| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 2 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 4 | | tagDensity | 0.5 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 76.94% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1301 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 6 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "slowly" | | 1 | "slightly" | | 2 | "suddenly" | | 3 | "perfectly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 38.51% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1301 | | totalAiIsms | 16 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "electric" | | 1 | "silence" | | 2 | "chill" | | 3 | "scanning" | | 4 | "flicker" | | 5 | "resonance" | | 6 | "weight" | | 7 | "searing" | | 8 | "rhythmic" | | 9 | "raced" | | 10 | "perfect" | | 11 | "could feel" | | 12 | "resonated" | | 13 | "chaotic" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 102 | | matches | | |
| 86.83% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 4 | | narrationSentences | 102 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 104 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 32 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1292 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 4 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 83.33% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 32 | | wordCount | 1285 | | uniqueNames | 10 | | maxNameDensity | 0.93 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Grove | 4 | | London | 3 | | Fae | 2 | | Richmond | 2 | | Park | 2 | | Heartstone | 3 | | Pendant | 2 | | Dymas | 1 | | Hel | 1 | | Rory | 12 |
| | persons | | | places | | 0 | "Grove" | | 1 | "London" | | 2 | "Fae" | | 3 | "Richmond" | | 4 | "Park" | | 5 | "Hel" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 86.71% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 79 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "felt like coarse hair beneath her boots" | | 1 | "looked like distant needles on a horizon" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1292 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 104 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 37 | | mean | 34.92 | | std | 25.35 | | cv | 0.726 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 68 | | 1 | 82 | | 2 | 102 | | 3 | 41 | | 4 | 8 | | 5 | 74 | | 6 | 22 | | 7 | 50 | | 8 | 49 | | 9 | 4 | | 10 | 11 | | 11 | 47 | | 12 | 12 | | 13 | 68 | | 14 | 9 | | 15 | 67 | | 16 | 28 | | 17 | 5 | | 18 | 1 | | 19 | 34 | | 20 | 51 | | 21 | 5 | | 22 | 56 | | 23 | 35 | | 24 | 43 | | 25 | 8 | | 26 | 11 | | 27 | 25 | | 28 | 44 | | 29 | 38 | | 30 | 22 | | 31 | 51 | | 32 | 31 | | 33 | 4 | | 34 | 10 | | 35 | 18 | | 36 | 58 |
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| 88.06% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 5 | | totalSentences | 102 | | matches | | 0 | "been slammed" | | 1 | "was perched" | | 2 | "was layered" | | 3 | "was terrified" | | 4 | "being slammed" |
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| 0.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 8 | | totalVerbs | 213 | | matches | | 0 | "was merely investigating" | | 1 | "was looking" | | 2 | "was reacting" | | 3 | "were absorbing" | | 4 | "were blooming" | | 5 | "was pulsing" | | 6 | "were bleeding" | | 7 | "were speaking" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 9 | | semicolonCount | 4 | | flaggedSentences | 9 | | totalSentences | 104 | | ratio | 0.087 | | matches | | 0 | "It didn’t fade; it stopped, as if a door had been slammed shut behind her." | | 1 | "Wildflowers—deep violets, electric yellows, and pale, translucent whites—bloomed in thick, suffocating carpets across the grass." | | 2 | "There was no breeze, which was normal for the Grove, but as she watched a particularly vibrant red blossom, she realized it wasn't just still—it was frozen." | | 3 | "She didn't run—she wasn't the type to panic—but she felt a sudden, urgent need to be back in the noise of the city." | | 4 | "A flicker of movement—something tall, spindly, and the color of ash—ducked behind one of the ancient oaks." | | 5 | "The gem was no longer cool; it was pulsing." | | 6 | "The wildflowers withered into ash; the air turned into a thick, sulfurous fog." | | 7 | "The voice didn't come from the creature's mouth; it resonated inside Rory’s own skull, vibrating through her jawbone." | | 8 | "It reached out a hand—a pale, elongated version of Rory’s own hand—and the fingers were too long, the joints bending at angles that defied human anatomy." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1300 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "single, translucent white wildflower." |
| | adverbCount | 44 | | adverbRatio | 0.033846153846153845 | | lyAdverbCount | 17 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.013076923076923076 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 104 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 104 | | mean | 12.42 | | std | 7.58 | | cv | 0.61 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 30 | | 1 | 23 | | 2 | 15 | | 3 | 13 | | 4 | 11 | | 5 | 16 | | 6 | 15 | | 7 | 27 | | 8 | 12 | | 9 | 18 | | 10 | 24 | | 11 | 19 | | 12 | 29 | | 13 | 26 | | 14 | 15 | | 15 | 8 | | 16 | 8 | | 17 | 27 | | 18 | 14 | | 19 | 8 | | 20 | 17 | | 21 | 3 | | 22 | 2 | | 23 | 17 | | 24 | 15 | | 25 | 5 | | 26 | 10 | | 27 | 20 | | 28 | 12 | | 29 | 23 | | 30 | 14 | | 31 | 4 | | 32 | 2 | | 33 | 9 | | 34 | 2 | | 35 | 9 | | 36 | 11 | | 37 | 8 | | 38 | 17 | | 39 | 4 | | 40 | 8 | | 41 | 21 | | 42 | 17 | | 43 | 6 | | 44 | 9 | | 45 | 15 | | 46 | 9 | | 47 | 3 | | 48 | 8 | | 49 | 14 |
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| 33.65% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 17 | | diversityRatio | 0.22115384615384615 | | totalSentences | 104 | | uniqueOpeners | 23 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 95 | | matches | | 0 | "Then, she heard it." | | 1 | "Slowly, she reached up to" | | 2 | "Then, she felt something." |
| | ratio | 0.032 | |
| 51.58% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 40 | | totalSentences | 95 | | matches | | 0 | "It didn’t fade; it stopped," | | 1 | "She stood still for a" | | 2 | "She had come here tonight" | | 3 | "She told herself she was" | | 4 | "She was looking for a" | | 5 | "She stopped near a cluster" | | 6 | "She reached out to touch" | | 7 | "It simply ceased to exist" | | 8 | "She looked around the grove." | | 9 | "It was a heavy, expectant" | | 10 | "She began to walk back" | | 11 | "She didn't run—she wasn't the" | | 12 | "She turned slowly, scanning the" | | 13 | "she called out" | | 14 | "Her voice sounded thin, stripped" | | 15 | "She shifted her weight, and" | | 16 | "She gasped, clutching the Heartstone" | | 17 | "She looked down at the" | | 18 | "She turned to bolt for" | | 19 | "It was her own voice." |
| | ratio | 0.421 | |
| 38.95% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 80 | | totalSentences | 95 | | matches | | 0 | "The transition was always seamless," | | 1 | "Aurora stepped between the two" | | 2 | "It didn’t fade; it stopped," | | 3 | "She stood still for a" | | 4 | "The Fae Grove didn’t obey" | | 5 | "The light here was a" | | 6 | "Rory reached up and touched" | | 7 | "The deep crimson gem was" | | 8 | "She had come here tonight" | | 9 | "She told herself she was" | | 10 | "She was looking for a" | | 11 | "She stopped near a cluster" | | 12 | "That was when she noticed" | | 13 | "The flowers were blooming, but" | | 14 | "A small, iridescent beetle was" | | 15 | "Rory leaned in, her bright" | | 16 | "She reached out to touch" | | 17 | "It simply ceased to exist" | | 18 | "Rory pulled her hand back," | | 19 | "She looked around the grove." |
| | ratio | 0.842 | |
| 52.63% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 95 | | matches | | 0 | "Even though it was mid-November" |
| | ratio | 0.011 | |
| 23.81% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 60 | | technicalSentenceCount | 10 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora stepped between the two weathered oak standing stones that marked the boundary of the Grove, and the distant hum of London vanished." | | 1 | "The light here was a permanent, bruised purple, the kind of hue that preceded a violent summer storm, though the sky above remained a clear, starless void." | | 2 | "As she walked deeper into the clearing, the grass crunched beneath her boots, but the sound felt dampened, as if the ground were absorbing the noise." | | 3 | "There was no breeze, which was normal for the Grove, but as she watched a particularly vibrant red blossom, she realized it wasn't just still—it was frozen." | | 4 | "The silence, which had initially felt peaceful, now felt predatory." | | 5 | "It was a heavy, expectant silence, the kind that exists in the breath between a question and a terrifying answer." | | 6 | "But it was layered, as if a dozen versions of her were speaking in a tight, overlapping unison." | | 7 | "She clawed at the air, her fingers grazing the rough bark of the first standing stone." | | 8 | "It reached out a hand—a pale, elongated version of Rory’s own hand—and the fingers were too long, the joints bending at angles that defied human anatomy." | | 9 | "She scrambled backward, away from the stones, gasping for air, her chest heaving." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 2 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 1 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "it whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 4 | | tagDensity | 0.25 | | leniency | 0.5 | | rawRatio | 1 | | effectiveRatio | 0.5 | |