Run: 2026-05-10-01KR90Y7H4FN12BKBS4ETNY3SC

Run Details

Duration:
8m 1s
Cost:
$0.000865
Provider:
Parasail

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The green neon sign of The Raven’s Nest hummed with a low, electric vibration that Aurora felt in her teeth. It cast a sickly, emerald glow over the rain-slicked pavement of the Soho alley, turning the puddles into pools of liquid jade. She pulled her collar up against the London drizzle, her fingers brushing the small, crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist—a nervous habit she’d never quite managed to break. The bell above the heavy oak door gave a muffled chime as she stepped inside. The air in the bar was a thick, comforting weight of sandalwood, stale gin, and the metallic tang of old maps. It was a subterranean sanctuary, a place where the light died before it could reach the corners of the room. Aurora scanned the dim interior, her eyes adjusting to the shadows dancing across the black-and-white photographs pinned to the walls. She wasn't supposed to be here for anything more than a quick pint after her shift at Golden Empress. The delivery bag was still tucked in the corner of her bike, likely damp from the ride, and her legs ached from a day of weaving through London traffic. She just wanted to disappear into a corner booth and exist without being perceived. But then she saw him. He was sitting at the far end of the mahogany bar, a silhouette framed by the amber glow of a single low-hanging lamp. Even from the back, the posture was familiar—a certain rigidity in the shoulders that spoke of a man who spent a lot of time being watched. As she drew closer, the light caught the silver signet ring on his right hand as he lifted a glass. "Julian?" the name left her lips before she could censor it, sounding thinner and more fragile than she intended. The man froze. He didn't turn immediately; instead, he set the glass down with a precision that felt rehearsed. When he finally rotated on the stool, the breath left Aurora’s lungs. It was Julian, but the version of Julian she had carried in her memory—the boy with the easy, lopsided grin and the perpetually messy blonde hair who had promised to study architecture in Florence—was gone. The man sitting before her was carved from harder, colder stone. His face had lost its softness, replaced by sharp, unforgiving angles. There were lines around his eyes that hadn't been there five years ago, and a stillness in his expression that felt less like peace and more like a ceasefire. "Rory," he said. His voice had deepened, losing the melodic lilt of their youth, replaced by a clipped, neutral tone that felt entirely foreign. "You look... different," she managed, sliding onto the stool beside him. She felt acutely aware of her own appearance: her shoulder-length black hair was slightly damp, her skin pale under the dim lights, her eyes likely reflecting the frantic pulse in her throat. "Time tends to do that," Julian said. He didn't smile. He didn't even reach out to touch her hand. He simply stared at the condensation pooling on his glass. "I heard you moved to London. I didn't realize you'd settled in Soho." "I'm just passing through," she lied. The weight of her life in the flat above the bar, the exhaustion of the delivery runs, and the quiet, steady hum of her survival felt too heavy to explain to a ghost. "And you? Last I heard, you were in Berlin. Working on something... structural." Julian let out a short, dry sound that might have been a laugh if there had been any humor in it. "Structural. That’s one way to put it." He took a sip of his drink, his eyes drifting toward the dark corners of the bar, toward the bookshelves that hid secrets even the patrons didn't know about. "I spent a long time building things, Rory. Mostly just making sure things didn't fall apart." The silence that followed was not the comfortable silence of their university days, when they would sit for hours in the Cardiff libraries, dreaming of lives that felt inevitable. This silence was dense, filled with the things they hadn't said when the letters stopped coming, when the phone calls grew shorter, and when the distance between them had transitioned from miles to an unbridgeable chasm of silence. "Why didn't you call?" she asked. The question was blunt, stripped of the politeness she usually maintained. "After the summer in Wales. After everything. You just... evaporated." Julian turned his head to look at her. His eyes, once bright and inquisitive, were now guarded, looking at her as if she were a puzzle he no longer had the interest to solve. "Some things are better left unsaid, Rory. Some people are better left behind. I thought you wanted that. I thought that was the point of you leaving." Aurora flinched. She thought of Evan, of the terror that had driven her out of Cardiff, and the way she had clung to the idea of a fresh start like a lifeline. "I wanted to leave the pain, Julian. Not the people. There's a difference." "Is there?" He leaned in slightly, the amber light catching the hard line of his jaw. "In my experience, the people are often the source of the pain. If you want to be clean, you have to cut the ties." "You sound like a man who's spent too much time around Silas Blackwood," she countered, her voice sharpening. She knew the reputation of the man who owned this establishment—the quiet authority, the way he moved with a slight limp that commanded respect rather than pity. She had seen him move through the bar, a shadow among shadows. "This place... it has a way of turning people into something else. Something guarded." Julian’s expression didn't flicker, but his grip tightened on his glass. "It’s a neutral ground. That’s all it is. A place to exist without being questioned." "But you are being questioned," she whispered, leaning closer. "By yourself. Every time you look in a mirror, you're looking for the person you used to be, aren't you? And you can't find him." The accusation hung in the air, vibrating like the neon sign outside. For a moment, the mask slipped. A flicker of the old Julian—the boy who used to share his headphones with her on the bus, the boy who had cried when he failed his first anatomy exam—pierced through the steel. His eyes softened, just for a heartbeat, and a profound, crushing regret seemed to settle over his features. It was the look of a man realizing he had traded his soul for a sense of security. "I don't miss him," Julian said, though the tremor in his voice betrayed him. "That boy was weak. He was a dreamer. Dreamers don't survive the things I've seen." "And what have you seen, Julian? To make you this hollow?" He didn't answer. Instead, he signaled the bartender for another round. The movement was practiced, efficient, and utterly devoid of warmth. Aurora looked down at her hands. She felt the sudden, overwhelming urge to reach out and grab his sleeve, to shake him until the old Julian rattled loose from the bones of this stranger. But she knew it wouldn't work. You couldn't resurrect someone who had chosen to die. "I'm sorry," she said softly. "For what?" "For not being there. For not realizing that while I was running away from my past, you were being swallowed by yours." Julian finally met her gaze, and for the first time, the emptiness in his eyes was replaced by a terrifying clarity. "We were never going to be those people again, Rory. We were just playing at it. We were children pretending the world was a place that cared about our intentions." He stood up, his movements fluid but heavy. He reached into his coat, pulled out a few crumpled notes, and placed them on the bar. The silver signet ring caught the light one last time before he turned away. "Don't look for me in the cities I visit," he said, his back to her. "It's better if you just remember me as I was in Cardiff. Before the world got loud." "Julian—" But he was already moving toward the door. He didn't look back. He stepped out into the Soho rain, his silhouette momentarily illuminated by the green neon before he vanished into the dark. Aurora sat alone at the bar, the scent of sandalwood and gin settling around her like a shroud. She watched the door swing shut, the bell giving a lonely, hollow chime. She felt the weight of the years, the staggering, cumulative gravity of every choice made in the dark, and the quiet, devastating realization that some ghosts don't haunt houses—they haunt the people we used to be.
created_at"2026-05-10T13:24:01.196Z" 5/10/2026, 1:24:01 PM
model"google/gemma-4-26b-a4b-it-20260403"
app_id182717
external_user(null)
streamedtrue
cancelledfalse
latency434
moderation_latency(null)
generation_time480551
tokens_prompt867
tokens_completion2148
native_tokens_prompt859
native_tokens_completion1884
native_tokens_completion_images(null)
native_tokens_reasoning0
native_tokens_cached0
num_media_prompt(null)
num_input_audio_prompt(null)
num_media_completion0
num_search_results(null)
num_fetches(null)
web_search_engine(null)
origin"https://ncbench.com/"
is_byokfalse
finish_reason"stop"
native_finish_reason"stop"
service_tier(null)
usage0.00086527
router(null)
provider_responses
0
endpoint_id"91f05fe1-9a18-4bcf-8cfa-093c369d8cea"
id"chatcmpl-b6583e3b8597de53"
is_byokfalse
latency434
model_permaslug"google/gemma-4-26b-a4b-it-20260403"
provider_name"Parasail"
status200
user_agent"langchainjs-openai/1.0.0 ((node/v24.14.1; linux; x64))"
http_referer(null)
request_id"req-1778419441-JcHFbwJbR8TwrAYoN8PC"
session_id(null)
api_type"completions"
id"gen-1778419441-ss5YyZQCXFMAOXgpWMmB"
upstream_id"chatcmpl-b6583e3b8597de53"
total_cost0.00086527
cache_discount(null)
upstream_inference_cost0
provider_name"Parasail"
response_cache_source_id(null)

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags13
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"she said softly [softly]"
dialogueSentences30
tagDensity0.433
leniency0.867
rawRatio0.077
effectiveRatio0.067
86.49% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1480
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count2
1
adverb"utterly"
count1
2
adverb"softly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"utterly"
2"softly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
25.68% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1480
totalAiIsms22
found
0
word"electric"
count1
1
word"comforting"
count1
2
word"weight"
count3
3
word"sanctuary"
count1
4
word"scanned"
count1
5
word"dancing"
count1
6
word"familiar"
count1
7
word"lilt"
count1
8
word"pulse"
count1
9
word"silence"
count4
10
word"comfortable"
count1
11
word"flicker"
count2
12
word"profound"
count1
13
word"sense of"
count1
14
word"efficient"
count1
15
word"warmth"
count1
highlights
0"electric"
1"comforting"
2"weight"
3"sanctuary"
4"scanned"
5"dancing"
6"familiar"
7"lilt"
8"pulse"
9"silence"
10"comfortable"
11"flicker"
12"profound"
13"sense of"
14"efficient"
15"warmth"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences73
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences73
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"managed to"
1"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences90
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen38
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1472
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions10
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions28
wordCount1144
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity0.87
worstName"Julian"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Julian"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Aurora6
Soho2
London2
Golden1
Empress1
Julian10
Florence1
Cardiff2
Evan1
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Aurora"
3"Julian"
4"Evan"
places
0"Soho"
1"London"
2"Golden"
3"Florence"
4"Cardiff"
globalScore1
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences60
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1472
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences90
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs35
mean42.06
std24.13
cv0.574
sampleLengths
070
176
262
35
469
519
631
786
824
943
1042
1152
1273
1367
1427
1561
1645
1740
1871
1926
2034
2187
2229
2311
2421
2549
265
272
2822
2951
3039
3132
321
3333
3467
81.23% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount5
totalSentences73
matches
0"being perceived"
1"was gone"
2"was carved"
3"was practiced"
4"was replaced"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs184
matches
0"was sitting"
1"was already moving"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount8
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences7
totalSentences90
ratio0.078
matches
0"She pulled her collar up against the London drizzle, her fingers brushing the small, crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist—a nervous habit she’d never quite managed to break."
1"Even from the back, the posture was familiar—a certain rigidity in the shoulders that spoke of a man who spent a lot of time being watched."
2"He didn't turn immediately; instead, he set the glass down with a precision that felt rehearsed."
3"It was Julian, but the version of Julian she had carried in her memory—the boy with the easy, lopsided grin and the perpetually messy blonde hair who had promised to study architecture in Florence—was gone."
4"She knew the reputation of the man who owned this establishment—the quiet authority, the way he moved with a slight limp that commanded respect rather than pity."
5"A flicker of the old Julian—the boy who used to share his headphones with her on the bus, the boy who had cried when he failed his first anatomy exam—pierced through the steel."
6"She felt the weight of the years, the staggering, cumulative gravity of every choice made in the dark, and the quiet, devastating realization that some ghosts don't haunt houses—they haunt the people we used to be."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1158
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small, crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount38
adverbRatio0.03281519861830743
lyAdverbCount17
lyAdverbRatio0.01468048359240069
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences90
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences90
mean16.36
std9.2
cv0.562
sampleLengths
020
122
228
315
421
520
620
719
829
914
105
1123
1226
1320
1419
153
1616
1712
1835
1911
2011
2129
223
2321
2411
2532
267
273
289
2910
3013
316
3233
3313
3421
3536
3616
3729
3838
396
4011
4110
428
4326
4427
452
4630
4713
4816
4924
47.41% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats9
diversityRatio0.34444444444444444
totalSentences90
uniqueOpeners31
49.02% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences68
matches
0"Instead, he signaled the bartender"
ratio0.015
8.24% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount36
totalSentences68
matches
0"It cast a sickly, emerald"
1"She pulled her collar up"
2"It was a subterranean sanctuary,"
3"She wasn't supposed to be"
4"She just wanted to disappear"
5"He was sitting at the"
6"He didn't turn immediately; instead,"
7"It was Julian, but the"
8"His face had lost its"
9"His voice had deepened, losing"
10"she managed, sliding onto the"
11"She felt acutely aware of"
12"He didn't smile."
13"He didn't even reach out"
14"He simply stared at the"
15"He took a sip of"
16"His eyes, once bright and"
17"She thought of Evan, of"
18"He leaned in slightly, the"
19"she countered, her voice sharpening"
ratio0.529
26.18% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount59
totalSentences68
matches
0"The green neon sign of"
1"It cast a sickly, emerald"
2"She pulled her collar up"
3"The bell above the heavy"
4"The air in the bar"
5"It was a subterranean sanctuary,"
6"Aurora scanned the dim interior,"
7"She wasn't supposed to be"
8"The delivery bag was still"
9"She just wanted to disappear"
10"He was sitting at the"
11"the name left her lips"
12"The man froze."
13"He didn't turn immediately; instead,"
14"It was Julian, but the"
15"The man sitting before her"
16"His face had lost its"
17"His voice had deepened, losing"
18"she managed, sliding onto the"
19"She felt acutely aware of"
ratio0.868
73.53% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences68
matches
0"Even from the back, the"
ratio0.015
31.75% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences45
technicalSentenceCount7
matches
0"Even from the back, the posture was familiar—a certain rigidity in the shoulders that spoke of a man who spent a lot of time being watched."
1"He didn't turn immediately; instead, he set the glass down with a precision that felt rehearsed."
2"It was Julian, but the version of Julian she had carried in her memory—the boy with the easy, lopsided grin and the perpetually messy blonde hair who had promis…"
3"His voice had deepened, losing the melodic lilt of their youth, replaced by a clipped, neutral tone that felt entirely foreign."
4"The silence that followed was not the comfortable silence of their university days, when they would sit for hours in the Cardiff libraries, dreaming of lives th…"
5"His eyes, once bright and inquisitive, were now guarded, looking at her as if she were a puzzle he no longer had the interest to solve."
6"She knew the reputation of the man who owned this establishment—the quiet authority, the way he moved with a slight limp that commanded respect rather than pity…"
48.08% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags13
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"He leaned, the amber light catching the hard line of his jaw"
1"she countered, her voice sharpening"
83.33% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags8
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"she lied (lie)"
1"she whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences30
tagDensity0.267
leniency0.533
rawRatio0.25
effectiveRatio0.133
77.9417%