| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 2 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 4 | | tagDensity | 0.5 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 87.81% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1231 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 6.58% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1231 | | totalAiIsms | 23 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "navigated" | | 1 | "silence" | | 2 | "rhythmic" | | 3 | "warmth" | | 4 | "pulse" | | 5 | "oppressive" | | 6 | "loomed" | | 7 | "intensity" | | 8 | "weight" | | 9 | "tangible" | | 10 | "whisper" | | 11 | "scanning" | | 12 | "familiar" | | 13 | "affection" | | 14 | "searing" | | 15 | "beacon" | | 16 | "shattered" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 99 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 70.71% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 5 | | narrationSentences | 99 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | 0 | "seem to" | | 1 | "seemed to" | | 2 | "tried to" | | 3 | "began to" |
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| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 101 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 33 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 3 | | markdownWords | 5 | | totalWords | 1224 | | ratio | 0.004 | | matches | | 0 | "Click." | | 1 | "Screee. Screee. Screee." | | 2 | "Scree-scree-scree." |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 5 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 17 | | wordCount | 1215 | | uniqueNames | 7 | | maxNameDensity | 0.58 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 2 | | Park | 2 | | Rory | 7 | | Heartstone | 2 | | Fae | 1 | | Grove | 1 | | London | 2 |
| | persons | | | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "Fae" | | 3 | "Grove" | | 4 | "London" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 77 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "felt like a living thing trying to burr" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1224 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 101 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 36 | | mean | 34 | | std | 23.44 | | cv | 0.69 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 65 | | 1 | 60 | | 2 | 31 | | 3 | 77 | | 4 | 55 | | 5 | 4 | | 6 | 64 | | 7 | 38 | | 8 | 1 | | 9 | 59 | | 10 | 13 | | 11 | 72 | | 12 | 54 | | 13 | 42 | | 14 | 4 | | 15 | 28 | | 16 | 7 | | 17 | 40 | | 18 | 4 | | 19 | 1 | | 20 | 61 | | 21 | 7 | | 22 | 14 | | 23 | 56 | | 24 | 8 | | 25 | 61 | | 26 | 43 | | 27 | 57 | | 28 | 32 | | 29 | 48 | | 30 | 28 | | 31 | 17 | | 32 | 15 | | 33 | 33 | | 34 | 5 | | 35 | 20 |
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| 98.17% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 99 | | matches | | 0 | "being dragged" | | 1 | "were whispered" |
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| 0.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 11 | | totalVerbs | 206 | | matches | | 0 | "were standing" | | 1 | "was playing" | | 2 | "was making" | | 3 | "was burning" | | 4 | "was coming" | | 5 | "was gripping" | | 6 | "were running" | | 7 | "was searing" | | 8 | "was pulsing" | | 9 | "was acting" | | 10 | "wasn't warning" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 7 | | semicolonCount | 6 | | flaggedSentences | 11 | | totalSentences | 101 | | ratio | 0.109 | | matches | | 0 | "It wasn't the gentle heat of a radiator; it was a heartbeat, thrumming against her skin, accelerating as she pushed deeper into the uncharted stretches of the park." | | 1 | "Year-round wildflowers—violets and pale lilies—bloomed in thick, fragrant carpets across the grass, their scent cloying and sweet, like rotting honey." | | 2 | "It wasn't a creature so much as a distortion—a ripple in the air, like heat haze on a summer highway." | | 3 | "The light was playing tricks; the scent of the flowers was making her lightheaded." | | 4 | "It was no longer pulsing; it was burning." | | 5 | "It wasn't a voice she recognized, but it had an inflection that felt hauntingly familiar—a mimicry of affection that didn't reach the tone." | | 6 | "A hand—or something shaped like one—was gripping the edge of the nearest standing stone." | | 7 | "It didn't have nails; it had shards of something translucent and sharp." | | 8 | "Rory didn't scream; her throat had tightened into a hard knot." | | 9 | "It wasn't warning her; it was acting as a beacon." | | 10 | "The noise of the Richmond Park night rushed back in—the wind, the distant sirens of London, the rustle of the leaves." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1225 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 40 | | adverbRatio | 0.0326530612244898 | | lyAdverbCount | 10 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.00816326530612245 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 101 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 101 | | mean | 12.12 | | std | 7.75 | | cv | 0.639 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 15 | | 1 | 26 | | 2 | 6 | | 3 | 18 | | 4 | 17 | | 5 | 28 | | 6 | 15 | | 7 | 14 | | 8 | 10 | | 9 | 7 | | 10 | 24 | | 11 | 20 | | 12 | 33 | | 13 | 8 | | 14 | 26 | | 15 | 21 | | 16 | 4 | | 17 | 27 | | 18 | 4 | | 19 | 15 | | 20 | 18 | | 21 | 12 | | 22 | 26 | | 23 | 1 | | 24 | 2 | | 25 | 15 | | 26 | 10 | | 27 | 6 | | 28 | 14 | | 29 | 1 | | 30 | 11 | | 31 | 4 | | 32 | 9 | | 33 | 16 | | 34 | 17 | | 35 | 20 | | 36 | 19 | | 37 | 9 | | 38 | 5 | | 39 | 14 | | 40 | 18 | | 41 | 8 | | 42 | 10 | | 43 | 9 | | 44 | 8 | | 45 | 15 | | 46 | 4 | | 47 | 11 | | 48 | 14 | | 49 | 1 |
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| 37.13% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 13 | | diversityRatio | 0.2871287128712871 | | totalSentences | 101 | | uniqueOpeners | 29 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 6 | | totalSentences | 88 | | matches | | 0 | "Just the empty clearing and" | | 1 | "Then came the sound." | | 2 | "Then, a voice spoke." | | 3 | "Only the scent of rotting" | | 4 | "Slowly, she reached up to" | | 5 | "Only the wind remained, carrying" |
| | ratio | 0.068 | |
| 42.73% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 39 | | totalSentences | 88 | | matches | | 0 | "She navigated the dense thicket" | | 1 | "She shouldn't have come this" | | 2 | "It wasn't the gentle heat" | | 3 | "She had found it: The" | | 4 | "She had come here seeking" | | 5 | "She stepped forward, her boots" | | 6 | "She reached up to touch" | | 7 | "It had come from behind" | | 8 | "She spun around, swinging her" | | 9 | "she called out" | | 10 | "Her voice sounded flat, swallowed" | | 11 | "She turned back toward the" | | 12 | "It wasn't a creature so" | | 13 | "It shifted behind a wide" | | 14 | "She tried to rationalize it." | | 15 | "She was an intelligent woman," | | 16 | "She didn't believe in ripples" | | 17 | "She began to backtrack, moving" | | 18 | "It was no longer pulsing;" | | 19 | "It started as a whisper," |
| | ratio | 0.443 | |
| 45.23% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 73 | | totalSentences | 88 | | matches | | 0 | "The humidity of the Richmond" | | 1 | "She navigated the dense thicket" | | 2 | "She shouldn't have come this" | | 3 | "The park was officially closed," | | 4 | "The Heartstone pendant rested against" | | 5 | "It wasn't the gentle heat" | | 6 | "Every few steps, the pulse" | | 7 | "The oppressive dampness vanished, replaced" | | 8 | "She had found it: The" | | 9 | "The clearing opened up before" | | 10 | "Year-round wildflowers—violets and pale lilies—bloomed" | | 11 | "Rory stopped at the edge" | | 12 | "She had come here seeking" | | 13 | "The silence was wrong." | | 14 | "Here, there was nothing." | | 15 | "The air felt thick, as" | | 16 | "She stepped forward, her boots" | | 17 | "She reached up to touch" | | 18 | "The sound had been sharp," | | 19 | "It had come from behind" |
| | ratio | 0.83 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 88 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 21.79% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 59 | | technicalSentenceCount | 10 | | matches | | 0 | "She navigated the dense thicket of brush, her sneakers sinking into the loam, the beam of her flashlight cutting a narrow, jittery path through the dark." | | 1 | "The park was officially closed, and the silence that had settled over the woods felt heavy, almost intentional." | | 2 | "Year-round wildflowers—violets and pale lilies—bloomed in thick, fragrant carpets across the grass, their scent cloying and sweet, like rotting honey." | | 3 | "At the perimeter, the ancient oak standing stones loomed, their grey surfaces pitted and scarred by centuries of wind, marking a boundary that felt less like a …" | | 4 | "She reached up to touch the pendant, which was now vibrating with such intensity it felt like a living thing trying to burrow into her chest." | | 5 | "It shifted behind a wide oak tree, a fluid, sliding motion that lacked the jerky cadence of an animal." | | 6 | "It wasn't a voice she recognized, but it had an inflection that felt hauntingly familiar—a mimicry of affection that didn't reach the tone." | | 7 | "Only the scent of rotting honey, which was growing stronger, almost suffocating." | | 8 | "It was ten feet away, crouching in a distorted heap, its limbs folding like a spider's." | | 9 | "Rory didn't stop running until she reached the paved path, her lungs burning, her legs shaking." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 2 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "she demanded, her voice trembling" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 1 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | | dialogueSentences | 4 | | tagDensity | 0.25 | | leniency | 0.5 | | rawRatio | 1 | | effectiveRatio | 0.5 | |