| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 1 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 1 | | tagDensity | 1 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 85.77% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1405 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 4 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "truly" | | 1 | "suddenly" | | 2 | "slowly" | | 3 | "slightly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.36% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1405 | | totalAiIsms | 28 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "navigated" | | 1 | "silence" | | 2 | "sanctuary" | | 3 | "velvet" | | 4 | "weight" | | 5 | "scanned" | | 6 | "footsteps" | | 7 | "oppressive" | | 8 | "chill" | | 9 | "tracing" | | 10 | "echoing" | | 11 | "warmth" | | 12 | "throb" | | 13 | "racing" | | 14 | "beacon" | | 15 | "gloom" | | 16 | "pulsed" | | 17 | "depths" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 99 | | matches | | |
| 56.28% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 6 | | narrationSentences | 99 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 99 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 36 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 1 | | markdownWords | 9 | | totalWords | 1398 | | ratio | 0.006 | | matches | | 0 | "You brought a light into the dark, little bird." |
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| 41.67% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 3 | | unquotedAttributions | 1 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 28 | | wordCount | 1397 | | uniqueNames | 8 | | maxNameDensity | 0.79 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 2 | | Park | 2 | | Rory | 11 | | Grove | 6 | | London | 2 | | Heartstone | 3 | | Evan | 1 | | Silas | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Rory" | | 1 | "Grove" | | 2 | "Evan" | | 3 | "Silas" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "London" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 86 | | glossingSentenceCount | 9 | | matches | | 0 | "felt like a sanctuary—a pocket of impos" | | 1 | "felt like a held breath" | | 2 | "emerald that seemed to vibrate against the dark velvet of the night sky" | | 3 | "felt like a dead weight, a piece of col" | | 4 | "looked like wet parchment" | | 5 | "felt like it was stretching" | | 6 | "as if listening to the vibration of her fear" | | 7 | "sounded like a dry branch snapping" | | 8 | "felt like wet leather, and with a final" |
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| 56.94% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 2 | | per1kWords | 1.431 | | wordCount | 1398 | | matches | | 0 | "not leaping, but flowing, its weight barely registering as the limbs swayed" | | 1 | "Not with its usual warmth, but with a violent, pulsing heat" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 99 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 33 | | mean | 42.36 | | std | 22.42 | | cv | 0.529 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 94 | | 1 | 17 | | 2 | 81 | | 3 | 71 | | 4 | 53 | | 5 | 21 | | 6 | 46 | | 7 | 19 | | 8 | 52 | | 9 | 14 | | 10 | 41 | | 11 | 58 | | 12 | 35 | | 13 | 45 | | 14 | 51 | | 15 | 47 | | 16 | 54 | | 17 | 5 | | 18 | 73 | | 19 | 43 | | 20 | 28 | | 21 | 10 | | 22 | 24 | | 23 | 74 | | 24 | 24 | | 25 | 31 | | 26 | 26 | | 27 | 9 | | 28 | 65 | | 29 | 65 | | 30 | 21 | | 31 | 48 | | 32 | 53 |
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| 84.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 6 | | totalSentences | 99 | | matches | | 0 | "been watched" | | 1 | "being dragged" | | 2 | "was gone" | | 3 | "been, stretched" | | 4 | "were sunk" | | 5 | "was gone" |
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| 0.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 10 | | totalVerbs | 222 | | matches | | 0 | "was screaming" | | 1 | "was folding" | | 2 | "was echoing" | | 3 | "were shifting" | | 4 | "was reacting" | | 5 | "wasn't reacting" | | 6 | "was stretching" | | 7 | "was slipping" | | 8 | "wasn't standing" | | 9 | "were emerging" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 7 | | semicolonCount | 5 | | flaggedSentences | 11 | | totalSentences | 99 | | ratio | 0.111 | | matches | | 0 | "Usually, the Grove felt like a sanctuary—a pocket of impossible color and stillness where the noise of London faded into a distant hum." | | 1 | "It didn't feel like peace; it felt like a held breath." | | 2 | "A sound broke the silence—a wet, sliding noise, like a heavy piece of raw meat being dragged across stone." | | 3 | "She reached for her wrist, her fingers tracing the small crescent-shaped scar there—a nervous habit from childhood that had never truly left her." | | 4 | "The sanctuary had turned into a trap, and the intuitive part of her brain—the part that had kept her alive through the wreckage of her past—was screaming at her to move." | | 5 | "It wasn't just one source anymore; it was echoing, coming from the left, then the right, then from somewhere directly above her." | | 6 | "It wasn't reacting to a portal; it was reacting to a presence." | | 7 | "Every time she glanced sideways, she saw it—a silhouette, long-limbed and distorted, keeping pace with her just beyond the veil of the trees." | | 8 | "It didn't run; it simply existed in the space beside her, appearing and disappearing with every blink of her eyes." | | 9 | "It had no face—only a smooth, pale expanse of skin where features should have been, stretched tight over a narrow skull." | | 10 | "It didn't use a voice; the words formed directly inside her mind, a cold, echoing rasp that tasted of copper and old earth." |
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| 86.09% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1407 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "typical faint inner glow." |
| | adverbCount | 69 | | adverbRatio | 0.04904051172707889 | | lyAdverbCount | 26 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.01847903340440654 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 99 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 99 | | mean | 14.12 | | std | 7.91 | | cv | 0.56 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 15 | | 1 | 25 | | 2 | 31 | | 3 | 23 | | 4 | 6 | | 5 | 11 | | 6 | 15 | | 7 | 8 | | 8 | 31 | | 9 | 27 | | 10 | 11 | | 11 | 12 | | 12 | 15 | | 13 | 7 | | 14 | 26 | | 15 | 4 | | 16 | 16 | | 17 | 33 | | 18 | 6 | | 19 | 1 | | 20 | 14 | | 21 | 18 | | 22 | 28 | | 23 | 19 | | 24 | 2 | | 25 | 15 | | 26 | 11 | | 27 | 11 | | 28 | 8 | | 29 | 5 | | 30 | 4 | | 31 | 10 | | 32 | 18 | | 33 | 11 | | 34 | 12 | | 35 | 6 | | 36 | 23 | | 37 | 18 | | 38 | 11 | | 39 | 4 | | 40 | 31 | | 41 | 14 | | 42 | 24 | | 43 | 7 | | 44 | 8 | | 45 | 11 | | 46 | 10 | | 47 | 22 | | 48 | 3 | | 49 | 8 |
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| 33.84% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 16 | | diversityRatio | 0.29292929292929293 | | totalSentences | 99 | | uniqueOpeners | 29 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 5 | | totalSentences | 97 | | matches | | 0 | "Usually, the Grove felt like" | | 1 | "Just the iridescent petals of" | | 2 | "Just the sound of her" | | 3 | "Slowly, Rory looked toward the" | | 4 | "Then, it spoke." |
| | ratio | 0.052 | |
| 55.05% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 40 | | totalSentences | 97 | | matches | | 0 | "She navigated the dense thickets" | | 1 | "She had come to the" | | 2 | "It didn't feel like peace;" | | 3 | "She stopped in the center" | | 4 | "She reached up to touch" | | 5 | "She turned in a slow" | | 6 | "She began to walk toward" | | 7 | "She had come here to" | | 8 | "She held her breath, her" | | 9 | "She waited, her heart drumming" | | 10 | "It was an expectant silence." | | 11 | "she called out" | | 12 | "Her voice sounded thin, swallowed" | | 13 | "It had been too fast" | | 14 | "She reached for her wrist," | | 15 | "She told herself it was" | | 16 | "She decided to leave." | | 17 | "She began to walk faster," | | 18 | "It wasn't just one source" | | 19 | "She looked up." |
| | ratio | 0.412 | |
| 52.78% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 79 | | totalSentences | 97 | | matches | | 0 | "The humidity of the Richmond" | | 1 | "She navigated the dense thickets" | | 2 | "She had come to the" | | 3 | "Tonight, the silence was too" | | 4 | "It didn't feel like peace;" | | 5 | "Rory stepped between two of" | | 6 | "The scent of damp earth" | | 7 | "The colors of the Grove" | | 8 | "She stopped in the center" | | 9 | "She reached up to touch" | | 10 | "The deep crimson gem was" | | 11 | "That was the first ripple" | | 12 | "The pendant usually simmered with" | | 13 | "Rory scanned the perimeter." | | 14 | "The towering oaks leaned inward," | | 15 | "The stillness was absolute, yet" | | 16 | "She turned in a slow" | | 17 | "She began to walk toward" | | 18 | "She had come here to" | | 19 | "A sound broke the silence—a" |
| | ratio | 0.814 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 97 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 10.20% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 70 | | technicalSentenceCount | 13 | | matches | | 0 | "The scent of damp earth and decaying leaves vanished, replaced instantly by the cloying, honeyed fragrance of wildflowers that should not have been blooming in …" | | 1 | "The colors of the Grove were vivid, almost aggressive, the grass a shade of emerald that seemed to vibrate against the dark velvet of the night sky." | | 2 | "She reached for her wrist, her fingers tracing the small crescent-shaped scar there—a nervous habit from childhood that had never truly left her." | | 3 | "The sanctuary had turned into a trap, and the intuitive part of her brain—the part that had kept her alive through the wreckage of her past—was screaming at her…" | | 4 | "She couldn't see a face, only the occasional glimpse of pale, translucent skin that looked like wet parchment." | | 5 | "The impact knocked the wind from her lungs, leaving her gasping on the iridescent grass." | | 6 | "It was tall, impossibly thin, its limbs elongated and bent at angles that defied anatomy." | | 7 | "It simply stood there, leaning slightly to one side, as if listening to the vibration of her fear." | | 8 | "The Heartstone pulsed one last time, a blinding flash of crimson that illuminated the creature for a fraction of a second." | | 9 | "Its long, needle-like fingers were sunk deep into the soil, and dozens of other pale hands were emerging from the grass around her, reaching upward, their finge…" | | 10 | "She kicked blindly, her boot connecting with something that felt like wet leather, and with a final, desperate surge of adrenaline, she threw herself through th…" | | 11 | "She lay there for a long time, shivering, her chest heaving." | | 12 | "As she stood up to walk back toward the city, she noticed a smudge of grey, translucent slime on the heel of her boot, and the faint, lingering scent of wildflo…" |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 1 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |