| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | |
| 88.24% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1276 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "slowly" | | 1 | "suddenly" | | 2 | "tightly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 5.96% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1276 | | totalAiIsms | 24 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "chill" | | 1 | "synthetic" | | 2 | "tracing" | | 3 | "oppressive" | | 4 | "silence" | | 5 | "rhythmic" | | 6 | "weight" | | 7 | "grave" | | 8 | "pulsed" | | 9 | "synchronized" | | 10 | "throb" | | 11 | "flickered" | | 12 | "dancing" | | 13 | "stark" | | 14 | "navigating" | | 15 | "spectral" | | 16 | "flicker" | | 17 | "familiar" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 94 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 66.87% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 4 | | narrationSentences | 94 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | 0 | "tried to" | | 1 | "seemed to" | | 2 | "began to" |
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| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 94 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 43 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 3 | | markdownWords | 12 | | totalWords | 1270 | | ratio | 0.009 | | matches | | 0 | "Don't run," | | 1 | "The moment you run, you’re the prey." | | 2 | "Time moves differently," |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 3 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 29 | | wordCount | 1270 | | uniqueNames | 12 | | maxNameDensity | 0.71 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 2 | | Park | 1 | | London | 2 | | October | 1 | | Aurora | 9 | | Evan | 1 | | Heartstone | 3 | | Eva | 1 | | Cardiff | 1 | | Fae | 1 | | Grove | 6 | | Tube | 1 |
| | persons | | | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "London" | | 3 | "Cardiff" | | 4 | "Fae" | | 5 | "Grove" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 84.21% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 76 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "torso that seemed to ripple like ink dropped in water" | | 1 | "looked like nothing more than aged rock," |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.787 | | wordCount | 1270 | | matches | | 0 | "not a gust, but a languid, deliberate drift of air" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 94 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 86.54% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 27 | | mean | 47.04 | | std | 21.3 | | cv | 0.453 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 71 | | 1 | 87 | | 2 | 55 | | 3 | 57 | | 4 | 58 | | 5 | 3 | | 6 | 21 | | 7 | 50 | | 8 | 34 | | 9 | 81 | | 10 | 15 | | 11 | 47 | | 12 | 43 | | 13 | 11 | | 14 | 63 | | 15 | 33 | | 16 | 19 | | 17 | 32 | | 18 | 54 | | 19 | 39 | | 20 | 70 | | 21 | 49 | | 22 | 34 | | 23 | 70 | | 24 | 73 | | 25 | 49 | | 26 | 52 |
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| 94.06% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 94 | | matches | | 0 | "was carpeted" | | 1 | "was cushioned" | | 2 | "being pinched" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 3 | | totalVerbs | 215 | | matches | | 0 | "was coming" | | 1 | "were slowly corkscrewing" | | 2 | "were folding" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 7 | | semicolonCount | 3 | | flaggedSentences | 9 | | totalSentences | 94 | | ratio | 0.096 | | matches | | 0 | "Underfoot, the ground—which should have been dormant frost-bitten mud—was carpeted in vibrant, impossible wildflowers." | | 1 | "It was the sound of something dry breaking—like a hollow bone being pinched between two calloused thumbs." | | 2 | "The oaks here weren't normal trees; their bark twisted in spirals that suggested movement, as if they were slowly corkscrewing themselves into the ground." | | 3 | "A breeze moved through the clearing—not a gust, but a languid, deliberate drift of air that smelled of ozone and damp grave dirt." | | 4 | "Its shadow, stark and elongated by the pendant’s glow, showed a cluster of limbs—too many limbs, dragging behind an elongated torso that seemed to ripple like ink dropped in water." | | 5 | "It wasn't the distant observation of a bystander; it was the intense, microscopic focus of someone leaning in to sniff the back of her neck." | | 6 | "She didn't look down, fearing what she might see—or what might be trying to hold her back." | | 7 | "But as she watched, she saw a flicker of crimson light deep within the undergrowth—far from where any human could hope to be." | | 8 | "She didn't look back; she walked toward the main road, the familiar sting of the London cold hitting her face." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1280 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "dormant frost-bitten mud—" |
| | adverbCount | 35 | | adverbRatio | 0.02734375 | | lyAdverbCount | 9 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.00703125 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 94 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 94 | | mean | 13.51 | | std | 7.69 | | cv | 0.569 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 16 | | 1 | 23 | | 2 | 15 | | 3 | 17 | | 4 | 2 | | 5 | 23 | | 6 | 20 | | 7 | 13 | | 8 | 29 | | 9 | 7 | | 10 | 28 | | 11 | 20 | | 12 | 7 | | 13 | 14 | | 14 | 14 | | 15 | 22 | | 16 | 7 | | 17 | 22 | | 18 | 5 | | 19 | 24 | | 20 | 3 | | 21 | 4 | | 22 | 17 | | 23 | 2 | | 24 | 14 | | 25 | 24 | | 26 | 10 | | 27 | 4 | | 28 | 2 | | 29 | 16 | | 30 | 12 | | 31 | 2 | | 32 | 3 | | 33 | 3 | | 34 | 23 | | 35 | 14 | | 36 | 14 | | 37 | 3 | | 38 | 19 | | 39 | 15 | | 40 | 11 | | 41 | 6 | | 42 | 30 | | 43 | 3 | | 44 | 24 | | 45 | 16 | | 46 | 4 | | 47 | 7 | | 48 | 12 | | 49 | 10 |
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| 36.52% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 14 | | diversityRatio | 0.30851063829787234 | | totalSentences | 94 | | uniqueOpeners | 29 | |
| 74.07% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 90 | | matches | | 0 | "Then, a snap." | | 1 | "Then again, from six feet" |
| | ratio | 0.022 | |
| 46.67% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 39 | | totalSentences | 90 | | matches | | 0 | "It grew thick, synthetic, and" | | 1 | "She rubbed her left wrist," | | 2 | "She reached into her neckline," | | 3 | "She hadn't told anyone she" | | 4 | "They were bruised purples and" | | 5 | "It was a physical weight," | | 6 | "It wasn't twigs underfoot." | | 7 | "It was the sound of" | | 8 | "She kept her eyes forward," | | 9 | "She forced herself to breathe," | | 10 | "It pulsed, a rhythmic, synchronized" | | 11 | "She looked down." | | 12 | "Its shadow, stark and elongated" | | 13 | "Her brain, sharpened by years" | | 14 | "She kept her posture steady," | | 15 | "She began to back away," | | 16 | "She saw nothing but the" | | 17 | "It wasn't the distant observation" | | 18 | "She heard the sound again," | | 19 | "It was a wet, clicking" |
| | ratio | 0.433 | |
| 87.78% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 67 | | totalSentences | 90 | | matches | | 0 | "The air in Richmond Park" | | 1 | "It grew thick, synthetic, and" | | 2 | "She rubbed her left wrist," | | 3 | "The skin there felt tight," | | 4 | "She reached into her neckline," | | 5 | "The deep crimson gem was" | | 6 | "She hadn't told anyone she" | | 7 | "Aurora moved deeper into the" | | 8 | "Underfoot, the ground—which should have" | | 9 | "They were bruised purples and" | | 10 | "Every step she took was" | | 11 | "Here, the silence was predatory." | | 12 | "It was a physical weight," | | 13 | "It wasn't twigs underfoot." | | 14 | "It was the sound of" | | 15 | "She kept her eyes forward," | | 16 | "The oaks here weren't normal" | | 17 | "She forced herself to breathe," | | 18 | "This was Richmond, after all," | | 19 | "The air shifted." |
| | ratio | 0.744 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 90 | | matches | | 0 | "Even Eva, who had been" | | 1 | "If an hour inside could" |
| | ratio | 0.022 | |
| 40.82% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 63 | | technicalSentenceCount | 9 | | matches | | 0 | "Underfoot, the ground—which should have been dormant frost-bitten mud—was carpeted in vibrant, impossible wildflowers." | | 1 | "Every step she took was cushioned by the mossy floor, silencing her boots, stripping her of the comfort of her own footfalls." | | 2 | "It was a physical weight, pressing against her eardrums until they hummed with the effort of trying to catch a sound that wasn't there." | | 3 | "The oaks here weren't normal trees; their bark twisted in spirals that suggested movement, as if they were slowly corkscrewing themselves into the ground." | | 4 | "A breeze moved through the clearing—not a gust, but a languid, deliberate drift of air that smelled of ozone and damp grave dirt." | | 5 | "It pulsed, a rhythmic, synchronized throb that matched the hammering of her own heart." | | 6 | "Its shadow, stark and elongated by the pendant’s glow, showed a cluster of limbs—too many limbs, dragging behind an elongated torso that seemed to ripple like i…" | | 7 | "She kept her posture steady, her hand hovering just beneath the pendant, thumbing the silver chain." | | 8 | "She touched her wrist, her thumb tracing the crescent-shaped scar, and realized she could still feel the phantom sensation of a touch pressing against the fabri…" |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 0 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |