| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 3 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 4 | | tagDensity | 0.75 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 93.11% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1452 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.14% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1452 | | totalAiIsms | 29 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "predictable" | | 1 | "oppressive" | | 2 | "silence" | | 3 | "chill" | | 4 | "whisper" | | 5 | "pulse" | | 6 | "standard" | | 7 | "rhythmic" | | 8 | "velvet" | | 9 | "sense of" | | 10 | "warmth" | | 11 | "searing" | | 12 | "dancing" | | 13 | "synchronized" | | 14 | "flicker" | | 15 | "perfect" | | 16 | "stomach" | | 17 | "churn" | | 18 | "echoed" | | 19 | "crystallized" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 110 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 64.94% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 6 | | narrationSentences | 110 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 111 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 37 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 7 | | markdownWords | 21 | | totalWords | 1445 | | ratio | 0.015 | | matches | | 0 | "It’s just the wind," | | 1 | "The topography is just playing tricks on your inner ear." | | 2 | "enveloped" | | 3 | "Thump-thump. Thump-thump." | | 4 | "occurred" | | 5 | "Help," | | 6 | "Someone, please." |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 6 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 25 | | wordCount | 1428 | | uniqueNames | 8 | | maxNameDensity | 0.63 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Rory | 9 | | London | 2 | | Heartstone | 7 | | Pendant | 1 | | Fae | 1 | | Grove | 3 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Rory" | | 1 | "Heartstone" | | 2 | "Pendant" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "London" | | 3 | "Fae" | | 4 | "Grove" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 40.11% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 91 | | glossingSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "It was as if she had stepped into a vacuum" | | 1 | "crimson that seemed to glow with an internal, sickly light" | | 2 | "looked like tiny, sightless eyes" | | 3 | "void that seemed to drink the light of the Heartstone" |
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| 61.59% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 2 | | per1kWords | 1.384 | | wordCount | 1445 | | matches | | 0 | "not soft, but tacky, like it was trying to grip her clothes, to hold her d" | | 1 | "no one in the Grove but" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 111 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 36 | | mean | 40.14 | | std | 23.34 | | cv | 0.582 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 62 | | 1 | 108 | | 2 | 47 | | 3 | 74 | | 4 | 50 | | 5 | 19 | | 6 | 66 | | 7 | 23 | | 8 | 40 | | 9 | 22 | | 10 | 63 | | 11 | 55 | | 12 | 49 | | 13 | 2 | | 14 | 47 | | 15 | 37 | | 16 | 20 | | 17 | 29 | | 18 | 73 | | 19 | 42 | | 20 | 10 | | 21 | 26 | | 22 | 35 | | 23 | 4 | | 24 | 82 | | 25 | 14 | | 26 | 37 | | 27 | 49 | | 28 | 17 | | 29 | 49 | | 30 | 8 | | 31 | 48 | | 32 | 46 | | 33 | 32 | | 34 | 13 | | 35 | 47 |
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| 95.69% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 110 | | matches | | 0 | "being dragged" | | 1 | "being *enveloped" | | 2 | "was synchronized" |
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| 0.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 22 | | totalVerbs | 221 | | matches | | 0 | "wasn't looking" | | 1 | "was pulsing" | | 2 | "were breathing" | | 3 | "was burning" | | 4 | "wasn't coming" | | 5 | "was coming" | | 6 | "was walking" | | 7 | "was coming" | | 8 | "was moving" | | 9 | "were turning" | | 10 | "were waiting" | | 11 | "weren't attacking" | | 12 | "wasn't coming" | | 13 | "was coming" | | 14 | "was shifting" | | 15 | "were descending" | | 16 | "weren't swaying" | | 17 | "were uncurling" | | 18 | "was trying" | | 19 | "were drifting" | | 20 | "wasn't just moving" | | 21 | "was running" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 7 | | semicolonCount | 8 | | flaggedSentences | 13 | | totalSentences | 111 | | ratio | 0.117 | | matches | | 0 | "She shouldn't have come here alone, but the instinct that usually made her a good delivery driver—the ability to read a street, to sense a shift in the atmosphere—had been screaming at her for days." | | 1 | "The pull hadn't been a whisper; it had been a physical ache in her chest, centered right where the Heartstone Pendant rested against her skin." | | 2 | "It didn't just become quieter; it became hollow." | | 3 | "The ambient hum of London—the distant pulse of traffic on the A31, the far-off siren, the rustle of wind in the standard oaks—vanished." | | 4 | "Even in the dim moonlight, she could see them—blooms of iridescent violet and bruised crimson that seemed to glow with an internal, sickly light." | | 5 | "They didn't sway with the breeze; they moved in unison, a slow, rhythmic undulation that suggested they were breathing." | | 6 | "It wasn't the sensation of eyes on her back; it was the feeling of being *enveloped*." | | 7 | "It was too thin, its limbs too long, and it lacked any discernible features—no eyes, no mouth, just a void that seemed to drink the light of the Heartstone." | | 8 | "They weren't attacking; they were waiting." | | 9 | "The branches weren't swaying; they were descending." | | 10 | "The moss felt different now—not soft, but tacky, like it was trying to grip her clothes, to hold her down." | | 11 | "They hadn't walked; they had simply *occurred* closer, as if distance was a suggestion they chose to ignore." | | 12 | "The crimson light was no longer a steady pulse; it was a strobe, a frantic, dying flicker." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1441 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 52 | | adverbRatio | 0.03608605135322693 | | lyAdverbCount | 18 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.012491325468424705 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 111 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 111 | | mean | 13.02 | | std | 7.46 | | cv | 0.573 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 25 | | 1 | 21 | | 2 | 16 | | 3 | 19 | | 4 | 20 | | 5 | 9 | | 6 | 35 | | 7 | 25 | | 8 | 16 | | 9 | 31 | | 10 | 22 | | 11 | 11 | | 12 | 8 | | 13 | 23 | | 14 | 10 | | 15 | 8 | | 16 | 15 | | 17 | 4 | | 18 | 23 | | 19 | 10 | | 20 | 9 | | 21 | 18 | | 22 | 5 | | 23 | 24 | | 24 | 19 | | 25 | 9 | | 26 | 14 | | 27 | 2 | | 28 | 12 | | 29 | 17 | | 30 | 1 | | 31 | 8 | | 32 | 12 | | 33 | 10 | | 34 | 6 | | 35 | 16 | | 36 | 16 | | 37 | 25 | | 38 | 16 | | 39 | 20 | | 40 | 19 | | 41 | 5 | | 42 | 17 | | 43 | 27 | | 44 | 1 | | 45 | 1 | | 46 | 14 | | 47 | 6 | | 48 | 6 | | 49 | 21 |
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| 37.39% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 14 | | diversityRatio | 0.26126126126126126 | | totalSentences | 111 | | uniqueOpeners | 29 | |
| 96.15% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 104 | | matches | | 0 | "Only the heavy, sweet scent" | | 1 | "Only the sliding sound again," | | 2 | "Then, she saw it." |
| | ratio | 0.029 | |
| 35.38% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 48 | | totalSentences | 104 | | matches | | 0 | "It was an unnatural scent," | | 1 | "She stepped over a fallen" | | 2 | "She shouldn't have come here" | | 3 | "It wasn't a physical vertigo," | | 4 | "It didn't just become quieter;" | | 5 | "It was as if she" | | 6 | "She reached for the pendant" | | 7 | "Her fingers brushed the silver" | | 8 | "It wasn't the steady beat" | | 9 | "she whispered, her voice sounding" | | 10 | "She pressed on, her boots" | | 11 | "They didn't sway with the" | | 12 | "It was a soft, wet" | | 13 | "She held her breath, her" | | 14 | "She waited for the sound" | | 15 | "*It’s just the wind,* she" | | 16 | "She pushed forward, her pace" | | 17 | "It wasn't the sensation of" | | 18 | "It felt as though the" | | 19 | "She reached the center of" |
| | ratio | 0.462 | |
| 46.54% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 86 | | totalSentences | 104 | | matches | | 0 | "The air in Richmond Park" | | 1 | "Tonight, the air felt heavy," | | 2 | "It was an unnatural scent," | | 3 | "She stepped over a fallen" | | 4 | "The moon was a pale," | | 5 | "Rory pulled her jacket tighter" | | 6 | "She shouldn't have come here" | | 7 | "The pull hadn't been a" | | 8 | "It wasn't a physical vertigo," | | 9 | "The stones stood like petrified" | | 10 | "It didn't just become quieter;" | | 11 | "The ambient hum of London—the" | | 12 | "It was as if she" | | 13 | "She reached for the pendant" | | 14 | "Her fingers brushed the silver" | | 15 | "The Heartstone was pulsing." | | 16 | "It wasn't the steady beat" | | 17 | "she whispered, her voice sounding" | | 18 | "She pressed on, her boots" | | 19 | "The wildflowers here were wrong." |
| | ratio | 0.827 | |
| 48.08% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 104 | | matches | | 0 | "Even in the dim moonlight," |
| | ratio | 0.01 | |
| 8.93% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 64 | | technicalSentenceCount | 12 | | matches | | 0 | "Tonight, the air felt heavy, thick with a cloying sweetness that reminded her of lilies left too long in a vase." | | 1 | "The stones stood like petrified giants, their bark-like surfaces weathered by centuries of rain that shouldn't have been able to reach them." | | 2 | "She pressed on, her boots sinking into moss that felt uncomfortably soft, almost like walking on velvet-covered flesh." | | 3 | "Even in the dim moonlight, she could see them—blooms of iridescent violet and bruised crimson that seemed to glow with an internal, sickly light." | | 4 | "It felt as though the very air was pressing against her skin, a thousand microscopic touches that made the hair on her arms stand up." | | 5 | "A heavy, rhythmic thudding, deep in the earth, as if something colossal was walking in slow motion miles below the surface." | | 6 | "It was a predatory silence, a stillness that felt intentional." | | 7 | "The air grew colder, a biting, unnatural frost that crystallized on the edges of the leaves." | | 8 | "It was a distortion in the light, a smudge of darkness that was darker than the night around it." | | 9 | "It stood near the edge of the standing stones, perhaps seven feet tall, a silhouette that defied the logic of the human form." | | 10 | "It was too thin, its limbs too long, and it lacked any discernible features—no eyes, no mouth, just a void that seemed to drink the light of the Heartstone." | | 11 | "It was searingly hot, a dry, cauterizing heat that made her scream." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 3 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "she whispered, her voice sounding thin and brittle" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 2 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she whispered (whisper)" | | 1 | "she lied (lie)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 4 | | tagDensity | 0.5 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 1 | | effectiveRatio | 1 | |