 0 | "It wasn't just the moisture;" | | 1 | "She shouldn't have come here" | | 2 | "She reached into her jacket," | | 3 | "It radiated a low, pulsing" | | 4 | "They didn't fade; they were" | | 5 | "They shouldn't have been there." | | 6 | "It was late autumn, the" | | 7 | "She stood still, her heart" | | 8 | "*It’s just an atmospheric shift." | | 9 | "She tried to focus on" | | 10 | "They didn't stretch away from" | | 11 | "She scanned the treeline, her" | | 12 | "It sounded like something heavy" | | 13 | "She gripped the pendant, her" | | 14 | "she called out" | | 15 | "Her voice sounded thin, stripped" | | 16 | "She began to back away," | | 17 | "She kept her eyes fixed" | | 18 | "It wasn't the feeling of" | | 19 | "It felt like being observed" |
| | ratio | 0.421 | |
| 70.53% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 74 | | totalSentences | 95 | | matches | | 0 | "The dampness of Richmond Park" | | 1 | "It wasn't just the moisture;" | | 2 | "Aurora pushed a stray lock" | | 3 | "She shouldn't have come here" | | 4 | "The logical part of her" | | 5 | "The Heartstone Pendant was waking" | | 6 | "She reached into her jacket," | | 7 | "The crimson gemstone was no" | | 8 | "It radiated a low, pulsing" | | 9 | "The boundary wasn't a wall," | | 10 | "They didn't fade; they were" | | 11 | "Silence rushed into her ears," | | 12 | "Aurora stepped into the clearing" | | 13 | "They shouldn't have been there." | | 14 | "It was late autumn, the" | | 15 | "She stood still, her heart" | | 16 | "*It’s just an atmospheric shift." | | 17 | "A localized pocket." | | 18 | "She tried to focus on" | | 19 | "The shadows cast by the" |
| | ratio | 0.779 | |
| 52.63% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 95 | | matches | | 0 | "Even in the absence of" |
| | ratio | 0.011 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 57 | | technicalSentenceCount | 12 | | matches | | 0 | "The dampness of Richmond Park usually felt like a comfort, a heavy, wet blanket that muffled the distant roar of London." | | 1 | "It wasn't just the moisture; it was a thickness, a visceral quality to the atmosphere that made every breath feel like swallowing silk." | | 2 | "The logical part of her brain—the part that had once parsed legal precedents and studied the rigid structures of contract law—told her that a woman walking thro…" | | 3 | "She reached into her jacket, her thumb tracing the small, crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist before finding the silver chain." | | 4 | "It was late autumn, the ground should have been a graveyard of dead leaves and frost, yet these petals were soft, fleshy, and looked as though they were breathi…" | | 5 | "She tried to focus on the ground, on the concrete reality of her boots pressing into the soil, but her eyes kept drifting to the periphery." | | 6 | "The crimson gem flared, a sudden burst of light that illuminated the immediate circle around her." | | 7 | "It wasn't the feeling of a predator watching prey—that would have been a familiar, adrenaline-spiked terror." | | 8 | "It felt like being observed by something that found her existence curious, like a child looking at an insect under a glass." | | 9 | "It left a trail of dim, shimmering light in its wake, a wake that looked like bruised skin." | | 10 | "The warmth was now an agitation, a frantic vibration that made her chest ache." | | 11 | "The Heartstone pulsed one last time, a blinding, violent burst of crimson that felt like a physical blow to her ribs." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 1 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |