| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 2 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 3 | | tagDensity | 0.667 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1547 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1547 | | totalAiIsms | 33 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "rhythmic" | | 1 | "weight" | | 2 | "chill" | | 3 | "scanned" | | 4 | "familiar" | | 5 | "warmth" | | 6 | "pulsed" | | 7 | "vibrated" | | 8 | "silence" | | 9 | "racing" | | 10 | "echoed" | | 11 | "footsteps" | | 12 | "could feel" | | 13 | "flicker" | | 14 | "gloom" | | 15 | "searing" | | 16 | "structure" | | 17 | "pulse" | | 18 | "stomach" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "knuckles turned white" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 104 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 60.44% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 6 | | narrationSentences | 104 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 105 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 47 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 3 | | markdownWords | 17 | | totalWords | 1538 | | ratio | 0.011 | | matches | | 0 | "Don't look back," | | 1 | "There is a rational explanation. Atmospheric pressure. Optical illusions caused by low light." | | 2 | "snap" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 5 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 21 | | wordCount | 1526 | | uniqueNames | 12 | | maxNameDensity | 0.33 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Aurora | 5 | | Golden | 1 | | Empress | 1 | | Silas | 1 | | London | 2 | | Heartstone | 5 | | Pendant | 1 | | Fae | 1 | | Grove | 1 | | God | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Aurora" | | 1 | "Empress" | | 2 | "Silas" | | 3 | "Heartstone" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "Golden" | | 3 | "London" | | 4 | "Fae" | | 5 | "Grove" | | 6 | "God" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 4.65% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 86 | | glossingSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "drop that seemed to suck the breath from her lungs" | | 1 | "felt like an intrusion upon the silence" | | 2 | "felt like a panicked heartbeat" | | 3 | "looked like stone; they looked like teeth" | | 4 | "looked like teeth, jagged and enormous, r" | | 5 | "felt like liquid, thick and sweet" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.65 | | wordCount | 1538 | | matches | | 0 | "not toward a path, but toward the only thing" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 105 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 39 | | mean | 39.44 | | std | 24.21 | | cv | 0.614 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 89 | | 1 | 4 | | 2 | 86 | | 3 | 41 | | 4 | 6 | | 5 | 51 | | 6 | 27 | | 7 | 7 | | 8 | 76 | | 9 | 63 | | 10 | 32 | | 11 | 20 | | 12 | 7 | | 13 | 39 | | 14 | 43 | | 15 | 55 | | 16 | 7 | | 17 | 60 | | 18 | 31 | | 19 | 77 | | 20 | 5 | | 21 | 42 | | 22 | 10 | | 23 | 48 | | 24 | 57 | | 25 | 6 | | 26 | 21 | | 27 | 51 | | 28 | 29 | | 29 | 60 | | 30 | 36 | | 31 | 40 | | 32 | 11 | | 33 | 59 | | 34 | 31 | | 35 | 23 | | 36 | 68 | | 37 | 69 | | 38 | 51 |
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| 85.02% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 6 | | totalSentences | 104 | | matches | | 0 | "were erased" | | 1 | "being watched" | | 2 | "was gone" | | 3 | "was trapped" | | 4 | "was cracked" | | 5 | "being digested" |
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| 0.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 12 | | totalVerbs | 249 | | matches | | 0 | "were blooming" | | 1 | "was currently humming" | | 2 | "was standing" | | 3 | "was already beginning" | | 4 | "wasn't being" | | 5 | "was pulsing" | | 6 | "was walking" | | 7 | "was coming" | | 8 | "was circling" | | 9 | "was circling" | | 10 | "was throbbing" | | 11 | "wasn't just pulsing" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 9 | | semicolonCount | 9 | | flaggedSentences | 16 | | totalSentences | 105 | | ratio | 0.152 | | matches | | 0 | "It wasn't the crisp, damp chill of a London autumn; it was a sudden, vacuum-like drop that seemed to suck the breath from her lungs." | | 1 | "The scent of the city—exhaust, wet asphalt, and distant electricity—vanished, replaced by an overwhelming, cloying perfume of wildflowers." | | 2 | "The sounds of the city—the distant hum of the M3, the occasional siren—didn't fade so much as they were erased." | | 3 | "One moment, the world was alive with the muffled heartbeat of London; the next, she was standing in a vacuum." | | 4 | "The silence in the Fae Grove wasn't the absence of noise; it was a presence." | | 5 | "Every time she turned her head, she caught the suggestion of movement—a shadow stretching too far, a branch swaying when there was no wind." | | 6 | "It wasn't the sharp crack of a twig under a foot; it was the wet, splintering sound of something breaking." | | 7 | "It didn't walk; it flowed, a smear of white against the darkness that vanished the moment she focused her gaze on it." | | 8 | "The light didn't penetrate the darkness; it seemed to be swallowed by it." | | 9 | "They no longer looked like stone; they looked like teeth, jagged and enormous, rising from the earth to bite the sky." | | 10 | "She could hear the weight of it—the heavy, rhythmic dragging of something large moving through the undergrowth." | | 11 | "It wasn't just pulsing anymore; it was throbbing in time with her own terror." | | 12 | "It didn't step into the light; it seemed to be made of the darkness itself, a silhouette that was darker than the night around it." | | 13 | "She scrambled to grab the phone, her fingers brushing the small, crescent-shaped scar on her wrist—a nervous habit she had fallen into since she was a child." | | 14 | "It had no face, yet she could feel its gaze—a cold, predatory hunger that stripped her bare." | | 15 | "The Heartstone flared, a blinding, crimson light that tore through the gloom, and for a heartbeat, she saw the exit—a narrow slit of moonlight between two ancient oaks." |
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| 82.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1537 | | adjectiveStacks | 3 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "underwater, pressing against her" | | 1 | "harsh, clinical white glow." | | 2 | "small, crescent-shaped scar" |
| | adverbCount | 45 | | adverbRatio | 0.029277813923227064 | | lyAdverbCount | 9 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.005855562784645413 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 105 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 105 | | mean | 14.65 | | std | 8.32 | | cv | 0.568 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 28 | | 1 | 24 | | 2 | 37 | | 3 | 4 | | 4 | 24 | | 5 | 25 | | 6 | 18 | | 7 | 19 | | 8 | 4 | | 9 | 20 | | 10 | 17 | | 11 | 6 | | 12 | 11 | | 13 | 17 | | 14 | 4 | | 15 | 19 | | 16 | 14 | | 17 | 13 | | 18 | 7 | | 19 | 6 | | 20 | 20 | | 21 | 20 | | 22 | 15 | | 23 | 15 | | 24 | 20 | | 25 | 24 | | 26 | 19 | | 27 | 19 | | 28 | 5 | | 29 | 2 | | 30 | 6 | | 31 | 6 | | 32 | 14 | | 33 | 7 | | 34 | 2 | | 35 | 17 | | 36 | 20 | | 37 | 14 | | 38 | 16 | | 39 | 13 | | 40 | 16 | | 41 | 5 | | 42 | 13 | | 43 | 21 | | 44 | 7 | | 45 | 7 | | 46 | 17 | | 47 | 14 | | 48 | 22 | | 49 | 12 |
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| 32.86% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 18 | | diversityRatio | 0.23809523809523808 | | totalSentences | 105 | | uniqueOpeners | 25 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 101 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 6.14% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 54 | | totalSentences | 101 | | matches | | 0 | "She adjusted the strap of" | | 1 | "She shouldn't have taken the" | | 2 | "It wasn't the crisp, damp" | | 3 | "They were blooming in thick," | | 4 | "Her bright blue eyes scanned" | | 5 | "Their bark was too smooth," | | 6 | "She reached inside her jacket," | | 7 | "It was a warning." | | 8 | "she whispered, her voice sounding" | | 9 | "She hated how her own" | | 10 | "She stepped past the first" | | 11 | "It felt heavy, like being" | | 12 | "She kept moving, her eyes" | | 13 | "It was the sensation of" | | 14 | "It was pulsing faster now," | | 15 | "It wasn't the sharp crack" | | 16 | "She held her breath, her" | | 17 | "She waited for a deer" | | 18 | "She forced herself to take" | | 19 | "She could feel the impact" |
| | ratio | 0.535 | |
| 24.36% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 88 | | totalSentences | 101 | | matches | | 0 | "The gravel of the Richmond" | | 1 | "She adjusted the strap of" | | 2 | "She shouldn't have taken the" | | 3 | "The air changed first." | | 4 | "It wasn't the crisp, damp" | | 5 | "The scent of the city—exhaust," | | 6 | "They were blooming in thick," | | 7 | "Aurora slowed her pace." | | 8 | "Her bright blue eyes scanned" | | 9 | "Their bark was too smooth," | | 10 | "A warmth bloomed against her" | | 11 | "She reached inside her jacket," | | 12 | "The deep crimson gem pulsed" | | 13 | "It was a warning." | | 14 | "The stone never lied, and" | | 15 | "she whispered, her voice sounding" | | 16 | "She hated how her own" | | 17 | "She stepped past the first" | | 18 | "The transition was seamless, yet" | | 19 | "The sounds of the city—the" |
| | ratio | 0.871 | |
| 49.50% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 101 | | matches | | 0 | "To her right, near the" |
| | ratio | 0.01 | |
| 28.57% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 75 | | technicalSentenceCount | 12 | | matches | | 0 | "The gravel of the Richmond Park perimeter path crunched beneath Aurora’s boots, a rhythmic, lonely sound that felt far too loud in the suffocating stillness of …" | | 1 | "As she veered off the manicured paths and toward the ancient oak standing stones that marked the boundary of the grove, the temperature plummeted." | | 2 | "It wasn't the crisp, damp chill of a London autumn; it was a sudden, vacuum-like drop that seemed to suck the breath from her lungs." | | 3 | "Their bark was too smooth, their branches twisting in geometries that defied the natural reach of wood." | | 4 | "The deep crimson gem pulsed beneath her touch, a steady, rhythmic heat that vibrated against her skin." | | 5 | "The stone never lied, and it was currently humming with a frantic, thrumming energy that made her fingertips ache." | | 6 | "It was the sensation of being watched by something massive and many-eyed, something that moved only when she blinked." | | 7 | "It was pulsing faster now, a rhythmic heat that felt like a panicked heartbeat." | | 8 | "Their petals were translucent, veined with something that looked uncomfortably like bruised flesh, and they leaned toward her, as if drawn to the warmth of her …" | | 9 | "It was a presence, a void in the shape of a man, but elongated, its limbs too long, its joints bending at angles that suggested a skeletal structure built for s…" | | 10 | "It had no face, yet she could feel its gaze—a cold, predatory hunger that stripped her bare." | | 11 | "The Heartstone flared, a blinding, crimson light that tore through the gloom, and for a heartbeat, she saw the exit—a narrow slit of moonlight between two ancie…" |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 2 | | uselessAdditionCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "she whispered, her voice sounding thin and brittle" | | 1 | "she demanded, her voice cracking" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 2 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she whispered (whisper)" | | 1 | "she demanded (demand)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 3 | | tagDensity | 0.667 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 1 | | effectiveRatio | 1 | |