| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 1 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 1 | | tagDensity | 1 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 88.81% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1341 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1341 | | totalAiIsms | 29 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | | | 20 | | | 21 | | | 22 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "rhythmic" | | 1 | "silence" | | 2 | "weight" | | 3 | "throbbed" | | 4 | "glistening" | | 5 | "pulsed" | | 6 | "flickered" | | 7 | "sentinel" | | 8 | "scanning" | | 9 | "navigate" | | 10 | "oppressive" | | 11 | "echo" | | 12 | "flicker" | | 13 | "whisper" | | 14 | "warmth" | | 15 | "perfect" | | 16 | "synchronized" | | 17 | "pulse" | | 18 | "chill" | | 19 | "velvet" | | 20 | "familiar" | | 21 | "standard" | | 22 | "chilled" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 105 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 47.62% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 6 | | narrationSentences | 105 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | 0 | "seemed to" | | 1 | "started to" | | 2 | "began to" |
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| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 105 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 36 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 1 | | markdownWords | 11 | | totalWords | 1334 | | ratio | 0.008 | | matches | | 0 | "When the light fails, look for the fracture in the stone." |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 2 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 23 | | wordCount | 1333 | | uniqueNames | 14 | | maxNameDensity | 0.45 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1 | | worstWindowName | "Fae" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 2 | | Park | 2 | | London | 2 | | Fae | 2 | | Grove | 1 | | Carter | 1 | | Fae-touched | 1 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Hel | 1 | | Golden | 1 | | Empress | 1 | | Cardiff | 1 | | Evan | 1 | | Aurora | 6 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Carter" | | 1 | "Evan" | | 2 | "Aurora" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "London" | | 3 | "Fae" | | 4 | "Grove" | | 5 | "Golden" | | 6 | "Cardiff" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 81 | | glossingSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "void that seemed to swallow the light from her pendant" | | 1 | "noise that seemed to originate from the air itself" | | 2 | "quite exist in the same frame rate as the rest of the world" | | 3 | "felt like needles pressing into the sof" | | 4 | "looked like they had been broken and rese" |
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| 50.07% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 2 | | per1kWords | 1.499 | | wordCount | 1334 | | matches | | 0 | "not in language, but in intent" | | 1 | "not away from the creatures, but toward the nearest standing stone" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 105 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 90.47% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 32 | | mean | 41.69 | | std | 19.45 | | cv | 0.467 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 50 | | 1 | 64 | | 2 | 71 | | 3 | 20 | | 4 | 86 | | 5 | 33 | | 6 | 4 | | 7 | 70 | | 8 | 5 | | 9 | 34 | | 10 | 29 | | 11 | 52 | | 12 | 31 | | 13 | 65 | | 14 | 24 | | 15 | 41 | | 16 | 37 | | 17 | 31 | | 18 | 63 | | 19 | 13 | | 20 | 71 | | 21 | 32 | | 22 | 50 | | 23 | 40 | | 24 | 33 | | 25 | 40 | | 26 | 20 | | 27 | 39 | | 28 | 40 | | 29 | 42 | | 30 | 45 | | 31 | 59 |
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| 95.24% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 105 | | matches | | 0 | "was choked" | | 1 | "been broken" | | 2 | "was left" |
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| 51.19% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 5 | | totalVerbs | 224 | | matches | | 0 | "was hunting" | | 1 | "were skipping" | | 2 | "was getting" | | 3 | "weren't hiding" | | 4 | "was burning" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 7 | | semicolonCount | 3 | | flaggedSentences | 9 | | totalSentences | 105 | | ratio | 0.086 | | matches | | 0 | "She took another step, and the sound repeated—closer this time, behind her right shoulder." | | 1 | "Her voice didn't echo; it hit the wall of trees and simply died." | | 2 | "Something moved on the edge of her vision—a flicker of motion that shouldn't have been there." | | 3 | "It moved with a jagged, hitching gait as if the creature—or whatever it was—didn't quite exist in the same frame rate as the rest of the world." | | 4 | "Panic was a luxury she couldn't afford; Evan had taught her that." | | 5 | "The standing stones were no longer a circle; they had shifted, leaning inward, their surfaces glistening with a dark, viscous sap." | | 6 | "They wore rags that might have once been finery, and their eyes were identical to the pendant—deep, hungry crimson, flickering with the same unstable warmth." | | 7 | "She flattened her palm against the ancient, cold rock, searching for the inconsistency—a crack, a tremor, a soft spot in the reality of the air." | | 8 | "Her fingers found it—an edge that felt jagged and sharp, vibrating with a frequency that made her teeth ache." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1345 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 45 | | adverbRatio | 0.03345724907063197 | | lyAdverbCount | 10 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.007434944237918215 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 105 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 105 | | mean | 12.7 | | std | 7.73 | | cv | 0.609 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 13 | | 1 | 27 | | 2 | 10 | | 3 | 15 | | 4 | 29 | | 5 | 20 | | 6 | 10 | | 7 | 18 | | 8 | 22 | | 9 | 21 | | 10 | 7 | | 11 | 5 | | 12 | 8 | | 13 | 11 | | 14 | 21 | | 15 | 18 | | 16 | 14 | | 17 | 22 | | 18 | 17 | | 19 | 16 | | 20 | 4 | | 21 | 7 | | 22 | 22 | | 23 | 9 | | 24 | 32 | | 25 | 1 | | 26 | 4 | | 27 | 14 | | 28 | 20 | | 29 | 4 | | 30 | 12 | | 31 | 13 | | 32 | 4 | | 33 | 6 | | 34 | 4 | | 35 | 16 | | 36 | 22 | | 37 | 9 | | 38 | 9 | | 39 | 13 | | 40 | 16 | | 41 | 4 | | 42 | 18 | | 43 | 27 | | 44 | 5 | | 45 | 12 | | 46 | 2 | | 47 | 2 | | 48 | 1 | | 49 | 1 |
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| 28.10% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 23 | | diversityRatio | 0.26666666666666666 | | totalSentences | 105 | | uniqueOpeners | 28 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 99 | | matches | | 0 | "Then, the sound started." | | 1 | "Just the swaying wildflowers." | | 2 | "Then, the damp, familiar air" |
| | ratio | 0.03 | |
| 0.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 55 | | totalSentences | 99 | | matches | | 0 | "It possessed a weight, like" | | 1 | "She stepped past the first" | | 2 | "It was mid-November, a week" | | 3 | "They smelled of ozone and" | | 4 | "You came for the seal." | | 5 | "You came to finish what" | | 6 | "She reached into her jacket" | | 7 | "It pulsed against her palm," | | 8 | "It was hunting for a" | | 9 | "She reached the center of" | | 10 | "It wasn't a roar or" | | 11 | "It was the sound of" | | 12 | "She kept her movements fluid," | | 13 | "She took another step, and" | | 14 | "she called out" | | 15 | "Her voice didn't echo; it" | | 16 | "She checked her wrist." | | 17 | "Her watch was a useless" | | 18 | "She had spent maybe ten" | | 19 | "She dropped it, catching it" |
| | ratio | 0.556 | |
| 20.61% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 87 | | totalSentences | 99 | | matches | | 0 | "The air in Richmond Park" | | 1 | "It possessed a weight, like" | | 2 | "Aurora Carter adjusted the strap" | | 3 | "The crescent-shaped scar on her" | | 4 | "She stepped past the first" | | 5 | "The wildflowers were the first" | | 6 | "It was mid-November, a week" | | 7 | "They smelled of ozone and" | | 8 | "Rory, she reminded herself, keep" | | 9 | "You came for the seal." | | 10 | "You came to finish what" | | 11 | "She reached into her jacket" | | 12 | "The silver chain felt freezing" | | 13 | "It pulsed against her palm," | | 14 | "The closer she moved to" | | 15 | "It was hunting for a" | | 16 | "She reached the center of" | | 17 | "The darkness here was absolute," | | 18 | "It wasn't a roar or" | | 19 | "It was the sound of" |
| | ratio | 0.879 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 99 | | matches | | 0 | "If she ran, she would" | | 1 | "If she stayed, she would" |
| | ratio | 0.02 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 64 | | technicalSentenceCount | 16 | | matches | | 0 | "She stepped past the first of the ancient oak standing stones, her boots crunching unnecessarily loud on the damp turf." | | 1 | "Pulsing violets and bioluminescent whites curled around the roots of the standing stones, their petals glistening with a dew that didn't evaporate." | | 2 | "They smelled of ozone and crushed copper, a scent that clung to the back of her throat like a copper penny." | | 3 | "It pulsed against her palm, a soft, rhythmic amber glow that matched the beat of her own heart." | | 4 | "It was hunting for a portal, searching for the thinning veil that kept the Hel realm cordoned off from the waking world." | | 5 | "It was the sound of wet paper being slowly torn, a delicate, skittering noise that seemed to originate from the air itself." | | 6 | "A soft, wet inhalation that carried a faint, sour musk, like autumn leaves left to rot in a stagnant pond." | | 7 | "Something moved on the edge of her vision—a flicker of motion that shouldn't have been there." | | 8 | "It was too tall, too disjointed, a collection of angles and shadows that didn't correlate with the trees." | | 9 | "They were tall, gaunt things, their skin the color of river silt, stretched over frames that looked like they had been broken and reset without a surgeon." | | 10 | "They wore rags that might have once been finery, and their eyes were identical to the pendant—deep, hungry crimson, flickering with the same unstable warmth." | | 11 | "The silence of the grove deepened, becoming a physical weight that made it hard to draw a full breath." | | 12 | "She remembered the words of the benefactor, the cryptic note that had led her to this cursed patch of urban wasteland." | | 13 | "Her fingers found it—an edge that felt jagged and sharp, vibrating with a frequency that made her teeth ache." | | 14 | "She gasped for air, her lungs burning, her clothes covered in a wet, dark residue that smelled of lightning and old graves." | | 15 | "She could still hear the sound of the paper tearing, and she knew, with a certainty that chilled her to the marrow, that the gap she had used to escape was not …" |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 1 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |