Run: 2026-05-19-01KS0TPBA5MNJX3VQRH842HFX1

Run Details

Duration:
28.9s
Cost:
$0.046461
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The rain had slicked the Soho cobbles into black mirrors by seven o’clock, bleeding the distinctive green neon of the sign above the entrance into long, shivering streaks across the pavement. Inside The Raven's Nest, the air carried the familiar, comforting weight of damp wool, spilled stout, and the faint, sweet trace of lemon wax. Aurora Carter sat on her usual stool at the far corner of the mahogany bar, her back to the stairs that led up to her small flat. She was twenty-five, but tonight, after a grueling four-hour shift hauling paper bags of spring rolls and chow mein through the cold drizzle for Yu-Fei Cheung’s Golden Express, she felt older. Her shoulder-length black hair was damp at the tips, clinging to the collar of her worn waxed jacket. With her thumb, she traced the small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist—a childhood souvenir from a Cardiff garden wall, though these days she touched it more out of habit than memory, a physical anchor when her thoughts began to drift. Behind the bar, Silas Blackwood moved with his characteristic, quiet efficiency. He was fifty-eight, tall and broad-shouldered, though his left leg dragged slightly—the permanent souvenir of a cold winter night in Prague long before he had ever bought the Nest. The silver signet ring on his right hand clinked against the glass of a tumbler as he polished it, his hazel eyes scanning the sparsely populated room. He didn’t speak, but his presence was a steady, grounding force, the only constant in Rory’s life since she had fled London’s outskirts to hide in the city’s crowded center. The brass bell above the door chimed, letting in a swirl of cold air and the muffled roar of evening traffic. Rory didn’t look up immediately. People came and went through the Nest’s double doors, seeking temporary shelter or a quiet corner beneath the faded, frame-hung maps of forgotten military campaigns. But then came the sound of heels—sharp, confident, tapping a rhythmic cadence across the floorboards. "Excuse me," a voice said. It was crisp, carrying the distinct, slightly rounded vowels of Cardiff’s affluent Northern suburbs. "Just a dry martini, please. French gin, if you have it." Rory’s hand froze against her wrist. She turned her head slowly, her bright blue eyes narrowing against the dim amber light of the bar. The woman standing a few feet away was shaking out a sleek black umbrella. She wore a tailored camel-wool coat that looked as though it had never encountered a crowded Tube carriage, and her blonde hair was pinned back in an immaculate, expensive twist. "Carys?" Rory said, the name tasting foreign and heavy on her tongue. The woman turned. Her expression shifted from professional detachment to blank confusion, and then, with a sudden, sharp intake of breath, to recognition. "Rory? Oh my god. Aurora?" For a second, neither of them moved. The space between them felt vast, filled with the ghosts of lecture halls on Corbett Road, the cheap cider they used to drink in Bute Park, and the heavy, suffocating silence that had followed Rory’s sudden disappearance from Cardiff three years ago. "It is you," Carys said, stepping closer. She reached out as if to hug Rory, but hesitated, her hands lingering in the air before dropping to her sides. She settled for sitting on the stool next to Rory’s, her movements fluid and practiced. "I can’t believe it. What are you doing here? In a place like this?" Carys looked around the Nest, her eyes lingering on the dark wood, the peeling black-and-white photographs of mid-century London, and Silas, who was currently watching her with a cool, unhurried gaze as he prepared her martini. "I live here," Rory said simply. "Upstairs." Carys blinked, her polished exterior slipping for a fraction of a second. "Upstairs? But... I thought you were in West London. Eva said you went to London, but she was always so vague about it. We all thought you were working for a firm in the city. Or maybe finishing your degree at UCL." "No," Rory said. She kept her voice even, cooler than she felt. The old training—the analytical, defensive posture she had learned during her brief stint in Pre-Law before everything shattered—clicked into place. "I didn't finish the degree." Silas set the martini down in front of Carys, the liquid clear and perfectly still. His hand, marked by the silver ring, lingered on the counter for a beat. He offered Rory a brief, almost imperceptible nod before sliding down the bar to give them space, though his watchful presence remained at the periphery. Carys took a sip of her drink, using the moment to compose herself. "I saw your father last month," she said softly, keeping her eyes on the glass. "Brendan. He was at the Welsh Law Awards. He looked... well. He asked about you, you know. He said he hadn't heard from you since Christmas." "We don't have much to say to each other," Rory said. Her father, the formidable barrister, had viewed her flight from Cardiff—and her refusal to marry or even speak to Evan again—as a personal betrayal, a waste of his investment. "He’s still disappointed," Carys murmured, her tone a delicate mix of sympathy and judgment. "You were the star of our cohort, Rory. Everyone expected you to have made partner somewhere by now. And instead..." She trailed off, her gaze dropping to Rory’s scuffed boots and the faint grease stain on the sleeve of her utility jacket. "Instead, I’m here," Rory finished for her. "Evan is a partner now," Carys said, the name falling between them like a heavy, cold stone. "At his uncle’s firm in Cathedral Road. He’s doing incredibly well. He bought that house in Pontcanna we all used to admire." Rory felt a familiar, cold knot tighten in her stomach. She stared at the reflection of the green neon sign in Carys’s glass. Carys didn’t know. None of them did. They had only seen the handsome, charismatic young law student who bought rounds of drinks and held doors open. They hadn’t seen the locked bedroom doors, the bruised wrists hidden under long sleeves, or the quiet, systematic dismantling of Rory’s confidence until she felt like a ghost in her own skin. To Carys, Rory’s flight had been a dramatic, irrational breakdown. "I’m glad he’s doing well," Rory said, her voice entirely devoid of emotion. Carys sighed, leaning back. "You changed, Rory. You used to be so... vibrant. Remember the mock trial competition in our second year? You practically reduced the opposing team to tears. You had this fire. Now, you look like you’re trying to disappear." "Maybe I wanted to," Rory said. "But why?" Carys’s voice carried a genuine, painful frustration. "We had everything planned. We were going to move to London together, get a flat in Richmond, work our way up. Instead, you just vanish in the middle of the night, change your number, and leave us all behind. It wasn't fair." Rory looked at her former friend. She saw the expensive coat, the gold watch, the career path laid out like a well-paved highway. She saw the life she was supposed to have had. And yet, looking at Carys, she felt a profound, chilling distance. Carys was still living in the world of expectations and appearances, untouched by the raw, jagged edges of the world Rory had inherited. "I had to go, Carys," Rory said quietly. "It wasn't about you." "But you could have told me," Carys said, her eyes shinning with a sudden, unexpected anger. "I thought we were best friends. I spent months trying to figure out what I’d done wrong. And now I find you here, delivering food, living above a public house in Soho. It’s... it’s a waste, Aurora. It’s a complete waste." Silas stopped wiping the glass he was holding. He didn't look up, but his shoulders squared, his tall frame casting a long shadow across the back bar. The silence in the room stretched, heavy and suffocating. Rory looked down at her left wrist, her fingers lightly tracing the crescent scar. "It wasn't a waste," she said, her voice steady and deliberate. "It was a choice." "A choice to do what?" Carys asked, her tone softening into pity. "To hide?" "To survive," Rory said. Carys opened her mouth to argue, but the certainty in Rory’s bright blue eyes stopped her. There was an icy, impenetrable wall there now, built from three years of rebuilding her life from scratch, of learning to walk the rainy streets of London without looking over her shoulder. It was a strength Carys couldn't comprehend, because she had never needed it. Slowly, Carys checked her watch—a delicate, gold piece that caught the amber light. She looked uncomfortable now, the warmth of the reunion entirely dissipated. "I have to go," she said, her voice tight. "I have a dinner reservation in Mayfair. A client." "Of course," Rory said. Carys reached into her leather purse, pulling out a crisp twenty-pound note and sliding it onto the counter. "Keep the change," she told Silas, though she didn't look at him. She turned back to Rory, her expression a fragile mask of regret. "I hope you find whatever it is you're looking for, Rory. Truly." "I survived, Carys," Rory said softly. "I already found it." Carys lingered for a second, as if waiting for Rory to say something else, to plead or explain or apologize. But Rory only watched her with that cool, intelligent detachment. With a small, tight nod, Carys gathered her umbrella and walked toward the exit. The brass bell chimed again, and then she was gone, swallowed by the Soho rain and the blur of passing headlights. The Nest fell quiet once more. Silas limped over, his silver signet ring tapping the counter as he picked up the twenty-pound note. He set it aside, then picked up Carys’s half-finished martini and poured it down the sink drains. "You alright, kid?" he asked, his rough, low voice breaking the silence. Rory let out a slow, quiet breath. The tension in her shoulders didn't leave, but it settled into something manageable, a familiar weight she knew how to carry. "I'm fine, Silas," she said, looking up at him with a small, tired smile. "Just a bit wet from the rain." Silas nodded, then reached under the counter and pulled out a clean glass. He poured a small finger of dark, amber whiskey and pushed it toward her. "On the house," he said. "Get some warmth in you before you go upstairs." Rory took the glass, the warmth of the spirit rising to meet her. She turned her stool back toward the bar, looking at the old maps on the wall, and took a slow, quiet sip, listening to the rain beat steadily against the windowpane.
created_at"2026-05-19T19:16:37.834Z" 5/19/2026, 7:16:37 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
46.15% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags26
adverbTagCount4
adverbTags
0"Rory said simply [simply]"
1"she said softly [softly]"
2"Rory said quietly [quietly]"
3"Rory said softly [softly]"
dialogueSentences45
tagDensity0.578
leniency1
rawRatio0.154
effectiveRatio0.154
75.21% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1815
totalAiIsmAdverbs9
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count2
1
adverb"slowly"
count2
2
adverb"perfectly"
count1
3
adverb"softly"
count2
4
adverb"lightly"
count1
5
adverb"truly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"slowly"
2"perfectly"
3"softly"
4"lightly"
5"truly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
36.64% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1815
totalAiIsms23
found
0
word"familiar"
count3
1
word"comforting"
count1
2
word"weight"
count2
3
word"traced"
count1
4
word"scanning"
count1
5
word"rhythmic"
count1
6
word"silence"
count3
7
word"shattered"
count1
8
word"stomach"
count1
9
word"systematic"
count1
10
word"profound"
count1
11
word"chilling"
count1
12
word"long shadow"
count1
13
word"tracing"
count1
14
word"warmth"
count3
15
word"tension"
count1
highlights
0"familiar"
1"comforting"
2"weight"
3"traced"
4"scanning"
5"rhythmic"
6"silence"
7"shattered"
8"stomach"
9"systematic"
10"profound"
11"chilling"
12"long shadow"
13"tracing"
14"warmth"
15"tension"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences97
matches
0"looked uncomfortable"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences97
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences116
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen43
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1807
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions25
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions91
wordCount1399
uniqueNames23
maxNameDensity2.22
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Soho2
Raven1
Nest5
Carter1
Yu-Fei1
Cheung1
Golden1
Express1
Cardiff4
Silas7
Blackwood1
Prague1
Rory31
London3
Northern1
Tube1
Corbett1
Road1
Bute1
Park1
Carys23
Pre-Law1
Evan1
persons
0"Nest"
1"Carter"
2"Yu-Fei"
3"Cheung"
4"Silas"
5"Blackwood"
6"Rory"
7"Carys"
8"Evan"
places
0"Soho"
1"Raven"
2"Cardiff"
3"Prague"
4"London"
5"Corbett"
6"Road"
7"Bute"
8"Park"
globalScore0.392
windowScore0
86.71% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences79
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"felt like a ghost in her own skin"
1"as if waiting for Rory to say something else, to plead or explain or apologize"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1807
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences116
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs48
mean37.65
std24.25
cv0.644
sampleLengths
055
1117
297
321
445
530
624
744
812
928
1049
1157
1236
137
1454
1537
1654
1754
1840
1956
207
2139
2291
2313
2442
256
2651
2767
2812
2957
3036
3129
3214
334
3461
3542
364
3754
3810
3930
4035
416
4234
4312
4428
4521
4641
4744
94.41% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences97
matches
0"was pinned"
1"was supposed"
2"was gone"
82.53% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount4
totalVerbs227
matches
0"was shaking"
1"was currently watching"
2"was still living"
3"was holding"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount8
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences6
totalSentences116
ratio0.052
matches
0"With her thumb, she traced the small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist—a childhood souvenir from a Cardiff garden wall, though these days she touched it more out of habit than memory, a physical anchor when her thoughts began to drift."
1"He was fifty-eight, tall and broad-shouldered, though his left leg dragged slightly—the permanent souvenir of a cold winter night in Prague long before he had ever bought the Nest."
2"But then came the sound of heels—sharp, confident, tapping a rhythmic cadence across the floorboards."
3"The old training—the analytical, defensive posture she had learned during her brief stint in Pre-Law before everything shattered—clicked into place."
4"Her father, the formidable barrister, had viewed her flight from Cardiff—and her refusal to marry or even speak to Evan again—as a personal betrayal, a waste of his investment."
5"Slowly, Carys checked her watch—a delicate, gold piece that caught the amber light."
82.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1424
adjectiveStacks3
stackExamples
0"small crescent-shaped scar"
1"faded, frame-hung maps"
2"handsome, charismatic young law"
adverbCount45
adverbRatio0.03160112359550562
lyAdverbCount19
lyAdverbRatio0.013342696629213483
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences116
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences116
mean15.58
std10.19
cv0.654
sampleLengths
031
124
227
331
418
541
611
729
827
930
1021
115
1225
1315
145
1514
1611
176
1818
1914
2030
2112
223
2320
245
257
2642
277
2821
2915
3014
3136
326
331
3412
3542
363
379
3820
395
4015
4114
4225
4313
4415
4526
4611
4729
4814
4942
48.28% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats9
diversityRatio0.33620689655172414
totalSentences116
uniqueOpeners39
36.63% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences91
matches
0"Slowly, Carys checked her watch—a"
ratio0.011
74.95% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount33
totalSentences91
matches
0"She was twenty-five, but tonight,"
1"Her shoulder-length black hair was"
2"He was fifty-eight, tall and"
3"He didn’t speak, but his"
4"It was crisp, carrying the"
5"She turned her head slowly,"
6"She wore a tailored camel-wool"
7"Her expression shifted from professional"
8"She reached out as if"
9"She settled for sitting on"
10"She kept her voice even,"
11"His hand, marked by the"
12"He offered Rory a brief,"
13"she said softly, keeping her"
14"Her father, the formidable barrister,"
15"She trailed off, her gaze"
16"She stared at the reflection"
17"They had only seen the"
18"They hadn’t seen the locked"
19"She saw the expensive coat,"
ratio0.363
20.44% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount80
totalSentences91
matches
0"The rain had slicked the"
1"Aurora Carter sat on her"
2"She was twenty-five, but tonight,"
3"Her shoulder-length black hair was"
4"He was fifty-eight, tall and"
5"The silver signet ring on"
6"He didn’t speak, but his"
7"The brass bell above the"
8"Rory didn’t look up immediately."
9"People came and went through"
10"a voice said"
11"It was crisp, carrying the"
12"Rory’s hand froze against her"
13"She turned her head slowly,"
14"The woman standing a few"
15"She wore a tailored camel-wool"
16"Rory said, the name tasting"
17"The woman turned."
18"Her expression shifted from professional"
19"The space between them felt"
ratio0.879
54.95% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences91
matches
0"To Carys, Rory’s flight had"
ratio0.011
56.65% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences58
technicalSentenceCount7
matches
0"Aurora Carter sat on her usual stool at the far corner of the mahogany bar, her back to the stairs that led up to her small flat."
1"She wore a tailored camel-wool coat that looked as though it had never encountered a crowded Tube carriage, and her blonde hair was pinned back in an immaculate…"
2"The space between them felt vast, filled with the ghosts of lecture halls on Corbett Road, the cheap cider they used to drink in Bute Park, and the heavy, suffo…"
3"She reached out as if to hug Rory, but hesitated, her hands lingering in the air before dropping to her sides."
4"Carys looked around the Nest, her eyes lingering on the dark wood, the peeling black-and-white photographs of mid-century London, and Silas, who was currently w…"
5"They had only seen the handsome, charismatic young law student who bought rounds of drinks and held doors open."
6"Slowly, Carys checked her watch—a delicate, gold piece that caught the amber light."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags26
uselessAdditionCount8
matches
0"Rory said, the name tasting foreign and heavy on her tongue"
1"Carys murmured, her tone a delicate mix of sympathy and judgment"
2"Carys said, the name falling between them like a heavy, cold stone"
3"Rory said, her voice entirely devoid of emotion"
4"Carys said, her eyes shinning with a sudden, unexpected anger"
5"she said, her voice steady and deliberate"
6"Carys asked, her tone softening into pity"
7"she said, her voice tight"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags23
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"Carys murmured (murmur)"
dialogueSentences45
tagDensity0.511
leniency1
rawRatio0.043
effectiveRatio0.043
73.1844%