Run: 2026-05-10-01KR921DC8XZ32N4PZHVSZEJ4Y

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Duration:
3m 35s
Cost:
$0.000635
Provider:
DekaLLM

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System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The green neon hummed with a low, electric vibration that Rory felt in the marrow of her bones. It was a restless sound, one that mirrored the damp chill of the Soho evening clinging to her jacket. She pushed through the heavy door of The Raven's Nest, the scent of aged whiskey, stale tobacco, and rain-slicked pavement rushing to meet her. The bar was a cavern of shadows and half-remembered histories. On the walls, black-and-white photographs of faces long since forgotten stared out from beneath layers of dust, and old maps of cities that no longer existed hung like tattered skin. It was the kind of place where people came to be lost, or to ensure they stayed hidden. Rory navigated the narrow aisle toward the bar, her movements practiced and efficient. Her delivery bag, heavy with the scent of ginger and soy from Golden Empress, sat on a stool beside her. She reached up to tuck a strand of shoulder-length black hair behind her ear, her fingers grazing the small, crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist. It was a phantom itch, a reminder of a girl who had lived in a different version of the world. She was halfway to the counter when the movement near the corner booth caught her eye. A man sat there, shrouded in the amber glow of a low-hanging lamp. He was leaning forward, his silhouette sharp against the dark wood. As he turned to reach for a glass, the light caught the silver of a signet ring on his right hand. Rory froze. The breath hitched in her throat, a sudden, violent interruption to her steady rhythm. "Liam?" she whispered, though the name felt like a relic she had unearthed from a shallow grave. The man paused. He didn't turn immediately. He took a slow, deliberate sip of his drink, his shoulders squaring in a way that felt fundamentally wrong. When he finally looked up, the man staring back at her was a stranger wearing a ghost’s face. The boy she had known in Cardiff had been all soft edges and bright, easy laughter. He had been a person of sunlight and unexamined certainties. This man was carved from granite and shadow. His jaw was heavy, his eyes shadowed by a weariness that went deeper than mere lack of sleep, and there was a hardness to his mouth that suggested he had forgotten how to smile. "Rory," he said. His voice had dropped an octave, roughened by time or perhaps by things he had had to say. She moved toward him, drawn by a gravitational pull she couldn't resist, despite the instinctual alarm bells ringing in her head. She slid into the booth opposite him, her damp coat crinkling loudly in the relative quiet of the bar. "You look... different," she said, the understatement hanging between them like a fog. Liam let out a short, dry sound that might have been a laugh if there had been any humor behind it. "Time tends to do that. It wears the soft parts away." "I didn't think I'd see you in London," Rory said, her eyes tracing the new lines around his eyes. "I didn't even know you were in England." "I'm not. Not really," Liam replied. He looked away, his gaze wandering to a map of the Mediterranean pinned to the wall. "I move around. It’s easier that way. Less luggage." Rory felt a sudden, sharp pang of regret. She thought of her own life—the frantic, grinding reality of deliveries, the cramped flat above the bar, the way she had fled Cardiff only to find herself running in circles in a much larger city. She had thought she was escaping a life, but she was merely changing the scenery of her survival. "You sound like you've been running a long time," she said softly. Liam finally met her eyes. The intensity in his gaze was unnerving. "We’re all running, Rory. Some of us just stop trying to pretend we're going somewhere." The silence that followed was heavy, laden with the weight of the years they had lost to each other. They had been inseparable once, a pair of bright-eyed students convinced the world was a puzzle they were meant to solve. Now, they were just two people sitting in a dim bar, surrounded by the relics of other people's lives. "How is your mother?" Liam asked, a sudden, fragile moment of the old Liam breaking through the veneer. "Is she still teaching?" "She is," Rory said, her voice softening. "She’s in Cardiff. She still sends me books. Every month, a new one arrives, usually with a note asking if I've finally decided to take the law exams." "And have you?" Rory looked down at her hands. The knuckles were slightly red from the cold. "I try. But the days get away from me. I work, I sleep, I repeat. It’s hard to study the law when you’re too busy trying to navigate the streets." "It’s not the same," Liam said, his voice tinged with something that sounded suspiciously like envy. "The law has rules. It has a beginning and an end. It assumes people act with intent." "And you don't?" Liam leaned back, the light failing to reach the hollows of his cheeks. "I act out of necessity. There's a difference." Rory watched him, searching for a crack in the armor. She wanted to reach across the table and grab his hand, to see if the man she once loved was still buried under the layers of whatever life had forged him into. But the distance between them felt insurmountable, a chasm carved by secrets and silence. "I heard about Evan," Liam said abruptly. Rory stiffened. The name felt like a physical blow. "What?" "Word travels. Even in places like this." He watched her closely, his expression unreadable. "I heard you left. I heard it was... difficult." "It was," Rory said, her voice tight. She refused to let the vulnerability show, refused to let him see the scar of that period in her life. "But I'm fine. I'm here. I'm doing my own thing." "Are you?" Liam asked. It wasn't an accusation; it was a question of profound, aching curiosity. "Or are you just hiding in a different shadow?" Rory felt the sting of tears but blinked them back. She wouldn't give him that. Not here. Not now. "I'm not hiding, Liam. I'm living. There's a difference." "Is there?" He reached for his glass, his movements precise and controlled. As he did, his sleeve slid back, revealing a glimpse of a dark, faded tattoo on his forearm—something geometric and sharp. It looked like a mark of ownership, or perhaps a brand. "Who are you now, Liam?" she asked, her voice barely a whisper. He looked at her, and for a fleeting second, the hardness vanished. In its place was a raw, naked grief that mirrored her own. It was the look of a man who had seen too much and understood too little. "I'm just a man who knows how to stay quiet," he said. He stood up, the movement causing his knee to give a slight, audible click. He didn't limp, but there was a stiffness in his gait that hadn't been there before. "I have to go," he said. "Will I see you again?" Rory asked, the question sounding foolish even to her own ears. Liam paused, his hand resting on the edge of the table. He looked at her, really looked at her, as if trying to memorize the blue of her eyes or the way the dim light caught the black of her hair. "Maybe," he said. "But don't wait for me, Rory. It's a bad habit to wait for people who aren't coming back." He turned and walked toward the door, his silhouette merging with the shadows of the bar. Rory watched him go, the green neon sign flickering above him like a dying pulse. When the door swung shut, the heavy thud of it echoed through the room, leaving her alone with the maps, the photographs, and the suffocating silence of the Nest. She sat there for a long time, the cold of the evening seeping back into her skin. She thought of the boy in the sunlight and the man in the shadow, and she realized with a crushing certainty that the tragedy wasn't that they had changed. The tragedy was that they had both survived.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
88.89% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags18
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"she said softly [softly]"
1"Liam said abruptly [abruptly]"
dialogueSentences36
tagDensity0.5
leniency1
rawRatio0.111
effectiveRatio0.111
85.83% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1411
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"really"
count2
1
adverb"softly"
count1
2
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"really"
1"softly"
2"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
22.04% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1411
totalAiIsms22
found
0
word"electric"
count1
1
word"chill"
count1
2
word"ensure"
count1
3
word"navigated"
count1
4
word"efficient"
count1
5
word"reminder"
count1
6
word"grave"
count1
7
word"tracing"
count1
8
word"pang"
count1
9
word"intensity"
count1
10
word"silence"
count3
11
word"weight"
count1
12
word"navigate"
count1
13
word"tinged"
count1
14
word"unreadable"
count1
15
word"profound"
count1
16
word"whisper"
count1
17
word"fleeting"
count1
18
word"pulse"
count1
19
word"echoed"
count1
highlights
0"electric"
1"chill"
2"ensure"
3"navigated"
4"efficient"
5"reminder"
6"grave"
7"tracing"
8"pang"
9"intensity"
10"silence"
11"weight"
12"navigate"
13"tinged"
14"unreadable"
15"profound"
16"whisper"
17"fleeting"
18"pulse"
19"echoed"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences85
matches
0"felt the sting"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences85
filterMatches
0"see"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences103
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen36
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1409
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions16
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
66.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions32
wordCount1139
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity1.14
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Rory13
Soho1
Raven1
Nest2
Golden1
Empress1
Cardiff2
Liam10
Mediterranean1
persons
0"Rory"
1"Raven"
2"Empress"
3"Liam"
4"Mediterranean"
places
0"Soho"
1"Golden"
2"Cardiff"
globalScore0.929
windowScore0.667
0.75% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences67
glossingSentenceCount4
matches
0"felt like a relic she had unearthed fro"
1"felt like a physical blow"
2"looked like a mark of ownership, or perha"
3"as if trying to memorize the blue of her eyes or the way the dim light caught the black of her hair"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1409
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences103
matches
0"was that they"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs44
mean32.02
std19.74
cv0.616
sampleLengths
061
158
278
361
416
517
644
768
821
940
1013
1132
1227
1331
1461
1512
1627
1759
1822
1935
203
2144
2233
233
2421
2556
267
2710
2823
2937
3025
3128
322
3342
3412
3540
3612
3730
386
3916
4041
4121
4260
4354
97.01% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences85
matches
0"was carved"
1"were meant"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs193
matches
0"was escaping"
1"was merely changing"
59.64% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences103
ratio0.029
matches
0"She thought of her own life—the frantic, grinding reality of deliveries, the cramped flat above the bar, the way she had fled Cardiff only to find herself running in circles in a much larger city."
1"It wasn't an accusation; it was a question of profound, aching curiosity."
2"As he did, his sleeve slid back, revealing a glimpse of a dark, faded tattoo on his forearm—something geometric and sharp."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1149
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small, crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount40
adverbRatio0.034812880765883375
lyAdverbCount14
lyAdverbRatio0.012184508268059183
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences103
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences103
mean13.68
std7.84
cv0.573
sampleLengths
018
119
224
310
430
518
613
720
825
920
1016
1113
1211
1321
142
1514
1617
173
184
1919
2018
2116
2210
238
2434
253
2618
2721
2819
2913
3021
3111
3219
338
346
3516
369
378
3835
3918
4012
415
427
4315
4419
4521
4619
4718
484
497
43.04% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats9
diversityRatio0.3106796116504854
totalSentences103
uniqueOpeners32
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences75
matches(empty)
ratio0
17.33% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount38
totalSentences75
matches
0"It was a restless sound,"
1"She pushed through the heavy"
2"It was the kind of"
3"Her delivery bag, heavy with"
4"She reached up to tuck"
5"It was a phantom itch,"
6"She was halfway to the"
7"He was leaning forward, his"
8"she whispered, though the name"
9"He didn't turn immediately."
10"He took a slow, deliberate"
11"He had been a person"
12"His jaw was heavy, his"
13"His voice had dropped an"
14"She moved toward him, drawn"
15"She slid into the booth"
16"she said, the understatement hanging"
17"He looked away, his gaze"
18"She thought of her own"
19"She had thought she was"
ratio0.507
13.33% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount67
totalSentences75
matches
0"The green neon hummed with"
1"It was a restless sound,"
2"She pushed through the heavy"
3"The bar was a cavern"
4"It was the kind of"
5"Rory navigated the narrow aisle"
6"Her delivery bag, heavy with"
7"She reached up to tuck"
8"It was a phantom itch,"
9"She was halfway to the"
10"A man sat there, shrouded"
11"He was leaning forward, his"
12"The breath hitched in her"
13"she whispered, though the name"
14"The man paused."
15"He didn't turn immediately."
16"He took a slow, deliberate"
17"The boy she had known"
18"He had been a person"
19"This man was carved from"
ratio0.893
66.67% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences75
matches
0"Now, they were just two"
ratio0.013
87.91% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences52
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"He took a slow, deliberate sip of his drink, his shoulders squaring in a way that felt fundamentally wrong."
1"His jaw was heavy, his eyes shadowed by a weariness that went deeper than mere lack of sleep, and there was a hardness to his mouth that suggested he had forgot…"
2"It was the look of a man who had seen too much and understood too little."
3"He looked at her, really looked at her, as if trying to memorize the blue of her eyes or the way the dim light caught the black of her hair."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags18
uselessAdditionCount8
matches
0"she whispered, though the name felt like a relic she had unearthed from a shallow grave"
1"she said, the understatement hanging between them like a fog"
2"Rory said, her eyes tracing the new lines around his eyes"
3"Rory said, her voice softening"
4"He watched, his expression unreadable"
5"Rory said, her voice tight"
6"she asked, her voice barely a whisper"
7"Rory asked, the question sounding foolish even to her own ears"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags17
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"she whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences36
tagDensity0.472
leniency0.944
rawRatio0.059
effectiveRatio0.056
74.7701%