| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 1 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 1 | | tagDensity | 1 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 91.80% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1220 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1220 | | totalAiIsms | 28 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | | | 20 | | | 21 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "oppressive" | | 1 | "rhythmic" | | 2 | "fragmented" | | 3 | "silence" | | 4 | "resonated" | | 5 | "electric" | | 6 | "pulse" | | 7 | "synchronized" | | 8 | "beacon" | | 9 | "scanning" | | 10 | "sentinels" | | 11 | "echo" | | 12 | "footsteps" | | 13 | "weight" | | 14 | "stomach" | | 15 | "churn" | | 16 | "cacophony" | | 17 | "could feel" | | 18 | "pulsed" | | 19 | "perfect" | | 20 | "anticipation" | | 21 | "familiar" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 2 | | narrationSentences | 93 | | matches | | 0 | "felt a prickle" | | 1 | "g in anticipation" |
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| 35.33% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 7 | | narrationSentences | 93 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | 0 | "seemed to" | | 1 | "began to" | | 2 | "tried to" |
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| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 93 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 34 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 2 | | markdownWords | 2 | | totalWords | 1212 | | ratio | 0.002 | | matches | | 0 | "Thump-thump." | | 1 | "Thump-thump." |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 2 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 21 | | wordCount | 1211 | | uniqueNames | 7 | | maxNameDensity | 0.74 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | London | 2 | | Aurora | 9 | | Richmond | 2 | | Park | 2 | | Heartstone | 4 | | Fae | 1 | | Grove | 1 |
| | persons | | | places | | 0 | "London" | | 1 | "Richmond" | | 2 | "Park" | | 3 | "Fae" | | 4 | "Grove" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 18.42% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 76 | | glossingSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "quite mastered the timing of its mimicry" | | 1 | "sounded like a lullaby, but the intervals" | | 2 | "felt like a physical weight on her shou" | | 3 | "looked like translucent parchment stretch" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1212 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 93 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 34 | | mean | 35.65 | | std | 21.82 | | cv | 0.612 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 72 | | 1 | 67 | | 2 | 55 | | 3 | 49 | | 4 | 6 | | 5 | 54 | | 6 | 60 | | 7 | 42 | | 8 | 60 | | 9 | 5 | | 10 | 15 | | 11 | 36 | | 12 | 24 | | 13 | 18 | | 14 | 61 | | 15 | 26 | | 16 | 33 | | 17 | 2 | | 18 | 24 | | 19 | 65 | | 20 | 16 | | 21 | 43 | | 22 | 4 | | 23 | 54 | | 24 | 41 | | 25 | 38 | | 26 | 66 | | 27 | 56 | | 28 | 17 | | 29 | 33 | | 30 | 49 | | 31 | 4 | | 32 | 4 | | 33 | 13 |
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| 90.17% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 93 | | matches | | 0 | "been replaced" | | 1 | "were arranged" | | 2 | "being hunted" | | 3 | "was curved" |
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| 0.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 8 | | totalVerbs | 191 | | matches | | 0 | "was glowing" | | 1 | "were absorbing" | | 2 | "were flanking" | | 3 | "was circling" | | 4 | "weren't attacking" | | 5 | "were herding" | | 6 | "wasn't breathing" | | 7 | "was just watching" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 8 | | semicolonCount | 4 | | flaggedSentences | 10 | | totalSentences | 93 | | ratio | 0.108 | | matches | | 0 | "The Heartstone pendant, tucked beneath her shirt, had been thrumming against her collarbone for three days—a persistent, rhythmic heat that felt less like a piece of jewelry and more like a living thing." | | 1 | "The oppressive silence of the park vanished, replaced by a sound that was almost a sound—a low, melodic vibration that resonated in her teeth." | | 2 | "Wildflowers of impossible hues—electric violets, translucent creams, and deep, bruising blues—carpeted the ground." | | 3 | "The deep crimson gem was no longer just warm; it was glowing with a faint, inner light, pulsing in time with the vibration of the grove." | | 4 | "The movements weren't erratic; they were flanking." | | 5 | "She didn't run—running triggered the chase instinct in predators—but she moved with a purpose." | | 6 | "It sounded like a lullaby, but the intervals were wrong—the notes slid into dissonant frequencies that made her stomach churn." | | 7 | "The sound didn't come from one direction; it seemed to emanate from the trees themselves." | | 8 | "They didn't run; they glided, their limbs moving in jointless, fluid motions." | | 9 | "For a heartbeat, she saw them all—dozens of the pale things, standing in a perfect circle around her, their long fingers twitching in anticipation." |
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| 88.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1224 | | adjectiveStacks | 2 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "familiar, smog-blurred stars." | | 1 | "small crescent-shaped scar" |
| | adverbCount | 48 | | adverbRatio | 0.0392156862745098 | | lyAdverbCount | 12 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.00980392156862745 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 93 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 93 | | mean | 13.03 | | std | 7.55 | | cv | 0.579 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 23 | | 1 | 25 | | 2 | 24 | | 3 | 6 | | 4 | 33 | | 5 | 28 | | 6 | 19 | | 7 | 2 | | 8 | 15 | | 9 | 19 | | 10 | 11 | | 11 | 14 | | 12 | 24 | | 13 | 6 | | 14 | 20 | | 15 | 13 | | 16 | 21 | | 17 | 11 | | 18 | 26 | | 19 | 4 | | 20 | 19 | | 21 | 8 | | 22 | 26 | | 23 | 8 | | 24 | 18 | | 25 | 16 | | 26 | 26 | | 27 | 5 | | 28 | 6 | | 29 | 9 | | 30 | 2 | | 31 | 13 | | 32 | 18 | | 33 | 3 | | 34 | 4 | | 35 | 20 | | 36 | 9 | | 37 | 9 | | 38 | 12 | | 39 | 17 | | 40 | 7 | | 41 | 25 | | 42 | 12 | | 43 | 14 | | 44 | 10 | | 45 | 12 | | 46 | 11 | | 47 | 1 | | 48 | 1 | | 49 | 3 |
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| 38.17% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 11 | | diversityRatio | 0.26881720430107525 | | totalSentences | 93 | | uniqueOpeners | 25 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 89 | | matches | | 0 | "Then came the first sound." | | 1 | "Then, a soft rustle of" | | 2 | "Instead, she looked down at" | | 3 | "Then, she heard it." |
| | ratio | 0.045 | |
| 58.20% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 36 | | totalSentences | 89 | | matches | | 0 | "She walked with her chin" | | 1 | "She hadn't come for a" | | 2 | "It had pulled her here," | | 3 | "They formed a jagged perimeter," | | 4 | "She was in the Fae" | | 5 | "They didn't sway in the" | | 6 | "Her mind, trained for the" | | 7 | "She reached up and touched" | | 8 | "It was a warning, or" | | 9 | "She began to walk toward" | | 10 | "It wasn't the silence of" | | 11 | "It was a soft, wet" | | 12 | "She pivoted slowly, her bright" | | 13 | "she called out" | | 14 | "Her voice sounded flat, stripped" | | 15 | "She was an intelligent woman," | | 16 | "She began to walk back" | | 17 | "She didn't run—running triggered the" | | 18 | "She stopped abruptly." | | 19 | "She didn't look back." |
| | ratio | 0.404 | |
| 66.74% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 70 | | totalSentences | 89 | | matches | | 0 | "The city of London was" | | 1 | "She walked with her chin" | | 2 | "She hadn't come for a" | | 3 | "The Heartstone pendant, tucked beneath" | | 4 | "It had pulled her here," | | 5 | "Aurora pushed through a dense" | | 6 | "They formed a jagged perimeter," | | 7 | "The transition was physical, a" | | 8 | "The oppressive silence of the" | | 9 | "She was in the Fae" | | 10 | "Wildflowers of impossible hues—electric violets," | | 11 | "They didn't sway in the" | | 12 | "Aurora paused, her cool-headedness fighting" | | 13 | "Her mind, trained for the" | | 14 | "The air tasted of ozone" | | 15 | "She reached up and touched" | | 16 | "The deep crimson gem was" | | 17 | "It was a warning, or" | | 18 | "She began to walk toward" | | 19 | "The further she moved from" |
| | ratio | 0.787 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 89 | | matches | | 0 | "By the time she reached" | | 1 | "Before her stood the ancient" |
| | ratio | 0.022 | |
| 2.55% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 56 | | technicalSentenceCount | 11 | | matches | | 0 | "The Heartstone pendant, tucked beneath her shirt, had been thrumming against her collarbone for three days—a persistent, rhythmic heat that felt less like a pie…" | | 1 | "The transition was physical, a sudden drop in pressure that made her ears pop." | | 2 | "The oppressive silence of the park vanished, replaced by a sound that was almost a sound—a low, melodic vibration that resonated in her teeth." | | 3 | "It wasn't the silence of emptiness, but the silence of a room full of people who had all stopped talking at the exact moment she entered." | | 4 | "Her voice sounded flat, stripped of its echo, as if the atmosphere were absorbing the sound before it could travel." | | 5 | "Something was circling her, staying just beyond the reach of her vision, using the vibrant flowers and the deep shadows of the oaks as cover." | | 6 | "It sounded like a lullaby, but the intervals were wrong—the notes slid into dissonant frequencies that made her stomach churn." | | 7 | "Aurora could feel the gaze of a dozen unseen eyes, a heavy, predatory pressure that felt like a physical weight on her shoulders." | | 8 | "It was tall, impossibly thin, with skin that looked like translucent parchment stretched over a frame of obsidian." | | 9 | "It had no eyes, only a wide, lipless mouth that was curved into a static, horrific imitation of a smile." | | 10 | "Aurora collapsed onto the grass of Richmond Park, gasping for air, her chest heaving." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 1 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |