| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 1 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 1 | | tagDensity | 1 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1440 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 16.67% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1440 | | totalAiIsms | 24 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "familiar" | | 1 | "silence" | | 2 | "weight" | | 3 | "echoing" | | 4 | "rhythmic" | | 5 | "scanning" | | 6 | "flickered" | | 7 | "warmth" | | 8 | "pulse" | | 9 | "cacophony" | | 10 | "footsteps" | | 11 | "could feel" | | 12 | "searing" | | 13 | "beacon" | | 14 | "depths" | | 15 | "oppressive" | | 16 | "chill" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 2 | | narrationSentences | 119 | | matches | | 0 | "felt a prickle" | | 1 | "a jolt of terror" |
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| 58.82% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 7 | | narrationSentences | 119 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 119 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 41 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1433 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 2 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 31 | | wordCount | 1432 | | uniqueNames | 10 | | maxNameDensity | 0.7 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Blink" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 2 | | Park | 2 | | Aurora | 1 | | Fae | 1 | | Grove | 5 | | Earth | 1 | | Heartstone | 5 | | Morse-code | 1 | | Rory | 10 | | Blink | 3 |
| | persons | | | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "Fae" | | 3 | "Grove" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 65.73% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 89 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "felt like a warning" | | 1 | "sounded like a hundred dry twigs breaking" | | 2 | "sounded like her own voice calling her nam" |
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| 0.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 3 | | per1kWords | 2.094 | | wordCount | 1433 | | matches | | 0 | "not the absence of sound, but a heavy, expectant thing" | | 1 | "not toward where she thought the entrance was, but away from the clicking" | | 2 | "not around the creatures, but straight through them" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 119 | | matches | | |
| 97.55% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 34 | | mean | 42.15 | | std | 20.71 | | cv | 0.491 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 94 | | 1 | 65 | | 2 | 42 | | 3 | 65 | | 4 | 63 | | 5 | 38 | | 6 | 4 | | 7 | 51 | | 8 | 3 | | 9 | 55 | | 10 | 13 | | 11 | 41 | | 12 | 64 | | 13 | 10 | | 14 | 35 | | 15 | 60 | | 16 | 18 | | 17 | 31 | | 18 | 59 | | 19 | 59 | | 20 | 62 | | 21 | 33 | | 22 | 37 | | 23 | 41 | | 24 | 51 | | 25 | 16 | | 26 | 39 | | 27 | 35 | | 28 | 51 | | 29 | 58 | | 30 | 12 | | 31 | 24 | | 32 | 46 | | 33 | 58 |
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| 93.47% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 119 | | matches | | 0 | "being dragged" | | 1 | "was accompanied" | | 2 | "was gone" | | 3 | "was replaced" |
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| 0.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 15 | | totalVerbs | 230 | | matches | | 0 | "wasn't shifting" | | 1 | "were turning" | | 2 | "weren't following" | | 3 | "was vibrating" | | 4 | "was reacting" | | 5 | "was circling" | | 6 | "wasn't coming" | | 7 | "was standing" | | 8 | "was projecting" | | 9 | "wasn't just glowing" | | 10 | "were waiting" | | 11 | "weren't attacking" | | 12 | "were circling" | | 13 | "weren't hunting" | | 14 | "were herding" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 7 | | semicolonCount | 7 | | flaggedSentences | 12 | | totalSentences | 119 | | ratio | 0.101 | | matches | | 0 | "She knew the rumors about the Grove—the way time stretched and snapped like a rubber band, the way the boundary between Earth and something older was porous here." | | 1 | "But the light wasn't shifting; it remained in a state of permanent, bruised twilight, a purple haze that blurred the edges of the standing stones." | | 2 | "A shape—long, pale, and impossibly thin—darted behind a cluster of oversized ferns." | | 3 | "They weren't following the sun; they were turning toward her, their petals tracking her movement like a thousand tiny, sightless eyes." | | 4 | "It wasn't the warmth of a hearth; it was the heat of a fever." | | 5 | "It was accompanied by a soft, clicking noise—rapid-fire snaps that sounded like a hundred dry twigs breaking at once." | | 6 | "It wasn't coming from one direction; it was circling her." | | 7 | "It didn't move toward her; it simply existed there, a static glitch in the landscape." | | 8 | "Something brushed against the back of her neck—a touch as light as a spiderweb, yet freezing enough to make her skin crawl." | | 9 | "It wasn't just glowing now; it was projecting a dim, crimson light that cut through the fog like a beacon." | | 10 | "They weren't attacking; they were waiting." | | 11 | "She looked up and saw it—a sliver of moonlight filtering through the canopy, illuminating the jagged silhouette of the oak standing stones." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1443 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "small crescent-shaped scar" |
| | adverbCount | 41 | | adverbRatio | 0.028413028413028413 | | lyAdverbCount | 12 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.008316008316008316 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 119 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 119 | | mean | 12.04 | | std | 7.52 | | cv | 0.625 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 31 | | 1 | 20 | | 2 | 5 | | 3 | 20 | | 4 | 18 | | 5 | 18 | | 6 | 6 | | 7 | 28 | | 8 | 13 | | 9 | 12 | | 10 | 14 | | 11 | 16 | | 12 | 26 | | 13 | 5 | | 14 | 14 | | 15 | 20 | | 16 | 8 | | 17 | 20 | | 18 | 2 | | 19 | 2 | | 20 | 6 | | 21 | 25 | | 22 | 8 | | 23 | 3 | | 24 | 2 | | 25 | 25 | | 26 | 4 | | 27 | 19 | | 28 | 16 | | 29 | 3 | | 30 | 13 | | 31 | 3 | | 32 | 8 | | 33 | 10 | | 34 | 8 | | 35 | 12 | | 36 | 4 | | 37 | 13 | | 38 | 4 | | 39 | 9 | | 40 | 12 | | 41 | 8 | | 42 | 21 | | 43 | 9 | | 44 | 5 | | 45 | 6 | | 46 | 12 | | 47 | 14 | | 48 | 18 | | 49 | 6 |
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| 30.67% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 23 | | diversityRatio | 0.226890756302521 | | totalSentences | 119 | | uniqueOpeners | 27 | |
| 61.16% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 109 | | matches | | 0 | "Then came the sound." | | 1 | "Pale, jawless things, crouching in" |
| | ratio | 0.018 | |
| 29.17% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 52 | | totalSentences | 109 | | matches | | 0 | "She shouldn't have taken this" | | 1 | "She knew the rumors about" | | 2 | "She reached up to touch" | | 3 | "She paused, tilting her head." | | 4 | "She was an intelligent woman," | | 5 | "She began to walk again," | | 6 | "She looked back toward the" | | 7 | "It was a wet, sliding" | | 8 | "It was distant, barely audible," | | 9 | "She held her breath, her" | | 10 | "She waited, the silence returning" | | 11 | "She shifted her weight, and" | | 12 | "It wasn't a person." | | 13 | "she called out" | | 14 | "Her voice sounded thin, stripped" | | 15 | "They weren't following the sun;" | | 16 | "She reached for the Heartstone." | | 17 | "It was vibrating, a low-frequency" | | 18 | "It wasn't the warmth of" | | 19 | "It was accompanied by a" |
| | ratio | 0.477 | |
| 37.98% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 92 | | totalSentences | 109 | | matches | | 0 | "The air in Richmond Park" | | 1 | "The transition was seamless, a" | | 2 | "Here, the world felt saturated." | | 3 | "The wildflowers, vibrant and incongruous" | | 4 | "The silence was not the" | | 5 | "Rory adjusted the strap of" | | 6 | "She shouldn't have taken this" | | 7 | "She knew the rumors about" | | 8 | "She reached up to touch" | | 9 | "The deep crimson gem was" | | 10 | "That should have been a" | | 11 | "She paused, tilting her head." | | 12 | "The movement was rhythmic, a" | | 13 | "Rory frowned, her blue eyes" | | 14 | "She was an intelligent woman," | | 15 | "A trick of the shifting" | | 16 | "She began to walk again," | | 17 | "She looked back toward the" | | 18 | "It was a wet, sliding" | | 19 | "It was distant, barely audible," |
| | ratio | 0.844 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 109 | | matches | | 0 | "To her left, the canopy" | | 1 | "To her right, the fog" | | 2 | "If time moved differently here," |
| | ratio | 0.028 | |
| 28.99% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 69 | | technicalSentenceCount | 11 | | matches | | 0 | "As she walked, the gravel beneath her boots sounded too loud, the crunch echoing in a way that suggested the clearing was larger than it appeared." | | 1 | "But the light wasn't shifting; it remained in a state of permanent, bruised twilight, a purple haze that blurred the edges of the standing stones." | | 2 | "She looked back toward the entrance, but the oak stones had vanished, swallowed by a sudden, thick fog that tasted of ozone and old copper." | | 3 | "They weren't following the sun; they were turning toward her, their petals tracking her movement like a thousand tiny, sightless eyes." | | 4 | "It was vibrating, a low-frequency hum that radiated a dull, insistent warmth." | | 5 | "It didn't have a face, just a smooth, pale expanse of skin stretched tight over a skull that lacked a jaw." | | 6 | "Her mind, the part of her that had survived the volatility of her past, snapped into a cold, analytical gear." | | 7 | "The trees leaned inward, their branches interlocking like skeletal fingers, weaving a ceiling of thorns and silver leaves." | | 8 | "The clicking grew louder, now a cacophony that filled the air, drowning out the sound of her own footsteps." | | 9 | "She could feel a presence hovering just inches behind her, a cold draft that smelled of stagnant water and ancient dust." | | 10 | "She lay there for a long time, gasping for air, her lungs burning." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 1 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |